Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- We Keep On Going Anyway (Malcolm Gladwin)
Life\'s journey through lands of illusions and reality is with us all the...
August 4th, 2025 04:40 - I forgot to breathe (Baker)
Sometimes life passes so quickly that we don\'t even notice breathing. A...
August 4th, 2025 04:35 - Lunacy (Fränz Müller)
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just...
August 4th, 2025 04:33 - Sol (Not_defined)
A beautiful poem that shows fleeting moments of brightness worth pursuing....
August 4th, 2025 04:31 - Secondhand (Berniece)
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor...
August 4th, 2025 04:29 - Intuitive Clones of Progress and Dying (ElizabethMoroz)
Cascading images of a world we live in where things are not always what...
August 4th, 2025 04:27 - After the Storm (Gray0328)
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the...
August 4th, 2025 04:19 - reader, read her (Arqios)
A mysterious and quiet opening to this poem. Set in the early hours past...
August 4th, 2025 04:17 - Dangerous (Orchidee)
In that survival is often dependent upon instinct and reflex I would have...
August 4th, 2025 04:07 - Is Life Dangerous? (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Andy with most encouraging words. I see life as an adventure...
August 4th, 2025 04:00 - Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl (Neville)
Some works of art are fortunate enough to be appreciated by their owners...
August 4th, 2025 03:54 - Road (Brimelow)
I hear the urgency in this write and the metaphor makes it uncertain. The...
August 3rd, 2025 18:48 - dance (Lunarchloedip)
A fun rhyme shows the passion in this youthful poem of young love.
August 3rd, 2025 18:46 - Did I mention the mosquitoes? (Eugene S.)
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and...
August 3rd, 2025 18:45 - The Truth of Loss (Mminarik00)
Clever, logical, and that is hard to mesh with the emotional. Nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 18:40 - Back when I was a Kid (Thomas W Case)
Well said Thomas a fun fead
August 3rd, 2025 18:34 - Love\'s Worth (Teddy.15)
Clever Teddy. A very nicely worded write over an emotion that we all have...
August 3rd, 2025 18:30 - SEASONED NIGHT (Acheel)
Love and spice a good combination a most artistic write.
August 3rd, 2025 18:27 - Don’t Force It (Meagan Adelle)
A sad poem of allowing others to use and mold you so that you will fit...
August 3rd, 2025 15:27 - Refuge (Will Kevin)
Great imagery for a love that continues to burn bright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2025 15:24 - Energy (Amethyste)
Funny how we sometimes notice things that others do not. A good write
August 3rd, 2025 15:23 - A Heart Part 1 The Damaged One (Anthony Hanible)
Interesting images that make for a mechanical life. Today\'s world does...
August 3rd, 2025 15:22 - Your own truth (Byyvette)
A poem that tickles the mind with thoughts of the ethereal. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 15:04 - Ashes Don’t Echo (Samuel)
A poem of anguish and pain for a relationship that is lost. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 13:21 - Just Stand (Kayla Jackson)
The bigger the obstacle overcome the greater the feeling of empowerment...
August 3rd, 2025 13:18 - At the Black See (Ksey_Gan)
This poem has an exotic feel to it as it floats through the lines
August 3rd, 2025 13:17 - Our Guiding Light (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A poem of faith and looking for guidance. Religious in nature it looks...
August 3rd, 2025 13:15 - The Cowslip’s Lesson (GeekSusie)
A beautiful and tender poem that touches the heart
August 3rd, 2025 13:10 - Caught In The Glow (Kurt Philip Behm)
I get the sense with this one Kurt that we all put on a mask or some would...
August 3rd, 2025 13:07 - Change is the only constant (Hzugman)
A true statement about life. The ups and downs and all we can do is...
August 3rd, 2025 13:03 - Thought (Bella Shepard)
So true in so few words. Well said Bella.
August 3rd, 2025 13:01 - Untitled #2 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48 - Battery life (Jeremy Leach)
A true and fun read all wrapped into one. If deprived of their phone most...
August 3rd, 2025 09:45 - Is it Better? (Vicecream)
A beautiful poem full of imagery choices are often difficult but the...
