Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Old Man Winter now flagging, and slip sliding along... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Lots of creative images and metaphors here. All nicely woven into one...
March 2nd, 2025 10:36 - So Pathetic (Anthony Hanible)
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21 - The Light in Me (Whats write for me)
Light often used as a symbol for truth and knowledge shines through here....
March 2nd, 2025 09:19 - Blood Caps (Timothy Hilary Musa)
Covered under layers of metaphor is political commentary. A poem replete...
March 2nd, 2025 09:15 - anvil clouds and phantom corridors (Tristan Robert Lange)
Gothic indeed and dark. A good choice of images to present the story. Well...
March 2nd, 2025 09:10 - Pleasure & Pain (Mutley Ravishes)
There is depth in this short piece. Memories are what we want them to be...
March 2nd, 2025 06:30 - march is here (Jim56)
Once again Jim you paint a beautiful picture of sunny days and beautiful...
March 2nd, 2025 06:29 - I write & The situation (Maplespal)
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely...
March 2nd, 2025 06:27 - The UK Government Want All Ya eBay Money (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It doesn\'t matter which country they all want their share of the pie and...
March 2nd, 2025 05:08 - To understand you is an understatement (Vishakha)
This to me is a poem of friendship and is written in such a caring way....
March 2nd, 2025 05:06 - Listen Loud Just One More Time (Neville)
The subtlety in this piece nearly slipped past me. If he needs to shout...
March 2nd, 2025 05:04 - Trust (Kez)
I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its...
March 2nd, 2025 04:51 - Notes in bottles (Coracaodacripta)
This in many ways sounds classical in form and is somewhat of a soliloquy....
March 2nd, 2025 04:49 - love (Sheta)
A good write and yes love encompasses them all.
March 2nd, 2025 04:45 - Resuscitate (Rebellion_in_sanity)
This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its...
March 2nd, 2025 04:43 - The River of Thought (Salvia.S)
This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It...
March 2nd, 2025 04:39 - No5 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
Another great fanciful rhyme that keeps me thinking, imagining, and...
March 2nd, 2025 04:32 - Eclipse (Arqios)
Your voice is always welcome and your poetry enjoyed. Memories are never...
March 2nd, 2025 04:25 - Time to Shine (Cellinic)
A cryptic write to unravel lies in this poem. Thought provoking.
March 2nd, 2025 04:22 - Why insult others ? (NafisaSB)
A great message in this poem. Unfortunately until we feel true love for...
March 2nd, 2025 04:18 - Same O\'l Song.. (Lyricalremedy)
A modern day prophesy and just like the old ones few listen. The story has...
March 2nd, 2025 04:14 - Prince of the Private School (Thomas W Case)
The evolution and development of literary interest. A very open divulgence...
March 2nd, 2025 04:11 - old dogs and older boots (Queer-with-a-pen)
Reflections. Nicely written and well said. As we look back on our lives we...
March 2nd, 2025 04:07 - the war within (Xiaohua)
A short write that feels quite Biblical in nature. Very nice
March 2nd, 2025 04:00 - Campfires Gone Bye (MDStone)
A great metaphor of aging love is well portrayed in this poem with great...
March 2nd, 2025 03:58 - People Praise (Orchidee)
Another great hymn. Those added notes add flavor and yes there do seem to...
March 2nd, 2025 03:44 - Love For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
There is enough love for everyone. A most lovely thought
March 2nd, 2025 03:34 - The cry of married man (Ksey_Gan)
After years of being together things become like this. A write of an older...
March 1st, 2025 16:19 - For You (Bird In Red)
A beautiful poem and the last line is the most important and meaningful....
March 1st, 2025 14:53 - Beauty (Kez)
Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem...
March 1st, 2025 14:52 - Where it comes from (Hzugman)
A good message cleverly put. I sometimes choke on my words. I\'ve been...
March 1st, 2025 14:51 - Faithful Eyes (Whats write for me)
And so it is indeed each sunrise and sunset are markers of faith and...
March 1st, 2025 14:48 - The Cage (Shahla Latifi)
A sad poem of confinement whether real or metaphorical. Yet we are all in...
