Comments on community poems by Augustus
- WRITTEN LOVE ❤ (Illia)
Loving message. I question if the recepient will cry. It presupposes the...
December 30th, 2016 18:50 - Wings (Tony36)
Now you got me in the cooking mood. Nice.
December 30th, 2016 18:41 - And Out Falls Another Year. (Kevin browne)
Yes we need to be generous of spirit every day. Nicely done.
December 30th, 2016 18:13 - toy pony (Willyweed)
Precious. Creative.
December 30th, 2016 12:21 - DOWN INNIT STREET (Michael Edwards)
That is so typical of how guys talk. Some how there is meaningful...
December 30th, 2016 12:18 - Wheels Up (WriteBeLight)
Little birds leave the nest. Warm, touching.
December 30th, 2016 12:13 - Dying star (Aa Harvey)
How neat. Great thoughts.
December 30th, 2016 12:11 - THE LIFE OF PIE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
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December 30th, 2016 12:04 - UNTITLED (DD.)
Letting go of dreams is pure agony. It rips you apart. Nicely done. Hugs.
December 28th, 2016 22:38 - Pinnacle (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I like the line-- living in a state of mind that lacks rhythm. At first I...
December 28th, 2016 22:33 - Cross of my Savior (Tony36)
Inspirational Tony. Very nice.
December 28th, 2016 22:17 - Tree.......life (P.H.Rose)
I believe at one time all of Europe was a forest. I like the style of the...
December 28th, 2016 21:56 - All Lives Matter (Notapoet)
I just heard today on the news a college professor calling for genocide of...
December 28th, 2016 21:53 - the secret club in the park (Avigail)
This is less clinical, more personal and less abstract. I can form a...
December 28th, 2016 21:44 - the secret club in the park (Avigail)
December 28th, 2016 21:39 - STANDING FIRM, HOLDING HANDS. (Illia)
What a lovely way to open up and be totally vulnerable in mind and body to...
December 28th, 2016 12:58 - the secret club in the park (Avigail)
This is a change for you. I like the idea. I like enjoying the moment...
December 28th, 2016 12:47 - 2 0 1 7 H A P P Y N E W Y E A R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love your resolutions.
December 28th, 2016 09:27 - In the Morning (Willyweed)
Living in the moment is the perfect way to live. Love it!
December 28th, 2016 09:23 - MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING (Michael Edwards)
Teamwork. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2016 09:21 - JR. High Dance (Tony36)
Tells a nice short story.
December 28th, 2016 00:11 - the beauty and the light (Willyweed)
Truly beautiful.
December 28th, 2016 00:08 - Two dozen roses (Christina8)
You sound truly appreciative.
December 28th, 2016 00:05 - 27 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
Beautifully written.
December 28th, 2016 00:03 - As If (Kitkat231997)
Doubt is difficult. Nice.
December 28th, 2016 00:00 - Birthday (AnxiousMane)
That is very sad. Well said.
December 27th, 2016 23:58 - Fear.... (P.H.Rose)
Flashbacks are tough. Nicely done.
December 27th, 2016 23:55 - It Is Within Reach (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I need that about now. Thanks for sharing.
December 27th, 2016 23:53 - Road Flare (The 2 A.M Writer)
You really sound like you are trying desperately to help. Vivid...
December 27th, 2016 23:49 - Romanticizing Sadness (Gencruz)
Sometimes I have imagined sadness as a cloak that settles around your...
December 27th, 2016 12:40 - Hold You (Abpoet18)
Nicely done. Touching. I like the way it was written.
December 27th, 2016 12:37 - Harmony (Avigail)
The last 2 lines describe me to a T. I love you thoughts.
December 27th, 2016 12:33 - A TROUBLED MAN (Michael Edwards)
Truly troubled. So nicely written. I love the word chancel. I was not...
December 27th, 2016 12:30 - Side Seat Drivers (WriteBeLight)
Wuff. Wuff. Woof. Arf. Arf! Bau! Bau!
December 27th, 2016 12:23 - I don\'t care (Aa Harvey)
Hard to understand why some men don\'t take fatherhood seriously. His...
