Comments on community poems by Yorelzinala at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Yorelzinala

Seconds (CindyB) Brilliant!
June 26th, 2019 00:02
Fame or Failure (Mia_Rose) Without failure there can be no success. Be unafraid to fail. You will...
April 7th, 2019 02:45
I was born wrong (Dominique ruth) Brilliant!
April 7th, 2019 02:42
Dancing With The Devil (Angela1711) Articulating your struggle is already going towards that light. Wonderful...
April 7th, 2019 02:34
she speaks (Psychofemale) Hilarious ending. Brilliant!
February 4th, 2019 22:47
The Rain (Joanna Garrido) Wonderful, emotional ending.
February 4th, 2019 19:41
Beautiful Pain (Ztaysimple) Pain is weakness leaving the body!
February 4th, 2019 19:39
adrift (Delilah) brilliant!
February 2nd, 2019 07:29
A Poet (Caroline7) Fascinating! lol. Nice joke.
December 28th, 2018 22:43
What do you do? (Prettylittlepoet) You ask a question many ask everyday. There\'s only one thing to do. Is...
December 28th, 2018 22:39
Always Continue To Inspire (Brooklyn6timesplus) True words. Bravo!
December 28th, 2018 22:31
I’m still lost (Misskay) You\'ve made several realizations with this write quite brilliant. You\'re...
December 26th, 2018 22:32
Feel Me (Tiffany_Arnold) Assertive. Strong. Sensual. Wonderful articulation of emotion.
December 21st, 2018 22:49
REPETITIVE CYCLE (Monica Abrantes) A tree completes the circle of life and maintains it! Breathing in the...
December 20th, 2018 21:35
Find me there (Down the rabbithole) Brilliant! Lovely written.
December 7th, 2018 22:58
Pull the Trigger (Gabriela) Mental illness affects us all in many ways. Your perspective is compelling...
December 7th, 2018 22:53
Silver (Brittany Jo) Articulating one\'s struggle is difficult for most people. Wonderful poem.
December 5th, 2018 23:11
February 14 (Phoenix Nobles) Do a follow up poem asserting you not wanting to be friends. Your poem...
December 5th, 2018 23:00
Strength (Tiffany_Arnold) Brilliant!
December 5th, 2018 22:50
Put Your Heart Into Everything (Brooklyn6timesplus) Sincerely grateful for your words of encouragement and positive energy.
October 5th, 2018 23:34
💔💊’HIDDEN’ (YoursTruly9) Hidden Written off Don\'t step off that ledge just yet friend I\'m on...
October 5th, 2018 23:33
Do You Bellieve Me Now? (I.G.H) Lovely way to put suicidal ideations. But, it would be lovelier if she...
October 5th, 2018 23:20
10/1/2018 (Sugar Suicide) Brilliant!
October 1st, 2018 23:20
Up In The Clouds (DeepThoughtsWithAri) Like an out of body experience? Brilliant!
September 16th, 2018 22:58
HELLO HAPPINESS (Lcmcfadden) Uplifting and brilliant!
August 9th, 2018 21:48
Love Notes (Vela) Mystery. Lovely. bubbly. Please continue......
August 4th, 2018 22:46
mommy why doesn\'t he love me? (Kalanigarcia) Poet, allow yourself to be heartbroken...your heart will be unbounded....
August 4th, 2018 22:44
mommy why doesn\'t he love me? (Kalanigarcia) Poet, allow yourself to be heartbroken...your heart will be unbounded....
August 4th, 2018 22:44
poetry to me (Chana) This is but a chapter of the book of you. I look forward to the infinite...
August 4th, 2018 22:41
When All the Fun Was Over (MilkyWayCrossing) I embrace your darkness. Light up the darkness with your words. I...
August 4th, 2018 22:33
Rhetorical Poetry (Bran-done Wyll-iamz) That\'s a phenomenal flow. Thanks for sharing.
May 31st, 2018 17:58
If only I could kill her (C.N.A) Being broken is to be perfectly imperfect! Amazing write. Thank you for...
May 31st, 2018 17:52
Sadness (Mary73223) Brilliant!
May 29th, 2018 20:10
Bitter-sweet (Athaly) The duality of love can bring immense joy and desolate pain into one\'s...
May 29th, 2018 20:09
Waves (Roselyn) Inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
May 27th, 2018 21:01
Our Sin (LiterateLesbian) Brilliant!
May 25th, 2018 22:34
BLEEDING (Broken_kingdom) Numbing brilliance! Thank you for sharing.
May 23rd, 2018 23:11
A message to the insecure (Mj_santos) Liberating. Inspiring. Insightful. Wonderful message. Thank you for...
May 23rd, 2018 23:01
Failure (Skyebellasario) You fall; then rise like a phoenix out of the ashes. Fear of failure is...
May 23rd, 2018 21:19
To Love Is Best (W c) Brilliant! Thank your for sharing.
May 23rd, 2018 21:03
5-23-18 (Wilted) Pesky demons! they like to stir things up. You can\'t deal with them all...
May 23rd, 2018 21:00
Just For Fun :-)) (Kitcat) Comical and to the point. You didn\'t disappoint.Thanks for sharing.
May 22nd, 2018 22:14
Venus Rising (Gino) Epic and transcending. Bravo! Thank you for sharing.
May 22nd, 2018 21:46
Together Forever (Poetic_Pixel) Here\'s an idea: \"Endless Endeavor\" And GO!
May 22nd, 2018 21:35
Protection (Horriblepoet13) It appears you long for unconditional love. Free of judgement. Free of...
May 21st, 2018 22:45
Chaos (Angstypoems) Chaotic royalty. It\'ll happen. Thanks for sharing.
May 21st, 2018 22:35
THE STORMY WHISPER (Esala) Placing others before yourself is a virtue, but tread lightly, as some...
May 21st, 2018 22:30
With Hope at Least (Avarice) Do tell us when you can find the words to tell him how you feel. I\'m...
May 21st, 2018 22:24
A message to my creator (KC) The human experience is a burden on any soul, but one that is shared by...
May 21st, 2018 22:15
Always Take That Chance (Brooklyn6timesplus) Clear and concise. Inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
May 21st, 2018 22:09
Moving on (Mgl) That\'s some real talk. Love\'s duality of joy and pain is a troubling...
May 21st, 2018 22:05
Walking by the lake (SLR) Appreciating nature is all a part of the process of life. Seems like you...
May 21st, 2018 22:00
Beyond His Grasp (Kurt Philip Behm) Amazing and inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
May 21st, 2018 21:57
See For Yourself (Honey Silk) It\'s your universe. Fantastic write. Thank you for sharing.
May 20th, 2018 22:48
A Longing (Roselyn) Allow your feelings or unfeelings to guide your writing. Thank you for...
May 20th, 2018 21:34
Blades (Christina8) With you; your friend has a voice. Thank you for sharing.
May 20th, 2018 21:06
unfeeling (Qzat) That unfeeling feeling is all too real. Great write.
May 20th, 2018 20:59