March 1st, 2025 14:47 - punctual predator (Gray0328)
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last....
March 1st, 2025 14:44 - hard to do (Demar Desu)
May be a good place to be. Another short but provocative poem to make the...
March 1st, 2025 14:42 - [Even Open Mic Wouldn\'t Cut It] (Cheeky Missy)
And life goes on. Memories portrayed and delicacies devoured. Day to day...
March 1st, 2025 14:39 - The dark dahlia (Lorenz)
My father grew Dahlias and some were very dark. A rather serious poem that...
March 1st, 2025 11:42 - Tools of the Trade (Eugene S.)
Cynical and dark it is more true than not and strikes a chord Very nicely...
March 1st, 2025 11:39 - Time consuming (Freddi)
Great images and metaphor to describe the rush in our lives where we...
March 1st, 2025 11:36 - Scam (RSM0812)
Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks...
March 1st, 2025 11:33 - Lament for Life (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well...
March 1st, 2025 11:29 - Intelligent Design (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Loved this write it speaks to all. Very nicely worded and composed.
March 1st, 2025 09:21 - Give and Take (Tristan Robert Lange)
And haven\'t we all? I have gone through phases of worshiping different...
March 1st, 2025 09:19 - The Lone Cucumber (Tony36)
Creative, fun. I loved it.
March 1st, 2025 08:13 - animal cruelty (Jim56)
Whether animals or people it\'s all the same hurting others sometimes in...
March 1st, 2025 07:03 - Luminous Lunar (Salvia.S)
So short yet so beautiful like a single star. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 07:01 - Life (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ah but that\'s the key trying to make words that don\'t rhyme fit and...
March 1st, 2025 07:00 - 2 Thoughts from a bird (Maplespal)
Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved...
March 1st, 2025 05:34 - New month new hope (Funmiwrites)
A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:29 - FREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips...
March 1st, 2025 05:27 - “Liquid Love” (Peanut)
This poem is well worded and metered reflecting deep emotion that is not...
March 1st, 2025 05:25 - brother (Sheta)
What brother and sister should be. United in family. A lovely short with...
March 1st, 2025 05:23 - Planets On Parade (Reynaldo Casison)
The stars and night sky has always been romantic in its mystery and far...
March 1st, 2025 05:22 - Please Don\'t Enter (Anthony Hanible)
Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that...
March 1st, 2025 05:20 - Sinners And Babylon (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read that seems a warning to Hollywood. Nicely worded
March 1st, 2025 05:10 - Castle Keep (Arqios)
And such is childhood with its growing change simple, honest views of...
March 1st, 2025 05:00 - Daffodils Of Yellow (Ajon4wheels)
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem....
March 1st, 2025 04:48 - Gravity between us (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Here metaphor meets love and one thinks of how spacy one feels when in...
March 1st, 2025 04:45 - Scotch Tape Sweepstakes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Never thought I would see a poem about a book cover just goes to show that...
March 1st, 2025 04:42 - i/o (AnxiousMane)
A clever write with great word usage and so much said in so few words....
March 1st, 2025 04:37 - It Is Still Love (Teddy.15)
A recognition of the good and sad in even love but all is resolved in the...
March 1st, 2025 04:35 - Creation Praise (Orchidee)
Another great hymn of praise. I always wondered Orchi why so much time was...
March 1st, 2025 04:32 - That Place Called Home. (Goldfinch60)
A warm place that leaves a warm feeling and whether there or not it always...
March 1st, 2025 04:27 - My Dog\'s Revenge (Randyjohnson71)
This one made me chuckle and that is worth a fave. A fun read
February 28th, 2025 21:27 - Lines on a Railway Station (Kevin Hulme)
A lovely write in rhyme and good meter I think it is the nostalgia of the...
February 28th, 2025 21:25 - NBA 2k25 (Demar Desu)
A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to...
February 28th, 2025 21:21 - Passionless (RefugeInRain)
This poem leaves a feeling of being stuck somehow and the need for motion....
February 28th, 2025 21:20 - You (Ofentsevictoriousthomas)
I feel fond memories in this poem as if remembering a grandparent or maybe...
