Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• first love (Jim56) Some call it first love I call it passion. Never the less you are so right...
  August 8th, 2024 07:08
• What Makes us Superior?  (Maplespal) Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a...
  August 8th, 2024 07:06
• Axiomatic Sliver (Beatrix M) Very metaphoric this write. its comments on sexuality and purity buried...
  August 8th, 2024 07:03
• BEAUTIFUL TRAP (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Clear in its message this poem full of metaphor and imagery sends a...
  August 8th, 2024 06:58
• We Don\'t Need Kings and Queens (Rebellion_in_sanity) A call for revolution, anarchy? Democracy too has its weakness in tyranny...
  August 8th, 2024 06:56
• the rain (Anna_x_life) Bitter sweet this poem but a great sense of unity with nature and full of...
  August 8th, 2024 06:53
• Comforting Concerns (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi I can use all the comforting that can be spared...
  August 8th, 2024 06:50
• Garden of Edone (Mutley Ravishes) Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
  August 8th, 2024 06:48
• As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville) Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any...
  August 8th, 2024 06:46
• God’s Gifts (Cocamedo) A strong belief and faith in oneself is a great message in this poem....
  August 8th, 2024 06:44
• When I See You Again (Skaar) Seldom is repetition of phrases effective in my view but this is one of...
  August 8th, 2024 06:42
• The quiet (RSM0812) A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s...
  August 8th, 2024 06:38
• As I Sit Here. (Goldfinch60) So true friend, each moment is a new start and since you always start on a...
  August 8th, 2024 05:27
• Squeaks (Dan Williams) Maybe it is only recently that we have seen ourselves as sheep. Awakening...
  August 8th, 2024 05:22
• Harmony Lost, Hope Restored (Rrodriguez) An epic poem about creation and redemption from the fall. Nicely written
  August 7th, 2024 20:45
• The sword (2781) A most interesting write thought provoking.
  August 7th, 2024 18:22
• Inclusive (Tristan Robert Lange) On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so...
  August 7th, 2024 18:20
• Ignite me (Yourz Truly 2.0) Gratitude for good fortune in love. Very nice.
  August 7th, 2024 17:35
• ME N YOU (Magzzbaby) Sad a poem of loss. Hoping things work out. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 16:56
• The final whistle (Sami mulaj) Our sense of aggrandizement leaves us feeling like the train won\'t leave...
  August 7th, 2024 15:40
• America at a critical political crossroads..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Curious as to why most poets are from the left, is it that people from the...
  August 7th, 2024 14:19
• Beauty of Water (DLewis88) Very Taoist deep and profound a wonderful write.
  August 7th, 2024 14:13
• My Very Own Lemon Meringue (ADarkerMind) Incongruous combinations puzzle the mind and numb the brain bringing a...
  August 7th, 2024 13:46
• The Truth (Sheryffat) Reassuring and a good message. Nicely written
  August 7th, 2024 13:44
• Chapbook (Kenny O\'Donnell) Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 13:42
• Someday (I\'ll Tell You How You Won Over Me) (Petrichor of Love) Beautiful lines romantic in nature and soothing to the ear. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 12:07
• The Splender of Two Natures (Gray0328) I take this as a metaphor with in a metaphor. Symbolic god now a fading...
  August 7th, 2024 11:44
• Memory Fades (Thomas W Case) Was this directed at a woman? Seems like or maybe just my prejudiced view...
  August 7th, 2024 11:42
• Funeral (M.E.M.) A passage in life that all must take. Nicely worded
  August 7th, 2024 11:41
• Interesting Times (John Prophet) Change the only constant. Nicely worded.
  August 7th, 2024 11:39
• No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale (Raidoc) Energized this poem. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 10:11
• ~~> Pin Head (Thad Wilk) Is this about a UTI? It feels like it. Not a pleasant experience. Unlike...
  August 7th, 2024 10:09
• I AM A WOMAN (Kwrites) A great write about the paradoxes and inconsistencies of life as a woman...
