Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Displaced. (0ddity)
Sometimes you just can\'t shake that sinking feeling. Well done. Hugs.
December 20th, 2016 16:03 - Time ticks (SilentLaugh)
Some say heaven is open to all, but I understand the sentiment, some sins...
December 20th, 2016 16:00 - Lunacy\'s Bliss (Kurt Philip Behm)
You never know when mentally ill will cause chaos. Nice.
December 20th, 2016 15:57 - Going, Going, Gone (SabreLi)
It has got to be difficult to struggle with \"sanity\" as defined by...
December 20th, 2016 15:54 - Nova (Abpoet18)
My sense of this is man\'s struggle with the forces of Satan or perhaps...
December 20th, 2016 15:48 - Addams family Christmas (Willyweed)
Delightful!
December 20th, 2016 15:41 - BABIES & AMERICANS ON CYGNUS 3 ~ Part 4 ~ Science Faction (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Now if we could just breed the war gene out of the human. Well done.
December 20th, 2016 15:35 - EXPLORATION OF PLANET CYGNUS 3 ~ PART 3 ~ SCIENCE FACTION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Will you have chips to go with the chips? Nicely done.
December 20th, 2016 15:32 - JOURNEY TO CYGNUS 3 ~ PART 1 ~ SCIENCE FACTION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sorry I arrived late. I had received the message \"Houston, we have a...
December 20th, 2016 15:30 - Wake up (Quemis)
Soon these soulless robots may take our jobs. Nicely done.
December 20th, 2016 15:11 - Optimism and Pessimism Meet for Lunch (WriteBeLight)
Such fun. Very creative.
December 20th, 2016 15:09 - Final Goodbye (Notapoet)
As an old guy with 4th stage cancer I am really touched by this. Very well...
December 20th, 2016 10:01 - #171- The One (Mads)
Love it! Especially \" the one I\'m not the same with\".
December 20th, 2016 09:58 - La Pérdida del Hijo / The Loss of a Child (Augustus)
December 19th, 2016 21:46 - Driven (Quemis)
I gather from the speaker that the mind and body are racing but it is all...
December 19th, 2016 21:41 - First new day... (P.H.Rose)
Nice short story in a poem.
December 19th, 2016 21:31 - Fallen (SabreLi)
Depicts the suffering of an addict very well. Nice rhyme.
December 19th, 2016 21:25 - Heavenly Father (Tony36)
Great end of year message.
December 19th, 2016 21:23 - A poet\'s tree (Aa Harvey)
I often think about trees that have been around since the time of Christ....
December 19th, 2016 21:21 - All Movement Stopped (Kurt Philip Behm)
Perhaps with maturity old exciting ideas loose interest. That chapter is...
December 19th, 2016 21:19 - Progression of Time. (Myinnervoice)
I see the beast as an inner demon that goes wherever we go. I like the run...
December 19th, 2016 21:13 - I\'d love to spend a christmas with you (Reivax Camlost)
Nice message to a sweetheart.
December 19th, 2016 21:05 - What Is Beauty? (Seeker)
I have felt guilty for having placed too much emphasis on beauty. Like you...
December 19th, 2016 21:02 - Branded (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Talons to the altar! Love it. From your intro this is more like closing...
December 19th, 2016 20:55 - Father Christmas Is Coming For his Whiskey And Rye. (Kevin browne)
I\'ll drink to that.
December 19th, 2016 20:46 - Its like deja vu. (Efthimios William Cornelius)
Nicely done.
December 18th, 2016 16:56 - boost-good-mood (Avigail)
O.K. I\'ll hug myself and grow.
December 18th, 2016 15:46 - Time (SharonMoemise)
God, this is good. Love it. Profound ways of thinking about time.
December 18th, 2016 13:25 - Leap Of Faith (Notapoet)
Lovely. Shakespearean!
December 18th, 2016 13:21 - Something For Pyotr (Kurt Philip Behm)
Such a lovely tribute. Exquisite!
December 18th, 2016 12:30 - Halt (LIGHT WARRIOR)
This seems a change, a sadness, a vulnerability in the warrior I\'ve come...