December 27th, 2016 12:18 - SHOULD YOU EVER GO BACK ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The poem is nicely done in rhyme, meter and in the emotions it conjures up...
December 27th, 2016 11:48 - The beauty at our gate (Daniel)
I sense that this poem has 2 parts, one for the non-believer and another...
December 27th, 2016 11:27 - Christmas Eve (Reivax Camlost)
Very,very nice. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 23:15 - I Slowly Drown (Jmcg)
Great word play with a story. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 23:12 - Median (LIGHT WARRIOR)
You just have your heart spilled out all over the page.----- Glomming was...
December 24th, 2016 23:06 - Christmas Spirit (WriteBeLight)
Such fun. I bet you light up the room, even stuffy library rooms. Merry...
December 24th, 2016 22:58 - My Best Friend (Gelyn)
Mamá will be happy to,receive this. Hugs. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 22:55 - YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL WHEN YOU SMILE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like what you said in the intro. Women are indeed beautiful, every...
December 24th, 2016 22:51 - Our protectors from the storm (Aa Harvey)
Thank you for remembering our heroes in this season. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 22:45 - Good Things (Brittany)
Nice. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 22:43 - Drawers Of My Memory (Kurt Philip Behm)
Neat place to store memories. Like the idea. Merry Xhristmas
December 24th, 2016 22:42 - Girl, What A Masterpiece You Are (Brooklyn6timesplus)
The girl that gets this is lucky.
December 24th, 2016 20:51 - ~rose\'s thorn~ (Abpoet18)
Tough to take it like a man. I\'ve been such a cry baby. Nice.
December 24th, 2016 20:49 - blue traveler (Willyweed)
The too much to let go is the hard part when you are Scrooge. Heh, heh....
December 24th, 2016 20:44 - Do your pave your path, or do you let the path lead you? (Avigail)
I don\'t know how you keep coming up with these great lessons of life....
December 24th, 2016 20:35 - Days Of Torment Past (SabreLi)
I love the comparison with the silver screen. Flashbacks can be difficult....
December 24th, 2016 20:32 - Love For Sale (Refurbished) (Notapoet)
I did not read the note \"humor\" until after I read it. So glad you added...
December 24th, 2016 20:28 - Merry Christmas (Daniel)
Merry. Christmas to you too.
December 24th, 2016 19:13 - Spin (Stephanie Showers)
Sounds like a real fight. Enjoyed.
December 23rd, 2016 17:49 - the cradle (Willyweed)
Incredible!
December 23rd, 2016 17:45 - Burn Eternal (SabreLi)
I like this. Thermal memories. Neat.
December 23rd, 2016 17:40 - A Christmas Sabbath (P.H.Rose)
Christmas on a Sunday. Neat. Thanks and merry Christmas to you too.
December 23rd, 2016 17:05 - The First Step Is the Hardest (Notapoet)
Made me tear up. Beautiful.
December 23rd, 2016 17:02 - God (Tony36)
Comforting Tony. I\'ve been a real bad boy.
December 23rd, 2016 17:00 - life (Avigail)
So many on the planet unaware. This needs to be in our schools. Nicely...
December 23rd, 2016 12:29 - Bleeding heart (Aa Harvey)
I gather that some love is better than none at all and those who have true...
December 23rd, 2016 12:23 - The F Bomb (WriteBeLight)
P.S. With the warning at the beginning of the poem there was a tension...
December 23rd, 2016 12:08 - The F Bomb (WriteBeLight)
Clever, funny, enjoyable.
December 23rd, 2016 12:04 - C H R I S T M A S T R E E S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Did not know about the Norwegian connection. Great tradition. Cheers.
December 23rd, 2016 11:59 - The one night stand (Daniel)
You see and bring beauty to something often thought of as immoral, dirty...
December 23rd, 2016 11:55 - Sunflower Seeds (The 2 A.M Writer)
You are one bad hombre. I probably would not want to mess with you....
December 23rd, 2016 00:38 - White Christmas (Reivax Camlost)
All alone for Christmas. Nicely done. Hugs.
December 22nd, 2016 23:41 - Debridement (Yorke)
Interesting enigmatic poem. \"Where You end i begin\", the machine like...
