Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- tell your family i said hi (Carpe4diem)
Sad and horrific a dark read. Well expressed the emotion bleeds.
August 14th, 2024 09:02 - Birth of another tortured artist (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like...
August 14th, 2024 08:58 - GREEN MEANS GROW (Kelvin Kofi Apenteng Bamfo)
A time to be molded and grow it is true. Be careful the shape that you...
August 14th, 2024 06:43 - Overwhelmed (Anthony Hanible)
A poem of distress and agitation. Nicely expressed.
August 14th, 2024 06:40 - we never know (Jim56)
Change is the only constant. A fun read Jim
August 14th, 2024 06:39 - Power of Love (Job Welime)
Young expectations expressed in this poem a pledge to love. The youth...
August 14th, 2024 06:38 - Sleepless (Maplespal)
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace....
August 14th, 2024 06:35 - The 1990s were my 1960s. (Tom Dylan)
Memories, flashes from the past nicely expressed in this piece
August 14th, 2024 06:32 - I know (Dn)
Stark and cold is a kiss of steel that can not feel. Hard and harsh is its...
August 14th, 2024 06:31 - Bitter Sweet Springs (Neville)
This strikes at the heart of (progress?) or should I say growth. So nicely...
August 14th, 2024 06:27 - Spiritually Awake (Rj1way)
A nice message sent taken with good cheer. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2024 06:22 - Sex and the over Seventies (Saxon Crow)
I\'m glad that this not more explicit or it might be judged illicit. A...
August 14th, 2024 06:20 - The markets (2781)
This reads like a biblical verse. I feel premonitions of doom here. Well I...
August 14th, 2024 06:17 - Distractions (Cocamedo)
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the...
August 14th, 2024 06:14 - Pop Culture Reference Rhymes (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Ah pop culture, nicely rhymed. And yes a little social commentary and...
August 14th, 2024 06:13 - Water Well-Springs (Orchidee)
A hymn of praise. God knows we all need a little of that. Good write Orchi
August 14th, 2024 06:10 - AT THE BEAUTIFUL GATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A powerful write. Nicely done
August 14th, 2024 06:08 - It\'s Me Vs. Me (Dev Parth)
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04 - My Nevada (Teddy.15)
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An...
August 14th, 2024 06:01 - Winter, I hate you (Dn)
I could feel this one coming just like spring at the end of winter. A fun...
August 14th, 2024 05:53 - The Flamboyant Tree (Rrodriguez)
Nature sings and speaks in a language that only the truly interested can...
August 14th, 2024 05:51 - Slipping slowly, passing by (Iddycol)
A poem of adversity but also reassurance nicely written in verse. Well
August 14th, 2024 05:49 - CATCHING A JAZZ BUG (Bobby O)
A most beautiful description of what jazz is and why it is so seductive...
August 14th, 2024 05:06 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
May time bless you the rest of your days Gold. It is so wonderful when one...
August 14th, 2024 04:58 - Complacency Dares (Dan Williams)
Brilliant!! A masterpiece. The rhyme and meter in this pulls me on as time...
August 14th, 2024 04:55 - THIS DAY A WINDMILL (Bobby O)
I loved the complex but most satisfying rhyme in this piece The metaphor...
August 14th, 2024 04:44 - Energy (John Prophet)
I felt the energy in this powerful piece. It pulsates with reverberations...
August 13th, 2024 20:29 - Anchor Buried In Clouds (Satishverma)
Anger and violence is felt in this poem. Powerful write.
August 13th, 2024 20:27 - paroxysm (Anemoia)
Anger is heard in this poem. It seems on the edge and ready for violence....
August 13th, 2024 20:25 - What is the cost of a broken heart? (Anabasova)
The cost of a broken heart is an instalment plan of increasing interest...
