Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The sound of you (Arial) A poem of unity the goes beyond death. Nicely said.
  March 17th, 2025 14:59
• The gift of release (Nicole Pritchard) A great topic and message. It asks each person to let go of hate and anger...
  March 17th, 2025 14:58
• Be Wary (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem of warning and repudiation of witchcraft. Nicely written
  March 17th, 2025 14:52
• A Warrior of Speech (Kez) Firm believer in this and yes the pen is mightier than the sword. Well...
  March 17th, 2025 13:47
• Wisdom for the Day (AwHec8) A great play on rhyme. I happen to agree with both. A delightful short
  March 17th, 2025 13:46
• victim (MR.apocalypse) In a way it is a reversal of power. It is most frustrating when weakness...
  March 17th, 2025 13:45
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) A strong feeling of frustration with society voiced in this poem some...
  March 17th, 2025 12:10
• The Dance of Light and Darkness (Heledd) All those that believe in fate should cherish each moment and yes it might...
  March 17th, 2025 11:36
• New Moon Laughing (Kurt Philip Behm) A metaphor I assume. People are like this and from there it goes many...
  March 17th, 2025 11:34
• Love Love Love (Anthony Hanible) The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love...
  March 17th, 2025 10:49
• An ode to love (Enigma747) Your wording makes this poem, word choice and juxtaposition are wonderful....
  March 17th, 2025 10:18
• The Sun To My Moon (Akshadha_Joshi1310) Nice combination of two needed pieces to make a whole just as two lovers...
  March 17th, 2025 10:03
• They (Tony36) With more people more control and so it goes. There is an internal drive...
  March 17th, 2025 10:01
• NICE PRICE (ChrisLyn🕊) A very resolved poem of what one has to face and the reality of what one...
  March 17th, 2025 09:59
• Daddy…. (Ajon4wheels) A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not...
  March 17th, 2025 09:24
• vines (Newt) Too often this metaphor is lived by people where pruned they lay some...
  March 17th, 2025 09:00
• The inverted smile reigns (Tommy B Goode) How do we understand others if we don\'t understand ourselves? How can we...
  March 17th, 2025 08:58
• black desire (Lorenz) Darkly erotic and sensuous in nightly tones this poem holds black magic at...
  March 17th, 2025 08:56
• Exactly Where You Need To Be (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I see the progress in your poetry it is amazing. Here in your form you in...
  March 17th, 2025 07:55
• Wokey Pokey Song (Gregstarandgoff) I remember something like that. A fun song to get the day going. Come to...
  March 17th, 2025 07:53
• Saint Patrick\'s Brood (Tristan Robert Lange) A spear through the saint\'s heart. A pome to elucidate the fabricated...
  March 17th, 2025 07:49
• A simple thought (Maplespal) A most interesting question and one with a complex answer. Nicely said
  March 17th, 2025 07:11
• get help (Jim56) A most needed poem for those that have reached the end of their rope....
  March 17th, 2025 07:10
• The Artist\'s Ascent (Gray0328) A most artistic and poetic presentation of creation. Lovely images spring...
  March 17th, 2025 07:08
• RADIO CRACKLES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and...
  March 17th, 2025 07:05
• The Tree That Grew Us All (Junes) A great metaphor of the strength of family ties and the unseen protection...
  March 17th, 2025 07:03
• The Mischief of the Leprechaun (Matthew R. Callies) A wonderful poem appropriately posted on the right day. Well rhymed and...
  March 17th, 2025 07:01
• On St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan) A poem of heritage and its importance. My heritage also has a line to...
  March 17th, 2025 06:57
• Dangerous words (Jeremy Leach) A delightful poem about the care one needs to exercise when handling a...
  March 17th, 2025 06:55
• Feeling (L.R.A) It is the opposition in all things that make up this world. A poem of...
  March 17th, 2025 06:51
• I Would Have Lost Hope Series Pt. 3 (Pita) A poem that begs the reader to assess their wrongs and make changes. A...
  March 17th, 2025 06:48
• Sonder Eyes (L_19) We are all a piece of a whole a cell in a body, an atom in a universe. As...
