Comments on community poems by myself and me
- Night Sky (FredPeyer)
Reading your poem under the night sky, fell asleep with star sparkle
November 22nd, 2017 11:05 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards)
Shakespeare would laugh his skeleton off.
November 22nd, 2017 10:57 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I only did it once. It was a lot of fun. Awesome.
November 22nd, 2017 10:54 - The Proof (Fay Slimm.)
I am totally intoxicated by it.
November 22nd, 2017 10:52 - Cupboard Love. (Goldfinch60)
You describe the curiosity of the kids so well.
November 21st, 2017 20:36 - Depression, Aniexty, Loneliness (HMH)
It is such a hard feeling to be trapped in the 3 things. Do not give up,...
November 21st, 2017 20:30 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards)
A humorous Interpretation of the famous line. Love this new type of paint.
November 21st, 2017 20:21 - WRAPPING PARCEL ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Already in the mood of Christmas. Lovely poem.
November 21st, 2017 20:13 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
My mind flying with your beautiful cloud.
November 21st, 2017 20:11 - Sacred Creek (WL Schuett)
Re: Stunning \"Sacred creek\"
A withered leaf
from no where
Fall in the...
November 21st, 2017 19:56 - A New Ending. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poem, beautiful flowers.
November 20th, 2017 11:29 - A Christmas Poem (Christina8)
A special season for sharing and love. Do not forget to post your...
November 20th, 2017 11:03 - MY POETIC SIDE ~ OK ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes, indeed, MPS a big family keep growing.
November 20th, 2017 11:01 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
This bubble burst in a poetry way.
November 20th, 2017 10:54 - ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards)
\"where only ghosts and angels tread.\"
What\'s the deal?
Marvelous.
November 20th, 2017 10:51 - Fervour. (Fay Slimm.)
Great, just great. no matter what subject your pen touched.
November 20th, 2017 10:28 - THE SPHERE OF GOD\'S LOVE ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful message, thank you for sharing.
November 20th, 2017 10:25 - Sleeping Shadows (FredPeyer)
I saw Picasso\'s style.
November 20th, 2017 10:23 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
short but brilliant.
November 20th, 2017 10:18 - ZIMBABWE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Pray a bright future for the people there.
November 20th, 2017 10:06 - I Saw Him. (Fay Slimm.)
You describe the experience in such a tremendous way.
November 20th, 2017 10:03 - Cut three times and still too short (FredPeyer)
It took a lot of courage and consistency to make the same mistake again...
November 20th, 2017 09:57 - SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
The notes from the flute carried old memories waved in the air. How...
November 20th, 2017 09:52 - The Inventor (FredPeyer)
Re-invention, a brilliant way to live our life. Thank you for the wisdom.
November 17th, 2017 08:53 - Letting go but holding on (Poetic Dan)
\"Letting go\" is easy to say but hard to do. Very well penned.
November 17th, 2017 08:45 - Cardinals (Christina8)
I can imagine how lovely your Christmas tree looks with those birds.
November 17th, 2017 08:42 - Making Believe. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a beautiful poem make the view so romantic.
November 17th, 2017 08:39 - SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Making snowman is a lot of fun, shovel snow is a load of work. Love your...
November 17th, 2017 08:28 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
It is kind of magic to me that the lines turned into sketch, and the...
November 17th, 2017 08:26 - Tired (FredPeyer)
Feel like a bird out of cage, fly free.
November 17th, 2017 08:05 - I don’t even know (Lost-but-not-broken17)
\"Keep on fighting\", way to go my hero. One day you will beat it. Well...
November 16th, 2017 13:37 - A Poem About Sad Poems (Poemsbyliz)
sadness is a strong and powerful emotion. It triggers impulse for writing.
November 16th, 2017 13:31 - Memory of a Driveway (Will Shootman)
This boy did not finish washing his bicycle, but he did grow wings and...
November 16th, 2017 10:50 - Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful song will carry all the memories all the way long. Beautiful.
November 16th, 2017 09:18 - In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
You always find the bright side to watch, such a positive attitude to...
November 16th, 2017 09:17 - Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.)
such a relaxing and joyful Sunday to enjoy. I am in Sunday mood already.
November 16th, 2017 09:14 - CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thank you Briansodes for such a lovely poem for MOTHER CHRISTMAS.
November 16th, 2017 09:12 - IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards)
Fun to read and fun to watch.
November 16th, 2017 09:09 - Carousel of Life (FredPeyer)
This is so not you. How is the weather there? Cloudy?
November 16th, 2017 09:06 - A Gift (Christina8)
Very inspiring, full of positive energy.
November 15th, 2017 11:34 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
A homesick season for those who can not reunion with their families....
November 15th, 2017 11:32 - FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Soon the holiday season will be here, with the happy song everywhere,...
November 15th, 2017 11:27 - ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
you are the true ARTIST.
November 15th, 2017 11:14 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful picture with wonderful ballet to dance till the end.
November 14th, 2017 15:04 - My Purpose (Christina8)
You are such a wonderful person, even at the depress moment, still put...
November 14th, 2017 15:02 - CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph)
It always happened like this, the phone ring at your inconvenience. Will...
November 14th, 2017 14:58 - Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett)
Lovely paint. Marvelous poem.
November 14th, 2017 14:55 - WITHOUT EXCUSE (Michael Edwards)
The color meets perfectly in the paint, so does the poem. Interesting...
