Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Please tell me (Poetaldo)
A sincere plea heard in this poem. If one truly believes in a loving God...
February 25th, 2025 10:32 - Failures (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Persistence is the key to this poem. A great attitude and good message....
February 25th, 2025 10:30 - the host (Ink.weaver)
A beautiful write and a warning. Live the day and give praise for what is...
February 25th, 2025 08:56 - Dark Age Descended (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem...
February 25th, 2025 08:53 - Taco Tuesday (Tony36)
Love tacos and I like mine hot with lots of cheese and meat lettuce...
February 25th, 2025 08:42 - Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights (Maplespal)
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The...
February 25th, 2025 06:16 - Some Kind of Curious Something (Neville)
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and...
February 25th, 2025 06:08 - thank mum (Jim56)
A lovely tribute to the giver of life and unconditional love. Beautiful my...
February 25th, 2025 06:06 - Who Knows Where The Time Goes (Paul Gerard Reed)
A marvelous metaphor encased in this poem. Time like a breeze is here and...
February 25th, 2025 06:04 - THREAT OF SNOW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well....
February 25th, 2025 05:58 - Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk (EvenwheniLie)
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present...
February 25th, 2025 04:10 - Abby Wallace (Tkatie118)
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved...
February 25th, 2025 04:06 - Life 2 (Mik)
I liked the formation of this poem that emulated its message in its...
February 25th, 2025 03:58 - Oh virgin dew (Funmiwrites)
A most interesting concept that had not occurred to me before. Well put...
February 25th, 2025 03:57 - Forgiveness Found (Orchidee)
Ah Orchi you have outdone yourself on this one. If I were to write a hymn...
February 25th, 2025 03:54 - Blossoming (2017) (Arqios)
A glow of culture, and respect fill this poem. It is distinguished in...
February 25th, 2025 03:51 - No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
Your poems put a smile on my day and that always deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 03:48 - Natures Symphony Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
As the sun creeps over the horizon I can hear it now the dying of the...
February 25th, 2025 03:46 - The Giant they kept small (Eliaskayne)
I have worked with bonsai tree and all the time that I read this I could...
February 25th, 2025 03:42 - So In Love I Fell (Anthony Hanible)
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past...
February 25th, 2025 03:39 - Trains (MDStone)
A lovely description well set up and introduced. If it were not for the...
February 25th, 2025 03:36 - Our Song (RSM0812)
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the...
February 25th, 2025 03:32 - The light in the dark (Poems_From_Emotions)
A poem of happiness cast in rhyme that flows well.
February 24th, 2025 22:14 - Stars in a Tear Drop (Salvia.S)
Another short that is powerful and with its strength carries the heart...
February 24th, 2025 22:13 - Ode to the Weekend (Kevin Hulme)
This reads so well with such good meter and rhyme it feels classical in...
February 24th, 2025 22:12 - Candles In The Moon (Reynaldo Casison)
This poem has an eastern feel to it and reads like a classic Indian ...
February 24th, 2025 22:07 - directions to love (NinjaGirl)
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is...
February 24th, 2025 22:05 - Waste (E.J. Waling)
A call to arms and a motivational poem at that.
February 24th, 2025 22:02 - Bad choice (Nicole Pritchard)
Time can not be reversed and all choices are permanent but new choices can...
February 24th, 2025 22:01 - Flammable (Mutley Ravishes)
I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought...
February 24th, 2025 21:59 - Spend a Night in the Gathering of Humans—Just Once (Mohammad younus koul)
Very spiritual this poem
February 24th, 2025 21:58 - Where the children go to play (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Ah but to see the world through a child\'s eyes again. A lovely poem about...
February 24th, 2025 21:56 - Okay, Okay, Just Pat My Silly Head (Cheeky Missy)
A great line \"Frightened Monday\" and a fun read of the persistence of...
February 24th, 2025 21:53 - VooDoo\'s Grasp (Lil_Bit0912)
Good rhyme in this poem. It flows well and many people are creeped out by...
February 24th, 2025 15:59 - Distance (Steve Goldenfort)
Learning to let go is one of the hardest but greatest lessons to be...
