Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The beast within (Saleh Ben Saleh) Duality of man or at least undesirable aspects of each man. Nicely done
  August 5th, 2024 12:44
• ~`` Knees - Parody of Trees (Thad Wilk) A great rhythm and rhyme reminiscent of \"I think I shall never see a poem...
  August 5th, 2024 12:42
• Broken Dreams (Sami mulaj) A most interesting comparison wet in a poem. Mind provoking. Nicely done.
  August 5th, 2024 12:40
• The Scorpion And The Frog (Young Fella) A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and...
  August 5th, 2024 12:38
• Ambrosia for Us (Thoughtless) Beautiful and (possibly?) metaphoric.
  August 5th, 2024 09:04
• The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare) (Paul W Conway) A fun and metaphoric ballad and tale combining the best of both worlds....
  August 5th, 2024 09:03
• Heart speaks (Natalie Heisey) Nicely written with a most positive attitude.
  August 5th, 2024 08:59
• Physical & Mental Scars (Mark The Phenomenon) Painful memories can be seen as positive in that worse could have...
  August 5th, 2024 08:57
• How Much (Tony36) I am a cynic but this is darker than I. I prefer to think that I will...
  August 5th, 2024 07:52
• Poetry of the Undesired (Gaurav Gurung) Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here...
  August 5th, 2024 07:49
• If tomorrow starts without me (Shallom_M) Do we make a difference? A great question that this poem poses. Nicely...
  August 5th, 2024 07:46
• world wish (Jim56) A beautiful dream but unless you are a bee not likely in the near future....
  August 5th, 2024 07:44
• The Champion of Coney Island (Gray0328) A vivid scene with imagery galore but I sense something deeper rumbling in...
  August 5th, 2024 07:42
• 8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots (Maplespal) Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
  August 5th, 2024 07:32
• Where I End and You Begin (Beano) Thought provoking and nicely done. \"Morning, and its forceful...
  August 5th, 2024 07:27
• All Along the Watchtower (Neville) Memories of the past, so I won\'t mention him but what of Jimi Hendrix it...
  August 5th, 2024 07:25
• Comforting Consolings (Orchidee) Another wonderful hymn that I could have sung yesterday. Well done Orchi
  August 5th, 2024 07:21
• THE CELEBRANTS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A nice tribute. Well done
  August 5th, 2024 07:19
• Polarisation (2781) Politics always an amusing fight between left and right. Nicely done
  August 5th, 2024 07:18
• Angry At The Symbolism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read for film viewers and symbolism well we will see. Nicely done...
  August 5th, 2024 07:17
• Phew (Boot) A bit of humor is great to start the day Thanks for the smile.
  August 5th, 2024 07:15
• nights like these (Queer-with-a-pen) Sad indeed. painful and tragic it has a haunting quality to it. Well...
  August 5th, 2024 07:13
• CARVING (Bobby O) A deep and powerful write that courageously spews forth its message in...
  August 5th, 2024 07:08
• One Petal (Cocamedo) Full of memories that bring nostalgia to anyone that has had a lengthy...
  August 5th, 2024 07:03
• Nocturn (Rebellion_in_sanity) I feel the night in this poem that has so many great images and lines....
  August 5th, 2024 06:58
• Crying For Freedom (Dev Parth) A well worked poem with great power so well rhymed and metered it flows...
  August 5th, 2024 06:56
• NO SENSE GUESSING (Bobby O) Variability is part of life. Loved the first line \" Sometimes becomes...
  August 5th, 2024 05:45
• Natures Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60) And may it be so Andy. A calm and peaceful read to start the day. Lovely
  August 5th, 2024 05:38
• By Destiny Caught (Dan Williams) This poem reads so well in its rhythm and rhyme but more so each stanza...
  August 5th, 2024 05:32
• Moonwhite Heart (Satishverma) Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper...
  August 4th, 2024 20:35
• Urayoan, Towering Mountain (Rrodriguez) Scenic, vivid imagery that takes one on a trip. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2024 20:33
• But I wasn’t Enough (Gloria Denise) Painful to read. A darker write. Sad.
