Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Cry (Krissy.V) The feel of sexual focus is highlighted here and runs through this poem....
  July 29th, 2025 04:32
• Malevolent Forms Of Warning (ElizabethMoroz) Many symbols in this poem each of which could well be expanded upon. I...
  July 29th, 2025 04:30
• Little Man in the City (Dasim) This poem hauntingly casts its spell of setting a mood and telling a story...
  July 29th, 2025 04:25
• small acts (Luke Bensing) Wisdom in a poem, short and to the point is speaks for itself. Nicely done
  July 29th, 2025 04:20
• Muted (Vanna) Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood...
  July 29th, 2025 04:19
• right here, right now (Arqios) This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines...
  July 29th, 2025 04:11
• The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60) Being about the same age this is very identifiable and I was there too....
  July 29th, 2025 04:06
• like a breath of fresh air... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Humor in life. Good write
  July 28th, 2025 20:24
• The Hardness Of Life (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
  July 28th, 2025 19:02
• The Hardness Of Life (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Contrast is necessary to appreciate either one or the other. A person that...
  July 28th, 2025 19:02
• If I were a Man (Ladywithaquill) Everything has its advantages and disadvantages. Here the poet points out...
  July 28th, 2025 18:58
• You Can’t Metamorphose a Narcissist (Pete the poet) Narcissism a sad disorder. We all have some but those that have a...
  July 28th, 2025 16:50
• Rumination (Fränz Müller) Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A...
  July 28th, 2025 16:45
• Signs (Keeter C) Morals and values are taught not inherited. A sad commentary on present...
  July 28th, 2025 16:43
• Love Or Life.. (David Prestigiacomo) A poem that identifies a loved as fantasy like and transported to...
  July 28th, 2025 16:40
• To pen the silence (Amethyste) Well written what is not written is lost and even that that is written is...
  July 28th, 2025 16:37
• Living By Pocket Change (Kenny O\'Donnell) Suffering the key to good poetry. A poem that senses this and speaks to...
  July 28th, 2025 16:36
• A Welcoming Stillness (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely. A write of death itself and its peace in stillness. Very nice Kurt
  July 28th, 2025 16:34
• The Small Window (Shahla Latifi) This poem speaks dream like where a mother\'s voice is heard. Advice given...
  July 28th, 2025 16:33
• In A Box (Anthony Hanible) Well set this poem with metaphor tells of being imprisoned waiting for...
  July 28th, 2025 16:22
• Whispering Storm (A.N.) With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader...
  July 28th, 2025 16:20
• Patchwork People (Molly Delaney) A most interesting way of seeing who we become. Pieces we keep and patch...
  July 28th, 2025 16:17
• The Weepin\' Willers (Tony Grannell) Maybe it\'s the Irish in my ancestry but this one seemed a bit close to...
  July 28th, 2025 15:39
• Benidorm (Satire) (Teddy.15) Now that one hit hard both with laughter and after on second thought under...
  July 28th, 2025 15:32
• hope is the thing (Gray0328) Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to...
  July 28th, 2025 15:29
• Of Looking Innocent Versus Death Warmed Over (Cheeky Missy) Why do people try to look innocent? Either you are or you are not. We all...
  July 28th, 2025 15:27
• At the Very End of It All (Neville) I have long thought that death is not something to be feared but rather...
  July 28th, 2025 15:23
• Imago Dei (Tristan Robert Lange) Again Tristan I am intrigued with the word shape in your poem. It seems a...
  July 28th, 2025 15:16
• He (Tony36) Sad and tragic this poem speaks for the many homeless, the discarded, the...
  July 28th, 2025 15:13
• Jump into the afterdeath (Lorenz) Dark and noir it plays like a black and white movie. A death ritual maybe....
  July 28th, 2025 15:10
• Empty Words (RSM0812) Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the...
  July 28th, 2025 15:07
• Mosquitoes! (Friendship) The heat can be draining and the imprisonment in one\'s own house a...
  July 28th, 2025 15:04
• The Lake (Jerry Reynolds) The picture is as clear as the water. If there is a metaphor here my mind...
  July 28th, 2025 14:23
• doggie friend (Jim56) Another great poem of canine devotion. Nicely said Jim
  July 28th, 2025 05:42
• Irony (Lorna) Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of relativity in regard to knowledge...