August 13th, 2024 19:31 - My Dad (Angela)
A beautiful farewell and tribute. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:44 - How I write poems (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
That seems to be the process succinctly put in a very brief manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2024 17:21 - Memories in waves (Kenny O\'Donnell)
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves...
August 13th, 2024 17:17 - LIFE OF LIE (Kwrites)
Questioning oneself in doubt. Short but well written. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:15 - Words & Silence (Young Fella)
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued...
August 13th, 2024 17:13 - True North (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful and not critically polemic but complimentary. And well deserved.
August 13th, 2024 15:31 - Have Faith (DLewis88)
A beautiful poem loved it
August 13th, 2024 15:22 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
A colorful past with a black and white view. A colorful write with a black...
August 13th, 2024 15:18 - A 19\'s Poem (Wh)
A message nicely sent and in poetic terms. Well done.
August 13th, 2024 13:50 - pain (Sheta)
A true and most wonderful message. Great lines my favorite is the last...
August 13th, 2024 13:49 - Best wishes (Sami mulaj)
If only more people felt this way the words would be uttered more...
August 13th, 2024 13:47 - Rough times (Hey!)
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can....
August 13th, 2024 12:10 - The Lizard in the Coffee Pot (Gray0328)
A fun write and a metaphor at the same time. We all seek warmth whether...
August 13th, 2024 10:53 - Broken Broom (AuburnScribbler)
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my...
August 13th, 2024 10:48 - ~> Halloween Demon BAT! (Thad Wilk)
Sounds like Shylock\'s bargain of a pound of flesh. Too pricy a cost for...
August 13th, 2024 10:18 - Moving On (MendedFences27)
A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are...
August 13th, 2024 10:11 - The Silent Giant (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Mountains majesty stands out in this magnificently worded wonder of beauty
August 13th, 2024 08:43 - It\'s Your Life (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Choices are the basis of life or at least the illusion of choices. This...
August 13th, 2024 08:39 - At the Beach (Tony36)
Calm and easy to digest this poem promotes relaxation. Nice to hear and...
August 13th, 2024 08:37 - Letting you in (Natalie Heisey)
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant...
August 13th, 2024 08:36 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures...
August 13th, 2024 08:33 - Vampire Regurgitation Blues (Mutley Ravishes)
Metaphoric it is a most interesting view that in many ways makes sense. A...
August 13th, 2024 08:31 - Midnight Wish (Thoughtless)
Sensuous and sexy it evokes a feeling of longing. Nicely worded.
August 13th, 2024 08:29 - August 13th, 2024 – twenty five plus years since awful series of unfortunate events (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Full of images and metaphors this piece gos on with emotion. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 08:27 - Let go (BlessedbyGod)
Very nicely rhymed and composed. An enjoyable read.
August 13th, 2024 06:06 - Final Word Count (Tom Dylan)
A good question that I am fighting each day. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 06:04 - Monsoon! (Ladywithaquill)
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most...
August 13th, 2024 06:03 - heart friendship (Jim56)
Friendship a most valuable asset. As they say you pick your friends not...
August 13th, 2024 05:59 - 14th poem for: “T.N.D” - Cent or Dollar (Maplespal)
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when...
August 13th, 2024 05:57 - You introduced me to the phrase fatherly love (Glasswing)
A most beautiful tribute to brotherly love. Nicely penned I was initially...
August 13th, 2024 05:55 - Joy (Alan R)
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52 - Silent Battle (Tots onav)
A great Haiku nicely stated
August 13th, 2024 05:51 - IGBO AMAKA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Nicely done expressing a missing of one\'s past culture and enjoyment of...
August 13th, 2024 05:50 - writers block + the thoughts that consume us (Lei)
That last statement was a bit vague I hope either way writing or self it...
August 13th, 2024 05:48 - Inverter (2781)
Sounds religious. Nice rhyme. Liked it
August 13th, 2024 05:46 - Sticky Identities (The Great Kateri)
A wise statement how we describe ourselves comes from how we see ourselves...
