Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- A season of change (Funmiwrites)
Quite the love letter this poem reads hard and has power. Loved it
February 17th, 2025 08:19 - Watching leaves fall (Maplespal)
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for...
February 17th, 2025 08:15 - Trump the devil (2781)
All good stories require a villain, for God there must be a devil and so...
February 17th, 2025 08:09 - Shadow (Cassie58)
Here in a personal story one feels the curiosity, shock at discovery and...
February 17th, 2025 08:05 - Data Plots (Whats write for me)
Indeed too bad that we don\'t have them for our every day activities and...
February 17th, 2025 08:00 - Sloth Superpower (Gray0328)
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00 - hedgehog buddy (Jim56)
Cute and so much a part of nature this poem could well be in a children\'s...
February 17th, 2025 05:59 - Eternal Secret (Haleyalexis)
Pain and anguish so aptly expressed where the past is an anchor that pulls...
February 17th, 2025 05:34 - GRAPE (Laddukavi)
This poem and its worded meter give the sense of munching. Nice
February 17th, 2025 05:32 - MidNight Haikus (Reynaldo Casison)
Very nicely written these three Haiku. They give a splendid pictures to...
February 17th, 2025 05:31 - One for the Ladies (Mutley Ravishes)
A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like...
February 17th, 2025 05:29 - A silent conversation (Vishakha)
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings...
February 17th, 2025 05:19 - The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence)
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait...
February 17th, 2025 05:10 - Winter Soldiers And NPCs (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I echo the last line of this poem. When we are too connected we are forced...
February 17th, 2025 05:00 - Madness (Tkatie118)
The pacing and beat to this poem as well as other things remind me of Ren...
February 17th, 2025 04:57 - BOXING BOOTH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical...
February 17th, 2025 04:50 - Poor and Needy (Orchidee)
Love this one Orchi. In each of our minds aren\'t we all needy? I know I...
February 17th, 2025 04:46 - ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios)
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar,...
February 17th, 2025 04:41 - No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
There may be nothing for dinner but there is plenty in this short helping...
February 17th, 2025 04:36 - Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave)
Lived in Oklahoma once for a few years and you haven\'t missed much. As...
February 17th, 2025 04:25 - Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60)
Ah Gold I found that my vision was fading some time back and it can lead...
February 17th, 2025 04:17 - Love Confessional (Parisab)
To love something you must know it and to know it is to live it. A poem of...
February 17th, 2025 04:13 - Who is more civilized (EvenwheniLie)
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so...
February 16th, 2025 19:00 - the clover (Sheta)
A poem of love lost and a broken heart. Nicely written
February 16th, 2025 18:58 - The Love I wasn\'t looking for (Ugly)
Caught by the heart and then the loss that has transformed happiness into...
February 16th, 2025 18:56 - In the midst of death Montmartre lament (Emile Dubois)
So true that we hold onto past garbage that would be better ejected but...
February 16th, 2025 17:37 - Tears (CuriousWanderer)
A poem that shows that emoting is not a bad thing. Nicely worded with a...
February 16th, 2025 17:34 - The Sledgehammer - in Trumps own words (Raidoc)
A political poem on a hotly contested topic. Interesting and brave to say...
February 16th, 2025 17:32 - Ruined mind (Shadowbones)
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30 - Love poems. (Hey!)
I can hear the anguish in this poem and the pain of separated lovers. Well...
February 16th, 2025 17:27 - Don’t cry for me Africa (Poetaldo)
A heart felt poem for people on the African continent. Nicely done
February 16th, 2025 17:24 - Do or Dare (RSM0812)
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare?...
February 16th, 2025 14:22 - I never meant to (Nikola)
Gratitude expressed and in any relationship both carry the burden. A very...
February 16th, 2025 14:21 - A nice prescription of sleep (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Wounds anesthetized whether by drug or anything else seldom heal as well....
February 16th, 2025 14:19 - Deep In The Heart (Anthony Hanible)
Although metaphor many are dependent enough on love to do these things and...