August 3rd, 2025 09:43 - Mystical (Kaz)
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39 - Fighting Your Own Enemy (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
It is evident that it is about war and your note makes sense as to the...
August 3rd, 2025 07:43 - Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone. (Friendship)
A powerful poem of resilience and determination. A statement of strength....
August 3rd, 2025 07:40 - NO (Tony36)
Yes Tony poetry is all about feeling and telling it as it is. If you want...
August 3rd, 2025 07:28 - Twice the Woman (Samuel)
A poem that sends the message loud and clear and quite a dig it is. Well...
August 3rd, 2025 07:26 - Poor Credit (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am...
August 3rd, 2025 07:22 - Where Love and Wisdom Meet (JAINESH.D)
For the message alone a fave and if I had more to give for the words of...
August 3rd, 2025 07:20 - bluebird sky (Jim56)
Touching, soft and tender in its innocence with childhood memories it...
August 3rd, 2025 07:11 - Cutting (Maplespal)
Clever and deep in meaning. The repetition makes its point and the final...
August 3rd, 2025 07:08 - Taste of Summer (Jerry Reynolds)
A lovely senryu Jerry one that all can identify with. Memories how...
August 3rd, 2025 07:06 - \"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios)
As I read this the first thought was the contrast between government...
August 3rd, 2025 07:04 - Princess (Peto)
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave....
August 3rd, 2025 04:48 - WorkedBloodBeatingWin (Insanibean)
A write about the path that is sometimes dictated by life itself. Nicely...
August 3rd, 2025 04:46 - Quiet Repose (RSM0812)
Nice meter and flow in this love poem well written.
August 3rd, 2025 04:44 - Fire (Raye)
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance....
August 3rd, 2025 04:43 - The tree (Chai Tanner)
A great metaphor and so is life in general. Evolution in a bottle so to...
August 3rd, 2025 04:39 - Brain (Krissy.V)
This poem presents that dichotomy of the world that some see. A simple...
August 3rd, 2025 04:37 - The Mark Of The Beast (Part 2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Dark and it began long before 1984, before Brave New World its roots go...
August 3rd, 2025 04:35 - HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32 - Thread by Thread (Malcolm Gladwin)
Very nice meter in this poem that carries the reader on like a marching...
August 3rd, 2025 04:30 - The One Who Still Holds the Key (KnightOfCups)
A most interesting and compelling write that uses cards some tarot some...
August 3rd, 2025 04:26 - Waiting for Godot (Deepak Vohra)
Nicely written a deep poem about man\'s waiting for ideals that do not...
August 3rd, 2025 04:21 - Remember those feeling (David A Liebermann)
I sense a renaissance here a rebirth, a resurrection of a type into a new...
August 3rd, 2025 04:14 - We Kept Our Mouths Shut (Tony Grannell)
They have a saying in Brazil that translated is (a mouth full of ants)...
August 3rd, 2025 04:11 - Love Blooms Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write that is most reassuring with a strong feeling of...
August 3rd, 2025 04:02 - Requiem for a Second Rate (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read. Were the visitors\' dressed in off color?
August 2nd, 2025 21:06 - PAST (Keeter C)
Clever writing here. The wording makes it. Loved it
August 2nd, 2025 17:03 - The Passing Bell (Kurt Philip Behm)
I have seen too much of this and too many bells. Well done Kurt
August 2nd, 2025 16:58 - Cardboard (Aneenaelzabinod)
A most wonderful metaphor that works so well. A fave
August 2nd, 2025 15:59 - Until Death Do us Part (Teddy.15)
Humor always consists of something true enough to be believed. A fun read...
August 2nd, 2025 15:56 - Botox Rules OK! (Orchidee)
I thought they called them kilts over there. A fun read again Orchi
August 2nd, 2025 14:12 - Star-Thirsted Mind (Malcolm Gladwin)
Questions never end and when one is answered the answer changes and new...
August 2nd, 2025 13:35 - Ruin (Amethyste)
So few words say so much. Nicely penned and to say more would spoil it
August 2nd, 2025 13:31 - As a submissive and passive lad... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Reading a wonderful way to build fantasies and a free mind. A lovely write
August 2nd, 2025 13:30 - Helpless (Starlight)
Some flowers bloom in a desert and there is no reason that your bloom...