  August 4th, 2024 20:23
• not so empty thoughts (Emptythoughts) Honesty is the best policy it makes life a lot easier. Nicely written.
  August 4th, 2024 20:18
• Will of learning faith (DREEK0) A nice read about faith in oneself. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2024 20:17
• Observer (NinjaGirl) The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the...
  August 4th, 2024 18:36
• Celebrate (Cocamedo) Wise words and a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
  August 4th, 2024 17:35
• Fake (Alan R) This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers...
  August 4th, 2024 17:33
• Supernova (Mya) A fun read that is warm in many ways. Nice
  August 4th, 2024 17:29
• Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15) Teddy you have a knack to make someone feel good with your comments and...
  August 4th, 2024 16:05
• The bridge of love (Sami mulaj)
  August 4th, 2024 15:56
• The bridge of love (Sami mulaj) Clever write and probably wise as well. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2024 15:56
• ~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale (Thad Wilk) My friend had a Doberman that would only drink beer. It was the most...
  August 4th, 2024 15:55
• Corona (MendedFences27) Cheers to that. Nice write
  August 4th, 2024 15:52
• Montana (Thomas W Case) Thomas I lived in Montana for a while and though the rivers in the west...
  August 4th, 2024 15:51
• The unforgiving Christian (Charlotte3) True for all beliefs there are those that follow and those that just want...
  August 4th, 2024 14:03
• Destiny\'s Mime (Kurt Philip Behm) A beautiful write about most people. Those that love to watch sports on TV...
  August 4th, 2024 13:59
• My Wedding Night (Thoughtless) Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the...
  August 4th, 2024 13:55
• Jokes On Me (13LaurenD) Mixed emotions, things are never simple especially in love. Good write.
  August 4th, 2024 13:53
• Seeing The Daisies (Annemarie) A most positive attitude maintained in the face of adversity. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2024 09:53
• Standard Class (A Town Shanty) (AuburnScribbler) A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
  August 4th, 2024 09:52
• But I’m Smiling (Tkatie118) Sad and dark but with a hopeful ending left with a smile. A great message.
  August 4th, 2024 09:49
• i wish i could write her a poem (Carpe4diem) It sounds like you did write her a poem and a nice one too. Very nice.
  August 4th, 2024 09:46
• Perception3 (John Prophet) A chain of thoughts linked in free association to a single thought. Nice
  August 4th, 2024 09:45
• BROWN EYES (Adiba Khan) A wonderful view into the eyes of the common but spectacular. Color is...
  August 4th, 2024 09:43
• Tarnished Knight (Tony36) Such a claim of love so nicely state. The rhyme was great in this short...
  August 4th, 2024 09:40
• Beggars (2781) A beautiful message in this poem. So many judge the poor and unfortunate...
  August 4th, 2024 06:27
• 7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture (Maplespal) Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2024 06:24
• How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime. (ADarkerMind) A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the...
  August 4th, 2024 06:23
• happy poem (Jim56) Cute and reminded me of when my dog used to dig them up and bring them to...
  August 4th, 2024 06:21
• Breaking Bad Habits (Gray0328) Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy...
  August 4th, 2024 06:19
• Fireflies (Framed Mirror) So nicely worded this evokes emotions accompanying past memories from a...
  August 4th, 2024 06:16
• THE HOLY BRIEFCASE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Touching, historic, vivid in imagery and with a message. Nicely done.
  August 4th, 2024 06:08
• Black Sheep (Bame Bame) Narcissistic, egotistical maybe we all are such at some level and when our...
  August 4th, 2024 06:04
• slam your head into the basement concrete floor (Anemoia) What a creative manner of animating the inanimate to tell a human tale....
  August 4th, 2024 05:58
• Proceeding To Praise (Orchidee) Recognition, praise and gratitude what else could a supreme deity desire....
  August 4th, 2024 05:56
• If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15) A wonderful turning of lemons into lemonade. Such a fun read, playful and...
  August 4th, 2024 05:54
• Immaterial Things Such as These (Neville) Neville loved the format of this poem it seemed a zipper that was closed....
