Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- ACUPUNCTURE (Michael Edwards)
Now that is funny. I love humor in poetry and this is one of those. Lovely
April 18th, 2025 14:43 - it is all going away (Jon Nakapalau)
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42 - show me the way (Muse of Calliope)
The poem is so gentle and kind in true poetic form. It speaks out to...
April 18th, 2025 13:51 - Brightest star (Kaz)
A beautiful message sent in true poetic form. Very nicely said
April 18th, 2025 13:48 - New Emperor (Damaso)
A great fantasy poem but I feel a metaphor here. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 13:47 - The very abridged version recounting untold tragicomic storied life of Matthew Scott Harris (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Quite the story that many can identify with. Gladly the story has no...
April 18th, 2025 12:35 - Pro Tem (Kurt Philip Behm)
Profound. The changes in time and the weathering of the stone. Very nice...
April 18th, 2025 11:45 - YET, ONCE AGAIN (Abdullah123)
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark...
April 18th, 2025 11:43 - Enigmatic Individual (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
A great write that provokes thought and with whom many can identify. And...
April 18th, 2025 11:41 - Truth of Love is Lust (Anamika Hari)
A most interesting perspective and thought provoking. It is a great poem...
April 18th, 2025 11:39 - always on (Gray0328)
The message of this poem earns a fave. But do not think that that is all...
April 18th, 2025 11:37 - Time (Rrodriguez)
This poem in tranquil arms transports me to past memories of places and...
April 18th, 2025 11:33 - Standing Eight Count (Thomas W Case)
Just like I like em gritty, dark, full of flavor. Well done Thomas
April 18th, 2025 11:31 - The Eve Of Easter (Orchidee)
Very nicely crafted this well known tale. Nicely appropriate for the...
April 18th, 2025 11:29 - Ahem, Don\'t Look At Me (Cheeky Missy)
Chic I particularly enjoyed your first it being so intricately woven with...
April 18th, 2025 11:26 - THE NATURE OF REALITY (Twizzle48)
A great write about a very complex subject. Quantum physics is the poetry...
April 18th, 2025 09:24 - A Colored Night (Maplespal)
A very poetic description of fireworks that sparks memories and explodes...
April 18th, 2025 09:19 - True Friends (Simerjeet Singh)
Friends are special in that they are chosen while family is not. This...
April 18th, 2025 09:17 - the skull called place (Tristan Robert Lange)
A very powerful beginning that thunders at the reader with the power of...
April 18th, 2025 09:14 - Graves (Tony36)
A beautiful poem reminiscent of the song (Where have all the flowers gone)...
April 18th, 2025 07:43 - Wind (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah it is the ambiguity that catches my eye first. Is it the traveler or...
April 18th, 2025 07:41 - In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc. (Demar Desu)
A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American...
April 18th, 2025 07:33 - Whispers (Teardrop)
A most beautiful poem of the language of nature and our deafness to it....
April 18th, 2025 07:29 - Chocolate (Mutley Ravishes)
A great write and for a good purpose. Nicely done in few words
April 18th, 2025 06:17 - Ēostre Or Easter? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Even the date is hard to place the first Sunday after the first full moon...
April 18th, 2025 06:15 - Soul 2 (Teddy.15)
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A...
April 18th, 2025 05:34 - sleeping pills (Dimpy)
Biting one\'s tongue is painful. A very nice poem with a little advice
April 18th, 2025 05:31 - The Best is Left of Me (Randall Racine)
Well rhymed this poem tells the story of a life changed by adversity. Very...
April 18th, 2025 05:29 - mans best friend (Jim56)
Another tribute to man\'s best friend. Nicely done Jim
April 18th, 2025 05:23 - Mythos (Libellule)
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still....
April 18th, 2025 05:22 - Higanbana (Arobot)
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25 - Wonder (Mottakeenur Rehman)
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and...
April 18th, 2025 04:24 - Angel of my afterlife (Alan R)
A collage of images vivid all intermingled with nature scenes. A most...
April 18th, 2025 04:21 - ROBINS IN WINTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written...
April 18th, 2025 04:19 - The Last Loss (Devender Kumar)
The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 04:14 - Borrow (Salian)
Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and...
April 18th, 2025 04:11 - If you ever return (Chris Anderson)
Welcome to MPS this poem shows such nice flow and good rhyme with a topic...
April 18th, 2025 04:08 - So close yet so far (Lana c)
This is very clever poetry is the condensation of emotion into words and...
April 18th, 2025 04:04 - Buy Me (Randall Racine)
This poem utilizes careful meter in each line to create the rhythm and...
April 18th, 2025 04:01 - A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry? (Hollow Enigma)
Couplets compose this poem with a one line romantic and the other not so...
April 18th, 2025 03:53 - A Daisy on My Mind (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful metaphor. Love so beautiful and yet delicate. Very nicely...
April 18th, 2025 03:44 - Heart or Mind. (Poetic Licence)
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby...
April 18th, 2025 03:36 - twilight trek (Arqios)
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A...
April 18th, 2025 03:28 - The Air That You Breathe. (Goldfinch60)
I often wonder how life would be if the proportion of oxygen and nitrogen...
April 18th, 2025 03:19 - The Light I Left for You (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie)
A poem of loss and well rhymed nicely written. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:50 - When Somebody’s Dead (MDStone)
A truth and a nice set of quadruple rhymes. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:47 - Damn it to Hell! (Mutley Ravishes)
So where do you go if you\'re not good enough to to to heaven and the...
April 17th, 2025 20:44 - Today the Sky Looked Painted (Maydanae)
A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their...
April 17th, 2025 18:48 - Fogged rainbows (Arial)
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22 - German Death Camp by Boris Slutsky (Ksey_Gan)
A hard read about the cruelty of man to his fellows. A dark poem story of...
