Comments on community poems by myself and me
- FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A beautiful acrostic full of language of flowers. I learn a lot. Thank
November 10th, 2017 10:05 - My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wonderful life to live, to experience, to enjoy, to go on...
November 10th, 2017 09:59 - DAMN HUMANS! (Accidental Poet)
I guess in the eyes of all nature creatures, we are \"Damn humans\".
November 10th, 2017 09:52 - Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.)
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint...
November 10th, 2017 09:46 - Life is a Mess (FredPeyer)
What a wild life to clean up, hope the underwear could be cleaned...
November 10th, 2017 09:34 - The cage (Sammy walker-hebborn)
Deal with depression is hard. I suffered from it too. Very well expressed....
November 9th, 2017 13:35 - Slipping (Simple-Man87)
At least, The Gods of Forgiveness exist and I believe you have been...
November 9th, 2017 13:22 - THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph)
The best gift will last life long and the best way to save all those...
November 9th, 2017 11:55 - Cracked Window (WL Schuett)
It seems to me that something has been hatched inside a withered leaf,...
November 9th, 2017 11:46 - Dancing once again. (OrderFallingToChaos)
How beautiful to watch he dance again with her on the stage. Well penned.
November 9th, 2017 11:24 - blind in my heart (Dtyrrell145)
Happy Birthday to you. Today is your day.
You are at a special stage of...
November 9th, 2017 11:19 - Bright in Darkness (Jatell)
Your poem is in a very special structure. Beautifully penned about light...
November 9th, 2017 09:02 - Is this life? (Gbauer22)
This is part of life, not all of life. Very nice poem and welcome to this...
November 9th, 2017 08:59 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
That is a step require huge courage. Nice poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:55 - Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer)
A beautiful day to enjoy. Simply love this short form.
November 9th, 2017 08:52 - It’s a Good Day to Smile (Accidental Poet)
Smile, the best way to celebrate the start of a day. Wonderful poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:50 - Wordless. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, the harmony and the peace in nature are the best music on earth.
November 9th, 2017 08:47 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is an ill and crazy society. No matter what you do or you do not do,...
November 9th, 2017 08:44 - I can’t write anymore (A.Windowcleaner)
Depress, stress and sadness stimulate the part of our brain corresponding...
November 9th, 2017 08:32 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Giving, caring, helping and love are always the spirit of the holidays....
November 9th, 2017 08:27 - ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A...
November 8th, 2017 09:59 - Cold Rain (FredPeyer)
I love it. Brief, simple yet deep.
November 8th, 2017 09:40 - In Memory of Ronnie Blanchard (Accidental Poet)
A poem of grief. All those memories kept your friends alive in your heart.
November 8th, 2017 09:37 - Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.)
Any subject under your pen is perfect.
November 8th, 2017 09:32 - FALSE DIETIES (Louis Gibbs)
With or without religion, it is something very personal. If everyone could...
November 8th, 2017 09:30 - AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your poem is better than the aromatherapy itself, full of fragrance.
November 7th, 2017 12:27 - Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations. The happiest thing in this world is finding your true...
November 7th, 2017 12:22 - HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards)
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul....
November 7th, 2017 12:00 - The Actor (FredPeyer)
Simple yet wonderful writing. How about a one-man show?
November 7th, 2017 11:47 - Reflection of Beauty (Accidental Poet)
beautiful indeed.
November 7th, 2017 11:43 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
I always admire the courage of those fishermen. Beautiful writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:39 - The Land Of The Free (Christina8)
Let\'s hope and pray for a free land again. Nice writing.
November 7th, 2017 11:32 - MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS (Lasergraph)
Lucky you found your true love. It is such a blessing.
November 6th, 2017 15:44 - Satisfied? (Goldfinch60)
What is going to satisfy your hunger?
November 6th, 2017 12:27 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a peaceful place for all living creatures to live in harmony.
November 6th, 2017 12:24 - Roses (FredPeyer)
Sex and love, he and she, simple, straight and fun. Roses, the compromise.
November 6th, 2017 09:42 - Lonely (Christina8)
You have a very positive attitude to the temporary loneliness. Great.
November 6th, 2017 09:36 - The Optimist in Me (Accidental Poet)
Being optimistic is the key to have a happy life. Good writing.
November 6th, 2017 09:33 - Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett)
Standing still, \"to listen to the edge of the wind\".
Keep the eye open,...
November 6th, 2017 09:31 - My Forever After. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulation to the new couple and thank you for sharing such a lovely...
November 6th, 2017 09:09 - Realization (FredPeyer)
\"Though sad and hurt she realized
She was now free to live HER life...
November 6th, 2017 09:06 - GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It is such a difficult structure to follow and you did it. \"growing...
November 6th, 2017 09:03 - SOMEDAY (Louis Gibbs)
Hope this \"someday\" come soon.
November 6th, 2017 08:58 - A Productive Day (Accidental Poet)
congratulations on a productive day, early bird.
November 6th, 2017 08:56 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
True beauty about the depth of love.
November 6th, 2017 08:54 - ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are so lucky to have such a lovely lady, and she is so lucky to have...
November 3rd, 2017 20:32 - Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60)
She has carried so much burden on her for too long, she just need to...
November 3rd, 2017 20:27 - Litterbug Litterbug, Shame On You (Accidental Poet)
Driving along the road, saw the white plastic bags hanging on the fences,...
November 3rd, 2017 20:18 - Heydays. (Fay Slimm.)
The open field, the fresh air, the clear sky, running, chasing, playing....
November 3rd, 2017 20:12 - THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards)
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55 - The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss (FredPeyer)
What a blessing.
