Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Knick-Knack-Kerouac (Libellule) Now that is what I call a poem. Starting sweet becoming quirky with a dash...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:32
• In This Rain (MinaH) A great poem of the dichotomy of rain and how nice it is inside and how...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:26
• Patience and Chimney (Jerry Reynolds) Well told this metaphor in form of fable speaks to those who have children...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:23
• Flat line (HollyGolightly) Unconscious, numb, there is seldom pain in the red just numbness. I have...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:17
• The Roads Desire Built (Tristan Robert Lange) Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:13
• Yearning For You (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A sad longing pervades this poem with feelings of sadness and loss for...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:28
• Express Yourself (Tony36) A hymn of recognition and exaltation for what one is. Very nice Tony
  April 22nd, 2025 07:26
• Maybe (Jino) A poem of self recognition and flagellation over the undone. Nicely worded...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:24
• The Pond (RSM0812) Lovely word combination leads to deeper meaning in this poem. The flow...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:51
• With A Cupid’s Arrow (Ajon4wheels) Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:49
• Its Her Love (Reynaldo Casison) A love poem that speaks of being enamored by a love. Romantic and very...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:46
• what we will (Jim56) Another poem with a positive message Jim. Loved the message of respect
  April 22nd, 2025 05:44
• Love Story (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:42
• Directing thought (Maplespal) With this comes thoughts of Carl Jung and his anima and animus both male...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:40
• middle of the night (Dimpy) The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:18
• A Lotus Flower in Muddy Waters (Mariel Ilagan) A beautiful metaphor for raising above adversity well worded in rhyme....
  April 22nd, 2025 05:14
• To Touch the Sun (Xlayla55x) Very nicely worded in Greek mythology its metaphor is well taken and so as...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:12
• Letter to a narcissist (Mourgana of the Fey) Ah metaphor following metaphor in this poem it reads mysteriously and we...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:09
• YOU AND ME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Lost in the chaos of the past not to be found in the present. A poem that...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:05
• Silent warrior (Kaz) The old biblical phrase comes to mind (do not hide your light under a...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:03
• Sipping On Lemonade In Wigan Wetherspoons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Jammin\' a most fun poem that flows well with rhyme nicely done
  April 22nd, 2025 05:02
• Self-Immolation (Mottakeenur Rehman) This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:57
• EAT CAKE (Michael Edwards) Clever and short. I wonder if Marie Antoinette returned as Donald Trump. A...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:53
• Molded (E.J. Waling) Events shape us and age hardens us that clay from which we were formed and...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:49
• ableism is the foundation for fascism (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Yes Demar I agree racism is dumb. A good read
  April 22nd, 2025 04:47
• When the Caged Bird is Set Free (Teddy.15) Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:46
• cavernous (Arqios) This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:38
• Exodus at Sea: Beyond False Beacons (TheInnerLens) The author\'s note confirms my suspicions about the metaphor in this poem...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:31
• Chopin\'s Nocturnes. (Goldfinch60) Poetically sound. Music to my ears Andy. A very nice poem of the beauty we...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:26
• The Son (Thoughtless) Caught me by surprise. I think at times he should have. A fun read
  April 21st, 2025 20:05
• Crescendo. (Jonathan Merida) Enigmatic and mysterious this poem rocks with power. Lovely
  April 21st, 2025 18:16
• I Watched the Rain Fall (Rrodriguez) This is a great description of the rain with such vivid imagery and word...
  April 21st, 2025 18:13
• He\'s Risen (Cedrick) A wonderful write, well composed and powerful. Loved it very nice
  April 21st, 2025 18:00
• BIRD (Kman Pumpkin King28) How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in...
  April 21st, 2025 16:34
• The Right Honourable Gentleman (Kevin Hulme) A fun read using cynicism. Nicely done.
  April 21st, 2025 16:32
• The Lovecats (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in...
  April 21st, 2025 15:29
• Beside the city (Devender Kumar) Full of nature images and a carefree feel to this poem. Most lovely
  April 21st, 2025 15:26
• Inner Peace (Anthony Hanible) I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has...
