Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• season\'s jailbreak (Arqios) A race to the holidays or is it from the holidays. A most fun read Cryptic
  December 16th, 2024 05:26
• A Christmas Unearth (Teddy.15) I think that glass of water made me drunk because I see a metaphor here,...
  December 16th, 2024 05:24
• Ways of Falling Out of Love (Neville) This poem, as many of yours do, provoked a grate deal of thought and...
  December 16th, 2024 05:11
• Into The New Year. (Goldfinch60) A truely beautiful and kind message that may be a toast for the new year....
  December 16th, 2024 05:00
• Drink In the Sunrise (Dan Williams) This one spoke to me with each stanza a great line, so many in fact that I...
  December 16th, 2024 04:56
• holiday time (NinjaGirl) Love the shape of the poem that looks like a Christmas tree and the...
  December 15th, 2024 21:29
• Converse (Maplespal) Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its...
  December 15th, 2024 20:06
• How About Truffles from the Dark Forest? (Cheeky Missy) Many a trouble enfrented four stories invented Deprived of sleep helps...
  December 15th, 2024 16:09
• Bojangles (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem of promisses made and never kept. So is the human condition
  December 15th, 2024 13:06
• Collateral Damage (Malo J) Truth spoken in a world that wishes to blame someone else for everything....
  December 15th, 2024 13:04
• THE NEXT TABLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem paints such a vivid picture that I could not help but Fav it. It...
  December 15th, 2024 13:03
• Madness (E.J. Waling) How much is nurture and how much nature in the human race. Full of...
  December 15th, 2024 11:50
• `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk) One question always occurs to me, If people taste like pigs why won\'t a...
  December 15th, 2024 11:48
• Neriah (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I have to say you have a most unique manner of bringing the reader back....
  December 15th, 2024 11:46
• a moment in between (Arqios) A beautiful description of that time between. When nothing is measured,...
  December 15th, 2024 11:43
• Ticking Clock of Doom (Rebellion_in_sanity) Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in...
  December 15th, 2024 11:40
• No Taller Than A Tulip (ADarkerMind) A seasonal feel to this poem dark and a bit angry it shows disdane and...
  December 15th, 2024 07:49
• Demons (Tristan Robert Lange) We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all...
  December 15th, 2024 07:34
• Busy A Gut (Tony36) A good laugh can heal and certainly lifts the mood. A good write Tony
  December 15th, 2024 07:32
• mrs santa (Jim56) A fun seasonal story with a moral (always have a plan B) Very nice Jim
  December 15th, 2024 06:56
• Ancient Whispers in the Soil (Gray0328) History in fragments, untold stories told in pieces. What we all come to...
  December 15th, 2024 06:54
• Ripped off again (2781) Had it happen before and now make a second copy on the side in case. Had...
  December 15th, 2024 06:49
• Anagram (Lorenz) This poem sets the profane against the holy, the absurd against reality...
  December 15th, 2024 06:46
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far...
  December 15th, 2024 04:49
• Preparing The Way (Orchidee) Good choice of topic Orchi nicely worded and I always liked that the last...
  December 15th, 2024 04:23
• LIMERICK 132 (Michael Edwards) Love limericks and am so glad to see that Teddy Faved this one.
  December 15th, 2024 04:20
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of...
  December 15th, 2024 04:18
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Settling for second best is always disconcerting and although practical...
  December 15th, 2024 04:14
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age....
  December 15th, 2024 04:07
• Circumcision (2781) You did well the story to tell and from history to reveal the mystery/. If...
  December 15th, 2024 04:02
• creature (Rin) God in poetry. Creating makes one its god so to speak.
  December 15th, 2024 03:54
• thought 1 (Maplespal) Clever wording and well done. Very nice
  December 14th, 2024 13:35
• Celestial Trading (Rebellion_in_sanity) So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too...
  December 14th, 2024 11:12
• ~> If I Was A Dawg! _ Monorhyme_ (Thad Wilk) A fun read for a dog day afternoon. I think you should consider doing...
  December 14th, 2024 11:08
• Doors (Tristan Robert Lange) Wise words that one must loose fear to hear the truth before one can hear...
