Comments on community poems by myself and me
- Your Light (Caden)
\"though is that you\'re fighting\", and I never win. So I accept my...
August 17th, 2017 22:37 - half an hour until midnight (Stefan badham)
You definitely good at math, but you are a master of poem. You can write a...
August 17th, 2017 22:24 - Rage (John Prophet)
Wow, you wake me up. I just need to gather some strength and energy to do...
August 17th, 2017 22:08 - I have nothing (Aa Harvey)
I wrote \"She left\" to follow yours.
August 17th, 2017 21:24 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer)
Hei, you describe the symptom better than the doctors, the doctors can\'t...
August 17th, 2017 21:00 - Choices (WL Schuett)
What do you think, for the last sentence, move \"on\" to the end like...
August 17th, 2017 20:50 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
Ha, ha, I used to have a specs in red frame. Reading this, just save me...
August 17th, 2017 20:27 - DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs)
\"Deafening \", A word I have been searching for so long. Thank you.
It...
August 16th, 2017 23:10 - How do I? (Simple-Man87)
The hesitating, the sensitive, the guessing, the unsure, you expressed so...
August 16th, 2017 22:50 - After (Private poet)
Hug from me. follow your heart. One thing for sure, he want you to be...
August 16th, 2017 22:45 - True love (Angel-baby28)
True love indeed. A perfect gift from God.
Beautiful writing.
August 16th, 2017 22:32 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36)
It is just wonderful to share your love with your loved one.
Beautiful,...
August 16th, 2017 22:27 - Dead love (Alissa)
The message come in at the wrong time, did not do the magic but the...
August 16th, 2017 22:18 - what do you do in the 20%? (Avigail)
Oh, I have 20% to handle, that is too much for me. I wish I have zero...
August 16th, 2017 22:02 - Views from overseas (Eduanf)
The paradise has long gone. Human are the only species on this Earth...
August 16th, 2017 21:40 - No Longer (Kesha)
What have you been through? I am glad you are out of it now. You have such...
August 16th, 2017 21:34 - You are the only one (Tanvir H)
\"with God\'s permission\", the love should be secure.
August 16th, 2017 21:28 - Blue notes (WL Schuett)
You are such a talented person. Love that guitar. Blue notes is filling...
August 16th, 2017 21:23 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight)
“I work hard and have the right,
To just fart around.”
Good...
August 16th, 2017 21:16 - Hiding In The Rain (Accidental Poet)
\"Hiding in the rain\",
A scene just jump into my mind
A lady holding an...
August 16th, 2017 21:10 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60)
listening to the peaceful music, reading your poem, the beautiful moment...
August 16th, 2017 20:11 - Regrets (Urius)
\"i want to be gone but cant exceed\"
That is exactly what it felt like....
August 16th, 2017 20:02 - Four Shorts: Concupiscence / Longing / Old Couple / Love (FredPeyer)
Wrap up four complicated subject in a perfect short way. Love all of them.
August 16th, 2017 19:36 - First Love (FredPeyer)
It bring all the sweet memories back. The dreaming, the kiss and the...
August 16th, 2017 19:13 - THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards)
I am choked by their afflictions. Are they forgotten by God?
Love yours...
August 16th, 2017 18:52 - Cause/Effect (Simple-Man87)
You sure will see your family again, but you need to save yourself first....
August 15th, 2017 23:03 - Will not give up (Poetic Dan)
\" I\'m with a woman that let\'s me dream \"
Have such a lady in your...
August 15th, 2017 22:53 - Depressed - the definition (Sue.evans)
Been there and will be there without knowing when. I am OK at the moment....
August 15th, 2017 22:18 - Change (Sugiura Asuna)
I guess you are their brains. Stressful indeed. Take some deep breath, let...
August 15th, 2017 22:06 - A House With No Mirrors (Tristan Robert Lange)
not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us,...
August 15th, 2017 21:57 - Dried Up Tears (With a serving of a broken heart). (Darkangelpoetry)
I can feel the pain, the anger and deep down, the desire for the missing...
August 15th, 2017 21:55 - Money And Blood (Kurt Philip Behm)
That is why commitment is not reliable. Bloody good.
August 15th, 2017 21:39 - Live Divided, Die Together (Alex Arnot)
\"Live divided\", some enjoy that way, but they do forget \"die...
