Comments on community poems by myself and me
- HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards)
His picture is gone, but the picture of sadness is so vivid in this...
September 16th, 2017 17:10 - My Praises to The Lord (ForeverJesus7)
In this poem, I see a blessed soul with the Lord in heart.
Beautiful...
September 15th, 2017 19:04 - Residency Restoration (Orchidee)
A good reading. Thank you.
September 15th, 2017 19:01 - Wedding vow (Disrespectfully nice)
Such a heart touching wedding vow. It did not get lost, it hides deep in...
September 15th, 2017 18:45 - Homeless (W c)
So glad to know you are feeling well now.
A very touching read.
September 15th, 2017 18:41 - My Poetic Side (Lasergraph)
Thank you and agree with you. My soul feel at home here. Express my...
September 15th, 2017 18:38 - Passion (Malubotelho)
\"Inhaling the sinful perfume \"
\"the dreams of a forbidden love\"
Who...
September 15th, 2017 18:20 - Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Oh, what you have been through?
Love is such a complicated puzzle, hope...
September 15th, 2017 17:56 - Turtles on a log (WL Schuett)
I like the way you frame the paint.
I read leisure in your...
September 15th, 2017 13:16 - Brothers sing, complements of the chef (Poetic Dan)
Love the quote and how the poem fit the subject so nicely.
Wonderful...
September 15th, 2017 08:08 - FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It is \"Mirror\" Friday. You are fishing here, and Michael Edwards \"Well...
September 15th, 2017 07:59 - Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60)
I like how this piece end, \"empty biscuit barrel\".
A fun reading.
September 15th, 2017 07:55 - My Baby Girl (FredPeyer)
No matter where they are, how far they go, the love of a father to...
September 15th, 2017 07:51 - WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards)
Absolutely love the color on the paint.
You finished such a hard...
September 15th, 2017 07:37 - VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs)
\"Dismissed\", what a relief.
So glad to see you move on with a strong...
September 15th, 2017 07:23 - A Love So True (Christina8)
So romantic. Dance in love, dance for love, dance to love.
Such a...
September 15th, 2017 07:05 - My Anxiety Battle (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
I know your feeling well. People who have never experience this won\'t...
September 14th, 2017 18:33 - The girl I am (Kat)
You paint a very good self-portrait here.
Beautiful writing and welcome...
September 14th, 2017 18:22 - Writting (Tony36)
Writing sure help me release my emotions.
Very nice writing.
September 14th, 2017 18:14 - The water and the rock (Malubotelho)
A romantic moment about a lucky rock and a traveling water. The rock has...
September 14th, 2017 18:05 - Blessed (Christina8)
\"Now I am free to live and love as I please\"
What a blessing, how...
September 14th, 2017 17:49 - HARVEY AND IRMA (Lasergraph)
\"It\'s time to roll up our sleeve\".
Roll up our sleeve, to save...
September 14th, 2017 14:46 - Santita (Reverse E-Done ) (Mugsdaddy)
A beautiful portrait of Santita.
Well done.
September 14th, 2017 14:43 - Sweet Nectar (WL Schuett)
I wish I were the bird who got the elixir of life.
Beautiful poem fits...
September 14th, 2017 14:41 - C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This collaboration will sure last long (4300 miles).
Congratulation, you...
September 14th, 2017 12:32 - My roots (Poetic Dan)
I feel you. I feel you. Hope you feel better now.
We are humans, we all...
September 14th, 2017 12:28 - Endless Love. (Goldfinch60)
There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine,...
September 14th, 2017 12:09 - THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
How come when you pour, it is an art, while I pour, it is a big mess. Do...
September 14th, 2017 11:50 - Heart Beat. (Wallace)
That is close. What a day. I am so glad you feel hungry now.
A thrilling...
September 14th, 2017 11:41 - Just Human (FredPeyer)
\"I want to embrace
My own stupidity
But my arms are
Too short\"
I...
September 14th, 2017 11:33 - An unexpected Poem (WL Schuett)
Such a peaceful sunset view contrast to the violence in the poem.
Love...
September 13th, 2017 15:10 - VISIONS OF SLUMBER (Lasergraph)
I shall read this again before I go to bed. It drove me sleepy.
Really...
September 13th, 2017 13:14 - Daylight Dawning (Orchidee)
The first to experience \"darkness\" will be the first to see light.
