Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- No One Can See (Rosiii ;))
A ghostly type of feel sad and haunting
February 21st, 2025 13:36 - Thrown! (Framed Mirror)
This one requires time to contemplate.
February 21st, 2025 13:33 - Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58)
Such great wordsmithing here. The use of meter and rhyme combined in...
February 21st, 2025 13:31 - desperation (NinjaGirl)
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done...
February 21st, 2025 13:24 - To David (Kurt Philip Behm)
A most beautiful tribute. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 11:42 - Between Silence and Stars (Ciara Stanbury)
A beautiful sonnet that speaks at the division between heart and head and...
February 21st, 2025 11:41 - The Parting Hour (Abdullah123)
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one...
February 21st, 2025 11:35 - My Sister\'s Shadow (Whats write for me)
A most wonderful tribute to a person with whom you share blood, history,...
February 21st, 2025 10:01 - body (Newt)
A thought provoking write about a feeling that many have. To be a stranger...
February 21st, 2025 09:58 - Where Do I Go? (DLewis88)
All the makings of an existential crisis in this poem. Well expressed it...
February 21st, 2025 09:00 - How To Catch A Suicider (Anthony Hanible)
Empathy requires experience and I hear this in this poem. A deep write of...
February 21st, 2025 08:58 - I am coming back to reality (Poetaldo)
This is a deep poem that in not asking asks the reader to put themselves...
February 21st, 2025 08:56 - The Cult (Tristan Robert Lange)
There are many gods past and present and even more demigods to take up the...
February 21st, 2025 08:51 - Believe in yourself (Tony36)
A great motivational write. Desire and belief can overcome all. Very nice...
February 21st, 2025 08:48 - This Is Love (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Brilliant! Good advice in poetry can never go wrong. Seeing from both...
February 21st, 2025 08:47 - Lights into nights & Kissing death (Maplespal)
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that...
February 21st, 2025 08:43 - Smoked (Mutley Ravishes)
Ah the metaphor in this one goes deeper than the kidneys. Yes indeed who...
February 21st, 2025 08:30 - keep going (Sheta)
Never give up comes through in this poem of encouragement. Nicely said
February 21st, 2025 05:56 - Runaway engine (Cedrick)
A great metaphor in this poem that acknowledges that life runs until it is...
February 21st, 2025 05:55 - pets are for life (Jim56)
A poem of compassion for those of another species and the understanding...
February 21st, 2025 05:51 - My lips are tied (Funmiwrites)
What a great image is painted in this line. Very nicely done
February 21st, 2025 05:46 - Safe And Sound (Paul Gerard Reed)
Enjoy the pause before the next storm. A quiet and peaceful feeling to...
February 21st, 2025 05:45 - Please Notice Me (Junes)
Aspiration ring out in this poem, hope lingers but despite it all a...
February 21st, 2025 05:44 - Fire (Onurb Azile)
Loved the format and rhyme scheme in a poem of sensuality, eroticisms and...
February 21st, 2025 05:42 - Kindergarten (Faie)
What a wonderful portrayal of young children. Masterfully painted this...
February 21st, 2025 05:40 - UNKNOWN HERO (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor...
February 21st, 2025 05:36 - Do you want to? (Thoughtless)
Surprise is always a tasty treat. This poem the same. A lovely taste is...
February 21st, 2025 05:34 - Equations of Love (Salvia.S)
Clever the use of numbers in place of words to pull together the...
February 21st, 2025 05:31 - Coming Up With A Plan (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Short and desperate this poem evokes feeling of panic. What is more...
February 21st, 2025 05:28 - beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios)
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male...
February 21st, 2025 05:25 - I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence)
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes...
February 21st, 2025 05:01 - Black and White (MDStone)
What a beautifully worded poem and such a great metaphor of loss of...
February 21st, 2025 04:59 - There’s a House across the way (Kevin Hulme)
Well written with rhyme and good flow and meter it reads easily flowing...
