Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• him (Lunarchloedip) A most beautiful poem of feeling cared for and love dispensing with...
  April 24th, 2025 16:29
• Face To Face (𓆩Mase𓆪) The first four lines support a great rhyme scheme of AB, AB, AB, AB, Then...
  April 24th, 2025 16:27
• The Pangea Ultima (Bame Bame) Most interesting thoughts expressed in this piece. We may debate about the...
  April 24th, 2025 16:18
• forever in stone (MR.apocalypse) This is a very good poem that makes its point in just a few words. It is...
  April 24th, 2025 16:14
• But I’m not done yet (Randall Racine) I get the definite feeling of not being heard in this poem. There is the...
  April 24th, 2025 16:12
• Cattle In Pasture (Duran Mazzana) I take this poem as existential and surreal but well written and with a...
  April 24th, 2025 13:52
• Tribute to aFog Horn (Jerry Reynolds) So well written it could be put on a plaque and mounted on the horn at...
  April 24th, 2025 13:50
• Trapped (Sunshine777) A most painful read surreal or not a poem of wrestling with evil. Well...
  April 24th, 2025 12:55
• what is love? (Rmjhm.i) Love is a multifaceted word with many interpretations. Yes it is something...
  April 24th, 2025 12:03
• So, Yeah, Guess We Really *cough, cough* LOVE Shortbread... (Cheeky Missy) Another fine write with a series of sonnets. Nothing like fine food tied...
  April 24th, 2025 11:30
• Peter\'s Professing (Orchidee) A beautiful passage and a beautiful hymn. Very nicely done.
  April 24th, 2025 11:13
• Calm into Calamity (Brian Otucho) Things of calm and beauty can change in a minute to rage and terror. A...
  April 24th, 2025 11:11
• Come outside (Devender Kumar) Beautiful images and words of nature. Lovely
  April 24th, 2025 11:06
• Soul (Tony36) How true it is Tony. Art is the escape valve of the inner self. A great...
  April 24th, 2025 10:54
• A Calling Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) Reaching the future by sailing in the past may take us to uncharted and...
  April 24th, 2025 10:53
• Faster (Jonathan Merida) Frightening and the unknown or unrecognized is the worst fear. Well...
  April 24th, 2025 10:51
• OH, KASHMIR! (Qurrathul Ain) A beautiful tribute. It is so easy to lump all evil into one group, black...
  April 24th, 2025 09:48
• The Moon and Me (Michelle Buckley) A beautiful picture of nature is painted in this poem. Well worded images...
  April 24th, 2025 09:01
• Today (MinaH) Never question another\'s mood or feelings comes through in this poem each...
  April 24th, 2025 09:00
• Until We Meet Again (Akshadha_Joshi1310) Thoughts and feelings in absence fill the mind and body. Well expressed in...
  April 24th, 2025 08:56
• Breaking from Babylon (Tristan Robert Lange) I like how you used the personal pronoun I. Powerful and direct it sings...
  April 24th, 2025 08:54
• An emotional scare (Anabasova) Panic attacks happen for various causes and anxiety comes to all. A...
  April 24th, 2025 08:50
• I miss you (Amethyste) Short but sweet the search for what is missing that brings happiness and...
  April 24th, 2025 06:03
• Poeticist (Libellule) A very nice write of the energy driving the poet in their search for...
  April 24th, 2025 06:02
• Never Again (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This poem seems a farewell to a past love and it remains unsure why there...
  April 24th, 2025 05:43
• The holy sugar (Funmiwrites) A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy...
  April 24th, 2025 05:00
• The way I be (Maplespal) We all are who we are and see though our eyes as long as we recognize that...
  April 24th, 2025 04:57
• believe in you (Jim56) Belief in oneself is key to most all enterprises. A lovely write Jim
  April 24th, 2025 04:55
• Sugardaddy (Nicolerobinson) Everything is for sale it is merely a matter of settling on a price. A fun...
  April 24th, 2025 04:54
• Nature an eternal rhyme (Pukur) A wonderful write of inspiration. All we need to do is open our eyes and...
  April 24th, 2025 04:52
• One Day (Sassy Lou) The search for a person that fits one\'s needs goes on and in world of...