  March 17th, 2025 06:46
• Dusty roads take me out (Amy Michelle Mosier) A poem of nature\'s beauty and a place I have been before. It feels home...
  March 17th, 2025 06:41
• just my ☘️ luck (Arqios) Well timed this one does, now that you mention it, remind me of that song....
  March 17th, 2025 06:05
• KP she says..... (Orchidee) It sounds like you are still on fair terms calling her dear. Another fun...
  March 17th, 2025 06:01
• Wet Words. (Goldfinch60) And so they do Andy, in the shower or when driving are the worst in that...
  March 17th, 2025 05:58
• The Lighthouse that saved me (Kaelyn Jade) We all need something greater to look to. A great poem about this. Well...
  March 16th, 2025 20:48
• Fire (Shadowbones) I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater...
  March 16th, 2025 20:46
• My Car, Ma (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it
  March 16th, 2025 20:44
• Grief (Sassy Lou) Grief comes to us all at one time or another. Pain is part of life and no...
  March 16th, 2025 18:47
• Pedestrian Brake Pads (Matthew R. Callies) The shoes we walk in take us through life and all the steps we take. A...
  March 16th, 2025 18:45
• Sleeping Through Alarms (Mya) A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
  March 16th, 2025 18:42
• Beware bloody hyperbolic contents incorporated to embody rage against the machine (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) From now till then this poem goes over events and everything from music to...
  March 16th, 2025 18:40
• The weight of an empty room (Jodie) A poem of leaving already decided. Powerful. Nicely done.
  March 16th, 2025 18:34
• Descending Unlocks (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem of metaphor of ups and downs. Very nice.
  March 16th, 2025 18:31
• Balancing (Spilleronsheet) This may well be a metaphor for the artist. A wonderful write that...
  March 16th, 2025 13:07
• Misty forests (Alan R) A metaphor of inner self comes to mind and well imaged and stated in most...
  March 16th, 2025 12:59
• Finding (Spilleronsheet) This come and go in poetic form provokes a great deal of thought. A fight...
  March 16th, 2025 12:58
• The Love Choice (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) A poetic recognition that the choice is two fold and that one can put an...
  March 16th, 2025 12:56
• Forgiveness denied (Nicole Pritchard) A worthy write on a subject so misunderstood. Making good a part as is...
  March 16th, 2025 12:55
• Of Bar-B-Que, Pink, and Deja Vu.... (Cheeky Missy) Another day told and so may details that are painting this story. Lovely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:53
• Do I belong? (Pineapple_pizza018) Biblical in nature and archetypal it speaks of power, betrayal, the...
  March 16th, 2025 12:49
• The Weight of Truth ([email protected]) Journalist or metaphor this speaks of telling the truth and the bravery to...
  March 16th, 2025 12:44
• Night Shift (Gray0328) A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well...
  March 16th, 2025 12:41
• The time (Lorenz) Here are thoughts of a beyond and paradox that makes life. Very nicely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:38
• Tears icicled (Tommy B Goode) I hear anger and pain in this poem. It is sad.
  March 16th, 2025 11:56
• She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost (Dev Parth) A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost...
  March 16th, 2025 10:00
• Flowers Make Terrible gods (Thomas W Case) A great metaphor here Thomas. Whether gods or lovers the same applies,...
  March 16th, 2025 08:34
• A Thankful Daughter (Kiamiz) This is a very touching poem and I feel that true poetry must touch the...
  March 16th, 2025 07:40
• Waters (2781) A poem of acknowledgement and praise. Very nice
  March 16th, 2025 07:38
• Deep breaths and pants (Maplespal) I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including...
  March 16th, 2025 07:37
• The Instagram Queen (Mottakeenur Rehman) A poem of love loss and dealing with it. Love can not be bought, or sold...
  March 16th, 2025 07:34
• The Price of Silence (Molly Delaney) Most wonderfully written from the perspective of a child. It is an...
  March 16th, 2025 07:30
• issues (Jim56) Yes Jim that is part of life we all have issues and this poem explains it...
  March 16th, 2025 07:23
• A deer (Ginny jayne) Cute and with a sense of innocence. it paints a beautiful picture. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2025 07:22
• The truth of freedom (Heledd) In one way or another we are all trapped in our own worlds. Some trapped...
