Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The city (Lorenz) Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols....
  November 17th, 2024 16:25
• Aha! Methinks I Spy A Chicken Clearly WITHOUT Its Head (Cheeky Missy) I have felt the first one regarding work before and it is a gray day...
  November 17th, 2024 16:22
• Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday) (AuburnScribbler) And why not wish oneself a happy birthday?
  November 17th, 2024 14:37
• ~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts! (Thad Wilk) Humor is the best medicine and sex sells better than anything else put the...
  November 17th, 2024 14:34
• Miss Mary, Ticket Taker (Gray0328) A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely...
  November 17th, 2024 14:31
• When Words Bleed (Cassie58) Beautiful words \"a poem penetrated tissue of restraint pain\" a great
  November 17th, 2024 14:29
• Divulgence (Neilton) Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
  November 17th, 2024 08:04
• Addictsong (Mutley Ravishes) Depending on the pause in punctuation it holds different meanings and...
  November 17th, 2024 06:42
• inner peace (Jim56) A most wonderful thought and belief put into poetic form. Lovely
  November 17th, 2024 06:40
• The worst part & The waters\' view (Maplespal) Great poems that leave me feeling like I\'m being taken on a journey.
  November 17th, 2024 06:39
• Seven (2781) Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read
  November 17th, 2024 06:32
• Pirates’ Cove (Arqios) Have lived on the Treasure Coast of Florida for many years and not only...
  November 17th, 2024 06:26
• Meanwhile.... (Orchidee) If the humor is too dark then it can\'t be seen with no light.
  November 17th, 2024 05:42
• A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville) The feeling of entitlement and that the world owes them something bred by...
  November 17th, 2024 05:39
• Failing Hearts (RSM0812) A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this...
  November 17th, 2024 05:29
• My Wish For You. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful wishes that return upon the one who wishes showering them with...
  November 17th, 2024 05:24
• Failing Hearts (RSM0812) I’m most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
  November 16th, 2024 19:59
• Long Ago (E.J. Waling) This reads as though it were a personal history of my own even the age is...
  November 16th, 2024 19:56
• One Final Stop In Springfield (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another episode in the continuing saga. This reads like an old radio...
  November 16th, 2024 13:37
• ~> My Dawg Clyde! (Thad Wilk) Gives me memories of my old dog he used to pull me on my bike all around...
  November 16th, 2024 13:30
• The Scarecrow and the Raven (Tony36) A most interesting image you paint. Is its message that the real master is...
  November 16th, 2024 13:27
• The Poet\'s Cafe (Gray0328) If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
  November 16th, 2024 13:25
• My shaveling boy (Neilton) Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it....
  November 16th, 2024 11:41
• Power (2781) In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more...
  November 16th, 2024 08:52
• Selene of All Skies (Neville) Isis always was my favorite goddess. Just like a woman on a 28 day cycle...
  November 16th, 2024 08:50
• Aging (Lorenz) Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
  November 16th, 2024 08:48
• Bicycles For Power and Freedom... (Doggerel Dave) Gives a whole new meaning to burning up the roads. Good write Dave
  November 16th, 2024 08:46
• A word from Fido to me about Ch.... (Orchidee) Thank you for not mentioning the word. I suffer from PTSD from that event....
  November 16th, 2024 08:44
• 2 more poems, um don\'t enjoy (Maplespal) At first I thought that the second poem was what had happened to the...
  November 16th, 2024 08:39
• Robbie and the Baroque Fiddle (Arqios) All the arts and sciences are connected. A lovely write and a tribute to a...
  November 16th, 2024 08:34
• Satanic Panic (Tristan Robert Lange) A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews...
  November 16th, 2024 08:30
• Croquet Supper. (Goldfinch60) Such a pleasent time which is what life is all about. Most lovely
  November 16th, 2024 06:44
• Yggdrasil (Bigguy) Full of vivid and unique images this poem conveys a sense of tension that...
  November 16th, 2024 06:41
• Meara’s First Stop (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I keep comming back for chapter after chapter do you write seasons for...