  April 24th, 2025 04:50
• When i learned to end my nightmare. (Vanaynay) Quieting the mind is the secret to many things and is easier said than...
  April 24th, 2025 04:47
• Blood-Seed (Mottakeenur Rehman) So short yet so well written this one is a fave
  April 24th, 2025 04:45
• The Whispering Wind (Gray0328) Gray you have outdone yourself on this one. Every once in a while I read a...
  April 24th, 2025 04:44
• Pope 88 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A good poem about a good man and serves as a good tribute. Well done
  April 24th, 2025 04:40
• OVER THE TOP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Anti war? Me too. This poem puts it all out there the stupidity and lunacy...
  April 24th, 2025 04:38
• Maple moon (Reynaldo Casison) It is the rare combination of beautiful words that makes this poem a fave....
  April 24th, 2025 04:35
• Faces of death (EvenwheniLie) Loved this poem and its contrast with life and death. Great usage of rhyme...
  April 24th, 2025 04:33
• once again (Arqios) Shall we return to our past? At times I wish it so, at others I would not...
  April 24th, 2025 04:30
• Spring Storms (MDStone) I particularly liked the metaphor of the storm in this and how out of our...
  April 24th, 2025 04:22
• I Thought I Was Safe (Salian) I particularly loved the meter and rhyme of this poem that is good enough...
  April 24th, 2025 04:19
• Wonder Times. (Goldfinch60) A fun read Andy that I can identify with.
  April 24th, 2025 04:10
• Blues Through the Week (Thomas W Case) I enjoyed this one Thomas I always loved the blues and the names just keep...
  April 24th, 2025 04:06
• Puerto Rico, Of You I Sing (Rrodriguez) What a beautiful description in vivid images that paint a lovely picture...
  April 23rd, 2025 19:00
• Somewhere in the World (Michelle Buckley) A most wonderful picture painted that is most peaceful and serene. A...
  April 23rd, 2025 18:54
• Your Ghost (Maydanae) This poem has a most interesting rhyme scheme that catches attention. A...
  April 23rd, 2025 18:52
• Misread (Orions pen) This poem speaks to me of defenses built from past trauma and fear. A...
  April 23rd, 2025 17:49
• rare gentleness (Catsdrinkboba) Timing is everything and we all have problems with this. A love poem that...
  April 23rd, 2025 17:43
• Never In Love (Positive Girl) Now this is a different type of a love poem. It is a bit sad but tells the...
  April 23rd, 2025 17:12
• Professional Infatuation (Bragee) a seductive, sensual, erotic write so nicely written.
  April 23rd, 2025 15:25
• Time (S.louise) A good title and yes it is measured in dollars. Well written
  April 23rd, 2025 15:22
• Tomorrow\'s Utopia ([email protected]) A poem nicely rhymed and with good flow that reads well. Very nice
  April 23rd, 2025 13:47
• If I Could. (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Beautiful words of wisdom in this poem and very nicely said.
  April 23rd, 2025 13:44
• Deep Inside (Kurt Philip Behm) This is another poem with meaning well written. Very nice Kurt
  April 23rd, 2025 13:41
• From Nasreddin at Bukhara by Wlad Sololovey (Ksey_Gan) This poem has the sound and feel of an exotic place that is in its own...
  April 23rd, 2025 13:38
• Hallelujah Variations (Muse of Calliope) A close resemblance indeed. Nicely done
  April 23rd, 2025 12:46
• In These Eyes, (Devender Kumar) A poem by a person smitten. A love poem well written. Good job
  April 23rd, 2025 12:44
• Revelations (EvenwheniLie) Fears and desires do in fact make up the seeds that lead to demise. A good...
  April 23rd, 2025 12:42
• The Garden of Reunion (Gray0328) Biblical references to the garden and the rolling of the stone. Very nice...
  April 23rd, 2025 12:40
• Responding to Luke 9:23 (Pita) Faith of being taken care of as the lilies of the field or birds of the...
  April 23rd, 2025 12:38
• Words of a Black Widow (Genesis) Some people are not good for you. To know this would be quite helpful....
  April 23rd, 2025 12:29
• Mind’s Great Ocean (Teddy.15) A sad write about people that are sorry enough to have such anger, greed,...