February 24th, 2025 13:52 - Awakened by His Call (Whats write for me)
A deep statement of faith and belief. Firmly stated well said.
February 24th, 2025 12:05 - Pondering over troubles (Arshia)
The question of how to find peace. A existential question. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 12:04 - \"Love kills. I am love.\" (Bird In Red)
Brutal and sad with a clever use of language to make its point. Nicely...
February 24th, 2025 12:02 - Cursed To Repeat (Kurt Philip Behm)
A social commentary of our present day. Sadly it is true. What more can I...
February 24th, 2025 12:00 - Gina Calfman (Tkatie118)
This write seems a critique and is well composed in that light. Very nice
February 24th, 2025 11:57 - The Poetry Slams (Thomas W Case)
As Paul Simon said the words of the prophets are written on the subway...
February 24th, 2025 11:55 - poetry (Newt)
The use of language in a true emotional manner. Very well written
February 24th, 2025 11:52 - Territory (MarcWalk)
This is the first poem about salesmen that I have read, definitely an...
February 24th, 2025 11:46 - Individual (Tony36)
A poem of being oneself and an individual so hard to do and fit in. A...
February 24th, 2025 11:43 - The Battle (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A poem of reliance and belief. Very nicely written
February 24th, 2025 11:41 - If a cat could talk (Kaelyn Jade)
A quizzical poem that many can relate to in that so many have pet cats....
February 24th, 2025 11:37 - Seal fin de siècle with unheard celebration (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Unwarranted and ridiculous punishments in a ridiculous society. A poem of...
February 24th, 2025 11:32 - In The End It’s You I Hold Dear (Bloomingdale)
This poem says that we don\'t have to be alike or opposites to love and so...
February 24th, 2025 11:25 - butterflies (Jim56)
A beautiful picture you paint in words Jim. Very nicely done
February 24th, 2025 11:21 - Please tell me (Poetaldo)
A poem with most interesting wording. There is doubt in trust and here is...
February 24th, 2025 11:20 - A typical 24 (Maplespal)
Between day and night feels rough. Fights all day and no sleep at night. A...
February 24th, 2025 11:17 - BETWEEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it...
February 24th, 2025 11:13 - Spring Awaits (Xiaohua)
A poem about the uncertainty of the weather. Spring always looked forward...
February 24th, 2025 11:08 - Pontiac (Tristan Robert Lange)
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on...
February 24th, 2025 11:06 - I Swear It (PART 2) (Abdullah123)
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring...
February 24th, 2025 04:28 - Moonlight Over the Bayou (Gray0328)
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for...
February 24th, 2025 04:23 - Weight of Depression (Melancholic~Onion)
This brings to mind the song by Radiohead Creep. Depression is a terrible...
February 24th, 2025 04:20 - Glimpse of yesterday (Funmiwrites)
Indeed if I knew what I knew now when I was a young child how would things...
February 24th, 2025 04:14 - Morning Walk (Orchidee)
Then there are those that mark all their poems +18 and I read and read and...
February 24th, 2025 04:05 - Keys In A Mansion. (Goldfinch60)
A very apt metaphor Gold. Music is a many roomed mansion, each room with...
February 24th, 2025 02:51 - Thoughts that keep me stuck (Poems_From_Emotions)
I feel a sense of urgency and uncertainty in this poem. It leaves a sense...
February 24th, 2025 02:47 - first love (Sheta)
There is much truth in this poem. If I might add First love is just an...
February 24th, 2025 02:45 - Stay humble (NafisaSB)
Good advice given in this poem of good rhyme as well. Nicely done
February 24th, 2025 02:42 - Dreaming (Shandi)
I sense sadness, anger and resentment in this poem. Written as...
February 24th, 2025 02:40 - The Cracked Lens (Steve Goldenfort)
Generally one\'s most severe critique is oneself. It is good to be honest...
February 24th, 2025 02:37 - Cindy Beale (Tkatie118)
I hear don\'t judge until you have walked in the other person\'s shoes....
