Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Unity in Diversity (Mello) A beatiful message highlited with vivid imagry and a great metaphor....
  February 12th, 2023 08:16
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (1) Almost Midnight (Doggerel Dave) In my youth I worked laying track in a mine and have ridden steam...
  February 10th, 2023 21:52
• No offense (Ok Waleed) Dreams are more easily lived out than life itself. And yes there is little...
  February 10th, 2023 17:16
• Individual Journeys. (Goldfinch60) So true, so many paths that cross and intertwine. As we cross it is nice...
  February 9th, 2023 06:05
• Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave) A gritty piece of work that took me to the scene. Nicely written with the...
  February 9th, 2023 06:01
• Words (2781) So true. Short and to the point.
  February 9th, 2023 05:40
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) I loved the pairings. Subtle yet to the point. A bit melancholic but also...
  February 9th, 2023 05:07
• Peace Plea (Orchidee) Orchidee this is a beautiful thought and prayer that we are still a long...
  February 7th, 2023 05:45
• Dancing To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) Yes, life is a dance. Hopefully we love our partner and don\'t step on too...
  February 7th, 2023 05:37
• “Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani?” (Ok Waleed) Doubt, lack of trust are the seeds from which paranoia and hate grow. I...
  February 7th, 2023 05:32
• Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave) Not been there but similar and your words framed the images well. Very...
  February 6th, 2023 21:59
• River And Time. (Goldfinch60) Rivers meander and they rush, they flood and they dribble by. Time too...
  February 6th, 2023 04:53
• of Geometrical Substance or Mode (L. B. Mek) Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so...
  February 3rd, 2023 05:48
• The Chick Cycle (Thinkerbell) A nice poem with a sad ending. Yes we all imprint whether biologically of...
  February 1st, 2023 09:35
• Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave) What I was taught i school I have found to be mythical, and one sided....
  February 1st, 2023 07:45
• flowershop blather (Arqios) Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it...
  February 1st, 2023 07:37
• Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett) Bella so glad you enjoyed it. It was more fun to write about years later...
  January 31st, 2023 17:07
• Circular journey (Sorenbarrett) Dear Bella you humble me with your more than gracious comments. My mind...
  January 31st, 2023 15:57
• Possibilities. (Goldfinch60) Yes, words as true as Gold.
  January 31st, 2023 04:14
• The Night Male (Doggerel Dave) This was truly an enjoyable read so well constructed that it flowed like...
  January 30th, 2023 10:11
• what if i (Amepiesces) This is so raw, so loaded with emotion, it drips pain. It oozes the human...
  January 30th, 2023 06:09
• not to be messed with (Arqios) This is thought provoking and maybe shouldn\'t be. The chesire cat and I...
  January 30th, 2023 05:28
• Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek) L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski...
  January 30th, 2023 04:42
• ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54) This haunting tale evokes many memories and the experiences that have gone...
  January 29th, 2023 05:50
• Sad Little Puppy (Bella Shepard) Bella, this took me back to my childhood and I felt like my mother was...
  January 28th, 2023 13:01
• We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave) Well Dave I have to agree. I have no proof otherwise. Belief, yea we all...
  January 28th, 2023 07:44
• What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave) I came a little late to this party but have been a student of the Darwin...
  January 26th, 2023 20:56
• Laughter Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy. The old adage that laughter is good medicine is true. What...
  January 25th, 2023 10:45
• Queen Victoria Sits Again. (Doggerel Dave) Sounds like a white elephant gift to me. So sad when your not wanted. Nice...
  January 24th, 2023 20:46
• Prams. (Doggerel Dave) Have to admit I had to look up what a pram is. Then it all made sense and...
  January 23rd, 2023 05:45
• I can’t trust my wife (Ok Waleed) I\'m white so don\'t trust me, I\'m a man so maybe you can, Satan was an...
  January 22nd, 2023 13:51
• Earth, Air, Fire (Sorenbarrett) Thanks for the review and comment
  January 22nd, 2023 13:48
• No Shave, Thanks - Just a Haircut! (Doggerel Dave) I started shearing my own hair long before the Covid thing so it didn\'t...