  July 28th, 2025 05:41
• Not everyone (Maplespal) A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which...
  July 28th, 2025 05:10
• First Rays of Dawn (Parsa) Beautiful imagery fill this love poem. Very nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 05:03
• A Head Full Of Dreams (Cassiopeiaxneptune) The line between dreams and reality and how to transform one into the...
  July 28th, 2025 05:01
• Chakam! (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A most interesting read. Memories frozen in time. Nicely done
  July 28th, 2025 05:00
• Level 115 (Samuel) A curious, interesting and surreal dream that leaves one asking does it...
  July 28th, 2025 04:59
• AS DAYLIGHT FADES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final...
  July 28th, 2025 04:51
• AS DAYLIGHT FADES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final...
  July 28th, 2025 04:51
• Endure (Xander_Kaine) A short but wise statement nicely said
  July 28th, 2025 04:49
• Flatline (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem has a sense of finality about it and it feels a bit satirical in...
  July 28th, 2025 04:49
• Smile (Boot) A fun read by itself and although it may not be intended it can be a...
  July 28th, 2025 04:47
• The Sacred Now (DesertWords) This poem takes a most interesting shape and speaks of the present. Nicely...
  July 28th, 2025 04:45
• The old tree speaks (Malcolm Gladwin) Nature, man, philosophy all packed into the symbol of a tree. Well done
  July 28th, 2025 04:42
• Understanding and Compassion (Evelynn) A poem of faith and recognition of a higher power. Nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 04:37
• Coupled (Spencer Wilhelm) This poem carries an intriguing short and regular meter on alternating...
  July 28th, 2025 04:36
• My name by NEPIEGE (NEPIEGE) A love pledge of wish comes through in this poem. Nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 04:30
• if (Jon Nakapalau) This is a gem! A fave
  July 28th, 2025 04:28
• 6 Fir\'s Last Watch (Arqios) This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as...
  July 28th, 2025 04:20
• Old Fashioned Respect. (Goldfinch60) Much lacking not just for funerals but in life in general but as they say,...
  July 28th, 2025 04:15
• Stage (Salem) This one gave me pause and led to a great deal of thought. That is a good...
  July 28th, 2025 04:11
• Misanthropic Melodies (ElizabethMoroz) This poem appears as a collage of societal, intelectual, emotional snap...
  July 28th, 2025 04:05
• The Bottom Of A Bottle (Anthony Hanible) A poem of drinking to the end of the bottle A most interesting read.
  July 27th, 2025 19:57
• See In Me What I Can’t (Emery Walker) A poem of self condemnation and critique. It is hard on the person\'s...
  July 27th, 2025 19:51
• Juliettau and Romeu by Margarita Aliger (Ksey_Gan) A most interesting poem nicely done
  July 27th, 2025 19:48
• Our Infinite Between (Gaias Soothing Haven) Sensual, errotic, sexual as is nature itself. Nicely done
  July 27th, 2025 18:39
• I can’t see you (Olive Anderson) A most interesting thing how far back memory reaches. Most is foggy before...
  July 27th, 2025 18:35
• Hello rainy day (Arial) Thought provoking afraid no and never smile in vain. Fun read
  July 27th, 2025 18:32
• Nothing new under the sun. (Keeter C) A write from a Floridian true with hurricanes, Fire ants and shore lines a...
  July 27th, 2025 18:31
• Mr. Krueger’s Porch (Friendship) A fun read that at the same time is a deeper dive into the character of...
  July 27th, 2025 18:26
• Smokey sex (Amethyste) This could be a song. A most interesting piece
  July 27th, 2025 13:49
• When the good ones let me go. (Insiya Najmi) A sad poem of being set adrift on a polluted sea with not a drink. Nicely...
  July 27th, 2025 13:47
• Recompense (Luke Bensing) Ah the things we do to ourselves. A thought provoking read that calls for...
  July 27th, 2025 13:44
• Meditation over prayer (EvenwheniLie) Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and...
  July 27th, 2025 13:42
• Fucking with Metaphors (Thomas W Case) This was the apple of my eye that left me blind as Eve took a bite. Or was...