  December 14th, 2024 11:05
• My kingdoms of legend (Lorenz) Written in rose thorns, What a wonderful line. A mystical place in an...
  December 14th, 2024 11:02
• The Prophet’s Eye (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
  December 14th, 2024 08:58
• Christmas Time (Tony36) A most pleasent feeling to this seasonal poem. Lovely Tony
  December 14th, 2024 07:54
• friendship (Jim56) A most beautiful message conveyed in this poem
  December 14th, 2024 07:53
• Do You Believe in Angels? (Gray0328) (In silent rooms where moonlight lifts the dust,)(And time corrodes the...
  December 14th, 2024 07:51
• Fragile (Cassie58) Masterful Cassie! Each line a new reveal that paints the picture of a girl...
  December 14th, 2024 04:45
• The Consequences of Failing to Prep (Neville) Had my children early and that had its problems too. Too early or late in...
  December 14th, 2024 04:41
• Vlad and Donald (Poetic Licence) Greed for power, wealth, and dominion are the basis of humanity it is what...
  December 14th, 2024 04:36
• mountain (Rin) A deep metaphoric story that strikes deep at human nature and...
  December 14th, 2024 04:32
• Empty thoughts - extended v of Empty Thought (Maplespal) Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of...
  December 14th, 2024 04:28
• Forever Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful words to start a beautiful day with Andy
  December 14th, 2024 04:22
• THE MIRROR TALKS (Bobby O) Figuring out one\'s end in anything is the hard part but once done...
  December 14th, 2024 04:18
• Winds of Change (RSM0812) We can only hope for change from dark days to ones brighter. Gilded...
  December 13th, 2024 17:53
• Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab) Something that man has done from the beginning and what he seems to do...
  December 13th, 2024 17:48
• Secrets (Rebellion_in_sanity) A great poem. I was always told that one doesn’t have to worry about...
  December 13th, 2024 15:02
• The Vertigo of Eternity (Gray0328) Beautiful weather, talking of a woman or the universe, nature or person...
  December 13th, 2024 14:59
• Today a person begged (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Trapped in the middle between customer and management. A terrible place to...
  December 13th, 2024 14:57
• Blind (2781) Differences in opinions and views that are not well tolerated. I don’t...
  December 13th, 2024 10:14
• Once Upon A Time! (Thad Wilk) This one made me laugh. It reminded me of my old dog not that he chewed on...
  December 13th, 2024 10:11
• The Silent Herald (Arqios) You have depicted well, the voice of a poet. Very nicely worded in this...
  December 13th, 2024 10:09
• sleepy hedgehog (Jim56) A different creature grace is your poem today Jim. Do you have painted him...
  December 13th, 2024 10:07
• The woman inside me (Lorenz) You have named many of the archetypes that fill are feminine side. Each of...
  December 13th, 2024 10:05
• Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet, Andy. Full of love and romance, it speaks to the
  December 13th, 2024 10:03
• Afterwards #2   (Neville) Just enough twist and turns in this folded drawer to give this poem, the...
  December 13th, 2024 10:00
• After the brainwashing is done (EvenwheniLie) This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that...
  December 13th, 2024 09:58
• Thaw (Tony36) You say so much in so few words very nicely said and very poetic terms
  December 13th, 2024 09:52
• One Out of Five (Tristan Robert Lange) Beautiful words and fantastic lines of poetic understanding. A lovely poem...
  December 13th, 2024 08:35
• Seasonal Mayhem (senryu) (Teddy.15) Love eggnog and am still plagued with the ghost of season past but the...
  December 13th, 2024 08:31
• Optimist or Pessimist? (Orchidee) Words of wisdom spill like water from an overfilled glass. Lovely write...
  December 13th, 2024 03:39
• Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) The company we have overcomes all outside forces. Very nice Andy.
  December 13th, 2024 03:33
• Princess Of The Night (Sheta) A most sensitive view of the heavens put in beautiful words of poetry....
  December 13th, 2024 03:30
• Earth Angels (NafisaSB) There are too few of these earth angles and it would be nice if each of us...