April 17th, 2025 17:19 - Long story, Words short (Mya)
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in...
April 17th, 2025 16:17 - Elegy For a Name No One Remembers (Rawaneigh.99)
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is...
April 17th, 2025 16:12 - the women that saved my life (Bethan)
A wonderful tribute in poetic form. Well done
April 17th, 2025 16:08 - Have fun, sell some words (Maplespal)
A great technique and a fun poem all in one. I do that from time to time...
April 17th, 2025 16:06 - Hoisted Detriments (Duran Mazzana)
This poem speaks with power of violence and healing. Well worded
April 17th, 2025 16:03 - Good Old Friend (Mya)
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am...
April 17th, 2025 16:00 - Bring Me Alive (Gray0328)
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and...
April 17th, 2025 15:57 - Assurance (Mottakeenur Rehman)
So short yet says so much a most lovely write
April 17th, 2025 13:29 - Neck of These Woods (Justyouraveragewriter)
I think I have been there and met him. Not a bad place. Loved the write
April 17th, 2025 13:17 - Oppressed (Sunshine777)
A poem of questions that we have been asking for a long time. Nicely...
April 17th, 2025 13:15 - Self Beating (Anthony Hanible)
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even...
April 17th, 2025 13:13 - all I am is a man (Newt)
I like the progression in this poem well written
April 17th, 2025 13:11 - The SINGULARITY (Muse of Calliope)
A great write raising the questions and fears that too share. Maybe we...
April 17th, 2025 13:09 - The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee)
A great write for this time of the year Orchi. Well done.
April 17th, 2025 13:05 - I\'m 19 years into this life (Pineapple_pizza018)
That existential crisis that many of us go through usually in our teens...
April 17th, 2025 13:04 - Love of the Old (Tony Dawson)
Clever and touching a rare combination. Well written and composed. A fave
April 17th, 2025 13:01 - I wonder (MinaH)
A great question or several questions. Very philosophical. I would say it...
April 17th, 2025 12:59 - Forever Lost (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful I\'ve had that feeling although it makes no sense. the poem...
April 17th, 2025 10:57 - wolf in sheep\'s clothing (Gia)
The duality of this poem speaking from a outside point of view and as the...
April 17th, 2025 09:19 - Cryptical (Libellule)
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet...
April 17th, 2025 09:02 - the agony (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very dark, this poem dives deep into the depths and reveals the festering...
April 17th, 2025 07:42 - The Streets (Tony36)
The harshness of life in this poem. Well written and with just enough...
April 17th, 2025 07:39 - Mitchell Man: Lover (Tkatie118)
Blinded by passion and love one forgets and forgives and even believes...
April 17th, 2025 06:30 - Long Death, Liberty (Arobot)
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body...
April 17th, 2025 06:24 - Wife of Shadow (RSM0812)
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the...
April 17th, 2025 06:21 - birthdays (Jim56)
True it is Jim and I have had many. A bright poem for those of us with...
April 17th, 2025 06:19 - \"She said to herself\" (Antra.sharma_)
A parents message to their child a lovely thing. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:06 - Fate, the Soul mate (Devender Kumar)
This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is...
April 17th, 2025 05:03 - The things you can’t buy… (Demar Desu)
Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price...
April 17th, 2025 05:01 - Coin Flip (Salian)
A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work....
April 17th, 2025 05:00 - Infinity Of Love (Ajon4wheels)
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58 - in darkness... (Dimpy)
Sensual, erotic, sexual, full of desire. A poem with energy
April 17th, 2025 04:56 - Do You Believe Katy Perry Went To Space? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This was a really fun read with great rhyme and humor it rocks
April 17th, 2025 04:54 - Whispers of Palani Hills ([email protected])
Painted with wonderful and vivid imagery this poem talks of natural beauty...
April 17th, 2025 04:52 - Midnight sky (Reynaldo Casison)
Here a combination of incongruous words make for a indescribable feeling...
April 17th, 2025 04:47 - experimental haiku (Thoughtless)
Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It\'s...
April 17th, 2025 04:42 - Around Her (Salian)
A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem...
April 17th, 2025 04:40 - STONE IN MY BOOT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the...
April 17th, 2025 04:36 - Seeds (Pineapple_pizza018)
A beautiful poem of faith and seeing how things fit in a longer...
April 17th, 2025 04:34 - Message (E.J. Waling)
A universe that is full of waves, vibrations if you will just has to be...
April 17th, 2025 04:32 - To live forever (MinaH)
So I hear most all people say and billions are spent on attempting to...
April 17th, 2025 04:30 - CrAvE (Natalie Heisey)
This poem carries with it a feeling of oppressive sheltering and the urge...
April 17th, 2025 04:26 - I Got Burned. (Poetic Licence)
A poem of injustice in an unjust world where little makes sense but all...
April 17th, 2025 04:14 - but a flesh wound (Arqios)
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the...
April 17th, 2025 04:08 - The Four Composers. (Goldfinch60)
A poem with a very good point that I agree with and who I am listening to...
April 17th, 2025 03:55 - El Yunque (Rrodriguez)
Simply beautiful in its imagery and nature. For this alone it is a fave
April 16th, 2025 20:10 - Now isn\'t that Lovely. (Maydanae)
In this poem all seems well until the last line. Everything with or...
April 16th, 2025 20:07 - Searching (Mik)
I loved this poem it speaks to the head through the heart and belief in...
April 16th, 2025 20:03 - Forevermore (Muse of Calliope)
A great use of multiple rhyme in a poem of a powerful emotional nature....
April 16th, 2025 20:01 - Lionel Groom (Kevin Hulme)
What a great poem. People are not always what they seem to be or the other...
April 16th, 2025 19:00
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