Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• ~> Rapunzel And Jack Frost - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk) Another fun read. Love these fairy tales. Fairy tales are fun but...
  August 10th, 2024 09:35
• A Serendipitous Eternity (Bliss) Nicely written and fun to read.
  August 10th, 2024 09:33
• The Late Richard Franklin (Randyjohnson71) A very nice tribute set in verse. Well done.
  August 10th, 2024 09:07
• The spirit (2781) Well defined. The spirit nicely explained.
  August 10th, 2024 09:05
• We\'re Toxic (Anthony Hanible) Unity despite whatever. Nicely written
  August 10th, 2024 09:04
• Darkness Came to Soon (Tomorrowlloyd) A poem of loss with pain but the feeling that the departed is still near....
  August 10th, 2024 07:36
• Evening Stroll (Tony36) Sweet and cute glad you got your wish
  August 10th, 2024 07:33
• CEASELESS WONDER (Bobby O) Elegantly worded this poem to me reflects a desire of mine as well to have...
  August 10th, 2024 07:22
• The Balance of Narcissus (Gray0328) Love the last line \"life is best without the lens of death\" Nicely...
  August 10th, 2024 07:19
• The bunny (Michael William Reid) Cute and so childlike it could well be told to young children. Oh that we...
  August 10th, 2024 07:08
• My Last Wish (Vansh Lohia) Questioning one\'s value in a relationship is a continual venture. Here it...
  August 10th, 2024 07:07
• Dinner Date (Maplespal) A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem....
  August 10th, 2024 07:03
• love is for everyone (Jim56) Universality nicely expressed in this poem of unity and brotherhood. Very...
  August 10th, 2024 07:00
• Parting Words (Young Fella) Well expressed in different forms and perspectives through...
  August 10th, 2024 06:58
• Flames of Defiance (Dev Parth) Most beautifully worded this poem is a call to courage and perseverance....
  August 10th, 2024 06:56
• Swan\'s Lake (Teddy.15) It\'s a wonderful world sung by Lois Armstrong in poetry. Beauty is in the...
  August 10th, 2024 06:54
• IJE UWAM (MY STORY) (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A happy ending to a sad story. Nicely written
  August 10th, 2024 06:50
• Rituals (Neville) Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me...
  August 10th, 2024 06:48
• War, Who Is It Good For? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) War is good for the manufactures of weapons, for contractors that are...
  August 10th, 2024 06:46
• Now lookie here.... (Orchidee) So sorry Orchi I thought you had posted a picture of KP and Fido.
  August 10th, 2024 06:43
• My Sweet Boy (Cocamedo) To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in...
  August 10th, 2024 06:41
• mirror,mirror (Sheta) Yes so true the mirror tells lies indeed, lies to the inner self not the...
  August 10th, 2024 06:39
• Under the Mausoleum Door (Beatrix M) Fine words here leaving a gothic feel to a dark poem. I loved the last...
  August 10th, 2024 06:32
• Square One, Again (Jewelwrites55) Short but with a plot and nicely said. Don\'t fight the current go with...
  August 10th, 2024 06:29
• Lying to Myself (FallingAwake2) The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of...
  August 10th, 2024 06:28
• Our Favourite Place Once More. (Goldfinch60) Gold your pairing of your poems with music is a kickstart in the morning...
  August 10th, 2024 05:29
• The Violin Man (Dan Williams) This is a wonderful poem and I can see how it is a song as well. The...
  August 10th, 2024 05:26
• ~> So Sad, Cookie Monster\'s Gone Mad! (Thad Wilk) I needed a smile this morning and this one gave it to me. Thank you for...
  August 10th, 2024 05:19
• Cry of The Hermit (Dan Williams) Loved the first two lines and the last the most. They convey a distant and...
  August 10th, 2024 05:15
• Oh Just Get On With It. (Doggerel Dave) Now here is a mind boggler that I was not expecting. Be careful of slips...
  August 10th, 2024 05:11
• The Inevitable Revolving Door (Gloria Denise) Never predict the future your beliefs can lead things to happen. Think...
  August 9th, 2024 20:26
• Hope Dies Daily (Satishverma) Good advice don\'t drop names in poems and shutting the book of life...