  November 15th, 2024 16:02
• Paralytic (Teddy.15) Teddy such a poem of the end of times and fulfilling that last item on the...
  November 15th, 2024 15:58
• Vlad, the Impaler (Gray0328) Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth...
  November 15th, 2024 15:47
• ~> Today Was Ma Lucky Day! (Thad Wilk) Loved the dialect a little word play as well with horse shit and dun. Very...
  November 15th, 2024 10:08
• RESIST (Tristan Robert Lange) A great acrostic Tristan
  November 15th, 2024 10:05
• Fido speaks again (Orchidee) Fido is on the watch and don\'t mess with Fido. Very Nice Orchi
  November 15th, 2024 10:03
• Silence (Lorenz) A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly...
  November 15th, 2024 09:13
• Live free (Tony36) Akita happiness is contained in this poem. It is wonderfully written and...
  November 15th, 2024 09:10
• Things I love (NafisaSB) Quite a list of items on both the positive and negative side and most...
  November 15th, 2024 09:09
• christmas verse (Jim56)
  November 15th, 2024 09:08
• christmas verse (Jim56) A joyful Christmas poem coined out of many almost familiar lines that have...
  November 15th, 2024 09:08
• When pets make your day (Arqios)
  November 15th, 2024 09:07
• When pets make your day (Arqios) Creatures can give a great deal of comfort simply by their presence. There...
  November 15th, 2024 09:07
• 2 at once, enjoy (Maplespal) Deep thoughts lay frozen in this latter poem and its all too human...
  November 15th, 2024 05:53
• The Look (Neville) A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on...
  November 15th, 2024 05:49
• FOXES IN THE TREES (Bobby O) All depends on what you want. proxcimity and misery distance and lonely...
  November 15th, 2024 05:47
• Journey of Dreams (Dev Parth) Dreams are the fuel that propells us on our journey. A most important
  November 15th, 2024 05:41
• Treat me like a human (MR.apocalypse) Boundaries blurr and need to be reinforced to keep life in perspective....
  November 15th, 2024 05:38
• Gravedigging (Mutley Ravishes) A collage of human feelings that comprise the reality of human...
  November 15th, 2024 05:35
• To Cradle Pain (Gray0328) A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to...
  November 15th, 2024 05:31
• This Is Me Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A brilliant philosophy employed by too few that think that they must show...
  November 15th, 2024 05:26
• ~`> If I Were Only One Inch Tall -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk) To be less in any way is always an obstacle to overcome. I like the ending...
  November 14th, 2024 17:35
• Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58) Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the...
  November 14th, 2024 14:38
• Parallels (Kerry) Relationships are difficult break ups are even more difficult and seeing...
  November 14th, 2024 14:36
• Somewhere along my way (Lorenz) In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the...
  November 14th, 2024 14:34
• Living Zombies (Tony36) The most interesting writing that I also wrote about today. Many of us...
  November 14th, 2024 14:31
• HATE (Tristan Robert Lange) He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can...
  November 14th, 2024 14:30
• all the lonely people (Jim56) Alienation is a problem for many. This poem tells well the sense of...
  November 14th, 2024 14:28
• A restricted life (Maplespal) It all seems overwhelming. I hear the frustration and anguish in the poem,...
  November 14th, 2024 14:27
• A Flash of Gordon (Arqios) A beautiful tribute and beautiful verse for a poet of the past nicely done...
  November 14th, 2024 05:18
• Essence (Neville) Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling...
  November 14th, 2024 05:15
• A Transcendent Classic (Bobby O) A beautiful poetic response to an artistic act. Nicely said Bobby.
  November 14th, 2024 05:13
• The Legend of Mother Hubbard: A Journey Beyond Hunger (Matthew R. Callies) A beautiful story in quite a saga of a poem. In this metaphor, there are...
  November 14th, 2024 05:11
• Pipe organs of Destiny (Dan Williams) A very powerful poem with a wonderful ending line. “ She hangs on me...
