Comments on community poems by Severus Alexander

• 11 May 2017 (Severus Alexander) Friend to me, light-hearted, heavy are your thoughts And how warm our...
  May 11th, 2017 11:59
• In Collaboration With Severus Alexander (Reivax Camlost) I think it is. My lines are the only two that have anything in common.
  March 9th, 2017 11:18
• 23 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost) I usually spent the five minutes or so after I write a poem...
  February 23rd, 2017 11:20
• Melody (Tris Eaton) Falling into quiet, from whence all music springs. For only beyond sound,...
  February 19th, 2017 20:21
• 15 February 2017 (Severus Alexander) 1, 1. 2, 3. 10, 11. 6, 6. 1, 0. 6, 2. 10, 3. 4, 5. 1, 2. 5, 3. 3, 4. 1, 6....
  February 15th, 2017 13:38
• 2 February 2017 (Severus Alexander) I apologize. My deductive reasoning has always been on the inadequate...
  February 2nd, 2017 11:55
• 17 January, 2017 (Severus Alexander) I\'m resolving to go to my grave in peace, so long as I set my mark upon...
  January 17th, 2017 20:26
• 17 January, 2017 (Severus Alexander) I consider the first tercet to be a poem in of itself. But let it with the...
  January 17th, 2017 18:20
• 16 December 2016 (Severus Alexander) Thank you guys! Means a lot to me.
  December 17th, 2016 19:43
• The Fall (Kurt Philip Behm) There is no chaos, but difference. And no order, but for control..
  December 5th, 2016 13:49
• 1 December, 2016 / (A wise man from Nishapur) (Severus Alexander) A Story from Attar \"This, Too, Will Pass\" A powerful king, ruler...
  December 1st, 2016 15:34
• 1 December, 2016 / (A wise man from Nishapur) (Severus Alexander) Thank you.
  December 1st, 2016 15:30
• Climbing Trees ~ Stanza I (Severus Alexander) Thank you! A poem in of itself, and hopefully the first of more...
  October 24th, 2016 11:41
• Winter lady in the park (Severus Alexander) Thank you.. I'm glad that you appreciate my work.
  September 10th, 2016 13:50
• Inspiration (Reivax Camlost) I believe you mean, "Argent."
  September 4th, 2016 10:13
• On the Battlefield (Reivax Camlost) Inspiring.. your words evoke a vivid image.
  August 24th, 2016 11:12
• Dust and Leaves (Severus Alexander) Thank you! It's always nice to hear kind words.. Paul Simon is a...
  August 3rd, 2016 12:21
• I hate it here (PerpetualFlowers) We possess the capability to play well, despite the hand that we are dealt...
  August 2nd, 2016 20:12
• Another One Shot (PerpetualFlowers) It brings me great joy to know that this terrible tragedy has been lent...
  August 2nd, 2016 20:10
• To the next person who cares (PerpetualFlowers) Melancholy.. passionate, and engaging. A heartfelt poem on the edge of the...
  August 2nd, 2016 20:05
• Eyes (Elphaba993) I highly recommend that you read Edgar Allan Poe's short story,...
  July 24th, 2016 20:41
• A Poets Love (Dee) Your work is seamless, and so lovely. I admire a poet for whom words...
  June 30th, 2016 18:58
• Daffodils (Severus Alexander) I set this poem to the tune and rhythm of "Cedarwood Road" By my favorite...
  June 13th, 2016 18:19
• Daffodils (Severus Alexander) If this poem seems slightly off, that's probably because I stayed up until...
  June 13th, 2016 13:17
• Split Worlds (Eeva) There is a duality to human nature, which emerges in the face of...
  June 8th, 2016 13:44
• Let Me (Eeva) A very honest poem.
  June 8th, 2016 13:33
• Behind Glass (Eeva) Lively, a touch melancholy... I like this poem: it speaks from the...
  June 8th, 2016 13:31
• Natural Details (Despina Nicole Cambosos) Lovely.. Wonderful imagery. However, this is not a haiku. It's a...
  June 8th, 2016 12:51
• Footsteps (Severus Alexander) Yes.. I will be entering ninth grade come autumn next. However, I am...
  June 5th, 2016 18:54
• Angel Wings (Therainking) "Angels have four wings.." "With two they hide their faces.." "And with...
  May 30th, 2016 16:55
• Petal Wings (Severus Alexander) Thank You.
  May 3rd, 2016 14:25
• Goodnight (McKenzy) The heat comes and goes Sudden wind on Winter's day Rest by Summer's...
  April 22nd, 2016 06:45
• Sometimes I\'m Happy (PerpetualFlowers) Although we tend to think of emotions as an external response, they're...
  April 13th, 2016 19:23
• Home & Heart (Severus Alexander) Thank you. It's a work of the heart...
  April 13th, 2016 10:11
• The struggle called sleep (PerpetualFlowers) Touching! Freedom has its perks, but it also carries a great deal of...
  April 11th, 2016 21:30
• Melancholy Disposition (PerpetualFlowers) A glimpse of the other side... where we find ourselves all to often.