  January 19th, 2023 09:08
• Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60) \"I wonder if\" such a great entry to this piece. It paints a vivid...
  January 18th, 2023 14:20
• Balance. (Doggerel Dave) When ever there are more than one person there will be politics and a...
  January 13th, 2023 05:14
• Mozart\'s Morning. (Goldfinch60) Love Mozart but then I love most music. Nice piece Andy.
  January 12th, 2023 06:29
• The scent of a dream (Sorenbarrett) Thank you Andy, your comment is appreciated.
  January 12th, 2023 06:25
• My Biggest Fear (Rhmn_7) A precursor to the existential question. Shakespear said \"To thine own...
  January 10th, 2023 11:50
• The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard) I used to play the violin and I love the minor key but maybe this is...
  January 10th, 2023 11:39
• Believe In Dreams. (Goldfinch60) It is the last line that made me reflect. Yes I believe you are right,...
  January 7th, 2023 06:06
• Epiphany Expectations (Orchidee) So many times from childhood I have heard this story but you have told it...
  January 6th, 2023 11:18
• on the banks of the Oise (Arqios) This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending...
  January 6th, 2023 06:50
• Beautiful Destinations. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy I have walked them all I believe, and yet each day I find a...
  January 6th, 2023 06:08
• Boston Lay Beneath Our Pity (Charles69) This was a touching piece that goes deeper than the surface. In a sense we...
  January 4th, 2023 11:39
• Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60) Dark is the word. Nature has a way of working things out but wow. A very...
  January 3rd, 2023 05:41
• a vantaged perch (Arqios) A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people...
  January 2nd, 2023 10:15
• Distractions (Bella Shepard) A good point and although it may be true for many, for me I prefer the...
  January 1st, 2023 15:59
• Raining In My Heart To Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Thank you for sharing. It is a bittersweet poem of loss and gain.
  December 30th, 2022 06:56
• grand coterie (Arqios) This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the...
  December 29th, 2022 20:51
• Burning Souls (Rhmn_7) This started with such an obvious but neglected view \"do we live in the...
  December 23rd, 2022 16:00
• Prince Of Cool. (Goldfinch60) So true. I love music of all types but particularly blues and jazz. Chet...
  December 23rd, 2022 15:43
• Mr. Bean (Bella Shepard) Bella I look forward to your poems and how they share the common beauty in...
  December 23rd, 2022 15:36
• Liebestraum. (Goldfinch60) I too love music that has the power to make or change a mood. Although we...
  December 22nd, 2022 06:51
• retitled and reposted of chemotherapy (Dusk arising) Such a mature and wise view of life. It is not only the bitter medicine...
  December 21st, 2022 19:40
• Together And Forever. (Goldfinch60) Love is a wonderful thing. It is what makes us feel not alone in this...
  December 21st, 2022 07:31
• Disaster Trumps Competition. (Doggerel Dave) I\'m glad you didn\'t end it \"humanity rotten to the core\" , although...
  December 20th, 2022 19:40
• A message to you (Amepiesces) A great message tp us all, child or not. Time will work things out and...
  December 20th, 2022 09:17
• Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60) It is one thing that defines people, those that are positive, or negative,...
  December 17th, 2022 06:57
• War Veterans (Doggerel Dave) You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point...
  December 16th, 2022 17:55
• Light Limitless - Carol Series (5) (Orchidee) Another hymn that could fit in any church\'s hymnal. I am always reminded...
  December 16th, 2022 11:59
• Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud (Doggerel Dave) I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation....
  December 16th, 2022 07:25
• Mr Right (Arqios) Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll...
  December 15th, 2022 21:49
• The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard) What worries me is the cost of dying. I can\'t afford to die, it costs...
  December 14th, 2022 20:49
• Serious Questions (Doggerel Dave) Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the...
  December 14th, 2022 20:46
• Incarnation Impartation - Carol Series (4) (Orchidee) This time of the year is perfect for this write. Moses gave the law of an...
