Comments on community poems by Augustus
- The denied siren~ (Kira)
Many of us have those days when we think that we are give leave of our...
December 8th, 2016 16:45 - Mr Wong\'s kitchen (P.H.Rose)
I believe we all have a Mr. Wong in our city today. I can picture you...
December 8th, 2016 16:40 - Future me (Nicolerobinson)
An interesting perspective on guardian angels. Nice.
December 8th, 2016 16:37 - S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It is amazing how receptive folks are when you change your attitude. Nice.
December 8th, 2016 16:34 - Happy Ending (Notapoet)
Yes, yes, yes erotic. Lovely, sweet and deliciously so.
December 8th, 2016 16:32 - I am (SharonMoemise)
I love this. Very nice done.
December 8th, 2016 16:20 - Por siempre mi deseo. (Milyta)
Espero que sostenga en su corazón por mucho tiempo. That is such a lovely...
December 8th, 2016 12:40 - Invisible beauty (Daniel)
When I lived close to the desert I was surprised to hear so often how...
December 8th, 2016 12:33 - Thanks For Not Sharing (WriteBeLight)
Unfortunately, she may be able to prove with absences, etc. that she is...
December 8th, 2016 12:27 - Fire (Tony36)
May your fire burn brightly, my friend.
December 8th, 2016 12:20 - The poet condemned (Aa Harvey)
I love the banter. Excellent
December 8th, 2016 12:19 - Threatening Kobold (Kurt Philip Behm)
Mit malicious tricks I shock,
Montag, Dienstag und Mittwoch.
(Sorry,...
December 8th, 2016 12:12 - Epiphany (LIGHT WARRIOR)
You are so in the moment, really living every moment of your life and...
December 8th, 2016 00:09 - The Jester On The Throne (Kurt Philip Behm)
Royal imagery.
December 7th, 2016 23:42 - Loving The Presence (Abpoet18)
This is lovely.
December 7th, 2016 23:40 - Build Each Other Up (Tony36)
Nice one Tony.
December 7th, 2016 23:37 - karma and negative gossip (Avigail)
great advice.
December 7th, 2016 23:36 - Untitled (JunusScarin)
Dreamy, vulnerable images. Enjoyed.
December 7th, 2016 23:22 - Clarity (JunusScarin)
This has like a masochistic twist to it. Interesting.
December 7th, 2016 23:19 - CUDDLE ME ~ PLEASE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Warm fuzzie with neat rhymes and great message.
December 7th, 2016 16:10 - Don\'t Wear That (SheWasTheSun)
If only older peers and adults would leave kids to their own devices in...
December 7th, 2016 15:37 - 6 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
Warm cozy thoughts over someone special. I liked this a lot.
December 6th, 2016 23:50 - Obsession (The 2 A.M Writer)
That could be demonic . I like the golden conscience.
December 6th, 2016 23:37 - War (Desertchick75)
A week ago
I saw Charlie\'s head blow
Through the scope
I did not...
December 6th, 2016 17:30 - Lady of the Night (Elegant_Style)
She remains a mystery as to
why she walks there each evening.
Some say...
December 6th, 2016 17:29 - Lady of the Night (Elegant_Style)
She remains a mystery as to
why she walks there each evening.
Some say...
December 6th, 2016 17:28 - CHRISTMAS CARD JUST FOR YOU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for the card and message.
December 6th, 2016 17:08 - My first home... (P.H.Rose)
I loved this, the imagery, the simplicity, nicely done. (I too was bathed...
December 6th, 2016 16:58 - gap in the known (Avigail)
Oh, you know all my faults. Fill in the gaps with nonsense and make...
December 6th, 2016 16:43 - Till Death Do Us Part (Notapoet)
Heroin addiction may be the toughest to beat. OxyContin no difference....
December 6th, 2016 16:40 - Last Orphan Of The Truth (Kurt Philip Behm)
Light over darkness. Truth over lies . Engaging.
December 6th, 2016 16:36 - Sunshine In A Cold Cellar. (Kevin browne)
I like the idea of sunshine in an old cellar.
December 6th, 2016 16:33 - Timing is everything (Stephanie Showers)
Happy for you the timing was right.Cheers.
December 6th, 2016 16:28 - Be Yourself (Tony36)
Every one wants a piece of us. I love people who are open and honest, not...