February 16th, 2025 14:17 - Losers (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great word usage in this poem a bit of humor that unfortunately is...
February 16th, 2025 14:11 - Imagining the Impossible (Teddy.15)
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book...
February 16th, 2025 14:08 - To Fight Another Day ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
A tribute to those who have fought and died. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 14:06 - Micro poem (Thoughtless)
This has a George Carlin type of word play to it. Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:05 - The Caterpillar (R. Gordon Zyne)
Once again your metaphor is delightfully pictured in images each of which...
February 16th, 2025 09:10 - My Apologies, It IS Only...Nevermind (Cheeky Missy)
You remind me of the cold and how it increases the hunger. Once again I...
February 16th, 2025 09:07 - Diary Of My Heart (Ajon4wheels)
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love...
February 16th, 2025 09:04 - Snail in love with mushroom (Pineapple_pizza018)
Strange love but who\'s to say to each their own. Such a metaphor for...
February 16th, 2025 09:00 - Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole (Whats write for me)
Remember the days that the meal was the same every day and how hunger...
February 16th, 2025 08:55 - Truck Driving Man (Tony36)
I hear a song here. Good write Tony
February 16th, 2025 08:52 - Thick Fog (E.J. Waling)
Beautiful images each word defining a picture Lovely write
February 16th, 2025 08:51 - Rose Candle Haiku (Reynaldo Casison)
A beautiful image
February 16th, 2025 08:48 - One Sixty One Sixty... (Shantha Teldeniya)
Nicely said with poetic form
February 16th, 2025 08:42 - Fishbowl Fatigue (Tristan Robert Lange)
It is a hardwired fact that humans are cruel as well as kind. Cowardly as...
February 16th, 2025 08:38 - Anniversary Bouquet (Cassie58)
A beautiful write lustrous in its imagery and full of emotion. Lovely...
February 16th, 2025 06:31 - Fury (Paul Gerard Reed)
This poem full of wonderful metaphor and great lines was a welcome read
February 16th, 2025 06:29 - my friend robin (Jim56)
There are many in this life that sing us songs of beauty and then leave. A...
February 16th, 2025 06:27 - ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025 (Swarovski20)
That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too...
February 16th, 2025 06:25 - The Quiet Sanctum (Gray0328)
I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
February 16th, 2025 06:20 - Message 3 (Maplespal)
A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
February 16th, 2025 06:18 - A Solitary Path (Sehrab Sathoo)
Beautifully written in heroic form with great imagery this poem retells...
February 16th, 2025 05:18 - Manager Or Slave Master? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A most interesting read where a real majic in practice and theory shows...
February 16th, 2025 05:14 - Some Things She Once Said (Neville)
Neville forgive me but this took me as personification of Id meets Ego....
February 16th, 2025 05:10 - maybe (Thoughtless)
Clever and creative. Irma is also the word for sister in Portuguese and...
February 16th, 2025 04:58 - Kintsugi (Putu.voyager)
This poem a very good example of kintsugi is pieced together in a most...
February 16th, 2025 04:56 - The Beauty of Nature (Shahla Latifi)
When one\'s inner nature is accepted and connects with outer nature then...
February 16th, 2025 04:50 - Orange Man (James Michael)
Orange one of the hardest words to rhyme a wonderful fruit and the fruit...
February 16th, 2025 04:47 - Forgive Your Past Self (Somoine)
This from the fount to the wording is a haunting write that gives advice...
February 16th, 2025 04:45 - Dear Winstun (Mutley Ravishes)
In my dullness this one seemed a bit cryptic but I loved the feel of the...
February 16th, 2025 04:42 - Star shine brightly (Laddukavi)
And why not? Stars being suns of their own most larger than ours why not...
February 16th, 2025 04:39 - The Ephemeral Mind (Matthew J. Bays)
Like many great works they have many meanings to different people and so...
February 16th, 2025 04:38 - One To The Power Of X (RickthePoetWarrior)
Stump the chump dump the Trump I say. A fun read
February 16th, 2025 04:34 - Dear Loss by Alexander Vertinsky (Ksey_Gan)
So well written in metaphor this process of loss and moving on that clings...