  April 21st, 2025 15:24
• Some Nights (Maplespal) A poem of loss and missing the lost. Most people feel this at one time or...
  April 21st, 2025 15:22
• Tribute to Pope Francis (Jerry Reynolds) They say there is no discrimination in the trenches of war and so in the...
  April 21st, 2025 15:19
• Nude (Amethyste) Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it...
  April 21st, 2025 15:17
• The Redundancy of Certainty (Gray0328) A deep message set in this poem that hides behind the silver word plate of...
  April 21st, 2025 15:10
• Whispering Still (Kurt Philip Behm) A metaphor for the season or maybe the season a metaphor for the nature....
  April 21st, 2025 14:49
• Pain (Ajon4wheels) A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst...
  April 21st, 2025 14:47
• THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY! (Swarovski20) So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches ...
  April 21st, 2025 14:46
• Lost Souls (Genesis) Indeed we all wonder where we belong and some find a spot they think is...
  April 21st, 2025 14:42
• My Rose (RSM0812) A most lovely sonnet to someone loved and appreciated
  April 21st, 2025 14:30
• The Power of Our Words (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A great message sent in rhyme that emphasizes its point. Lovely and well...
  April 21st, 2025 14:28
• In the garge (Tony36) Indeed after the party who gets to clean up? A poignant metaphor and fun...
  April 21st, 2025 14:26
• what now? (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan many complain but few do anything. Those in power have no interest...
  April 21st, 2025 14:24
• Names Turned to Praise (Maydanae) A poem that all can relate to. I don\'t think there is a person that has...
  April 21st, 2025 14:17
• Canned Meat is a Bad Idea (Thomas W Case) It sent shivers up my spine. What a depiction it gives pause to a troubled...
  April 21st, 2025 13:59
• Commission Call (Orchidee) Another well written hymn Orchi well done
  April 21st, 2025 13:54
• A Flock of Clocks (Libellule) Clever word play in this poem to give it spice and flavor. A most...
  April 21st, 2025 13:51
• love is a nature (Jim56) Lovely and bright it is a poem of sunshine coming up in the east. Very...
  April 21st, 2025 06:37
• Reflections (Teardrop) A feeling of emptiness and isolation connect the stanzas of this poem and...
  April 21st, 2025 06:35
• Shimmy (Ksey_Gan) Sadness over loss and the heaviness that accompanies the pain. A sad poem
  April 21st, 2025 06:33
• Go Tell the Greek (Tony Grannell) This poem\'s style fits its subject and the end gives reference to its...
  April 21st, 2025 05:50
• Whats Waiting (Hollow Enigma) A strong plea for reunion is voiced in this poem. There is a sense of...
  April 21st, 2025 04:40
• The Wings of the Seagull (Mottakeenur Rehman) So many hidden feelings exposed in metaphor that remain hidden beneath the...
  April 21st, 2025 04:37
• IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem holds a deep metaphor. Although so pertinent to war and nations...
  April 21st, 2025 04:33
• How Hollywood Lives? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Abuse occurs in all areas human and is a sad reflection on the race and...
  April 21st, 2025 04:29
• Mademoiselle Bardot (Reynaldo Casison) This one glows and talks in its beauty combining two arts and a beautiful...
  April 21st, 2025 04:26
• After my Sweet Moment of Hush (Teddy.15) Teddy we grow so accustomed to what we are used to that even a headache...
  April 21st, 2025 04:15
• Torture (HollyGolightly) Arguments and power struggles lead to break ups in couples and nations and...
  April 21st, 2025 04:10
• not a poem nor a sonnet (Danastanic) It does not have to be confined to a preconceived form to be poetry, what...
  April 21st, 2025 04:08
• if i (Rainbow 1) A poem with a question. A cheap price now days and reminds me of the...
  April 21st, 2025 04:06
• a poem’s succession (Arqios) This touches close to heart. I have many fledglings in the nest some will...
  April 21st, 2025 04:00
• Swans On My River, Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet Gold about nature\'s beautiful creations. A wonderful...