  March 16th, 2025 07:20
• The Way of Truth (Whats write for me) Whether it is following their god or a president or their own family or...
  March 16th, 2025 07:17
• They Return (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It is at times hard to tell whether people are really people or not. A fun...
  March 16th, 2025 07:15
• 700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement (RSM0812) Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to...
  March 16th, 2025 07:13
• Skunk in the Backyard (Rabdikavi) The smell of a skunk can not be mistaken for anything else. I ought to...
  March 16th, 2025 07:08
• AN EMPTY SHELL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no...
  March 16th, 2025 07:07
• The Dream (Tony36) Here a turn of events makes the poem ironic where revenge begets revenge...
  March 16th, 2025 07:05
• Oh Dear Wales. (Goldfinch60) Some things are more important than other Andy and priorities always need...
  March 16th, 2025 07:01
• Euphrasia’s legacy (Domilla) Beautifully written this poem seems hauntingly mournful and yet familiar....
  March 16th, 2025 06:55
• When The Day Comes (Not_defined) A beautiful image implanted sun like this memory whether of person, love...
  March 16th, 2025 06:51
• Too Soon To Crawl (ADarkerMind) I don\'t pretend to be wise enough to understand all of this but like...
  March 16th, 2025 06:46
• Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates) (Teddy.15) A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one...
  March 16th, 2025 06:17
• pulse (Arqios) This poem made me feel right at home. I live with all this a hundred and...
  March 16th, 2025 06:14
• I have a demon (Poetic_Carm) I would think that in metaphor we all have our demons that at times would...
  March 15th, 2025 19:46
• Oops, What Was That, m\'Dear? (Cheeky Missy) A full banquet mentioned in this poem. Day to day wished my table was as...
  March 15th, 2025 19:44
• fingers (Lunarchloedip) Human contact is important as is feeling loved and wanted. A very nice...
  March 15th, 2025 17:13
• Forever your home (Nicole Pritchard) Beautiful sentiment in this poem that offers love instead of physical...
  March 15th, 2025 15:38
• The Light (Kiamiz) Inspirational and motivating this was a beautiful poem of hope.
  March 15th, 2025 13:56
• The Wolf and the Fax after Sam Marshak (Ksey_Gan) This poem story reminded me of stories my father told us as kids. His...
  March 15th, 2025 13:54
• Bang Bang Boom (Anthony Hanible) Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
  March 15th, 2025 11:42
• His Essence To Be (Kurt Philip Behm) A most philosophical view of God and limits. Lovely
  March 15th, 2025 10:50
• I\'m Already Dead (Molly Delaney) Here the cycle of abuse is put in metaphor and set to verse. A lovely...
  March 15th, 2025 10:48
• Nowruz (Shahla Latifi) A myth in poem is Homeric and it is beautiful to hear. Lovely and well...
  March 15th, 2025 10:45
• Spring Cleaning (Gray0328) What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like....
  March 15th, 2025 10:15
• Love for losers (2781) A most interesting poem and I love the last line. It is full of deeper...
  March 15th, 2025 10:12
• Gone (E.J. Waling) A poem of word associations, dark and with as sense of loss
  March 15th, 2025 08:26
• The other (Lorenz) Philosophical and existential this poem is filled with metaphor and vivid...
  March 15th, 2025 07:46
• Relationship (RSM0812) The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that...
  March 15th, 2025 07:43
• Play (Tony36) And so is fantasy in the mind a playground where reality does not rule....
  March 15th, 2025 07:42
• A Hot Day ([email protected]) This poem vivid in its imagery is taken literally but in metaphor it may...
  March 15th, 2025 07:40
• Coat of dust (Tommy B Goode) Metaphor upon metaphor in this short piece. The meaninglessness of life...
  March 15th, 2025 07:38
• Heart of Deception (Tristan Robert Lange) The first shape appeared the box the second the half eaten heart. The work...
  March 15th, 2025 07:35
• First dance (Maplespal)
  March 15th, 2025 07:23
• First dance (Maplespal) Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the...
  March 15th, 2025 07:23
• The Outsider\'s Flame (Rebellion_in_sanity) The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are...
  March 15th, 2025 07:20