  August 4th, 2024 05:50
• Order Out Of Chaos (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Much of the cynicism I hold is voiced in this poem and that too I think is...
  August 4th, 2024 05:45
• Unwound (Tristan Robert Lange) Disjointed thought link in chains as they pass through our minds. Here...
  August 4th, 2024 05:43
• Thank You Wolfgang. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful way to start the day. Amazing how a man so many years ago...
  August 4th, 2024 05:37
• A hug (NafisaSB) True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of...
  August 4th, 2024 05:35
• Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon) Sensual, sexual, romantic, a sex manual in a poem.
  August 4th, 2024 05:33
• Over Your Shoulder (Dan Williams) Is that finger pointing at me? You are creating paranoia in me Dan. A very...
  August 4th, 2024 04:57
• End (RefugeInRain) In chasing our tail we often find it is part of us, but it takes going in...
  August 3rd, 2024 21:00
• Unholy Night (Thomas W Case) Bad dreams, too much to drink, or wrong drugs often lead to this feeling...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:56
• Denouement - 1920 (Cole) A very unique style to this poem kept my attention and the wording was...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:54
• longing (Fire_fly) A nice thought with a very pleasant feel to it
  August 3rd, 2024 18:52
• shadow ii (Eugene S.) Thought provoking in its ambiguity yet holds the attention with its...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:51
• Queen Tore Flesh From Bone (Beatrix M) I once found myself in an obsidian field and gathered several shards. A...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:50
• A Strange Woman\'s Lips (Thoughtless) Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:47
• To My Childhood Best Friend (Aneenaelzabinod) Dependability is worth a great deal. Here it is expressed in this poem....
  August 3rd, 2024 18:43
• Empty Seats (Mya) Interesting and a fun read. Thanks for sharing
  August 3rd, 2024 18:41
• To My Sister: 姐姐 (Olive Anderson) Sweet, cute, endearing all fit this poem. Nicely written.
  August 3rd, 2024 13:40
• Reinventing Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Thought provoking lines put in verse that flows like honey.
  August 3rd, 2024 13:39
• Eye cannot envision not wearing glasses (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Quite and emotional ride in this story form the eyes of a child memory....
  August 3rd, 2024 13:37
• War and Desire (Anandh K) The ravages of war are a gruesome and tragic consequence of man and his...
  August 3rd, 2024 13:33
• Music To Lift the Spirits (Gray0328) This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the...
  August 3rd, 2024 11:44
• Pause (Annemarie) A mantra in poetry. Nicely written and beautiful to read
  August 3rd, 2024 10:36
• Play (Alan R) Nicely written in verse a message sent. Very good
  August 3rd, 2024 10:34
• A Battle With You (Iyeah) Clever and well stated. A good read.
  August 3rd, 2024 10:33
• Nightly Theatre (Teddy.15) Even good dreams can give muscle contractions. A lovely dream that seems...
  August 3rd, 2024 09:06
• SOULMATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A nice pledge of love to a chosen one seen as a soulmate
  August 3rd, 2024 08:58
• The hummingbird made me wonder (Saleh Ben Saleh) Beautiful little creatures I see different ones and sometimes they come...
  August 3rd, 2024 08:56
• To the Skies (Anabella151) Beautiful in a literal sense but the metaphor is greater still.
  August 3rd, 2024 08:54
• In the Clouds (MendedFences27) Beautiful images in this write. Love the clouds and sometimes find myself...
  August 3rd, 2024 08:53
• Twisted (2781) Sad when any group of people single out another group for any reason
  August 3rd, 2024 08:50
• Coffee (Tony36) I take it you are a coffee lover. Are you a coffee coinsure?
  August 3rd, 2024 08:49
• The 30th Anniversary of Papaw\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A sad tribute to a loved one. Nicely done
  August 3rd, 2024 08:47
• thank mum (Jim56) A wonderful tribute to a person that we all have and to whom we owe a debt...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:28
• I\'m Selfish (13LaurenD) Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely
  August 3rd, 2024 06:26