February 24th, 2025 02:34 - Volcanoes (MDStone)
A great metaphor for human emotion. Followed through from beginning to end...
February 24th, 2025 02:31 - Bleak House: The Fog (Arqios)
What a wonderful metaphor you have painted in this metropolis. Yes like...
February 24th, 2025 02:29 - Moral Decay (Mr. Not)
A poem that catches the ear. Nice to hear, nicely written.
February 23rd, 2025 19:15 - My Dante Lives (ADarkerMind)
Have read Dante and it fits. Nicely done and written
February 23rd, 2025 16:51 - I hate words (Xqw)
Vivid images presented in a most unique third person manner. Very nicely...
February 23rd, 2025 16:46 - I Said A Prayer For You (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A kind gesture in a poem. Nicely stated compassion for another stated....
February 23rd, 2025 16:43 - America’s Best (Kzsparadise)
It does make me wonder that if those are our best its a good thing the...
February 23rd, 2025 16:40 - Nostalgia (Kaelyn Jade)
Nostalgia is such a common thing and seems to grow stronger as we grow...
February 23rd, 2025 16:36 - Money lender......beware! (Davidbrailsford)
A fun read about a not so fun topic. Never borrow is the rule of thumb if...
February 23rd, 2025 16:32 - Color my small world - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
A most colorful and beautiful write with great metaphor.
February 23rd, 2025 16:28 - Read this right now (Hzugman)
Short and concise and with the greatest of rhyme.
February 23rd, 2025 16:24 - Running Dry (Anthony Hanible)
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back....
February 23rd, 2025 16:22 - The Mother\'s Curse (Meagan Adelle)
I have told my children the same. And they did. But as a grandparent it...
February 23rd, 2025 16:20 - It\'s Just a Hop, Skip. and a Jump to the Madhouse (Thomas W Case)
Almost anything these days will set off the nitroglycerin of daily living....
February 23rd, 2025 16:12 - distort (NinjaGirl)
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state...
February 23rd, 2025 16:09 - No More Mr. Blue Skies (Neville)
Now that casts a rather dark pall over this poem. \"Pray\" indeed...
February 23rd, 2025 16:07 - The Smile Room (Gray0328)
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is...
February 23rd, 2025 12:57 - Oh Tender Tongue (RSM0812)
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42 - The Echos of the past (Trix)
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself....
February 23rd, 2025 11:30 - Being Myself (Shahla Latifi)
A self statement that shows strength and power to be oneself. Nicely...
February 23rd, 2025 11:27 - Orphaned Moments (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another well written poem that rolls off the tongue
February 23rd, 2025 11:22 - Wear your wig bleach your skin (EvenwheniLie)
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful,...
February 23rd, 2025 11:20 - Sole Man (DLewis88)
And I ask you is it weirder to fixate on a person\'s foot than a breast,...
February 23rd, 2025 09:27 - Pooled string, Current location, & It blinks (Maplespal)
Pensive meditation in isolation is the feeling I get from these three. Yet...
February 23rd, 2025 08:24 - Share with me (Tony36)
A great message to others to be brave. To share oneself is the bravest...
February 23rd, 2025 08:20 - Set me free (Joseph M Marion)
A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 08:18 - I Swear It (PART 1) (Abdullah123)
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship...
February 23rd, 2025 08:16 - Antlers (Melancholic~Onion)
So many metaphors could be drawn from such a picture of an antler. Won\'t...
February 23rd, 2025 08:13 - Dunk Tank (Tristan Robert Lange)
A wonderful write. I wonder how much money could be made with this? Maybe...
February 23rd, 2025 08:11 - starling song (Jim56)
Such a nice flow to this poem and a picture with which I am very familiar....
February 23rd, 2025 06:28 - Smile (Whats write for me)
Such artistic flare here, to use nature to describe a smile. Using the sun...
February 23rd, 2025 05:57 - Someone like me (Poetaldo)
There are always those that would impose their values and desires upon...
February 23rd, 2025 05:55 - Your Presence (Ajon4wheels)
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls...
February 23rd, 2025 05:53 - anger transfers (Demar Desu)
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50
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