December 22nd, 2016 23:36 - Wind And Tide (SabreLi)
The photo of the enormous waves is the perfect backdrop for this poem of...
December 22nd, 2016 23:04 - Short Stories (Shahla Latifi)
I can\'t imagine a woman being abused in that culture. It would seem...
December 22nd, 2016 22:58 - crusade. (Aals)
A youth crusade. A story of survival. Nicely done.
December 22nd, 2016 22:48 - Family (Willyweed)
There\'s nothing like love in a family. Nicely done.
December 22nd, 2016 22:36 - Christmas time (Tony36)
A fun poem for a grand time.
December 22nd, 2016 22:15 - At The End Of My Rope (Notapoet)
Such power in brevity. Love it.
December 22nd, 2016 22:12 - #46- She Deserves Better (Mads)
Unfortunately some women just don\'t see a way out. Some even believe the...
December 22nd, 2016 22:10 - Rainbow in a hurricane (Aa Harvey)
One line I don\'t understand---I could love you the way I loved...
December 22nd, 2016 22:05 - Whack Off (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Betrayal sucks.
December 22nd, 2016 21:54 - STOW ~ ON ~ THE ~ WOLD ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It does sound like a perfect place. I remember a Germán laughing at me...
December 22nd, 2016 21:46 - To the Angel Kat and All (WriteBeLight)
How lovely and thoughtful enjoyed.
December 22nd, 2016 17:02 - Yourself ???? (P.H.Rose)
Stone man here. It\'s all about me. Just teasing. Nice way to do an...
December 22nd, 2016 17:00 - Memories of last night (Daniel)
Imprisoned by your shame perhaps. Nicely done.
December 22nd, 2016 16:03 - Pickle parade (Elsiewarrenswords)
Getting it off your chest. Hugs.
December 21st, 2016 16:03 - Whispers of Perfection (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Your life is so rich and your energy so endless I did not figure \"wee...
December 21st, 2016 15:58 - Law Of Probability (WriteBeLight)
Some of my pet peeves. But I know better to complain. I just say I love...
December 21st, 2016 15:50 - #118- Living Without Reason (Mads)
I\'d be proud of it too, but I hope you are not living it. Hugs.
December 21st, 2016 15:43 - Tomorrow\'s Dream (Kurt Philip Behm)
Damn, and I was about to trade in some stocks! Nicely done.
December 21st, 2016 15:38 - MY BIRTHDAY\'S TOO NEAR CHRISTMAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I was going to,offer condolences but then saw it was a friend. Great idea...
December 21st, 2016 15:37 - Exponential (Quemis)
Fascinating world.
December 21st, 2016 15:33 - cold water flat (Willyweed)
Very nice. (I was a bit confused in the beginning as to who \"was freezing...
December 21st, 2016 15:06 - Sister (Tony36)
Tony, you have a gift to be able to put yourself in another\'s shoes and...
December 21st, 2016 14:47 - multi levels of writing (Avigail)
One can fill the day thinking about all of the thoughts and emotions this...
December 21st, 2016 14:43 - Mama (Gelyn)
Very nice.
December 21st, 2016 14:39 - Grief (Myinnervoice)
I love the way this reads. Sending positive thoughts
December 21st, 2016 14:38 - My friend... (P.H.Rose)
Great tribute to your wife. I bet there are lots of jealous ladies out...
December 21st, 2016 14:35 - How will you remember me (Daniel)
Today being a loving father and husband is terrific. Nicely done.
December 21st, 2016 14:32 - AGAIN (The big red chair)
Sort of an awakening. Nicely done.
December 20th, 2016 22:49 - Mistletoe (Moontigerntn)
I\'ll be right over. Just teasing. This is light and fun, perfect for,the...
December 20th, 2016 22:47 - 20 December 2016 (Severus Alexander)
That you may travel far and well my friend. Very nice.
December 20th, 2016 22:41 - The Impulse. (Myinnervoice)
The speaker is able to create like a god it seems. That is awesome. The...
December 20th, 2016 19:03 - Cry (Tony36)
Nice. Hugs.
December 20th, 2016 18:49
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