  August 7th, 2024 10:07
• Relationships (Saleh Ben Saleh) Great rhyme in a poem of great flow and meaning
  August 7th, 2024 10:05
• Blue Song at Night (MendedFences27) Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini
  August 7th, 2024 10:04
• Lost at sea (Poetic Dan) Not sure how this would piss anyone off. I love the last line
  August 7th, 2024 09:59
• Heavy (Xqw) Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the...
  August 7th, 2024 09:28
• A bee sips from a dewdrop (Jerry Reynolds) A gentle and poetic line. Loved the imagery in this poem
  August 7th, 2024 09:25
• Heaven (The Indignant Poetess) Heartening and upbeat. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 08:58
• The Silence (Thoughtless) A touching story of overcoming difficulties and enduring love. Nicely...
  August 7th, 2024 08:51
• Abode of God (Rebellion_in_sanity) A very nice write and yes dignity is where God resides. Very nice
  August 7th, 2024 08:48
• Blood & sweat (Natalie Heisey) A battle cry or war cry this sounds out loud and clear. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 08:46
• Trapped (Tony36) All of us influenced by peer pressure. It is difficult to stand up against...
  August 7th, 2024 08:44
• daddies gift (Jim56) A dog is man\'s best friend. Good write
  August 7th, 2024 06:39
• The Light (13LaurenD) Perseverance and determination is the key to victory. Stated in many ways...
  August 7th, 2024 06:38
• Prolific (Tom Dylan) Good advice. The more you write the more practice you will get and the...
  August 7th, 2024 06:32
• A Very Grand Finale (Teddy.15) Dying with a smile is the only way to go. Then to die while performing two...
  August 7th, 2024 06:30
• The Poetess and the Pussy (Teddy.15) Fun is what I can say about this write. Yes I agree you have not lived...
  August 7th, 2024 05:16
• Two Sides of the Same Coin (Mystery\'s Creation) Many pearls here. Great line after great line. They say wisdom comes with...
  August 7th, 2024 04:46
• 10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel (Maplespal) Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings...
  August 7th, 2024 04:37
• PAINFUL REST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) This is particularly powerful and sad in its tragedy. This not only pulls...
  August 7th, 2024 04:35
• Why? (Marmar) Why implies understanding and some things are not to be understood but...
  August 7th, 2024 04:32
• Wholesome Worship (Orchidee) I love the music part and have gone to church in the past just for that....
  August 7th, 2024 04:30
• I Think I Like You But .. (Neville) Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance...
  August 7th, 2024 04:29
• The Porch Light is On (Cocamedo) A wonderful metaphor and the use of vivid images some of which are...
  August 7th, 2024 04:14
• Magic Potion (Mutley Ravishes) Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two...
  August 7th, 2024 04:12
• The Echoes of Valor ([email protected]) Horrors of war not just glories here. Loved the line \"Bent and broken, we...
  August 7th, 2024 04:05
• Painfully Passing the Time (Gloria Denise) Distraction is a marvelous way to keep one\'s mind off of the undesirable....
  August 7th, 2024 04:02
• Haiku (Hans__) This one requires more than one reading and leads to more than one...
  August 7th, 2024 04:00
• sweet on you (Queer-with-a-pen) I loved the opening stanza. Philosophical it used the paradox to set the...
  August 7th, 2024 03:58
• Analysing Myself (Satishverma) I again came to read lines of wisdom in the foolish. Beautiful thoughts...
  August 7th, 2024 03:54
• The truth about War (Saleh Ben Saleh) A poem with a message that deserves more readers. Just as in life itself...
  August 7th, 2024 03:47
• New Life Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful images and yes I too would love to soar but I\'m afraid that the...
  August 7th, 2024 03:43
• Me, Mary And Nature. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful and fulfilling write Gold. Nice way to start a day.
  August 7th, 2024 03:38
• Always Never (Dan Williams) This is a very powerful write that slowly takes hold of the reader, then...
  August 7th, 2024 03:33
• We rise again (Natalie Heisey) A call to fight onward. Animating and a pleasure to read. Very nice.
  August 6th, 2024 17:02
• Cranial decay (Shadowbones) Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving...
  August 6th, 2024 17:00
• Hidden Chaos (Young Fella) Wonderfully worded and neatly metered this poem shows a contrast between...