August 15th, 2017 21:37 - The Cycle (Caden)
what can exist the cycle. Nice poem.
August 15th, 2017 21:34 - Glass Bottle (CSS20013)
you are not glass, you are crystal, beautiful and strong.
August 15th, 2017 21:20 - Ten Feet From The Ledge (Accidental Poet)
I’ll still be here
Giving life my best
Respecting God given...
August 15th, 2017 21:05 - Dark time (Dulcinea91)
Who ever told you to communicate, they do not understand what you are...
August 15th, 2017 20:49 - ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards)
Love the poem, but the paint is the winner for today.
August 15th, 2017 20:45 - Guilt of Lost. (Jal)
The effect of the ramen must be very strong, it stir up such a romantic...
August 15th, 2017 20:37 - ( James ) my Ex husband (Angel-baby28)
You definitely got the guts. So glad you are out of it now. Wish you the...
August 14th, 2017 23:05 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt)
When the robot can do everything for us, the only thing left for human is...
August 14th, 2017 22:56 - Little Sister (CSS20013)
You are such a wonderful young girl, full of love, full of care, full of...
August 14th, 2017 22:53 - Love (Joel Carpenter)
A very detailed manual for a prescribed medicine \"love\". Fit your...
August 14th, 2017 22:44 - My once known soul mate. (Jul)
Welcome to the site, jul. Well expressed poem.
Love come, love gone. At...
August 14th, 2017 22:36 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
Alcohol, for some people, is the only way to have a temporarily break from...
August 14th, 2017 22:27 - River Music Haunts Me (WL Schuett)
The moon is intoxicated by the music from the old guitar and drowned in...
August 14th, 2017 21:51 - Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60)
Why \"Roman Catholic \"?
I did burst into laugh at the end.
A nice...
August 14th, 2017 21:38 - The Snowstorms of the Heart (Alissa)
My heart survived a similar snowstorm. Very powerful expression.
August 14th, 2017 20:15 - Stinkin’ Thinkin’ (Accidental Poet)
Don’t let the past
Define who you are
I won\'t anymore. Thank you...
August 14th, 2017 18:50 - An Open Letter To My Depression (Darkangelpoetry)
I am living life each day to the fullest.
That is the spirit. The best...
August 14th, 2017 12:18 - My poetic Side (Accidental Poet)
A site not only for posting poem,
but also for meeting friends.
A site...
August 13th, 2017 22:30 - New Generations. (Goldfinch60)
I guess soon ladder will be out of market. :)
August 13th, 2017 21:33 - My Darkest Hours (Darksidepoet)
It reminds me of my dark moment. Too bad, there is no prescription...
August 13th, 2017 21:25 - ()
Shall we call today \"septolet\" day. Two in a row. Love the expression.
August 13th, 2017 21:13 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
Feel like I am a dandelion seed myself. Cross the ocean, landed in a place...
August 13th, 2017 21:08 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01 - Leave the past behind (Tanvir H)
Love it. \"Leave the past behind\"
August 13th, 2017 20:47 - The Hidden Harbour (Alf W)
Your poem paint such a beautiful picture of a young lady at the harbor. A...
August 13th, 2017 19:43 - Thoughts (Staffnotesoul11)
We are all dying, but do the best we can to be away from the line. Like...
August 13th, 2017 19:20 - Choices we make (Mjdwindsor)
It is the choice from moment to moment makes what we are now, that is why...
August 13th, 2017 18:44 - Shooting Star (Bluedog783)
What a coincidence, tonight, in my area, Perseids meteor shower could be...
August 12th, 2017 23:20 - I\'m Sorry (David De La Cruz)
We can not change what had been done, right or wrong, just leave them...
August 12th, 2017 22:51 - Gone, Not Forgotten (ACS)
Short, simple and accurate definition.
August 12th, 2017 22:43 - Broken Shutters (WL Schuett)
Try to hear the fading echo. Like the last stanza.
August 12th, 2017 22:36 - Living (FredPeyer)
Wow, you come back with such a splendid piece. Act of living, living a...
August 12th, 2017 22:24 - What could have been (Aa Harvey)
In love like in a honey pool, lost love seems drowning in a freezing pond....
August 12th, 2017 22:16 - Cellblock D (Stephanie91)
Suffer from depression myself, I understand your feeling. I am so lucky I...
