Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Cut Me Some Slack...I Have a Crazy Streak (Cheeky Missy)
Woh now I worked in a factory that canned corn when I was young and I will...
April 16th, 2025 13:24 - Soother, The Rose (Devender Kumar)
A great short write full of images of color and tactile? senses. Very nice
April 16th, 2025 11:32 - Passover Ponderings (Orchidee)
A great rewrite in poetic hymn form. Well done Orchi
April 16th, 2025 11:30 - Paraphrase of Wolfgang Mozart Tearful Rest (Ksey_Gan)
A Lachrymosa in poetic words. Indeed a sad and tearful day. Well written
April 16th, 2025 11:28 - \"Eternal Love Laced in Loss.\" (Cirawrites01)
A great write on missing and longing wishing and not finding. Lovely
April 16th, 2025 11:25 - The Fragile Geometry of a Tuesday Night on Acid (Gray0328)
What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and...
April 16th, 2025 11:23 - Street Rat (Tony36)
Sad and a pathetic comment on a society that can not take care of its own....
April 16th, 2025 09:49 - Never Saw it Coming (Thomas W Case)
A most interesting write with various incongruous combinations. Well done
April 16th, 2025 09:46 - faces of the mirrors (Skyler2)
This poem has such great story telling and rhyme. I am curious why you...
April 16th, 2025 08:36 - prairie sky (Jim56)
A beautiful picture of nature you have painted in the will penned poem....
April 16th, 2025 07:25 - Letters of Complaint (Tristan Robert Lange)
For the rawness and bravery to put on paper what is so deeply felt a fave....
April 16th, 2025 07:23 - His Concert (Arobot)
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas...
April 16th, 2025 07:18 - CoacHELLa (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read about a not too fun topic. Well done
April 16th, 2025 05:17 - Cursivity (Libellule)
Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as...
April 16th, 2025 05:14 - O (Mourgana of the Fey)
I love this cryptic reference to the title and its implications the O in...
April 16th, 2025 05:11 - FOOTPRINTS IN THE SNOW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Deeply metaphoric this poem talks of the price of selling ones trust...
April 16th, 2025 05:04 - 4 am PT2 (Angeline)
Memory is the key to many emotions. A strong write it asks the question if...
April 16th, 2025 05:01 - a ravenous thirst... (Dimpy)
Strongly sexual this poem pulsates with desire and passion that pushes...
April 16th, 2025 04:58 - Midnight rain (Reynaldo Casison)
A most original love poem declaring ones love for another. Nicely written
April 16th, 2025 04:53 - pot plants (Arqios)
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead...
April 16th, 2025 04:40 - Words You Said (Raye)
A powerful poem with a strong message said in the first person...
April 16th, 2025 04:30 - Bipolar soul (Zephyrschild)
I hear anger, distrust, suspicion, hurt in this write of past...
April 16th, 2025 04:23 - Not Perfect. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful message that any partner would love to hear. Nicely said Andy
April 16th, 2025 04:17 - Where Swallows Play (MDStone)
A wonderful depiction of nature and a picture of watching life as it...
April 15th, 2025 21:33 - No Value (Santajah Douglass)
A longing for the past and its values. Well written with rhyme and good...
April 15th, 2025 21:31 - Not a losing fight (Pukur)
A fight with oneself and the different parts of who one is. Nicely...
April 15th, 2025 21:28 - Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes)
Short and to the point with a thought provoking question.
April 15th, 2025 19:42 - Enough? (Maydanae)
We all ask at times how much is enough. A good poem that emphasizes this...
April 15th, 2025 19:39 - Discern Over Despair (Descovia)
Everyone needs a friend. A very good message. Well done
April 15th, 2025 17:44 - If I were to make you (Funmiwrites)
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would...
April 15th, 2025 17:40 - Sick of???? (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
So many frustrations, so many problems and they only seem to grow. Nicely...
April 15th, 2025 17:37 - To the coming death (Ksey_Gan)
The onset of age, deterioration and break down. In the end each year holds...
April 15th, 2025 17:34 - 4 am PT1 (Angeline)
A most beautiful scene painted in words in this poem. Very nice
April 15th, 2025 16:01 - Ocean (Amethyste)
We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very...