I...
September 13th, 2017 13:10 - More me today than yesterday (Poetic Dan)
Can not recall who wrote the line \"I am so poor, the only thing left is...
September 13th, 2017 12:28 - The Edge of Suicide (Mugsdaddy)
The edge of suicide, sharp and cold, be away from there.
September 13th, 2017 12:09 - SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
\"Seasons of love\", another beautiful fruit of collaboration.
The...
September 13th, 2017 12:07 - What is Time? (Goldfinch60)
I got lost in your time, and forgot my time.
Great.
September 13th, 2017 11:38 - Ocean Swim (FredPeyer)
A worry free moment, with your true self blended into the ocean.
Reading...
September 13th, 2017 11:25 - THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs)
Life is a dream weave with time. When you are gone, the dreams...
September 13th, 2017 11:15 - Return to the meadow (WL Schuett)
The lonesome tree, standing there, with hope, with expectation, with its...
September 13th, 2017 11:03 - A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards)
I know Edone better now. I thought it should start with one letter word,...
September 13th, 2017 08:01 - Poison Ivy (Ruby.e)
Agree with FredPeyer. Go to see a doctor.
September 12th, 2017 20:19 - BUCKET (Lasergraph)
To me, I shall create the list ASAP.
Thank you for sharing.
September 12th, 2017 13:52 - Communion Closeness (Orchidee)
A great Communion .
September 12th, 2017 13:32 - Beat or bit a journey under our feet (Poetic Dan)
The views of life are there for you to enjoy, if you kept your eyes busy...
September 12th, 2017 13:17 - F L O R I D A ~ WE ALL LOVE YOU An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An Acrostic full of love. Thanks.
September 12th, 2017 12:37 - Innercore (EDone ) (Mugsdaddy)
Edone is growing on MPS.
You did great.
September 12th, 2017 12:33 - What is the Time? (Goldfinch60)
“What is the time?”
It is the time to read your poem on MPS.
September 12th, 2017 12:15 - Thought (FredPeyer)
Short lived thought vanished in the universe, no where to find.
Today\'s...
September 12th, 2017 11:50 - THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
All the three are fresh to me. Love them, fun to read.
September 12th, 2017 10:52 - I need answers (Angee Thomas)
Sorry, I do not have the answers for your questions. I share the same...
September 12th, 2017 08:08 - Scholarly Wanderers (WL Schuett)
Got bee sting on weekend. But still love the paint.
\"Scholarly...
September 11th, 2017 20:43 - OUR AUTUMN HOME (Lasergraph)
I love autumn too.
You paint such a beautiful autumn in your...
September 11th, 2017 19:52 - My Dear Mother (Christina8)
Her love for you will never gone.
Beautifully composed.
September 11th, 2017 19:07 - Incomparable Inconceivabilities (Orchidee)
\"He the Lord incomparable
None is like Him, none at all
Yet we humbly...
September 11th, 2017 19:05 - Another Day Gone (FredPeyer)
\"Think hard
There could be
Something more
Than nothing\"
Reading your...
September 11th, 2017 19:01 - From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60)
It is such a great journey leading you to find your God.
Very profound...
September 11th, 2017 18:53 - Storm (Ruby.e)
It is going to take a long time to recover from such a severe storm. Wish...
September 11th, 2017 18:43 - GOD\'S PROMISES & PROVISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May God give them hope and strength to rebuild their home and...
September 11th, 2017 18:39 - SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards)
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field,...
September 11th, 2017 18:30 - ()
How sweet meeting your first love again in a surprise way, then you...
September 11th, 2017 15:45 - The Rules of Cricket. (Goldfinch60)
Thank God, both are out at the end. My mind still spin. I would rather...
September 10th, 2017 17:11 - Homework can be fun (Poetic Dan)
A plus for this beautifully done homework.
September 10th, 2017 16:59 - Anointed Assurance (Orchidee)
\"It is better to in the LORD trust
Than to confide in man, mere dust
It...
September 10th, 2017 12:01 - Saddest Love Triangle (Ruby.e)
No matter how you choose, you will always feel you choose the wrong one,...
September 10th, 2017 11:54 - LIMERICK No 44 (Michael Edwards)
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46 - Carry On (LukeCoomer)
\"I am by your side
Any and all of the epic hassle
I will help you...