August 12th, 2017 21:24 - Sestina 1 (Thoff1)
It is such a hard poetic format to follow. Congratulation, you did such a...
August 12th, 2017 20:55 - Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Both the layout and the content are beautiful. Music for such a lovely...
August 12th, 2017 20:34 - He said \'There is no love.\' (Aa Harvey)
The big problem of depression is the loss of sense for love. I was...
August 11th, 2017 23:14 - Love is (Azura Nightsong)
The sour does start with sweet. Nice expression.
August 11th, 2017 22:55 - Is It Worth It? (Edward Charles McDevitt)
It might seem a burden hard to bear now, but one day, you will take it as...
August 11th, 2017 22:43 - My Future (ThisVivian)
Wish you the best in college, and good luck with your future.
August 11th, 2017 22:27 - You Are Loved (Simplybeautiful)
Tim is freed, from all the suffer, all the pain. Pray for those who are...
August 11th, 2017 21:50 - Waiting (WL Schuett)
Such a beautiful picture and fantastic poem. Love both.
August 11th, 2017 21:34 - The Lonely (Sugiura Asuna)
There is always someone, the right one for you. Be patient, all the lonely...
August 11th, 2017 20:42 - Some cuts are too deep (Tanvir H)
By through the pain, you get stronger. Oh, it hurt a lot.
August 11th, 2017 20:35 - WHISPERS ACROSS THE PILLOW (Lasergraph)
The \"whispers across the pillow\" is so peaceful and warm. Without it,...
August 11th, 2017 20:26 - Abandoned (Sue.evans)
It felt like being betrayed. Enjoy this break, something better is...
August 11th, 2017 20:09 - Words Have No Meaning (Hannabal)
Share your thoughts here, we will value them. Well expressed.
August 11th, 2017 19:10 - Take A Walk (Harsbars12281953)
Totally agree. Walking is good for health, good for mind too.
August 10th, 2017 23:00 - Help Me (NOX)
Turn yourself to the Savior. Listening to the guide, following the lead....
August 10th, 2017 22:56 - Things You Never Told Me (Kbreinich)
At least you do not need to deal with it any more and hear the lies. Look...
August 10th, 2017 22:49 - Nothing to me. (Mocuisle)
Forgiveness is to forgive the unforgivable. I can feel your feeling. well...
August 10th, 2017 21:07 - Life (Julianogollo)
It seems today is about \"life\" day. Learn a lot about life. Do our best...
August 10th, 2017 21:02 - Why Me? (Danny13)
Why me? Everyone ask the same question from time to time. Things just...
August 10th, 2017 20:51 - I Want You to Know (Liam Gordon)
You are sure deep in love. Congratulations. Nice piece.
August 10th, 2017 20:42 - Life Is About... (The Healer)
Life is what we all living.
August 10th, 2017 20:38 - Me (Xxxplicit)
If you can see it, then you can face it. Well written poem.
August 10th, 2017 20:36 - Cold As Ice (Asombersoul)
Winter will end, soon your heart will be warm. Welcome to here. Nice...
August 10th, 2017 20:28 - Love\'s Oath (Sefrin)
Oath might be broken, but love will last. So glad you are in love.
August 10th, 2017 20:25 - Live through darkness (Tanvir H)
Once through the darkness, it will be the bright world. Nice job.
August 10th, 2017 20:21 - Poetry Is... (ACS)
Poetry is art of words,
Poetry is music,
Poetry is weapon,
Poetry is...
August 10th, 2017 20:19 - My Time. (Goldfinch60)
I shall create my own time too. Good job.
August 10th, 2017 12:43 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight)
It is OK to give yourself a break, at least you have realized the problem....
August 10th, 2017 12:21 - Today Grieves (Kurt Philip Behm)
It will never be enough, I guess. Tomorrow does not exist, all grieving is...
August 10th, 2017 12:12 - Cheer Up, It Ain\'t So Bad (Thoff1)
Life without challenge is boring, isn\'t it? You have a good start, so...
August 10th, 2017 12:08 - The End (Jonnyc1)
It is the moment far beyond sadness. How could we erase that. This moment...
August 10th, 2017 12:02 - Soulmate (Aa Harvey)
Soulmate, no matter how late you meet in your life, you feel that you have...
August 9th, 2017 21:28 - Melancholy. (Goldfinch60)
The past sadness brewed with time is now melancholy.
August 9th, 2017 21:12
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