December 18th, 2016 12:26 - He\'s A Good Egg (WriteBeLight)
Delightfully clever. This is sooooo
Greeeeeeaaaaat!
December 18th, 2016 12:18 - My wife... (P.H.Rose)
\"The perfect morning rose\". How lovely. However, be careful with the...
December 18th, 2016 12:14 - COLONIZATION OF PLANET CYGNUS 3 ~ PART 2 ~ SCIENCE FACTION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like it all except that reproduction was forbidden in flight. That had...
December 18th, 2016 12:10 - The lady in the trees (Daniel)
What a neat story so cleverly presented.
December 18th, 2016 11:53 - Courting Agony (Myinnervoice)
One way out of the struggle is to not try or sabotage your work and that...
December 17th, 2016 01:50 - Hate (Augustus)
Another night owl. I think I know where you are coming from. I am so...
December 17th, 2016 01:40 - Untitled II (Azura Nightsong)
This reminds me of when at times my own mind has something that is unclear...
December 17th, 2016 01:33 - Acid Rain (SabreLi)
Powerful and also seductive as the reader is anxious for the next line.
December 16th, 2016 18:06 - A Story in The Winter... Part 1 (Elegant_Style)
Waiting in anticipation
December 16th, 2016 18:02 - Chasing rainbows (Aa Harvey)
Sad. Hopeless. Thanks for sharing.
December 16th, 2016 17:55 - No Longer Served (Kurt Philip Behm)
Would that time be abundant. Cheers.
December 16th, 2016 17:49 - 16 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
Like the thought, rhyme and brevity.
December 16th, 2016 17:45 - Then there was silence... (Camille)
Like the imagery.
December 16th, 2016 17:41 - I Know Not (XxRaavenSairasxX)
I like the way this reads in an effortless way. The contradictions. Love...
December 16th, 2016 16:02 - The who (Isituorme)
Painted a clear picture with emotion.
December 16th, 2016 15:48 - Love Gets Under Your Skin (Notapoet)
I love this awakening.
December 16th, 2016 15:33 - #166- Just Kids (Mads)
Helps to write about it I bet. Hugs.
December 16th, 2016 15:29 - Smile (Christina8)
\"Put on a happy face\". Great advice.
Neat!
December 16th, 2016 15:24 - Enjoy Life\'s Journey (Tony36)
Great message.
December 16th, 2016 15:19 - Symbols & Skies (Dominicpalmer)
I just love this. It is so refreshing. All I believe can relate to that...
December 16th, 2016 15:16 - The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer (Quemis)
I remember when systems were to enter the year 2000 computers all over the...
December 16th, 2016 15:09 - Part of the Heart of a Family (WriteBeLight)
Our two dogs just got their Christmas Collars, a tradition my wife...
December 16th, 2016 14:59 - Melting. (Zwitterion)
Perhaps the beginning and end of a relationship. Nicely done.
December 16th, 2016 14:55 - FOUR MEN IN A BOAT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice story.
December 16th, 2016 13:09 - Power to change... (P.H.Rose)
Been there. Enjoyed.
December 16th, 2016 13:06 - No angels here (Daniel)
That has always been a bitter pill to swallow. We can always come up with...
December 16th, 2016 13:05 - 14 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
If only peace were within our grasp.
Neat.
December 14th, 2016 18:15 - 14 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
If only peace were within our grasp.
Neat.
December 14th, 2016 18:15 - Explorers (Quemis)
Help I got lost in the labyrinth.
Nicely done.
December 14th, 2016 18:12 - Looking forward to Christmas (Christina8)
I miss shopping for kids, malls, choir groups in the halls. Now I sit at...
December 14th, 2016 18:08 - Lost cause (SilentLaugh)
Cool.
December 14th, 2016 18:05 - Don\'t Laugh (Tony36)
Nicely done.
December 14th, 2016 18:04 - Essential (Aa Harvey)
Wow!
December 14th, 2016 18:02 - Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves (WriteBeLight)
we as a people cannot be trusted and as we gradually turn our freedoms...
December 14th, 2016 18:00 - Weight (SheWasTheSun)
A tribute to womankind.