  August 6th, 2024 16:14
• Sadness (Angela) Personified death in this poem becomes a known entity and the read is a...
  August 6th, 2024 14:52
• Sound Bites: 8-6-2024 (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed they are short but polished sound bites. Each in its own way a...
  August 6th, 2024 14:49
• dandelion seeds. (DeadRose) Loved the wording of this piece it catches the imagination and rolls off...
  August 6th, 2024 14:44
• Ponder (L.R.A) A great message in this write. Nicely written.
  August 6th, 2024 13:12
• PISCES WOMAN (Magzzbaby) Astrological this poem is a great description of those aspects. As a fish...
  August 6th, 2024 13:10
• Dance! (Thoughtless) Intriguing write that gives the brain something to think about.
  August 6th, 2024 11:37
• Sandy Conversation  (Blossompayal) Nicely written a romantic write well done.
  August 6th, 2024 11:36
• Do not (Sami mulaj) Nicely written a beautiful and peaceful thought.
  August 6th, 2024 11:33
• Blackcurrant Squash (AuburnScribbler) A delicious write. Nicely done.
  August 6th, 2024 11:32
• Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World (Gray0328) Beautiful imagery in this poem. Vivid and identifiable.
  August 6th, 2024 11:27
• All people are Gifted (Saleh Ben Saleh) There is always someone better. Humility is the best rout. It is the most...
  August 6th, 2024 11:24
• Blue Song in Evening (MendedFences27) Quite the story. nicely done.
  August 6th, 2024 11:17
• Results (Sydney Zane) Appreciated the rhyme in this poem. Good going.
  August 6th, 2024 11:13
• Come Back (Shallom_M) Loss never believed, sometimes even after it occurs is not believed. We...
  August 6th, 2024 11:11
• ~> Martians Landed Twice In Australia! (Thad Wilk) A fun read that left me smiling. Loved it
  August 6th, 2024 09:05
• Prisoner Of My Own Thoughts (Mark The Phenomenon) Guilt and regret two difficult obstacles to overcome. Well expressed here.
  August 6th, 2024 09:03
• Little Red Riding Hood (Tony36) A nursery rhyme revisited is it to be continued with the wolf?
  August 6th, 2024 08:10
• angel flight (Jim56) Christmas in August I\'m not ready. A fun and uplifting read.
  August 6th, 2024 05:44
• 9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced (Maplespal) Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
  August 6th, 2024 05:35
• Gypsy (Garth Rakumakoe) Creative thought in this write. A fun read but with a deeper meaning that...
  August 6th, 2024 05:33
• Forever living (2781) Liked the playfulness of the rhyme in this piece. It carried me on to the...
  August 6th, 2024 05:31
• morning moment (Markashley1961) Beautiful and peaceful imaged fill this poem causing a feeling of...
  August 6th, 2024 05:26
• A Very Sweet Dream of Home (Teddy.15) Simply changing how we think about things can make all the difference in...
  August 6th, 2024 05:25
• THE LIFE OF LIKE (Poetrybyaqsa) A great message to redirect out thoughts away from what we don\'t have to...
  August 6th, 2024 05:22
• FATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A most satisfying view of oneself in the spectrum of time. Nicely said.
  August 6th, 2024 05:19
• Love Song (Tristan Robert Lange) A couple of beautiful themes in this poem: love, unity, peace, joy,...
  August 6th, 2024 05:18
• Letting Go of The Light (Neville) A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this...
  August 6th, 2024 05:15
• On My Way To Star (Dev Parth) A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of...
  August 6th, 2024 05:13
• I. (Goldfinch60) All will have an anthology of your works my friend. And may this not be...
  August 6th, 2024 05:10
• “Good Morning Heartache. Sit Down” (HolesInMyJeans) A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one...
  August 6th, 2024 05:07
• In the Dust (Cocamedo) A great message. There is no past and no future only the present and I...
  August 6th, 2024 05:03
• Mom\'s hands (NafisaSB) A lovely tribute to mother. Nicely done
  August 6th, 2024 05:00