  November 14th, 2024 04:51
• Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60) You are so right Andy art extend across many fields and cooking certainly...
  November 14th, 2024 04:39
• Through a Window Darkly (Tristan Robert Lange) Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber
  November 13th, 2024 21:42
• ~> Have No Fear, Santa Will Be Here! (Thad Wilk) A fun read my dad said that he was going to take us kids to see where...
  November 13th, 2024 21:38
• The Mingle Classes (Tom Dylan) I\'ve been to that club and didn\'t like it that much. Everything was...
  November 13th, 2024 21:36
• I told ya it\'s Ch....... (Orchidee) I knew it was all a plot by the establishment to keep us all confused and...
  November 13th, 2024 21:33
• Peanut, the Chicken (Gray0328) I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a...
  November 13th, 2024 21:30
• A Worthwhile Pursuit (Thomas W Case) Some great lines the whole second stanza is a great write of vivid images....
  November 13th, 2024 21:27
• The Business Propsal! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Always leave the reader wanting more when the tale ends for the day and...
  November 13th, 2024 21:00
• Scraps (Sorenbarrett) Thank you Mutley
  November 13th, 2024 19:07
• Love Soul Deep (Tony36) A beautiful thought of unity nicely said
  November 13th, 2024 08:20
• snow fun (Jim56) Nostalgic and full of fun memories, a wonderful right Jim
  November 13th, 2024 08:19
• Albina (RSM0812) A statement of deep love and highest steam, as well as a pledge for the...
  November 13th, 2024 07:31
• Potato Time Travel (Arqios) A beautiful story Cryptic The reflects connection of people passed and...
  November 13th, 2024 05:23
• The Colour of Void (Cassie58) Some beautiful lines in this poem, Cassie” i’ve lost the base notes...
  November 13th, 2024 05:21
• Mystical fluids (Lorenz) This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first,...
  November 13th, 2024 05:19
• Superfluous Twists (Neville) Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the...
  November 13th, 2024 05:16
• Trauma (Kerry) Trauma and violence both covered in this poem. What is to be done when the...
  November 13th, 2024 05:12
• The Way (E.J. Waling) Time itself is the rabbit hole once entered, cannot be returned and most...
  November 13th, 2024 05:09
• Three Wishes (Bobby O) Now that’s the stuff that comedy is made of. A very entertaining story...
  November 13th, 2024 05:08
• Messengers In Life. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful words that should reach the hearts of many people either through...
  November 13th, 2024 04:51
• Poor and Forgotten (RSM0812) The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of...
  November 13th, 2024 04:48
• Chains and Hunger (RSM0812) A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
  November 13th, 2024 04:45
• A violent gun (RSM0812) Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for...
  November 13th, 2024 04:41
• Hearts That Break (RSM0812) Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written...
  November 13th, 2024 04:35
• SHOOTING STAR (Qurrathul Ain) It is so true. It is strong emotions that fuel poetry once in a great...
  November 12th, 2024 19:36
• I write: poems (Maplespal) I thank you for your writing and I thank you for your enlightening. They...
  November 12th, 2024 14:54
• The Agnostic (RL Randall) The most interesting poem that I identify with I feel that I have been in...
  November 12th, 2024 14:50
• Dippy slip (2781) A poem asking for help from a higher power. The sense of needing greater...
  November 12th, 2024 14:41
• When he Cries (Raye) A comforting and reassuring poem, one of kindness and generosity nicely...
  November 12th, 2024 14:40
• Farewell Leaf (Gray0328) Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a...
  November 12th, 2024 14:38
• shopping spree (Jim56) The blending of commercialism with the true meaning of Christmas, that of...
  November 12th, 2024 14:36
• Sleeping Willow (FrasMac) A poem that leaves us somewhat sad and nostalgic feeling. It flows well...
  November 12th, 2024 14:33
• I Am (Tony36) Very good Tony yes, we are all a product of those forces that have made...
  November 12th, 2024 14:29