  December 13th, 2024 03:27
• wind woman (Sheta) This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new...
  December 13th, 2024 03:22
• Winter (Sheta) Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the...
  December 13th, 2024 03:15
• Engineering Issues (Mutley Ravishes) A strong message it rings with distress
  December 12th, 2024 20:33
• it\'s all in my head (NinjaGirl) Doubts powerful and common to us all. Nicely expressed
  December 12th, 2024 20:31
• No Taller Than A Tulip (ADarkerMind) So many great images and lines I concoct surreal hypotheses only to be...
  December 12th, 2024 17:10
• Our Lady of Guadalupe (Gray0328) Beautiful and poignant the clash of cultures and beliefs. Well penned with...
  December 12th, 2024 13:26
• The blizzard (RSM0812) A wonderful write about the changes in nature
  December 12th, 2024 13:23
• Calling Forth (Kurt Philip Behm) A most philisophical write penned in beautiful poetic form
  December 12th, 2024 13:21
• Reality Check (Vicecream) What we consider real and why is a most interesting question. Based on ...
  December 12th, 2024 10:54
• ~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk) Most amusing but also logical and an evolutionary growth. Lovely
  December 12th, 2024 10:51
• Empty thought (Maplespal) .So true emptiness has much to say. so nicely said
  December 12th, 2024 10:48
• The Key (Tristan Robert Lange) Great form to this poem so nicely done
  December 12th, 2024 10:46
• Come back (Tony36) Live, laugh, love for that is what life is about. What a great line and...
  December 12th, 2024 10:24
• Work vs. Purpose (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Deeper thought in this poem than at first evident. So few words for so
  December 12th, 2024 10:22
• robin myth (Jim56) How do these stories get started? I have heard some myself.Nicely woven...
  December 12th, 2024 10:21
• Made in Japan (Lorenz) Deeply rooted in culture this poem has a sense of cynicism and it comes...
  December 12th, 2024 10:19
• Complicit (Rebellion_in_sanity) Guilty as charged along with everyone else. Nicely written
  December 12th, 2024 09:56
• 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee) Commercialism at its best Orchi. A fun read.
  December 12th, 2024 09:53
• Granny Squares (Vicecream) So well expressed the response to seeing other\'s pain
  December 12th, 2024 09:44
• Today I Sang to the Dawn (Vicecream) Beautiful, simply beautiful.
  December 12th, 2024 09:42
• An Advent Walk (JD Boye) A beautiful scene with a seasonal sense of peace. Lovely
  December 12th, 2024 09:39
• Who Said I Had Anything to Add? (Cheeky Missy) This poem felt so seasonal with the foods mentioned as well as the lights...
  December 12th, 2024 04:37
• Now (2781) The most fun read is it ramble along from one topic to another just as the...
  December 12th, 2024 04:35
• Complicit (Rebellion_in_sanity) A thoughtful poem the place is blame back where control ends with...
  December 12th, 2024 04:31
• This Is My City (Tom Dylan) I love the perspective of this poem, where a city speaks as the narrator....
  December 12th, 2024 04:28
• The two-headed eagle (Rin) Envy is not a good thing and little good comes from it. It would seem in...
  December 12th, 2024 04:27
• You May Get a Kiss (senryu) (Teddy.15) What a beautiful seasonal message you send. Far better than wrapped...
  December 12th, 2024 04:20
• Glimmer of Frost (Arqios) As his usual, your wordplay and clever writing has made this poem not only...
  December 12th, 2024 03:59
• The Shadows. (Goldfinch60) The music sounds so familiar and although this was my era, I cannot place...
  December 12th, 2024 03:54
• It Took Years (Thomas W Case) It feels as though I have been there And it feels dry. I love when I can...
  December 12th, 2024 03:50
• Dementia’s Cruel Kiss (Neville) Although I have never personally experienced it, I have seen it in many...
  December 12th, 2024 03:45
• $0.65 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Short but to the point and where are all of our minds should be. A...
  December 11th, 2024 16:02
• In The Flatlands Of The Soul (Emile Dubois) A wonderful expression of the yearning we all have for things of no value....
  December 11th, 2024 16:01