Comments on community poems by Eugene S.
- Born of Chaos II (Eugene S.)
Thank you for the kind critique.
June 16th, 2024 19:13 - spin the black circle (Eugene S.)
😁 thanks for reading!! Love the interpretation. I didn\'t go down the...
May 29th, 2024 15:10 - So Very Lightly Hued (Neville)
A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went...
May 29th, 2024 03:55 - King of a Lost Frontier (ADarkerMind)
You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza....
May 29th, 2024 03:47 - DARK ENTRAILS (Nwafor Oji Awala)
To me, this speaks of an ancient wrong. One that has been instilled deeply...
May 29th, 2024 03:27 - Coming Home (DesertWords)
Wonderful. I kept envisioning Dorothy waking up from the dream to see that...
April 28th, 2024 08:34 - totally getting the neon pig (Eugene S.)
Thanks again for reading. Glad to see that you\'re posting again!!
February 25th, 2024 09:59 - Paper Planes (Rhmn_7)
A very visual portrayal. I can see the paper planes - excellent analogy....
February 25th, 2024 09:58 - I feel so much (Daphne_398)
Great portrayal of an empathic individual.
February 13th, 2024 01:46 - On a clear night like this (Tom Dylan)
A vivid portrayal with an endearing sentiment. Love it!
January 15th, 2024 17:19 - Rousseau, Kant, Hegel, Adam Smith, Karl Marx versus the Bhagavad Gita, and the Quran (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla)
If only people cared about their fellow man, so much tragedy could be...
January 15th, 2024 17:13 - Written on \"Blue Monday\" (AuburnScribbler)
Interesting - the whole Blue Monday thing. Love your poetic opposition....
January 15th, 2024 17:06 - The Narrowing. (David Wakeling)
Reminiscing seems to be the theme in the air tonight. Great write!
January 15th, 2024 16:56 - Unknown (Tony Grannell)
Great fable. Well versed.
January 1st, 2024 15:20 - Confined Thoughts (Gray0328)
The tea ball is cracked indeed - beautiful! Awesome wordplay!!
January 1st, 2024 15:15 - I smell the scent of Jewish corpses (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla)
It\'s amazing how quickly western society will abandon the lessons and the...
December 23rd, 2023 10:36 - Surrender (Sorenbarrett)
Great little piece. Love the rhyme scheme.
December 12th, 2023 18:36 - Laura\'s Fault (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Awesome. Unspoken detachment portrayed beautifully.
December 11th, 2023 12:19 - Pride (Keeter C)
Awesome and poignant free verse!
December 11th, 2023 12:13 - Barstool Gangster (for Shane MacGowan) (AuburnScribbler)
Nice memorial. Sounds very apropos.
Cheers to Shane!
For we are all...
December 3rd, 2023 13:25 - SAND SAILOR (Pat Malone)
As a great lyricist and survivor once said, \"Everything is subject to...
November 26th, 2023 12:53 - A union society dared not clasp. (Keekanon)
Beautiful. Nice rhyme scheme!👍
November 25th, 2023 16:43 - Painter of the Sky (Rhmn_7)
Ekphrastic and beautifully written!
October 29th, 2023 13:02 - The Third Way (Eugene S.)
Thank you L.B. Really had fun with that one.
October 9th, 2023 11:04 - Forgotten Grave (Eugene S.)
Thank you Parisab. Today was sadly a day of loss. Tomorrow will reveal a...
October 3rd, 2023 17:48 - The Crow (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Had flashbacks to the 80\'s (?). Amazing is that lasting impression of The...
September 4th, 2023 07:34 - Burn me better (DREEK0)
Such subtle language and verse that paints a vivid picture. A delicate...
September 4th, 2023 07:25 - Voilà ! here I am, here We be (L. B. Mek)
Absolutely beautiful. \"A window removed\" - I dare say we all are, and...
September 4th, 2023 07:16 - The World Never Wanted You, and Neither Did She (Eugene S.)
I was in a \"rare\" mood that day. It poured out on the page rather...
August 20th, 2023 16:38 - Symptoms of Nigeria\'s Governing Arms (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Sounds like America. The whole world seems to follow the same road. Good...
August 19th, 2023 04:58 - Publishers (2781)
The battle is not done, indeed!👍
August 19th, 2023 04:42 - I’ve Got My Lanyard (A Song) to the rhythm of You Should be Dancing by The Bee Gees (AuburnScribbler)
I\'m in a thoroughly good mood because of this. Awesome!