November 3rd, 2017 14:38 - First n last (Michael calderon)
A nice writing. Welcome to this site.
November 2nd, 2017 14:23 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
The true love in voiceless is so profound.
November 2nd, 2017 13:27 - Body Clock. (Goldfinch60)
To me, the big winner of changing time is the paper manufacture. Can you...
November 2nd, 2017 13:20 - Paradise Is Here (Christina8)
Indeed, you live in Paradise.
November 2nd, 2017 13:08 - Aftermath (FredPeyer)
Such a sad fact, we human beings will wipe ourselves off from the earth...
November 2nd, 2017 13:02 - SANTA CLAUS BLUES (Lasergraph)
It is such a joy to read your poem.
November 2nd, 2017 12:56 - Adrenaline Rush (Accidental Poet)
What a ride, adrenaline stimulating experience.
November 2nd, 2017 12:03 - Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee)
Beautiful.
November 2nd, 2017 11:58 - THE GYM (Lasergraph)
Gym is the place for us to get that extra space in our stomach to enjoy...
November 2nd, 2017 11:57 - THE BOOK (Michael Edwards)
Book, the best company you could have.
November 2nd, 2017 11:45 - Shhh, Listen (Accidental Poet)
When I read this poem, the song \"listen to your heart\" came up to my...
November 1st, 2017 10:47 - Straight to Arrears. (Goldfinch60)
Love the poem and the illustration, full of humor.
November 1st, 2017 10:43 - Dark Mood (FredPeyer)
Rainbow only showed up in the sky after rain. Love the contrast in this...
November 1st, 2017 10:38 - THE DECISION (Michael Edwards)
A perfect place for a perfect wedding with a surprise end.
November 1st, 2017 10:32 - Loving You (Christina8)
how lovely it is to live with your true love. Thank you for sharing.
October 31st, 2017 13:13 - LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A beautiful poem in a beautiful shape.
October 31st, 2017 07:35 - Fierce Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow, wonderful indeed.
October 31st, 2017 07:33 - Dancing With the Light (Accidental Poet)
Dancing with the light, recording the moments, frame the history. Well...
October 31st, 2017 07:31 - Twilight Song (WL Schuett)
The melancholy eyes are searching for hope, the closed mouth is trying to...
October 30th, 2017 14:21 - Lake Michigan (Christina8)
Such a beautiful place, I would like to visit or maybe even live there.
October 30th, 2017 08:16 - Rock Star Poet (Christina8)
Having a friend that can inspire you, help you, and understand you is such...
October 30th, 2017 08:14 - Flashbacks (Accidental Poet)
At least, you have had your days, your wonderful moments.
October 30th, 2017 08:10 - AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards)
The feeling of the two paintings are so dramatic. This one feel a bit...
October 30th, 2017 08:03 - Life is for the Living (FredPeyer)
Nice reminder. Try to get a goal for today.
October 30th, 2017 07:41 - IN PRAISE OF HEDGEHOGS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
They are so cute under your pen.
October 30th, 2017 07:34 - Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60)
I am trying to, to hear it, to feel it. So beautifully writing.
October 30th, 2017 07:32 - New Kind. (Fay Slimm.)
Feels like from worm to butterfly, a beautiful transform.
October 30th, 2017 07:27 - TWISTED CAP (Lasergraph)
Wow, those old memories take us to the lovely moments of the life.
October 27th, 2017 19:40 - The Old Oaken Bucket By Samuel Woodworth (Accidental Poet)
I would like to see this \"old oaken bucket\" myself.
October 27th, 2017 10:43 - Persevering Progressions (Orchidee)
Your poem always shine light on my day.
October 27th, 2017 10:40 - Unexplained. (Fay Slimm.)
The last stanza caught me. Beautiful writing.
October 27th, 2017 08:03 - Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60)
I can hear the music and see you lost in it.
October 27th, 2017 07:58 - SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a colorful love from teen to mature.
October 27th, 2017 07:56 - THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards)
I really enjoy the water color paint. The ancient land you paint in the...
October 27th, 2017 07:54 - At the Party (FredPeyer)
I hope it is NOT you, but the poem did come out of your mind. :). What an...
October 27th, 2017 07:47 - The Morning (WL Schuett)
A beautiful morning with whispers, coffee and roses. The sound, the smell...
October 26th, 2017 15:03 - Secret Friend (Simple-Man87)
A lot of people turn themselves to this friend, sometimes, this is the...
October 26th, 2017 12:42 - Spirit Showerings (Orchidee)
I need this shower.
October 26th, 2017 08:28 - Stranger (Misplacedsoul)
The pain of yours and his will be different. This kind of relationship is...
October 26th, 2017 08:27 - A Happy Poem (Christina8)
A happy poem from a happy heart. Make me happy too.
October 26th, 2017 08:22 - Depression (Lee Renard Caspian)
Feel your struggle, feel your pain. Open yourself to someone you could...
October 26th, 2017 08:20 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Love those shorts. Brief and full of meaning.
October 26th, 2017 08:11 - ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS (Av)
Reading this, require a strong heart and narrow throat, otherwise, the...
October 26th, 2017 08:02 - Water is Life. (Goldfinch60)
We have taken a lot of things for granted, especially water. A good...
October 26th, 2017 07:55 - Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.)
The words in your poem are so accurate and elegant. So much pleasure to...
October 26th, 2017 07:51 - SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Take me back to high school life. UFO and aliens. Interesting to read and...
October 26th, 2017 07:48 - 00:00 (Poetic Dan)
The moment hold so many.
October 26th, 2017 07:45
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