August 13th, 2024 05:44 - An Open Letter To Myself (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Mental images pressed in concrete. Feelings like needles in a pocket. I...
August 13th, 2024 05:43 - Calling Out (Cocamedo)
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely
August 13th, 2024 05:41 - Greatness of God (Orchidee)
Another good hymn Orchi
August 13th, 2024 05:38 - Home Another Way. (Goldfinch60)
The road not taken? or at least not taken before. A fun read Gold and a...
August 13th, 2024 05:36 - A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards)
Love these old measures Stones, furlongs, gill and cubit for a few. A most...
August 13th, 2024 05:33 - Letter From The Dead (Beatrix M)
Heavy and dark a plea for forgiveness for betrayal and treachery. Gothic...
August 13th, 2024 05:29 - Choir of Angels (Dan Williams)
The blues are soulful and come straight from the heart. Love the blues...
August 13th, 2024 05:27 - flowers without light are flowers that dont grow (MR.apocalypse)
Nicely written in good rhyme this poem of uncertainty was certainly done...
August 13th, 2024 05:22 - Our Walks (Anthony Hanible)
Walks too seldom taken by many and one of the reasons for alienation in...
August 13th, 2024 05:20 - WHY THAT\"S SO (Dev Parth)
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19 - Gertrude ......... (Saxon Crow)
This one gave me a laugh and got the morning off to a smiling start....
August 13th, 2024 05:17 - Clocked (Neville)
We never miss things until they are gone they say. And how could we? What...
August 13th, 2024 05:14 - Camera Roll (Sophin)
A great metaphor. Nicely penned.
August 13th, 2024 05:09 - I won\'t let you touch me (Weep little lion girl)
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form....
August 13th, 2024 05:07 - A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case)
A message sent in metaphor and clear words that speaks to all of us in one...
August 13th, 2024 05:06 - Wayfair (Coracaodacripta)
Exquisite imagery that often turns metaphoric. A beautiful write with a...
August 13th, 2024 05:03 - What Of Love? (Teddy.15)
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such...
August 13th, 2024 04:59 - Unrest (Boot)
The sound of a battle lost. Very nice
August 12th, 2024 20:44 - His Daily Ritual (J.Edse)
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42 - I\'m Coming Back (13LaurenD)
A poem of perseverance nicely stated. Well said.
August 12th, 2024 19:43 - Full Solitude (DLewis88)
A rhyme pattern that I chose to use in tomorrows poem. A great message and...
August 12th, 2024 17:39 - The Monster. (Wanderingpoet)
Words of what once was love now have taken control. Nicely written.
August 12th, 2024 17:02 - Layers (MattColombo)
Turning negatives into positive in good form. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 16:59 - Happy (Alan R)
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57 - Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard)
Most beautiful with stunning images and a wonderful lead in to the closing...
August 12th, 2024 15:30 - I die for you (Sami mulaj)
A beautiful sentiment clothed in poetic beauty. Lovely!
August 12th, 2024 15:25 - The Matrix (Thepoetman1234)
A poem of protest well stated and hopefully headed but yet what is the...
August 12th, 2024 15:24 - These days (BlessedbyGod)
Nicely written in verse this message speaks what many feel. Nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 15:22 - Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran) (AuburnScribbler)
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is...
August 12th, 2024 15:20 - texts from deadrose [part one] (DeadRose)
A mystery or code as time goes misunderstood. A most interesting read.
August 12th, 2024 14:56 - It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole (ADarkerMind)
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55 - Chokehold (Saidgodis)
A poem of distress and anguish. It cries out in pain.
August 12th, 2024 14:52 - The Unseen Struggle (Gray0328)
Well worded with some great lines it does speak to the heart. Loved it
August 12th, 2024 14:50 - Poets (Anabasova)
I liked this poem it talks of the difference between a poet and the rest...
August 12th, 2024 14:48
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