August 2nd, 2025 13:29 - Twisted games (Nicole Pritchard)
The older I get the sillier I see blame. Blame strengthens the defenses of...
August 2nd, 2025 13:26 - Lost in Love (RSM0812)
A poem of a dream of serenity nicely set to rhyme. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 13:22 - My Spring (Aishu)
Wonderful a message to oneself of change and the desire for it to stay....
August 2nd, 2025 13:19 - Shooting star (Sree)
A lovely write, innocent, pure just beautiful a fave
August 2nd, 2025 13:18 - Ying Yang Yung (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up...
August 2nd, 2025 13:15 - The Room Where I Exist (Dev Parth)
I hear you Dev I too prefer quiet most of the time. If I want a little...
August 2nd, 2025 13:14 - Yes, Bats and Shit, the Whole Shebang (Cheeky Missy)
As for cats I got tired of cleaning litter boxes and as for bats their...
August 2nd, 2025 13:11 - The Trouble With Normal (Alex PB)
A fave for the message. Love like steel needs to be forged in the hottest...
August 2nd, 2025 08:45 - A Noiseless, Patient Vulture (Rrodriguez)
I see them all the time and have too written a poem about them....
August 2nd, 2025 08:42 - The Distress Of Wreck (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
A poem of violence and bloodshed leaves a tragic and sad mood. Well
August 2nd, 2025 08:40 - Unbreakable.. (David Prestigiacomo)
A poetic dream of a love searched for and found in fantasy. Lovely
August 2nd, 2025 08:11 - She\'s A Killer (Anthony Hanible)
Control in a relationship is lethal and here it is displayed in poetic...
August 2nd, 2025 08:09 - I am who I am! (Friendship)
Short and pointed.A great poem that leaves a question. Ah! What\'s behind...
August 2nd, 2025 07:57 - Dance with you (Tony36)
A beautiful write Tony that seems deeper than the literal for isn\'t all...
August 2nd, 2025 06:46 - Messines (Fränz Müller)
Buried in this mound is a metaphor awaiting birth and sprouting. A lovely...
August 2nd, 2025 06:45 - Summer Shower (Jerry Reynolds)
Short, to the point, it paints a picture and if one dives deeper a...
August 2nd, 2025 06:43 - Happy Birthday, Mom - Part XIII (Randyjohnson71)
A beautiful dedication and tribute to a mother missed. Nicely worded
August 2nd, 2025 06:41 - Fight (Peto)
Here I hear the questions of one that has let their thoughts be known but...
August 2nd, 2025 06:40 - If it works (Maplespal)
A poem I feel and for that a fave, furthermore some crafty wording and...
August 2nd, 2025 05:42 - time and tide (Jim56)
Lovely Jim the power of nature one must always respect.
August 2nd, 2025 05:40 - A Ball of Love (Tony Grannell)
A poem that speaks to me of ritual in love as well as daily chores. It is...
August 2nd, 2025 05:24 - I’M SO DEVOTED (Yael Garcia)
This poem seems a mixture of the religious and sexual and indeed sex has...
August 2nd, 2025 05:14 - Rising from the ashes (2781)
This poem is wonderful in its vague depiction of what is meant. I take...
August 2nd, 2025 05:12 - LOML (Musdeenthoughts)
This poem lays the writer out totally vulnerable and exposed to the object...
August 2nd, 2025 05:07 - Modern Concentration Stamps For Query (ElizabethMoroz)
A critique of society indeed not just past history but present day...
August 2nd, 2025 05:05 - JAIL THE SINGLE MOTHER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Why must we rely on government to take care of the poor when it should...
August 2nd, 2025 05:01 - Poem at low tide (Lorenz)
Dysphoric and yet not sad this poem paints a gray picture that is somber....
August 2nd, 2025 04:57 - American Ninja (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A poetic movie review a fun read. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:54 - Moth in a butterfly\'s body (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt)
Quite clever the metaphor is good and the development of it is...
August 2nd, 2025 04:52 - My Peace (Raye)
This poem carries with it an aura of poetic feel. I love your lines
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August 2nd, 2025 04:48 - Her (Shadowbones)
Sensual this poem is tactil and one can feel its warmth. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:45
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