Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Time (Rrodriguez)
This poem in tranquil arms transports me to past memories of places and...
April 18th, 2025 11:33 - Standing Eight Count (Thomas W Case)
Just like I like em gritty, dark, full of flavor. Well done Thomas
April 18th, 2025 11:31 - The Eve Of Easter (Orchidee)
Very nicely crafted this well known tale. Nicely appropriate for the...
April 18th, 2025 11:29 - Ahem, Don\'t Look At Me (Cheeky Missy)
Chic I particularly enjoyed your first it being so intricately woven with...
April 18th, 2025 11:26 - THE NATURE OF REALITY (Twizzle48)
A great write about a very complex subject. Quantum physics is the poetry...
April 18th, 2025 09:24 - A Colored Night (Maplespal)
A very poetic description of fireworks that sparks memories and explodes...
April 18th, 2025 09:19 - True Friends (Simerjeet Singh)
Friends are special in that they are chosen while family is not. This...
April 18th, 2025 09:17 - the skull called place (Tristan Robert Lange)
A very powerful beginning that thunders at the reader with the power of...
April 18th, 2025 09:14 - Graves (Tony36)
A beautiful poem reminiscent of the song (Where have all the flowers gone)...
April 18th, 2025 07:43 - Wind (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah it is the ambiguity that catches my eye first. Is it the traveler or...
April 18th, 2025 07:41 - In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc. (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American...
April 18th, 2025 07:33 - Whispers (Teardrop)
A most beautiful poem of the language of nature and our deafness to it....
April 18th, 2025 07:29 - Chocolate (Mutley Ravishes)
A great write and for a good purpose. Nicely done in few words
April 18th, 2025 06:17 - Ēostre Or Easter? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Even the date is hard to place the first Sunday after the first full moon...
April 18th, 2025 06:15 - Soul 2 (Teddy.15)
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A...
April 18th, 2025 05:34 - sleeping pills (Dimpy)
Biting one\'s tongue is painful. A very nice poem with a little advice
April 18th, 2025 05:31 - The Best is Left of Me (Randall Racine)
Well rhymed this poem tells the story of a life changed by adversity. Very...
April 18th, 2025 05:29 - mans best friend (Jim56)
Another tribute to man\'s best friend. Nicely done Jim
April 18th, 2025 05:23 - Mythos (Libellule)
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still....
April 18th, 2025 05:22 - Higanbana (Arobot)
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25 - Wonder (Mottakeenur Rehman)
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and...
April 18th, 2025 04:24 - Angel of my afterlife (Alan R)
A collage of images vivid all intermingled with nature scenes. A most...
April 18th, 2025 04:21 - ROBINS IN WINTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written...
April 18th, 2025 04:19 - The Last Loss (Devender Kumar)
The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 04:14 - Borrow (Salian)
Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and...
April 18th, 2025 04:11 - If you ever return (Chris Anderson)
Welcome to MPS this poem shows such nice flow and good rhyme with a topic...
April 18th, 2025 04:08 - So close yet so far (Lana c)
This is very clever poetry is the condensation of emotion into words and...
April 18th, 2025 04:04 - Buy Me (Randall Racine)
This poem utilizes careful meter in each line to create the rhythm and...
April 18th, 2025 04:01 - A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry? (Hollow Enigma)
Couplets compose this poem with a one line romantic and the other not so...
April 18th, 2025 03:53 - A Daisy on My Mind (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful metaphor. Love so beautiful and yet delicate. Very nicely...
April 18th, 2025 03:44 - Heart or Mind. (Poetic Licence)
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby...
April 18th, 2025 03:36 - twilight trek (Arqios)
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A...
April 18th, 2025 03:28 - The Air That You Breathe. (Goldfinch60)
I often wonder how life would be if the proportion of oxygen and nitrogen...
April 18th, 2025 03:19 - The Light I Left for You (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie)
A poem of loss and well rhymed nicely written. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:50 - When Somebody’s Dead (MDStone)
A truth and a nice set of quadruple rhymes. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:47 - Damn it to Hell! (Mutley Ravishes)
So where do you go if you\'re not good enough to to to heaven and the...
April 17th, 2025 20:44 - Today the Sky Looked Painted (Maydanae)
A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their...
April 17th, 2025 18:48 - Fogged rainbows (Arial)
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22 - German Death Camp by Boris Slutsky (Ksey_Gan)
A hard read about the cruelty of man to his fellows. A dark poem story of...
April 17th, 2025 17:19 - Long story, Words short (Mya)
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in...
April 17th, 2025 16:17 - Elegy For a Name No One Remembers (Rawaneigh.99)
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is...
April 17th, 2025 16:12 - the women that saved my life (Bethan)
A wonderful tribute in poetic form. Well done
April 17th, 2025 16:08 - Have fun, sell some words (Maplespal)
A great technique and a fun poem all in one. I do that from time to time...
April 17th, 2025 16:06 - Good Old Friend (Mya)
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am...
April 17th, 2025 16:00 - Bring Me Alive (Gray0328)
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and...
April 17th, 2025 15:57 - Assurance (Mottakeenur Rehman)
So short yet says so much a most lovely write
April 17th, 2025 13:29 - Neck of These Woods (Justyouraveragewriter)
I think I have been there and met him. Not a bad place. Loved the write
April 17th, 2025 13:17 - Oppressed (Sunshine777)
A poem of questions that we have been asking for a long time. Nicely...
April 17th, 2025 13:15 - Self Beating (Anthony Hanible)
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even...
April 17th, 2025 13:13 - all I am is a man (Newt)
I like the progression in this poem well written
April 17th, 2025 13:11 - The SINGULARITY (Muse of Calliope)
A great write raising the questions and fears that too share. Maybe we...