  December 14th, 2022 13:56
• Kant spel (Hzugman) No one knows how to spell anymore. they don\'t teach cursive writing...
  December 11th, 2022 21:56
• Living Light (Orchidee) A great message. A prayer that if we put ourselves in the place of God, we...
  December 10th, 2022 08:47
• When Size is Not Everything (Neville) The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words...
  December 10th, 2022 08:43
• Long Life Pleasure. (Goldfinch60) So true, but as they say; we are only as old as we think we are. Age is in...
  December 10th, 2022 08:41
• Creatures of Nature (Bella Shepard) I could\'t agree more. We, in our arrogance, tend to aggrandize ourselves,...
  December 10th, 2022 07:37
• there (Arqios) It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to...
  December 10th, 2022 07:33
• Joy And Freedom. (Goldfinch60) Andy I have always loved music, it can reach deep into the soul and heart,...
  December 9th, 2022 06:55
• head gear all in poe (Arqios) A clever use of the word-- words. It makes sense to me but then I\'ve had...
  December 8th, 2022 19:06
• Freedom From The Doctrine Of Men - Series (8) (Orchidee) You can\'t tell a book by its cover, it\'s not what that is on the outside...
  December 8th, 2022 19:00
• The New Watch. (Goldfinch60) Habits are a hard thing to break even when one wants to. A great story...
  December 8th, 2022 18:55
• Rampant Vegetation. (Doggerel Dave) Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans...
  December 8th, 2022 18:49
• Nowhere (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
  December 8th, 2022 18:40
• Life (Bella Shepard) Bella what a great thought. I do try to laugh at the sadness in life, it...
  December 2nd, 2022 17:16
• The Chair. (Doggerel Dave) I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the...
  December 2nd, 2022 12:25
• thursday winds (Dusk arising) Dusk this brought back memories that have been buried for a long time.
  December 2nd, 2022 12:21
• Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60) Music touches the soul where nothing else can reach. A nice write that...
  December 1st, 2022 06:40
• Just Asking (Doggerel Dave) Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple...
  November 30th, 2022 22:12
• with my rhymes i am greater (MR.apocalypse) I liked this poem. At first it reminded me of a poem I had written some...
  November 30th, 2022 22:04
• Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.) This brings so many memories. Watching hawks and eagles as a grand part of...
  November 28th, 2022 07:58
• Just Another Zen Thing (Neville) A great analogy and wonderful poem put very succinctly and words as smooth...
  November 28th, 2022 06:23
• so once (Dusk arising) We all question ourselves at times and it is how we respond to these...
  November 28th, 2022 06:21
• Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave) This is a good and valid point. We or us are used without validation to...
  November 28th, 2022 06:09
• baggage claim delay (Arqios) Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which...
  November 28th, 2022 05:43
• Walking To School. (Goldfinch60) I like you grew up in those times walking and later riding a bicycle to...
  November 26th, 2022 16:35
• so once (Dusk arising) Loose the chains, loose the beast, there is beauty in that beast. Do I...
  November 25th, 2022 15:09
• Freedom From Enticing Words - Series (4) (Orchidee) Good write John
  November 25th, 2022 13:06
• Beholding The Baptist (Orchidee) This brought back many memories from childhood of Bible stories. So well...
  November 25th, 2022 07:20
• Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave) Dave I have been there. I\'m not sure whether it is worse to be bitten or...
  November 25th, 2022 07:18
• I Am One With Creation (Bella Shepard) I couldn\'t agree more Bella and I too feel that winter has arrived in my...
  November 25th, 2022 07:15
• ice fishing anyone? (Arqios) Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other...
  November 25th, 2022 07:11
• Creating Music. (Goldfinch60) A nice setting well imaged and with the feeling of completion and present...
  November 25th, 2022 07:08
• germinant style birthed (Arqios) Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A...
  November 23rd, 2022 09:07
• negotiable leave (Arqios) A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks...
  November 21st, 2022 10:28
• Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Andy there is too little of this. Years ago, in Brazil, the news would...
  November 20th, 2022 06:08
• fastidious malignment (Arqios) Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the...
  November 19th, 2022 07:09