February 21st, 2025 04:56 - No Pages to See (Teddy.15)
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then...
February 21st, 2025 04:51 - The Breath Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
When I listen to music I breath it in as well Andy. Nicely said
February 21st, 2025 04:42 - Searching for some magical feeling (Emile Dubois)
A fun play on words that flows from beginning to end.
February 20th, 2025 18:25 - She Smiles… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this one is marvelous especially with the final twist. Written well...
February 20th, 2025 18:21 - The Reflection Stops (Hey!)
The first stanzas of rhyme are very well done with wonderful meter...
February 20th, 2025 17:17 - Goodnight My Dearest! (Ladywithaquill)
Distance make the heart grow fonder. A great poem of separation
February 20th, 2025 14:29 - There is Dust on my Mind and on the Wall (Thomas W Case)
I know that same entity a hell of a friend that would rather drink and...
February 20th, 2025 14:26 - Burying love alive (Melancholia)
A questioning of past values and actions so well worded and spoken.
February 20th, 2025 14:07 - Unending Love (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A poem of parenthood and what it entails. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 14:04 - I\'m tired (NinjaGirl)
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never...
February 20th, 2025 14:02 - Fated Road (Gray0328)
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society...
February 20th, 2025 13:05 - ITESIWAJU (Kingjamescory)
Keep it going. Good read
February 20th, 2025 13:03 - A tree falls quantumly (Hzugman)
Am I even here? A fun read. Keep it up.
February 20th, 2025 13:02 - No Tick. No Tock. (ADarkerMind)
Well Melvin this one did take me down the rabbit hole uninvited and so I...
February 20th, 2025 11:57 - I Am the Lover of Meadows, Woods, and Streams (Mohammad younus koul)
I hear a closeness to nature in this poem a call to the natural and...
February 20th, 2025 11:35 - Narcissist (Moco)
A narcissist is a blind person that does not see the pain of others only...
February 20th, 2025 11:31 - Mother knows best (Pineapple_pizza018)
It takes a long time to realize that mother has more wisdom than we...
February 20th, 2025 11:25 - Baker (Freddi)
A great metaphor and was well stated in poetic form
February 20th, 2025 11:21 - Breakfast Reflection (Cassie58)
Very nice a poem of missing and absence. Well done
February 20th, 2025 11:19 - Breathless (Kurt Philip Behm)
Indeed it does and here is the pyramid and in it the mystery of truth....
February 20th, 2025 10:44 - Positive Fear (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message to never give up and think positive. Very nice
February 20th, 2025 10:42 - Little Grove (Paul Gerard Reed)
There are more similarities between us than differences and yet we focus...
February 20th, 2025 10:41 - Poison & Ink (Abdullah123)
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38 - I Wonder, Will I Ever Know? (Cheeky Missy)
Ah nothing like fresh ground coffee. The bean is most important and how it...
February 20th, 2025 09:54 - Playing Cards (Tony36)
Indeed it is not the game but how and with whom it is played. It is the...
February 20th, 2025 09:51 - two hearts (Newt)
Synchrony such a lovely concept that plays the music of the universe....
February 20th, 2025 09:50 - See you later (Bishop M.)
Always better to have loved and lost than to have never loved. If I can...
February 20th, 2025 09:44 - Total Dark (Tristan Robert Lange)
A beautiful write that at first sight offers a conundrum as to how...
February 20th, 2025 09:41 - Tears Stories (Anthony Hanible)
Powerful words a decision as to whether we push out the sad or the happy...
February 20th, 2025 08:36 - Ma prière (Poetaldo)
We all have the things that we depend upon. Such nice words well said
February 20th, 2025 08:33 - The Embrace of the Bugs (Rosiii ;))
We all have such thoughts that like flies won\'t leave us alone and worse...
February 20th, 2025 06:57 - What Are Memories? (Salvia.S)
There is truth beneath this pyramid of words, a poem that deserves...
February 20th, 2025 06:52 - 1st & last Note (Maplespal)
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we...