April 17th, 2025 13:09 - The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee)
A great write for this time of the year Orchi. Well done.
April 17th, 2025 13:05 - I\'m 19 years into this life (Pineapple_pizza018)
That existential crisis that many of us go through usually in our teens...
April 17th, 2025 13:04 - Love of the Old (Tony Dawson)
Clever and touching a rare combination. Well written and composed. A fave
April 17th, 2025 13:01 - Forever Lost (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful I\'ve had that feeling although it makes no sense. the poem...
April 17th, 2025 10:57 - wolf in sheep\'s clothing (Gia)
The duality of this poem speaking from a outside point of view and as the...
April 17th, 2025 09:19 - Cryptical (Libellule)
(All of these secrets kept within
a true bounty of virtue and sin
yet...
April 17th, 2025 09:02 - the agony (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very dark, this poem dives deep into the depths and reveals the festering...
April 17th, 2025 07:42 - The Streets (Tony36)
The harshness of life in this poem. Well written and with just enough...
April 17th, 2025 07:39 - Mitchell Man: Lover (Tkatie118)
Blinded by passion and love one forgets and forgives and even believes...
April 17th, 2025 06:30 - Long Death, Liberty (Arobot)
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body...
April 17th, 2025 06:24 - Wife of Shadow (RSM0812)
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the...
April 17th, 2025 06:21 - birthdays (Jim56)
True it is Jim and I have had many. A bright poem for those of us with...
April 17th, 2025 06:19 - \"She said to herself\" (Antra.sharma_)
A parents message to their child a lovely thing. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 05:06 - Fate, the Soul mate (Devender Kumar)
This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is...
April 17th, 2025 05:03 - The things you can’t buy… (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price...
April 17th, 2025 05:01 - Coin Flip (Salian)
A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work....
April 17th, 2025 05:00 - Infinity Of Love (Ajon4wheels)
Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
April 17th, 2025 04:58 - in darkness... (Dimpy)
Sensual, erotic, sexual, full of desire. A poem with energy
April 17th, 2025 04:56 - Do You Believe Katy Perry Went To Space? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This was a really fun read with great rhyme and humor it rocks
April 17th, 2025 04:54 - Whispers of Palani Hills ([email protected])
Painted with wonderful and vivid imagery this poem talks of natural beauty...
April 17th, 2025 04:52 - Midnight sky (Reynaldo Casison)
Here a combination of incongruous words make for a indescribable feeling...
April 17th, 2025 04:47 - experimental haiku (Thoughtless)
Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It\'s...
April 17th, 2025 04:42 - Around Her (Salian)
A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem...
April 17th, 2025 04:40 - STONE IN MY BOOT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the...
April 17th, 2025 04:36 - Seeds (Pineapple_pizza018)
A beautiful poem of faith and seeing how things fit in a longer...
April 17th, 2025 04:34 - Message (E.J. Waling)
A universe that is full of waves, vibrations if you will just has to be...
April 17th, 2025 04:32 - CrAvE (Natalie Heisey)
This poem carries with it a feeling of oppressive sheltering and the urge...
April 17th, 2025 04:26 - I Got Burned. (Poetic Licence)
A poem of injustice in an unjust world where little makes sense but all...
April 17th, 2025 04:14 - but a flesh wound (Arqios)
This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the...
April 17th, 2025 04:08 - The Four Composers. (Goldfinch60)
A poem with a very good point that I agree with and who I am listening to...
April 17th, 2025 03:55 - El Yunque (Rrodriguez)
Simply beautiful in its imagery and nature. For this alone it is a fave
April 16th, 2025 20:10 - Now isn\'t that Lovely. (Maydanae)
In this poem all seems well until the last line. Everything with or...
April 16th, 2025 20:07 - Searching (Mik)
I loved this poem it speaks to the head through the heart and belief in...
April 16th, 2025 20:03 - Forevermore (Muse of Calliope)
A great use of multiple rhyme in a poem of a powerful emotional nature....
April 16th, 2025 20:01 - Lionel Groom (Kevin Hulme)
What a great poem. People are not always what they seem to be or the other...
April 16th, 2025 19:00 - One Sided Love (Charicebcampos)
Hopes and dreams shattered by perceived rejection. A most powerful write.
April 16th, 2025 18:56 - My Own (Alex PB)
We all can live on our own but it is not the same as with someone else. A...
April 16th, 2025 18:54 - To Begin (Tayama)
This poem weaves its tale in wonderful wording and form. Well done
April 16th, 2025 17:01 - Almond seed (Amethyste)
How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with...
April 16th, 2025 16:59 - For your review (Maplespal)
A very personal poem offered to the readers. I would say thank your for...
April 16th, 2025 16:57 - she told me she felt like a loaf of bread (Jon Nakapalau)
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely...
April 16th, 2025 16:54 - The Treasures of Tomorrow (Shahla Latifi)
A poetic dream of a fair world where all have equal opportunity, a lovely...
April 16th, 2025 16:52 - Seeding The Palms (Kurt Philip Behm)
And so my grandfather said. It is fine to make a prophesy as long as you...
April 16th, 2025 14:58 - A trip to London (Chris Duffy)
A great amount of fun in this poem of being where one does not belong and...
April 16th, 2025 14:56 - Where did the enemy lurk? (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does...
April 16th, 2025 14:22 - RAIN (SEATTLE) (Magzzbaby)
Used to live close to Seattle and my son lives there. A poem with a...
April 16th, 2025 13:42 - The Stained Silk Dress (Tony Grannell)
Now I felt that I had just read a Dickens or Tolstoy novel. The...
April 16th, 2025 13:40 - Positive Side (RSM0812)
Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very...
April 16th, 2025 13:28 - Just A While Longer (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
I love how you are able to carry your rhyme in such a natural way through...
April 16th, 2025 13:26
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