  August 9th, 2024 20:24
• The Tree (Annemarie) A great analogy that borders on a metaphor. An insightful poem nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 18:11
• Lake or Ocean (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Surfing on the ocean or water skiing on a lake not vice versa. Nice write.
  August 9th, 2024 18:10
• Sometimes (NDOU ROLIVHUWA) I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 18:08
• Sometimes (NDOU ROLIVHUWA) I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 18:08
• Calm mind (DLewis88) Brief, clear, expressed thoughts. Nicely done.
  August 9th, 2024 18:06
• time (Anna_x_life) So many thoughts. We are all young enough to sleep. A fun write.
  August 9th, 2024 18:05
• Moonlight drive 🚗 🎶 (Natalie Heisey) A fun ride on a poem. Nicely written
  August 9th, 2024 18:03
• Apricity (Mya) We all need something like this a parent, a friend, lover a God. Nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 17:56
• A beautiful dark heart (EvenwheniLie) Lilith before Eve great add in here. The poem brings to mind Joseph Conrad...
  August 9th, 2024 14:20
• I love you (Sami mulaj) A most wonderful statement. Yes love means loving all flaws and all. I...
  August 9th, 2024 12:47
• Vegas (Jeffery Lee Palmer) Endearing and romantic a very nice love poem
  August 9th, 2024 12:15
• Trials & Triumphs (Angela) Beautifully stated the message an important one. Motivating and well...
  August 9th, 2024 12:13
• ~> \"Redneck\" Rhymin\' Pickup Lines! (Thad Wilk) Most fun and entertaining but I\'ve tried a couple of them and they...
  August 9th, 2024 12:10
• One By One (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) So elegantly stated the process of acquiring wisdom with age. Beautiful
  August 9th, 2024 12:07
• The First Thought (Gray0328) I enjoy a glass half full it still has flavor and nourishment. A wonderful...
  August 9th, 2024 12:06
• Deep Sixed (MendedFences27) This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved...
  August 9th, 2024 12:02
• Unspoken Words (Rebellion_in_sanity) Unspoken words can be more powerful I have heard it said it is not what...
  August 9th, 2024 11:59
• A COME BACK FROM A SETBACK (Kelvin Kofi Apenteng Bamfo) A motivational poem it is most encouraging. Nicely done
  August 9th, 2024 11:58
• Blurbs on X (Amogelang Marope) How true I have reviewed past blurbs of mine that seemed so important on...
  August 9th, 2024 11:56
• To fall in love with you (_lonely__side) A declaration of love for sure. Nicely done.
  August 9th, 2024 11:53
• A Communion (Thoughtless) I feel the celebration
  August 9th, 2024 11:51
• () A fun read although the issue of changing time infuriated me. I know some...
  August 9th, 2024 11:50
• Picking Flowers (Tony36) Love flowers but have always wondered where the tradition of men giving...
  August 9th, 2024 11:44
• Numbers (2781) Numbers, numerology, all have meaning to some: one creation, two evil,...
  August 9th, 2024 11:40
• The Station (John Prophet) Quite a journey painted in vivid images. A fun ride.
  August 9th, 2024 06:13
• Holding It All In (Anthony Hanible) Desperation, a cry for help that is unheard. Sad and heart rending. This...
  August 9th, 2024 06:09
• Academia (Alan R) Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different...
  August 9th, 2024 06:06
• sincerity (Jim56) Truly good advise in this short but nicely worded poem. Well done
  August 9th, 2024 06:03
• 11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets (Maplespal) Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of...
  August 9th, 2024 06:02
• Blankets (Xqw) A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket...
  August 9th, 2024 06:00
• The Little Street (Young Fella) I loved the format of this poem where a single word is used to evoke...
  August 9th, 2024 05:57
• You\'re Just Too Good To Be True (Teddy.15) Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with...
  August 9th, 2024 05:52
• Word Wholeness (Orchidee) Here is a nondenominational hymn that might be said to be applicable to...
  August 9th, 2024 05:48
• Try (2781) A cover by Bob Dylan Jokerman comes through. Love music too, it brightens...