November 14th, 2017 14:47 - Cindy (FredPeyer)
From this short interaction, lead our imagination to what she had been...
November 13th, 2017 09:06 - FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A beautiful acrostic full of language of flowers. I learn a lot. Thank
November 10th, 2017 10:05 - My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wonderful life to live, to experience, to enjoy, to go on...
November 10th, 2017 09:59 - Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.)
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint...
November 10th, 2017 09:46 - Life is a Mess (FredPeyer)
What a wild life to clean up, hope the underwear could be cleaned...
November 10th, 2017 09:34 - The cage (Sammy walker-hebborn)
Deal with depression is hard. I suffered from it too. Very well expressed....
November 9th, 2017 13:35 - Slipping (Simple-Man87)
At least, The Gods of Forgiveness exist and I believe you have been...
November 9th, 2017 13:22 - THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph)
The best gift will last life long and the best way to save all those...
November 9th, 2017 11:55 - Cracked Window (WL Schuett)
It seems to me that something has been hatched inside a withered leaf,...
November 9th, 2017 11:46 - Dancing once again. (OrderFallingToChaos)
How beautiful to watch he dance again with her on the stage. Well penned.
November 9th, 2017 11:24 - blind in my heart (Dtyrrell145)
Happy Birthday to you. Today is your day.
You are at a special stage of...
November 9th, 2017 11:19 - Bright in Darkness (Jatell)
Your poem is in a very special structure. Beautifully penned about light...
November 9th, 2017 09:02 - Is this life? (Gbauer22)
This is part of life, not all of life. Very nice poem and welcome to this...
November 9th, 2017 08:59 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
That is a step require huge courage. Nice poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:55 - Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer)
A beautiful day to enjoy. Simply love this short form.
November 9th, 2017 08:52 - Wordless. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is an ill and crazy society. No matter what you do or you do not do,...
November 9th, 2017 08:44 - I can’t write anymore (A.Windowcleaner)
Depress, stress and sadness stimulate the part of our brain corresponding...
November 9th, 2017 08:32 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Giving, caring, helping and love are always the spirit of the holidays....
November 9th, 2017 08:27 - ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A...
November 8th, 2017 09:59 - Cold Rain (FredPeyer)
I love it. Brief, simple yet deep.
November 8th, 2017 09:40 - Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.)
Any subject under your pen is perfect.
November 8th, 2017 09:32 - FALSE DIETIES (Louis Gibbs)
With or without religion, it is something very personal. If everyone could...
November 8th, 2017 09:30 - AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your poem is better than the aromatherapy itself, full of fragrance.
November 7th, 2017 12:27 - Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations. The happiest thing in this world is finding your true...
November 7th, 2017 12:22 - HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards)
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul....
November 7th, 2017 12:00 - The Actor (FredPeyer)
Simple yet wonderful writing. How about a one-man show?
November 7th, 2017 11:47 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
I always admire the courage of those fishermen. Beautiful writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:39 - The Land Of The Free (Christina8)
Let\'s hope and pray for a free land again. Nice writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:32 - MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS (Lasergraph)
Lucky you found your true love. It is such a blessing.
November 6th, 2017 15:44 - Satisfied? (Goldfinch60)
What is going to satisfy your hunger?
November 6th, 2017 12:27 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a peaceful place for all living creatures to live in harmony.
November 6th, 2017 12:24 - Roses (FredPeyer)
Sex and love, he and she, simple, straight and fun. Roses, the compromise.
November 6th, 2017 09:42 - Lonely (Christina8)
You have a very positive attitude to the temporary loneliness. Great.
November 6th, 2017 09:36 - Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett)
Standing still, \"to listen to the edge of the wind\".
Keep the eye open,...
November 6th, 2017 09:31 - My Forever After. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulation to the new couple and thank you for sharing such a lovely...
November 6th, 2017 09:09 - Realization (FredPeyer)
\"Though sad and hurt she realized
She was now free to live HER life...
November 6th, 2017 09:06 - GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It is such a difficult structure to follow and you did it. \"growing...
November 6th, 2017 09:03 - SOMEDAY (Louis Gibbs)
Hope this \"someday\" come soon.
November 6th, 2017 08:58 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
True beauty about the depth of love.
November 6th, 2017 08:54 - ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are so lucky to have such a lovely lady, and she is so lucky to have...
November 3rd, 2017 20:32 - Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60)
She has carried so much burden on her for too long, she just need to...
November 3rd, 2017 20:27 - Heydays. (Fay Slimm.)
The open field, the fresh air, the clear sky, running, chasing, playing....
November 3rd, 2017 20:12 - THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards)
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55 - The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss (FredPeyer)
What a blessing.
November 3rd, 2017 14:38 - First n last (Michael calderon)
A nice writing. Welcome to this site.
November 2nd, 2017 14:23 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
The true love in voiceless is so profound.
November 2nd, 2017 13:27 - Body Clock. (Goldfinch60)
To me, the big winner of changing time is the paper manufacture. Can you...
November 2nd, 2017 13:20 - Paradise Is Here (Christina8)
Indeed, you live in Paradise.
November 2nd, 2017 13:08 - Aftermath (FredPeyer)
Such a sad fact, we human beings will wipe ourselves off from the earth...
November 2nd, 2017 13:02
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