  April 21st, 2025 03:52
• Dream Passage (E.J. Waling) Indeed it is a very long roe to hoe. Most interesting John
  April 20th, 2025 18:45
• Pens and Markers (Maydanae) Short and to the point it makes sense to me. Very nicely done
  April 20th, 2025 18:44
• The End We Start From (Meagan Adelle) To every beginning there is an end and to every end there is a new...
  April 20th, 2025 18:02
• Losing Faith (ìfè) A poem about faith, proof and belief. A true dilemma and well written
  April 20th, 2025 17:59
• Under the Canopy of the Mango Tree (Rrodriguez) A most interesting poem of contemplation and evolving. Very nice
  April 20th, 2025 17:50
• Grateful For it All (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A poem of Faith and belief that expresses gratitude. Very appropriate for...
  April 20th, 2025 15:29
• Thank you Botswana (Cedrick) A beautiful tribute to a place loved and considered home. Most lovely
  April 20th, 2025 14:02
• Hollow (Genesis) Hollow, empty. void, nothing. A feeling that we get from time to time but...
  April 20th, 2025 13:03
• Hidden History (Randall Racine) So many examples of past exploitation and the resulting damage done. A...
  April 20th, 2025 12:58
• For things not done (2781) A wonderful poem of allegiance and loyalty. Very nicely said
  April 20th, 2025 12:50
• From Eight to Fate (Salian) A fun read that is romantic and if the eight turned on its side becomes...
  April 20th, 2025 11:33
• The Dream (Tony Grannell) Clever and well said in good rhyme. Loved the idea and poem
  April 20th, 2025 11:31
• Emmaus Enlightening (Orchidee) Another great Hymn of this time of the year well done Orchi
  April 20th, 2025 10:47
• No Candy This Year (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem so full of life. When my children were young we took pains to hide...
  April 20th, 2025 10:45
• Things that store our love (Ladywithaquill) Tender and cute this poem is sweet with many images of what one calls love
  April 20th, 2025 10:42
• Yes (Damaso) A dark poem of going beyond the limit and we all should know our limits....
  April 20th, 2025 10:40
• Fighting first fears (Pukur) Everything works out for the best in the end the problem is we don\'t know...
  April 20th, 2025 10:38
• The Man In The Moon (Justyouraveragewriter) Romantic and night, nature oriented. This poem breaths softly and smoothly
  April 20th, 2025 10:36
• The Poems (Thomas W Case) A statement that I can agree with my friend and well stated to in true...
  April 20th, 2025 10:31
• Scared To Say (Anthony Hanible) This poem speaks to me of a person that is not all he appears to be. He...
  April 20th, 2025 09:14
• not worth the pain, not worth the tears (Ke3v) A poem of happiness ending in sadness. Short and to the point it is well...
  April 20th, 2025 09:11
• The Cuckoo (Tkatie118) Whether metaphor or to be taken literally this poem paints a picture that...
  April 20th, 2025 09:09
• Gravel Road (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) It is the real life grittiness that gains a fave in this raw poem of life...
  April 20th, 2025 09:02
• Slippery Slopes (RSM0812) This poem to me reflects the temporal nature of love and its fleeting...
  April 20th, 2025 08:59
• Bones in a sac (Maplespal) Indeed I would agree in comparison to the others. A creative and...
  April 20th, 2025 08:55
• the penumbral revelation (Tristan Robert Lange) How appropriate for the day. This poem through the mouths of ancient...
  April 20th, 2025 08:52
• Hold out your hamd (Tony36) A poem of faith and belief. Nicely said and written. Very nice Tony
  April 20th, 2025 08:42
• White Noise (Arobot) Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new...
  April 20th, 2025 07:02
• Out of Ink (Libellule) I too have thought what can be said that has not already been said. Yet...
  April 20th, 2025 07:00
• pets need love (Jim56) A poem of sensitivity to all around us be it human or animal it makes no...
  April 20th, 2025 06:55
• Death (Teardrop) A great poem and metaphor that we all can identify with. I have heard his...
  April 20th, 2025 05:35