  August 9th, 2024 05:44
• The Beast Within (Cocamedo) This could be taken metaphorically as an internal struggle to overcome and...
  August 9th, 2024 05:41
• Be Still..... (Saxon Crow) Comforting words so well expressed in this poem. Nicely done
  August 9th, 2024 05:38
• Don\'t Be Afraid (The Great Tribulation) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Strong beliefs expressed in this piece. There are many diverse beliefs in...
  August 9th, 2024 05:37
• ADA AMEH (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I commend your efforts to commemorate people, causes and this poem is just...
  August 9th, 2024 05:35
• Amelia (Dan Williams) Masterfully worded this write in verse conveys love and care and the...
  August 9th, 2024 05:31
• Maybe To Be Continued (Neville) Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense...
  August 9th, 2024 05:27
• Heaven Is Where Dreams Come True. (Goldfinch60) Dreams and heaven the only place that this happens so well expressed in...
  August 9th, 2024 05:21
• Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire (Mutley Ravishes) The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it....
  August 9th, 2024 05:19
• For Love (Anthony Hanible) A bold pledge put in very few words. Nicely stated.
  August 9th, 2024 05:17
• In Spirit (Cassie58) A wonderful write with great rhyme. Loved the playfulness in this piece as...
  August 9th, 2024 05:16
• Wilma! (2781) A most fun read with some play on words in this poem. Loved it
  August 9th, 2024 05:13
• Ms.M (Jewelwrites55) This poem had a nice flow and rhyme. Fun to read.
  August 8th, 2024 20:17
• Me & You (Blossompayal) Romantic. Passionate well done.
  August 8th, 2024 20:14
• Waltzing Down Love Street (Thomas W Case) From the serious to the fantasy from sad to happy nicely done Thomas
  August 8th, 2024 19:19
• Ghost (13LaurenD) Stay positive and keep at it. Nice work
  August 8th, 2024 16:53
• The sea of dreams (Sami mulaj) Dreams do blend various memories and thoughts. A most interesting write
  August 8th, 2024 16:17
• Such Rights Not Recognised (ADarkerMind) Fun words fill this poem with fantasy? Maybe deep metaphor? They are...
  August 8th, 2024 13:24
• i say i believe (Sheta) A great desire and prayer to help to love better. Nicely said in verse
  August 8th, 2024 13:17
• `*` In Our Garden Of Love `*` (Thad Wilk) Sweet and charming this declaration of love is filled with flowers and...
  August 8th, 2024 13:16
• Haunted past (Nicole Pritchard) An apology for past actions where one did not have the ability to act as...
  August 8th, 2024 13:14
• Sinking ships in my mirage oceans (Arial) A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
  August 8th, 2024 12:19
• In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart (Teddy.15) I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone....
  August 8th, 2024 12:08
• Questions I Often Ask Myself (Gray0328) Beautifully penned images that float off the page. Nicely done
  August 8th, 2024 10:56
• Olympic Games (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler) Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
  August 8th, 2024 10:53
• () A most fun read everything is for sale
  August 8th, 2024 10:49
• Beyond the mourning of bereavement no stilled tears (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Sad write with further tones of darkness but ends on a sense of...
  August 8th, 2024 08:24
• Victory Is Mines (Callista Howard) Character gives strength to free will Nicely written
  August 8th, 2024 08:08
• Old School Vs Youngblood (Saleh Ben Saleh) Which is better the energy and enthusiasm of youth or wisdom and treachery...
  August 8th, 2024 08:07
• MY CASTLE (Qurrathul Ain) Beautiful in wording this poem shines
  August 8th, 2024 08:03
• Roll in Roll out (Tony36) Loved the roll of this poem its rhythm echoes the waves
  August 8th, 2024 08:01
• Betrayal by you (Natalie Heisey) I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final...
  August 8th, 2024 07:19
• Steaming (Tom Dylan) I like Dave am that man remembering when such trains were for the common...
  August 8th, 2024 07:15
• Urbanization (Thepoetman1234) I see this as well but it begs the question, what is the cause. Some say...
  August 8th, 2024 07:13
• Taking A Break (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nothing is permanent, freedom or lack there of. A fun read
  August 8th, 2024 07:11