  April 10th, 2016 20:29
• Summer Nocturne (Severus Alexander) Thanks! lol.
  April 6th, 2016 14:16
• \\\"Angels From Above\\\" (Kwrf) This is excellent! "Angels have four wings.." "With two they hide...
  April 4th, 2016 10:40
• \"At Last\" (Kwrf) You are most welcome! It warms my heart to see an emerging talent such...
  April 1st, 2016 19:38
• \"At Last\" (Kwrf) Oh, dear lord... This is beautiful! In reading this, I feel a renewed...
  April 1st, 2016 19:02
• Fylgja Minn (Severus Alexander) Like I said, it's better in Old Norse.
  April 1st, 2016 10:04
• Fylgja Minn (Severus Alexander) Roughly translated, for those of you out there who do not, in fact, speak...
  April 1st, 2016 10:03
• I Think of You (LaRose) This is.. Beautiful. The best poets write from the heart...
  March 31st, 2016 18:44
• TO STAY - OR NOT TO STAY ? - UK EUROPE REFERENDUM (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh, and I vote yes, by the way..
  March 31st, 2016 18:42
• TO STAY - OR NOT TO STAY ? - UK EUROPE REFERENDUM (BRIAN & ANGELA) Hey, Brian! This is lovely. I laughed out loud... : ) Um, I was...
  March 31st, 2016 18:42
• Derry Girl 💚 (Fiona) Welcome, Fiona... This is a very nice piece of work. Your grammar is a...
  March 31st, 2016 18:06
• To Share My Heart (LaRose) Very heartfelt. Love it. : )
  March 30th, 2016 16:27
• Majesty / Dawn (Severus Alexander) Thank you, Seeker. I appreciate your thoughts... What is solid,...
  March 30th, 2016 10:19
• The Light In August (Seeker) Poetry is, first and foremost... a tool for expressing beauty, and for...
  March 30th, 2016 09:12
• The Hungry Id (Seeker) I thoroughly enjoy this poem... Perhaps it is some symptom of my...
  March 30th, 2016 08:54
• Varnan (Severus Alexander) *Oh... Whoops. Roughly translated, (I much prefer the original Old...
  March 30th, 2016 08:35
• A Notable Journey (Seeker) Please allow me to state that, if you have not yet heard the same from...
  March 30th, 2016 08:32
• A Notable Journey (Seeker) Oh, my God! This is the most amazing piece of poetry which I have ever...
  March 30th, 2016 08:29
• Varnan (Severus Alexander) Allr Engill Leita Sinn Vegr
  March 30th, 2016 08:03
• Snake Charming (Satishverma) Angels have four wings~ With two they hide their faces... And with...
  March 29th, 2016 10:53
• Earth and Air (Chaz2296) Let them know, the earth is dying~
  March 29th, 2016 10:50
• Redemption (Zizi) Angels have four wings With two they hide their faces And with two...
  March 28th, 2016 16:20
• Soft Wind - Haiku () sun on barrow grass chill of tombstone on the soul cool under
  March 28th, 2016 16:18
• THE PHYSICS OF LOVE (Berthold Lippel) Love is like the ocean, too~ Hearts in unison contrive.... To brave...
  March 28th, 2016 16:08
• Fly (Lady K) Gorgeous! I love it.
  March 28th, 2016 09:58
• The Love We Share (LaRose) This really, really good! You've managed to imbue it with a crazy...
  March 28th, 2016 08:43
• heart please do not cry (LaRose) Words are but a conduit for the soul.
  March 26th, 2016 13:15
• Looking Glass / Remembrance (Severus Alexander) - "The road not taken," By Robert Frost.
  March 26th, 2016 12:45
• Looking Glass / Remembrance (Severus Alexander) On my boots... Age and rough terrain have rendered them worn, but the...
  March 26th, 2016 12:43
• Looking Glass / Remembrance (Severus Alexander) Thank you, LaRose. I would draw your attention to a line by Robert...
  March 26th, 2016 12:36
• Sentimental She Is (Brooklyn6timesplus) ... I feel for her. I shed no tear for the fool. Love is not...
  March 25th, 2016 20:28
• FAREWELL TO MY SPERM DONOR (Berthold Lippel) "That pale sustenance, despair.." -- Emily Dickinson
  March 25th, 2016 20:03
• Paradox (Bleeding diamonds) We are all the willing victims of humanity...
  March 25th, 2016 19:56
• How I Feel About You (LaRose) A splendid example of pure humanity.. I love the way you've conveyed...
  March 25th, 2016 19:54
• Love Yourself (Despina Nicole Cambosos) Poetry is, first and foremost, a tool for introspection, a means by which...
  March 24th, 2016 21:38
• Rhyming Acrostic (At Briansodes suggestion) (MsMermaid) I enjoyed this thoroughly. Bravo, my fellow aspiring poet, Bravo.
  March 24th, 2016 08:16
• Sweet Dreams (LaRose) The only practice which is absolutely necessary for good poetry is...
  March 24th, 2016 08:13
• A River in the Sky (Vcutler) My only requirement for good poetry is that the author speaks from his or...
  March 22nd, 2016 13:25