February 16th, 2025 04:30 - The World is Broken (R. Gordon Zyne)
A most moving write, moving because it\'s right. To gain a fave from me...
February 16th, 2025 04:24 - OLD SOLDIER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs...
February 16th, 2025 04:20 - Windfall (2781)
How times have changed. The bank used to give you coin rolls and you would...
February 16th, 2025 04:18 - Graces Given (Orchidee)
This hymn seems to represent a good deal of chorus and should be fun to...
February 16th, 2025 04:12 - An apology to the one. (Hey!)
Heartfelt powerful, emotive this reads of turmoil and despair. Emotion so...
February 16th, 2025 04:05 - poetry in time (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are...
February 16th, 2025 03:51 - once upon a long ago (Arqios)
Birth is not an easy process, conception, development, birth itself with...
February 16th, 2025 03:44 - Sonnet On The Death Of A Friend. (Goldfinch60)
Andy my condolences. This poem serves as a wonderful tribute. I have to...
February 16th, 2025 03:36 - Divine Blossoms (Salvia.S)
It is always most interesting to me to see what visions people have of...
February 16th, 2025 03:30 - What Was the Question, Again? (Cheeky Missy)
Once again I was not hungry until I read this. Another fun read Chic
February 16th, 2025 03:24 - I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case)
There are people, moments and places that make a home, all else doesn\'t...
February 15th, 2025 19:56 - Freckles (Bella Joy)
Romance bleed from this poem and is as sweet as sugar. A sunny work
February 15th, 2025 16:23 - Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 5 The Suicide Letter (Anthony Hanible)
A most serious pledge to write in blood. Strong message in this poem
February 15th, 2025 16:19 - Venus rages brightly tonight (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of love in Venus and shame. Secrets kept...
February 15th, 2025 16:14 - Like a Night Monster (J.Edse)
Very passionate in its power. A strong poem.
February 15th, 2025 16:10 - Karl is a Drunk (Gray0328)
The way you describe him I think I have met him. A great write with a...
February 15th, 2025 13:31 - Eternal emotions (RSM0812)
A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write
February 15th, 2025 13:28 - Dear Winston ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
I love how this one opens the first stanza speaks the truth with a bit of...
February 15th, 2025 13:26 - Shrink Satire (Teddy.15)
Maybe that is an indication for the hypocritical oath. All health care...
February 15th, 2025 13:23 - Heart first (Byyvette)
How nicely said in rhyme. Well done
February 15th, 2025 09:19 - secondhand (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ah metaphor deeply planted in this poem. There may be many interpretations...
February 15th, 2025 09:18 - I Lou You (Tony36)
Very nicely said Tony there are many ways to say and you said it nicely
February 15th, 2025 09:12 - Old songs (Maplespal)
Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely...
February 15th, 2025 08:19 - Amor I love you (Poetaldo)
A point well made and with which I agree. Well said and a work nicely done
February 15th, 2025 08:13 - Seasons (Paul Gerard Reed)
Seasons in nature and in emotions come and go. Cyclical in nature so in...
February 15th, 2025 07:23 - sunshine smile (Jim56)
A great poem of the changing dichotomy of emotion and weather. If one only...
February 15th, 2025 07:19 - not your day, either? (Arqios)
Metaphors of past now rusted dreams and memories in the squalor of the...
February 15th, 2025 07:06 - Nobody In The World Bends To Your Threats (Mohammad younus koul)
There is a sense of magnanimity in this poem fearing for one that one...
February 15th, 2025 05:15 - Turn Off The Telephone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A most interesting poem a relationship with the world technological in...
February 15th, 2025 05:12 - I Saw The Devil (Bigguy)
Strong words give a sense of power to this poem. Great imagery.
February 15th, 2025 05:10 - journal entry (Coracaodacripta)
I hear the anguish in this poem where there is a call for understanding...
February 15th, 2025 05:08 - Shell (Shadowbones)
In this poem there is the the ember of a dying fire where hope exists in...
February 15th, 2025 05:07
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