April 15th, 2025 15:59 - Upon a sureal mist (Kaz)
Smooth words well woven in this poem. Nicely said
April 15th, 2025 15:57 - Rewind (Tkatie118)
Quite the story. A most interesting write
April 15th, 2025 12:21 - Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy)
Another good set of poems Chic. Well done
April 15th, 2025 12:17 - Stepford Ice (Kurt Philip Behm)
Did they add any preservatives? Good write cleverly worded Kurt
April 15th, 2025 12:06 - Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee)
A very dramatic part of the Bible and leading into the central issue of...
April 15th, 2025 10:57 - Exodus (Sunshine777)
A poem appropriate for the season nicely said
April 15th, 2025 10:55 - Melancholic love tune (Sonal monhyung)
Love unrequited is more common than believed and love separated is more...
April 15th, 2025 10:15 - YET AGAIN (Abdullah123)
I remember the last and this one fits well as a sequel. Some are such by...
April 15th, 2025 10:09 - Looking Back (Garth Rakumakoe)
How time passes so quickly and age inevitably comes on. Very nicely
April 15th, 2025 09:08 - Airport (Libellule)
Brilliant! a lovely poem in its ambiguity it speaks to many things. Loved...
April 15th, 2025 09:07 - The Reckless Symphony (Gray0328)
This applies to all drivers on the road and on the road of life as well....
April 15th, 2025 09:06 - Go to sleep (Tony36)
A poetic lullaby that sends one off to dream. Lovely Tony
April 15th, 2025 09:04 - Here (Tristan Robert Lange)
Clever wording Tristan the first line starts off well and very poetic. The...
April 15th, 2025 09:03 - $0.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused...
April 15th, 2025 08:54 - demons (Jim56)
A piece of good advice in this poem Jim. Well done in verse and rhyme
April 15th, 2025 06:33 - Angkor Wat (Arobot)
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are...
April 15th, 2025 05:23 - Those people (Maplespal)
A term one has to be careful using in these politically correct times. A...
April 15th, 2025 05:21 - It’s only a dream (Nat Muñoz)
A poem of loss, loss of childhood, puppy love, love itself. Interesting...
April 15th, 2025 04:38 - Face to face (Alan R)
A natural response of rejecting what rejects you. This is well portrayed...
April 15th, 2025 04:35 - Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This is a most intriguing poem that on the surface feels like a religious...
April 15th, 2025 04:33 - But I did everything right. (Midnight Lasagna)
This is a wonderful poem so well put. Sitting down for tea with one\'s...
April 15th, 2025 04:26 - Escape (Boot)
This poem in an unconventional way of speech takes one on a journey....
April 15th, 2025 04:22 - Centrifugal (Shadowbones)
This may be taken in more than one way. It is labeled erotic and so it may...
April 15th, 2025 04:20 - true love ??? (Dimpy)
A most interesting write that starts with the real and then distances to...
April 15th, 2025 04:17 - A Dark Place (Anthony Hanible)
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string...
April 15th, 2025 04:14 - Stolen Glances (Pukur)
Infatuation is such a wonderful and at the same time dangerous feeling. It...
April 15th, 2025 04:12 - SOUL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Such a beautiful and peaceful image is in this poem it is soft and it...
April 15th, 2025 04:06 - Our day (2781)
A good poem on its own with good rhyme and continuity of story but it is...
April 15th, 2025 04:04 - Love serenade for a Surreal beauty (Reynaldo Casison)
Beautiful words that are fitful for a surreal beauty. Each may conjure up...
April 15th, 2025 04:00 - Change of Heart (Poetic Licence)
A turn from the dark to the light is felt in this poem. It is uplifting...
April 15th, 2025 03:51 - letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios)
What a great story with a moral. The line is so true (elegance does thrive...
April 15th, 2025 03:46 - Loyal Hearts. (Goldfinch60)
Dogs are most wonderful animals. A wonderful write Andy. I couldn\'t agree...
April 15th, 2025 03:39 - Little Wolf (M.E.M.)
Nicely painted in words this image of someone trained not to trust we can...
April 15th, 2025 03:37 - Lost At Sea (MDStone)
A good poem on the surface but in its metaphoric depths it rages. A poem...