September 9th, 2017 19:18 - Doors left open (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful poem, beautiful picture and a thought-provoking quote.
September 9th, 2017 19:13 - She Dances (WL Schuett)
Dance under the Moon, dance with fire glow, dance for hope, dance for...
September 9th, 2017 19:09 - Our Bond (Ruby.e)
Enjoy your trip. happy to see you so close to your brother.
Nice poem
September 9th, 2017 18:30 - SOME ENCHANTED EVENING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A love letter in pink.
Beautifully done.
September 9th, 2017 14:29 - The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60)
The muse for me is on vacation now. Hope she will return soon.
Nice...
September 9th, 2017 14:11 - A THOUSAND WRECKS (Michael Edwards)
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04 - What Kat found in the wreckage. (Dusk arising)
Hahaha. This is much better than the original movie, especially the...
September 8th, 2017 21:39 - Santa Claus (Ruby.e)
Real or not, every year he comes out.
A nice rhyme poem.
September 8th, 2017 21:33 - GOOD GUYS WON (Lasergraph)
\"Life was simple long ago,\"
Life was simple then because we were...
September 8th, 2017 21:26 - Breaking patterns, don\'t scream (Poetic Dan)
I think it is OK to scream occasionally to unload the burden, as long as...
September 8th, 2017 21:09 - Undeniably You (Christina8)
Finding your soulmate is the besting could ever happen in your life....
September 8th, 2017 21:01 - Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 6 (Orchidee)
\"Have compassion on our weakness\"
I get strength from it. Thank you.
September 8th, 2017 20:57 - Limericks - a bit more practice!!! (Sue.evans)
Thank you for giving me a happy weekend.
Well done.
September 8th, 2017 20:49 - Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60)
The development of new tech is so fast, beyond our imagination. A lot of...
September 8th, 2017 20:21 - HOW WAS YOUR DAY ~ HAVE OR HAVE~NOT ? ~ A Lament Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Happy birthday. On your special day, you are counting your blessing, and...
September 8th, 2017 20:08 - Wordsmith (FredPeyer)
It is not so easy to be a wordsmith, not only it require heavy labor...
September 8th, 2017 20:01 - THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you. I find the answer for my puzzle \"why I am not a poet?\"...
September 8th, 2017 19:46 - DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and...
September 8th, 2017 19:41 - Kat and Santita all at sea (Dusk arising)
Mission impossible 5- Guilty ice cubes.
Main character: Kat, San...
September 7th, 2017 21:22 - Hymns of Previous Souls (WL Schuett)
The Sun shine on the shabby barn, reflect old-day\'s glory. The luxuriant...
September 7th, 2017 21:07 - Well hello (Renzi)
Welcome back. Renzi. We missed you too. So glad things are going well with...
September 7th, 2017 16:50 - I LOVE YOU...... (Poeticallyb)
This is the deepest analysis of love I ever see. The hesitate, the unsure,...
September 7th, 2017 16:39 - Writer\'s Block (Ruby.e)
For a time like this, sit back and enjoy the free time, reading poem on...
September 7th, 2017 16:32 - Thick Skinned (WriteBeLight)
Yea! Good for you. You are a tough bean.
September 7th, 2017 13:21 - Storm Stillness (Orchidee)
Storm, a good test for faith.
September 7th, 2017 13:16 - WRITING (Lasergraph)
A nice writing about \"writing\". Please let us know when you finish your...
September 7th, 2017 13:14 - Unfinished Journey (Poetboy123)
\"Lions let out their roar, hear their call
Take your own destiny, refuse...
September 7th, 2017 13:10 - A collection of acrostics! (Sue.evans)
You did them so well.
\"Addiction is a condition!\" I agree.
September 7th, 2017 13:05 - My therapy (Poetic Dan)
I see your heart and feel your pain. Hope you be fine soon.
September 7th, 2017 12:42 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ! YIN & YANG DOUBLE ETHEREE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a priceless diamond with two pieces of love in it.
Love this diamond...
September 7th, 2017 12:26 - Home is where the start is. (Aa Harvey)
You are well prepared for your true love, a castle, even with a tree...
September 7th, 2017 12:10 - View of God. (Goldfinch60)
She will get a A plus for her art. So smart, both you and the girl.
September 7th, 2017 12:03 - The Dream (FredPeyer)
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What...
September 7th, 2017 11:33
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