December 6th, 2016 16:26 - electricity (Aals)
I\'m not sure I prefer eyes over stars but electricity has changed the...
December 6th, 2016 16:22 - a white war for souls (Aals)
I have been guilty of that always looking for results and forgetting to...
December 6th, 2016 00:04 - Choices (Daniel)
Some of us stay in the rut. Well done.
December 5th, 2016 23:59 - GOD CREATED THE MOON ~ AMEN! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fascinating universe we\'ll never fully comprehend--but u do a darn good...
December 5th, 2016 23:28 - No lie just a metaphor (Nicolerobinson)
Catchy phrasing. Enjoyed.
December 5th, 2016 23:22 - Spine Crime (WriteBeLight)
I had a locker at school. In some areas outlawed today due to the drug...
December 5th, 2016 23:17 - United states (Aa Harvey)
Oh this is so refreshing compared to much of the rhetoric today. A toast...
December 5th, 2016 23:02 - Habits (Avigail)
Guilty as charged. Love the way you think.
December 5th, 2016 22:58 - Misery Loves Company (Notapoet)
Doubt in your lovers devotion can be torture. You express the angst and...
December 5th, 2016 22:56 - Winter is here to stay (Christina8)
Wintery imagery I don\'t get in the South.
December 5th, 2016 22:51 - The Fall (Kurt Philip Behm)
I too had questions. The only Russian Sage I know is a plant and it grows...
December 5th, 2016 22:49 - SPACES (Stephanie Showers)
I love all the words rhyming with spaces and that being the central theme.
December 5th, 2016 22:23 - Exhibit (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Oh, thank God that you are not another boring \"normal\". Yes there is an...
December 5th, 2016 19:34 - hate triangle (SilentLaugh)
Hate sometimes has a way of taking hold of us. Nicely done.
December 5th, 2016 19:17 - Back Single !!! (P.H.Rose)
Single, punctured, empty and small. Can\'t get much lower than that....
December 5th, 2016 19:11 - Christmas Joy (Tony36)
This is so neat.
December 5th, 2016 19:00 - messed up life (Kitkat231997)
Love can be confusing. Well done.
December 4th, 2016 19:49 - Bad Compass (Yorke)
Subject to interpretation: sometimes the course we set was not the one we...
December 4th, 2016 19:47 - Sick Day (WriteBeLight)
This was so realistic and expertly said.
December 4th, 2016 19:39 - A Voyage To Nowhere (Notapoet)
You expressed your frustration so well metaphorically.
December 4th, 2016 19:37 - The days of men (P.H.Rose)
Right, too linear thinking and the graves just keep getting deeper. Nicely...
December 4th, 2016 19:34 - Healing (Christina8)
Yes very positive and thankful.
December 4th, 2016 19:32 - New Whispers (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonder what you may have been trying to sort out in your mind early in the...
December 4th, 2016 19:30 - Men of Letters (Moontigerntn)
Always intriguing.
December 4th, 2016 19:17 - Running away from Fire (Elegant_Style)
How timely with the fire in Oakland, Calif. USA. Nicely done.
December 4th, 2016 19:15 - About life, about love (Reivax Camlost)
With common easily understood words in short compact lines you impact a...
December 4th, 2016 18:54 - WE HAVE A WONDERFUL GOD ~ AMEN ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I get that same feeling when I gaze at the sky and try to understand the...
December 4th, 2016 18:51 - the love i got (Kitkat231997)
Love is hard to explain. The recipient is lucky.
December 4th, 2016 18:48 - Vanity Plate (WriteBeLight)
Hello Living Large! This is so neat. Years ago I was in Rome and SPQR is...
December 4th, 2016 18:44 - Through The Keyhole Darkly (Kurt Philip Behm)
I love the reverence to the door key hold that opens briefly and the mind...
December 4th, 2016 18:35 - Casting Call (LIGHT WARRIOR)
With Nag Champa burning in the background in this poem you make the test...
December 4th, 2016 18:17 - A day shopping...or DIY (P.H.Rose)
I loved going shopping with my wife and helping her choose colors and...
December 4th, 2016 17:55 - I am the Phoenix (Elegant_Style)
I love the style and the message.
December 4th, 2016 17:47 - LAMENT FOR USS POINT REYES ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love those old ships with beautiful architecture. Thanks.