  July 27th, 2025 13:37
• To Uncle Walt (Kurt Philip Behm) Well stated Kurt the dual indepence of one upon the other.
  July 27th, 2025 11:06
• In the Mud (Rose Abrilith) Independence is the theme of this poem. A polite declining of help. Nicely...
  July 27th, 2025 11:05
• The poet\'s soul (Lorenz) It is dark even black at places this poem speaks in symbols and metaphor...
  July 27th, 2025 11:02
• Freedom (Alan R) Lovely poetic description of art and its freeing force. Most lovely
  July 27th, 2025 10:59
• Lattes and Faux Fur (Cheeky Missy) My father always said that curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction...
  July 27th, 2025 09:39
• The Sane Age (Fränz Müller) When the burden is heavy we dream and I love the last line for sanity is...
  July 27th, 2025 09:37
• Shooting Stars Never Betray (Mya) A wistful poem of beauty and peace a wish for something beyond reality....
  July 27th, 2025 09:35
• That\'s enough for me (Sneha Sebastian)
  July 27th, 2025 09:16
• That\'s enough for me (Sneha Sebastian) A poem of moving on and growing. Nicely worded.
  July 27th, 2025 09:16
• Justice kind (Maplespal) Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
  July 27th, 2025 08:43
• When (Lorna) Well worded this poem is one of knowing that things will get better.
  July 27th, 2025 08:34
• A Place To Live (DesertWords) Beautiful images of a place of residence where dreams come true. Lovely
  July 27th, 2025 08:29
• Cry for Help (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Sad and tragic a poem of darkness that has fallen and awaiting the raising...
  July 27th, 2025 08:27
• Crucifix (RSM0812) A mantra of faith and belief in this poem. very nicely written
  July 27th, 2025 08:24
• my brain is a busy city (Gray0328) A splendid characterization of a busy mind is over crowded and moving too...
  July 27th, 2025 08:23
• You (Tony36) A most beautiful statement of friendship and love. Very nicely done Toney
  July 27th, 2025 08:21
• Puritanical (Tristan Robert Lange) Short the key to poetry, powerful, metaphoric it sends its message...
  July 27th, 2025 08:20
• The Purple Parasol (Tony Grannell) Toney once again I have to say you have nailed it. Such classic meter and...
  July 27th, 2025 08:14
• Classic Plate (Jerry Reynolds) So bleak that it has to be a favorite
  July 27th, 2025 08:04
• Let me be honest (Jane Walker) Well worded in good meter and rhyme it speaks of disillusionment, logic, a...
  July 27th, 2025 05:35
• Ennui (Cassiopeiaxneptune) This poem addresses entropy at its worst on an individual basis. Short and...
  July 27th, 2025 05:32
• A Baghead From Bag End (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A sad depiction of a soul or in metaphor of society itself pretending that...
  July 27th, 2025 05:30
• TOMORROWS DICTATOR (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of warning about a topic everyone knows but are afraid to address...
  July 27th, 2025 05:28
• Debris (Deepak Vohra) A strong message in this poem that directly and powerfully makes its point...
  July 27th, 2025 05:24
• Stop Adding Songs (Samuel) A powerful message in this poem that actions speak louder than words and...
  July 27th, 2025 05:20
• Pay attention (Jeremy Leach) Most cleverly worded this poem in good rhyme tells of attention being...
  July 27th, 2025 05:18
• As Love Nears, Winter Answers (Malcolm Gladwin) A clever use of cliches to make a poetic point. The fire of passion and...
  July 27th, 2025 05:15
• Tree (Justina) This poem seems a metaphor and questions the existence and ability of some...
  July 27th, 2025 05:12
• With You (Rose Abrilith) Although this may be taken as romantic in one sense it applies to all that...
  July 27th, 2025 05:08
• The Last to Know (Vanna) A raw poem that takes the topic of self awareness and puts it in question...
  July 27th, 2025 05:06
• Where Memory Outlives Time (Malcolm Gladwin) A lovely write with a romantic feel. An intriguing topic and an unusual...
  July 27th, 2025 05:03
• Salem’s Secret (Alison) Symbolic of all that are tormented and tortured by society. We are...
  July 27th, 2025 04:59