July 25th, 2023 03:09 - what is life you ask well I tell you what it is (MR.apocalypse)
I believe that one who has suffered knows more about what life truly is,...
July 25th, 2023 02:54 - Tears (Thinkerbell)
Simply beautiful.
July 25th, 2023 02:45 - Freedom (Y-not)
Amen!
July 25th, 2023 00:53 - Κομμάτια ενός καθρέφτη (Teo_sta)
Destiny. Contemplation. Questions.
The human condition runs throughout...
July 23rd, 2023 14:59 - orphan (Jim56)
Cool little story/parable.
July 23rd, 2023 14:53 - Patience is thin (Ok Waleed)
Age will ultimately control the time-line. He doesn\'t necessarily...
July 23rd, 2023 13:48 - I Remember Tomorrow (Pop64)
I like the back and forth of it. Great poem.
July 18th, 2023 17:26 - Happening (2781)
Interesting. It kinda (at first glance) eludes initially to the climate...
July 18th, 2023 17:17 - Blood War (Gramann001)
Stark apocalyptic realism with a little cynicism mixed in. I feel and...
July 16th, 2023 15:01 - Undervalued (JazilPoet)
Aye. A story as old as time. Those who overcome are so much more...
July 16th, 2023 14:47 - The Poetess and the Pussy (Teddy.15)
I needed that! 👍
July 16th, 2023 14:28 - Today is 26.05 (Imalexx)
Sometimes sorrow is belayed. Sometimes it comes unexpectedly. You know,...
July 9th, 2023 19:18 - Kingly Lines (Eugene S.)
Thank you for reading!
July 8th, 2023 14:36 - In The Line Of Fire (Teddy.15)
Enjoyed!
July 8th, 2023 03:48 - \"Crimson Symphony: A Ode to the Red Sunset\" (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
I\'m a fan of formal poetry. Great poem. The words vibrantly paint your...
July 4th, 2023 08:37 - Lush II (Eugene S.)
Thank you. I\'ll have to visit the pub again!
July 2nd, 2023 13:38 - Middlemen (I\'m Sorry...) (AuburnScribbler)
Indeed!
July 1st, 2023 12:43 - Samaritans (Wackyheartache4)
I share your sentiments. Powerful wording that many are tempted to hold...
June 24th, 2023 19:55 - When We Are Forced to Bloom (Lostmoon)
I appreciate your analogies. Well written piece.
June 24th, 2023 14:49 - Starbucks (Rhmn_7)
Maybe that\'s why I get the same Ole plain Latte. Can\'t stand all of the...
June 18th, 2023 12:45 - Blessed And Blasted Mahler. (Goldfinch60)
I just bypass the somber reflection and go straight to Shotakovich #10....
June 18th, 2023 11:52 - The Demise Of Delgado (Randyjohnson71)
I didn\'t know, but I remember his role during the Tom Baker days. Your...
June 18th, 2023 11:36 - Random or planned? (Hzugman)
I\'ll answer your question with a question. \"Is anything random?\"
June 18th, 2023 11:32 - The Sins of Us (Parisab)
Seeing inside (let alone, acknowledging it) is a difficult art form, and,...
June 18th, 2023 09:22 - THE BEAUTY OF DARKNESS ([email protected])
Been there many many times. Me & Shostakovich, Me & Layne Staley, Chris...
June 13th, 2023 18:42 - Come On (Bobfallon)
An interesting poem with a unique concept. It pulls you in. Well written.
June 11th, 2023 07:32 - Sea and Sky (AJ Douglas)
Beautiful.
June 11th, 2023 07:24 - Traitorous Fortune (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Greed and selfishness always lead to decay & destruction. Beautifully...
June 10th, 2023 09:13 - Written (Rhmn_7)
Truly intriguing. And yet you come back again....better and wiser, for...
May 29th, 2023 10:56 - Poetry is Dead (Ok Waleed)
One day all of those self-centered modern \'things\' will be gone, but...
May 27th, 2023 06:22 - Meeting Annie (Peter Gates)
Great situational poem that made me smile!
May 23rd, 2023 17:26 - 3 Days Sober (Edthepoet)
Amen! That\'s literally all I can say!
May 21st, 2023 17:29 - Heaven in Himachal (Reflections Corporate Training Hub)
I have always wanted to visit that region. You portray it beautifully in...
May 21st, 2023 05:40 - Aquaman (2781)
It\'s hard to fit in sometimes.