April 15th, 2025 03:35 - for sylvia plath (Jon Nakapalau)
Some fascinating lines in this poem very nice
April 14th, 2025 20:17 - Kilimanjaro (Rrodriguez)
A tribute to nature and a monument of a nation. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 18:34 - Noise (Pamela)
Unexpected. This poem speaks to the crowd of racquet in our heads. A...
April 14th, 2025 17:14 - And still his death haunts webbed wide world post American Civil War (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A bit of history mixed with other thoughts in this poem. I see a metaphor...
April 14th, 2025 16:31 - MYSELF IS DEAD (She_writes)
I hear desperation in this poem a sense of being lost and looking. An...
April 14th, 2025 16:24 - New worlds (Amethyste)
We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A...
April 14th, 2025 16:20 - But we had to (Tommy B Goode)
Those urges whether internal, biological or societal expectations lead to...
April 14th, 2025 16:18 - Laugh Line (Ladywithaquill)
A beautiful wish to make a mark on someone else. Very nicely stated.
April 14th, 2025 14:08 - Old Photographs (Paul Gerard Reed)
A most nostalgic poem of memories and the past. Well written in good rhyme...
April 14th, 2025 13:44 - Loving You (Cendrine Marrouat)
Strong feelings expressed in this poem reflect emotions that may come easy...
April 14th, 2025 13:43 - Foolish (Tkatie118)
What happens when one mistakes infatuation for love. Here is a play laid...
April 14th, 2025 13:39 - Easier (Kez)
So true it requires fewer words. Nicely written
April 14th, 2025 13:34 - Don\'t Look Back (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A most interesting view of creating. Very thought provoking
April 14th, 2025 13:33 - Rage-filled Turns (NinjaGirl)
Took dance lessons for a year or two and at times it was painful but the...
April 14th, 2025 11:24 - My domain (Angeline)
Indeed we are our domain. A lovely write
April 14th, 2025 11:00 - Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee)
A beautiful hymn appropriate for the season. Nicely done Orchi
April 14th, 2025 10:57 - Persian Song by Sergei Yesenin (Ksey_Gan)
A rare combination of poetic beauty with a great message. This make the...
April 14th, 2025 10:24 - YET (Abdullah123)
A poem one has to think a great deal about and each time I read it I get a...
April 14th, 2025 10:20 - Put On the Kettle and Your Feet Up? (Cheeky Missy)
Sonnet queen you have given three more wonderful poems to carry us on to a...
April 14th, 2025 09:00 - The hero (Pineapple_pizza018)
Do people change knowing what they know today would they do the same thing...
April 14th, 2025 08:57 - Abuse (Tony36)
It is those we trust that have the key to abuse the most. A powerful write
April 14th, 2025 08:53 - Sometimes (Gewar)
How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s...
April 14th, 2025 08:51 - Should Sleep Spare (Tristan Robert Lange)
Here anxiety reins. For years suffered from bouts of anxiety some stimulus...
April 14th, 2025 08:08 - Tormenting views (Maplespal)
It is the contrast of a peaceful past with the violence of the present...
April 14th, 2025 05:12 - The Anatomy of a Broken Heart (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A poem of betrayal not only by another but by ones own beliefs. A hard and...
April 14th, 2025 05:10 - Listen to them rhyme then figure out the words (MR.apocalypse)
To me it says that we all put a piece of ourselves into what we see or...
April 14th, 2025 05:07 - The Scents of Lavender! (Framed Mirror)
The flower still leaves its fragrance on the heel of the one that crushed...
April 14th, 2025 05:04 - We Plead oh Lord (Funmiwrites)
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an...
April 14th, 2025 05:02 - when the sun begins to shine (Jim56)
A bright write Jim the sun can make all the difference in the world in...
April 14th, 2025 05:00 - Stone to Dust (Arobot)
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in...
April 14th, 2025 04:58 - Memory, the voyage. (InTylerWeTrust)
Memory is the one thing that no one can steal, that you are not taxed for,...
April 14th, 2025 04:56 - Memory (Libellule)
Your word choice in this poem is so perfect in its description that it...
April 14th, 2025 04:52
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