February 20th, 2025 06:31 - Beyong the Page (Whats write for me)
In this lies the heart of each writer and a caution to all of us readers...
February 20th, 2025 06:24 - i love spring (Jim56)
A lovely portrayal of the budding of spring and all its beauty. Very nice...
February 20th, 2025 06:16 - Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite (Neville)
Child\'s toy or bird was the first question. You are playing with my mind...
February 20th, 2025 05:15 - \"Bebo:- My Heart\'s Desire\" (Shlok kumar author)
Whether physical or emotional separation it is painful and in this poem...
February 20th, 2025 04:59 - Where are my emotions (Funmiwrites)
Emotions have no time and are not planned they just happen nicely written
February 20th, 2025 04:55 - TRAIN STATION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to...
February 20th, 2025 04:54 - When You Light Your Candles (Reynaldo Casison)
A most romantic poem filled with sensuous images. Very nicely written
February 20th, 2025 04:51 - The Love of Lichen (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48 - The Same Picture Frame (Poetic Licence)
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just...
February 20th, 2025 04:46 - The Moon Appears and She is Blue (Teddy.15)
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of...
February 20th, 2025 04:42 - Three dots dancing (Arqios)
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a...
February 20th, 2025 04:23 - It’s Dark (AaliyahC.)
I can hear the plea in this poem and it gives a sense of desperation....
February 20th, 2025 04:19 - dont cry (Sheta)
Beautiful and brilliant! So short with so much meaning of a most positive...
February 20th, 2025 04:17 - Beating Heart (E.J. Waling)
A most interesting meaning to this poem. If one takes it to be the last...
February 20th, 2025 04:15 - My Sweet, Darling You (Ajon4wheels)
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12 - oh, my love (Oh kay)
Longingly, romantic, with a sense of drama being classical in nature it...
February 20th, 2025 04:09 - Fine Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful image cast Gold. It falls like sunbeams through a picket...
February 20th, 2025 04:00 - all women want (Rainbow 1)
Is that a good place to find one? A thought provoking read.
February 19th, 2025 19:40 - Excerpt from a poem Books after Valentin Gaft (Ksey_Gan)
No one reads anymore. I love reading but even I read less than in the...
February 19th, 2025 18:40 - Nothing to See Here, Folks. (Cheeky Missy)
Snow still makes one anxious for spring. A fun read
February 19th, 2025 16:30 - I thought (Byyvette)
Expectations don\'t always work out. A poem of loss within a loss. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:27 - The womb of all (DREEK0)
Intriguing metaphors here that lead to an untangling of meaning. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:25 - Unseen Blessing (Gray0328)
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23 - Definition of a Poet (M.E.M.)
So true that our thoughts and expectations shape our writing and one can...
February 19th, 2025 13:46 - Empty Thoughts (Cassie58)
Indeed I too become restless during the nonhunting season when one must...
February 19th, 2025 13:43 - Tinkering with Control (RSM0812)
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and...
February 19th, 2025 11:30 - Moi, je me perds (NinjaGirl)
Magnifique!
February 19th, 2025 11:28 - I can\'t feel it (Poetaldo)
Take your time and we will wait for you and your poetry too
February 19th, 2025 11:27 - Waiting For Supper (Kurt Philip Behm)
Philosophy put into reality, poetry put into metaphor, esoteric into...
February 19th, 2025 11:26 - The Self in all living Beings (Skally)
Great concept to which I adhere and matter nothing more than energy all...
February 19th, 2025 11:20 - Satan\'s Short Season (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I think G stands for goat head of the beast, greatest of all time, God...
February 19th, 2025 11:17 - The Tyrant\'s Creed (Mohammad younus koul)
Nicely stated
February 19th, 2025 11:15 - Mary Bess Brenner: A Poetic Tribute (Whats write for me)
A most lovely tribute and heart felt
February 19th, 2025 11:08 - Limerick 3 (Abdullah123)
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39
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