February 28th, 2025 21:18 - Am I Enough (Dev Parth)
A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself...
February 28th, 2025 19:08 - Dark writer??? (Pineapple_pizza018)
Such a sense of loss. Feelings of being robbed of oneself. Drugged and...
February 28th, 2025 19:05 - growing (Lunarchloedip)
A poem of growth that at times is painful or difficult but blooms. A...
February 28th, 2025 19:00 - “Impressionist” (Peanut)
Beautiful! A lovely write of under estimating oneself and surprise when...
February 28th, 2025 18:58 - Without dreams we have nothing (Poetaldo)
Change and acceptance of it seems to be the theme of this poem. I get the...
February 28th, 2025 18:55 - i care (Sheta)
To love someone requires energy but it defies the laws of entropy by...
February 28th, 2025 13:30 - These Eyes (Anthony Hanible)
A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
February 28th, 2025 13:29 - A Poet\'s Heart (Newt)
It is true that with our senses and brain we as poets paint the world in...
February 28th, 2025 13:27 - ...Where Tomorrow Never Truly Comes (Cheeky Missy)
Chic another two great poems this time with no food and I was prepared to...
February 28th, 2025 13:06 - the lessons we swallow (Gray0328)
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has...
February 28th, 2025 11:19 - Death\'s Indenture (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
This has wonderful lines that draw the reader along. Very nice
February 28th, 2025 10:28 - The American Dream (Truskiad)
The melding of fruit to love to religion. A wonderful write
February 28th, 2025 10:24 - Plan Éternel (Whats write for me)
Well written in form of faith. The Bible has its own poetry.
February 28th, 2025 10:22 - Beyond The Veils (E.J. Waling)
So true at least they say. A concept that holds true for physics, society...
February 28th, 2025 08:37 - Race night (Tony36)
Whether a metaphor for the race to the weekend or literal it is a great...
February 28th, 2025 08:34 - Epilogue (Lorenz)
Such a blend of metaphor and real in this poem loved it
February 28th, 2025 08:32 - Lament of the Last Leaf (Salvia.S)
This poem is tightly woven. Memories, echoes, time, beauty are all...
February 28th, 2025 08:21 - Call This What You Will, I Call It Misogyny (Tristan Robert Lange)
A noble poem for those that are least likely to read it, a message for...
February 28th, 2025 08:11 - The last 3 of the River story (Maplespal)
Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken....
February 28th, 2025 06:49 - This Is the Start (Paul Gerard Reed)
Great metaphors contained in this piece. A lovely write of rejuvenation
February 28th, 2025 06:42 - dog company (Jim56)
A tribute to man\'s best friend and what more could one ask. Very nice Jim
February 28th, 2025 05:56 - The Tree That Grieves (Ajon4wheels)
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new...
February 28th, 2025 04:32 - Only Rose (Reynaldo Casison)
A romance with words, pouring images sensuous, over natures beauty. Very...
February 28th, 2025 04:30 - ANOTHER MILE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and...
February 28th, 2025 04:25 - Deep Water Harbor (Mutley Ravishes)
Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so...
February 28th, 2025 04:23 - The Flower and Me. (Junes)
A beautiful write that touches the heart and for that I give it a fave....
February 28th, 2025 04:21 - untitled 575 ( what lingers on ) (Arqios)
Lovely poetic metaphors play in this poem of musical images a painting of...
February 28th, 2025 04:18 - The Beauty Of The New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful sonnet Andy. It lightens the heart and turns ones...
February 28th, 2025 04:16 - poetry the gateway drug (MR.apocalypse)
A fun read of rhyme the question is what the poet is moving on to.
February 28th, 2025 04:06 - Rule morning (Funmiwrites)
It is early morning here and the sun is just starting to brighten the...
February 28th, 2025 04:04 - I, II, III (Beccadeepinside)
This write was powerful and highly emotional pulling at the heart strings....
February 28th, 2025 04:00 - Tremble (Beccadeepinside)
You have a powerful piece here with a great theme and you have chosen a...
February 28th, 2025 03:42
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