May 21st, 2023 05:34 - Thoughtless thoughts (Lisztmsv)
It gets easier with age, but never truly goes away. Well written healing...
May 20th, 2023 14:11 - Free Falling (L. R. Thompson Poetry)
Acceptance is freeing, in a way. Words from a mature mind.
May 8th, 2023 03:40 - coronated (Arqios)
Thought I\'d see more written on the topic, but I guess that really says...
May 8th, 2023 03:30 - My End Table (Leta)
Welcome to My Poetic Side. Truly enjoyed the poem.
April 27th, 2023 19:16 - Trapped Under Ice (Ok Waleed)
Ah, this made me laugh. The word play, thought play suits my outlook on...
April 24th, 2023 20:25 - Impressionado 1 (Introverted Sage)
I really like the lay of the poem. Feels like an ended relationship with...
April 24th, 2023 20:06 - the garden (Amysavciuc)
Awesome, love it! Thanks for some insight.
April 24th, 2023 19:14 - The Unknown (Anonymouspursuer)
I suspect age, wisdom and acceptance are playing their part. A very honest...
April 23rd, 2023 16:41 - Old Lighthouses II (Eugene S.)
Thank you for reading, Andy. May the spark ignite for us all...
April 23rd, 2023 07:43 - Salutations & Dissociations (Creatistically Inclined)
Awesome word play, intriguing story,
\"Until midnight hung
Its purple...
April 23rd, 2023 07:36 - the garden (Amysavciuc)
Interesting. Your poem has very deep roots in human psyche. I would be...
April 23rd, 2023 07:30 - Dear Garden of Eden (Rocky Lagou)
I dare say many of us are ruminating on similar concepts. You managed to...
April 17th, 2023 20:35 - Freedom in Motion (Iva Hotko)
Wow, love it. It reminds me of fall. Gathering all of those happy and...
April 15th, 2023 16:16 - A Lament on Living (Peter Gates)
I understand the sentiment.
April 15th, 2023 13:30 - Kernou (Arqios)
Interesting. I\'m expanding my Cornish vocabulary and my understand of the...
April 15th, 2023 10:27 - Tribute (John_Bingham)
It is funny how elusive they can be. You can even remind yourself to write...
April 15th, 2023 10:13 - Fly in a storm (Tallisman)
Whoa! Awesome!! Beginning, middle & end.
April 10th, 2023 19:23 - Younger (Zerrol)
Cool topic and an intriguing wat to express it.
April 6th, 2023 11:08 - April 5, 2023 – refracted reflections: (Rew4er2nail)
Well that was a nice way to say it! Enjoyed the read!!
April 5th, 2023 16:30 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
...again, well expressed.
April 1st, 2023 19:43 - We are the stuff that screams are made of. (David Wakeling)
Yes. A great rendition of a common concern and human theme. Well
April 1st, 2023 19:40 - My System (Doggerel Dave)
Laughing! I thought it was just me.
March 30th, 2023 11:28 - Stray Dogs (Paul Bell)
The musings of an outsider, maybe? Well spoken!
March 30th, 2023 01:49 - The Sea and the Sky become as one (Dan Christian)
The ocean calls...
Very atmospheric, relatable and comforting poem.
March 26th, 2023 13:32 - It died (2781)
That got a laugh. Nice twist!
March 26th, 2023 06:17 - Stranger Empathy (Noveyre)
Really interesting wordplay. I know it\'s personal, but also abstract -...
March 13th, 2023 18:34 - #1 (_Anonymous_)
Riveting!
March 13th, 2023 18:26 - My poetic Side (-The poet in me)
May your intro be a beginning and your words create the path! Welcome!
March 13th, 2023 18:10 - Cosmic slop 2 (EvenwheniLie)
Enjoyed reading. I can hear it as a rap song or maybe some slam poetry.
March 5th, 2023 11:59 - My Wish (Rhmn_7)
Love it! I see no crimes here, however.
March 5th, 2023 11:55 - A Wilted Flower (Mark Tha Phenomenon)
I recognize the struggles of youth in these words. Again, well said dear...
March 5th, 2023 09:05 - Standing Still (Mark Tha Phenomenon)
Interesting! Death being the release, providing the freedom of movement....
March 5th, 2023 09:03 - Ugly Sue. (David Wakeling)
So full of humanity and empathy are your words! \"Still the Sun shines on...
March 5th, 2023 08:53 - Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling)
A very American vantage point! May we never give up that stance! Nice poem...
March 5th, 2023 08:48
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