December 2nd, 2016 13:59 - Toxicity (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Powerful piece. Best read out loud to appreciate the meter and rhyme. Can...
December 1st, 2016 23:22 - BETRAYAL (Michael Edwards)
Seems to be part of a larger story. I like the imagery. Also you are quite...
December 1st, 2016 22:46 - Nothing Is What it Seems (Ternic73)
Actually it does make sense. The mind wanders. One minute we are thinking...
December 1st, 2016 22:41 - Weakest Hearts of Men (Stephanie Showers)
This could be mankind or more likely one particular guy letting the world...
December 1st, 2016 22:21 - Rhythm (Yorke)
This is very special poetry and a tribute to (if I\'m understanding the...
December 1st, 2016 22:15 - There\'s Nothing In My Poem (WriteBeLight)
That\'s a lot about nothing. Love it. One I remember from Porky and Bess--...
December 1st, 2016 21:59 - tearing me apart (Kitkat231997)
You are hurting and screaming for help. Writing is cathartic. Sending...
December 1st, 2016 21:50 - Lightning From The Heavens (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Pharaoh, Wow! This is a side of you that lay hidden. This piece is so...
December 1st, 2016 21:45 - Sunday in the garden (Willyweed)
It is such fun to read and tell stories to entertain (and instruct) our...
December 1st, 2016 16:48 - The Unwanted (Tony36)
Tony, this is lovely.
December 1st, 2016 16:43 - Blessed To Begin (Kurt Philip Behm)
There are so many ways in which we are tested throughout our lives to...
December 1st, 2016 16:41 - The Hatred of the Lord (Liam Lawless)
We are all human and therefore incapable of understanding God but we do...
December 1st, 2016 16:30 - To Save Today (Kurt Philip Behm)
How thoughtful.
November 29th, 2016 19:43 - Nurses--An Acrostic (Christina8)
Nice recognition to an under appreciated profession.
November 29th, 2016 19:42 - Dead man\'s hand (Reivax Camlost)
Just how do we all deal with death? The scythe eventually catches us all....
November 29th, 2016 19:38 - And We Can Dance In The Heavens. (Kevin browne)
Live life with heart. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2016 19:33 - Spider Web (The 2 A.M Writer)
The mind is a fascinating place to explore.
November 29th, 2016 19:27 - Walking Through The Woods (Tony36)
Beautifully and poetically written. Sorry for your loss. The death of a...
November 29th, 2016 19:23 - Command (Liam Lawless)
Nicely done.
November 29th, 2016 19:18 - Perpetual Motion (Yorke)
My wife and I visited the Natchez Military Cemetery this time of year last...
November 29th, 2016 19:16 - The Empath (Jennas)
Having compassion and listening although at times not without suffering a...
November 29th, 2016 19:08 - The scars within (Daniel)
This poem calls for a look within and an understanding of the chaos in our...
November 29th, 2016 18:32 - School. (TyKy)
No interest in art or music, yet your words and rhythm are extremely...
November 29th, 2016 18:25 - Framework (Stephanie Showers)
Love? Or goodbye? Or perhaps setting limits as to what is permisible and...
November 29th, 2016 18:18 - Vitality (Augustus)
Thanks for the comments and interest. I have been pleasantly surprised to...
November 29th, 2016 18:14 - THE LIFE OF P I E ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh my, how culinary you are today with your pie. Miss my mom\'s pecan...
November 29th, 2016 17:57 - understanding (Avigail)
Very understanding. What a lovely way to make this concept clearer, to...
November 29th, 2016 17:51 - Arm Wrestle (WriteBeLight)
Sometimes a kick in the seat works better.i love your poetry about the...
November 29th, 2016 13:32 - Snap, Crackle and Pop (WriteBeLight)
Got a few chuckles out of me.
November 28th, 2016 15:18 - Poisoned (The 2 A.M Writer)
Why people stay in these relationships defies reason. (Oh beat me, hurt...
November 28th, 2016 15:14 - Savvy Wanted (WriteBeLight)
I had the naive notion that when I finished school that the learning...
November 28th, 2016 15:06 - Love is not blind (Prose Poem ) (Notapoet)
I like the alliteration, sweetness , vivid mental imagery and theme.
November 28th, 2016 14:59
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