  April 23rd, 2025 12:27
• Lakeside Life (Orchidee) Another great hymn of a good bible story. Well done Orchi
  April 23rd, 2025 12:23
• Rapture (TommyDingo) Well rhymed with meter that enhanced the flow. The poem takes the reader...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:33
• Every. Single. Day. (Nikola) The drain and monotony of day after day and no promise of change, no hope...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:29
• Present (Kenny O\'Donnell) Teddy you have outdone yourself in this write. Yes you are here in this...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:27
• Pope Francis, addio a te! (Azeezah Awal) Nicely written about a wonderful Pope that has past a true tribute in...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:27
• The Abortion (Tony Grannell) Wow! This one graphic, raw, hard hitting in its explicit imagery paints a...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:26
• Change of Heart (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A poem of growth and learning. It speaks of maturing in what one is doing...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:19
• Flame and Steel (Kaz)
  April 23rd, 2025 07:16
• Flame and Steel (Kaz) Noble love in a most classic setting take form in this poem. Well said and...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:16
• Lost Paradise (RSM0812) This has biblical as well as more astronomical references and is very...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:14
• The House of Fire (Yumi Gab) This has such a middle eastern flavor to it and the metaphor in this story...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:11
• Shrouded by snow (Thinkerbell) What a metaphor here it like the snow itself disguises what lies beneath....
  April 23rd, 2025 07:07
• My Heart (Tony36) A pleading in this poem for affiliation and understanding. Very...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:04
• Bald Is the New Beautiful (Tristan Robert Lange) How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:02
• Goodbye, Pope Francis! (Azeezah Khadeejah Awal) A very nice tribute to a most wonderful Pope very nicely done
  April 23rd, 2025 05:55
• They say \"Move on\" and I reply:- (Antra.sharma_) Short and to the point with great charm. Lovely
  April 23rd, 2025 05:50
• time goes so fast (Jim56) How quickly time passes indeed Jim, A great poem illustrating this.
  April 23rd, 2025 05:49
• Violets (Amethyste) Now there is a metaphor indeed. Lovely short.
  April 23rd, 2025 05:48
• Pen and Cob (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:47
• Take a ride with me (Sylvia Somaduroff) A most interesting poem of love and the question of it were to all be done...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:42
• Rendering (Libellule) So identifiable this metaphoric depiction of the existential crisis we go...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:38
• Rattled & Bored and waiting (Maplespal) Loved the first most original poem that depicts focus during times of...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:35
• The Headphones And Red Woolly Hat (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Seasonal wear depicted battle predicted. A lovely short
  April 23rd, 2025 05:32
• Ode to the Void (Mottakeenur Rehman) This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:30
• We Are Nothing but Uttered Words (Muntadher Saleh) A deep and wise poem that is poignant and applicable to all but...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:26
• Here Before They Were (J.Edse) This poem has a mystical, old, from the past feel to it that calls...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:20
• Did you miss me? (Chad Carlson) So glad that you are back
  April 23rd, 2025 05:18
• Once In Awhile (Reynaldo Casison) A refreshing sparkle to a love poem that shines like the stars. Very nice...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:17
• THE OLD PORTRAIT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most beautiful poem of times lost in the past and forgotten as are its...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:14
• 575s and 57577s (1) (Michael Edwards)
  April 23rd, 2025 05:06
• 575s and 57577s (1) (Michael Edwards) The mind can rove over these words and follow many paths. The literal is...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:06
• a miscreant yearns (Arqios) Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:02
• Moving Forward Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Yes so true for us to see the sun we must open our eyes and with that life...
  April 23rd, 2025 04:24
• Promise of forever (Pukur) A poem of friendship that lasts, maybe more. A most lovely write.
  April 22nd, 2025 20:10
• Through Concrete Curtains (Maydanae) A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:08
• Possession (Mutley Ravishes) This poem is well constructed and sends its message so poetically
  April 22nd, 2025 20:05
• Love Remains In Me (Sunshine777) To love oneself first before one can love another makes total sense to me...
  April 22nd, 2025 17:09
• With Eyes Like Candytuft (A Boy With Roses) A poem of reflections and observations that is somewhat dysphoric and dark...
  April 22nd, 2025 17:07