December 14th, 2016 17:03 - Turning away (Stephanie Showers)
Yes, the pursuit of truth and beauty.
December 14th, 2016 01:01 - He Who Writes (Kebiin)
I guess we\'ll be writers and not fighters. Nice.
December 14th, 2016 00:59 - When The Earth Is Tarmac And Car Parking Spaces. (Kevin browne)
I get your point but I see the earth as a huge living thing. Just as our...
December 14th, 2016 00:52 - Fever Steams (Quemis)
They do spoil everything. You may be better about spotting them than I...
December 14th, 2016 00:06 - Christmas surprise (Christina8)
When you think about it, the generosity at this time of the year even more...
December 13th, 2016 19:52 - The first 17 years on the 13th...... (P.H.Rose)
Nicely done. Very interesting story.
December 13th, 2016 19:48 - My Son (Daniel)
Oh wow!
December 13th, 2016 19:01 - Let me Go (A Parody of \"Let it Go\") (Elegant_Style)
Nice parody. I was not that familiar with Frozen. Powerful song.
December 11th, 2016 00:11 - Mercy is my one lifeline (Mercy is a friend of mine) (Reivax Camlost)
Mercy comes in many shades. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:54 - How Firm a Foundation (Severus Alexander)
Solid!
December 10th, 2016 23:50 - Last Shot Unheard (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very sweet.
December 10th, 2016 23:48 - Chill Baby (Abpoet18)
Thank you for your kind thoughts about those with mental illness.
December 10th, 2016 23:46 - Children (Avigail)
Save the children from dogmatics and helicopter parents.
December 10th, 2016 23:42 - Empty voice (Aa Harvey)
Well said. With a pen in your hand I doubt this will last long. (Consider...
December 10th, 2016 23:39 - Cough and Cold (WriteBeLight)
P.S. That would make a great TV public service ad.
December 10th, 2016 23:26 - Cough and Cold (WriteBeLight)
One of my pet peeves is snot nose rug rats in the grocery touching all of...
December 10th, 2016 23:25 - Whiskey and wine (Tony36)
You gotta put this one to music.
December 10th, 2016 23:22 - Henry Smithfield. The fisherman (P.H.Rose)
We have the shrimp boats in Louisiana. Nicely done. PS check first word.
December 10th, 2016 23:18 - C H R I S T M A S C R A C K E R S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Neat. Would love to experience.
December 10th, 2016 23:10 - THE REMOTE! (Daniel)
Miss my kids. They reset all the digital clocks after the electricity goes...
December 10th, 2016 23:06 - Consuming Fire (Tony36)
Forging anew. Neat.
December 10th, 2016 00:16 - Unheard (Stephanie Showers)
Wow!
December 10th, 2016 00:15 - By Morning You Were Gone (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely.
December 10th, 2016 00:13 - CUDDLY TOYS ~ PERFECT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Best kind of toys. Thanks.
December 10th, 2016 00:05 - 9 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
I liked the mental imagery.
December 10th, 2016 00:03 - Criticism (Avigail)
Hard to do but worth the effort. Well done.
December 10th, 2016 00:01 - A letter to heaven (Christina8)
Touching. Brought tears to my eyes. Sorry for your loss.
December 9th, 2016 23:57 - Edited for Clarity (Izzi Lynn)
Oh, don\'t get me started on the media. You do have a point. I like in...
December 9th, 2016 23:49 - A Knock On the Door (Ternic73)
This is a great message. Nicely done. Misspelled last word.
December 9th, 2016 23:46 - Mine (Nicolerobinson)
I was surprised when I was dating 35 years ago, the woman I dated came to...
December 9th, 2016 12:56 - Old man in a modern world (Daniel)
It is different and not the same. Those who are younger will not...
December 9th, 2016 12:51 - As I Lay (SharonMoemise)
Such a lovely poem. Wow!
December 9th, 2016 12:47 - Start Over (Stephanie Showers)
Hope it is working for you. Nicely done. Hugs.
December 8th, 2016 17:28 - ᴀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ 📖 (Bella cortez)
And furthermore good riddance! Nicely done. P.S. I don\'t think this...
December 8th, 2016 17:21
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