Comments on community poems by Daveyboyz

• IN A COMMON THEME (Michael Edwards) Great poem and sentiment, what takes generations to cultivate can be torn...
  April 22nd, 2018 15:00
• Onus of Living (Nicholas Browning) There\'s truth in this, well written.
  April 20th, 2018 05:58
• THE EMPTY BEACH (Michael Edwards) Nicely done. some nice alliterations.
  April 20th, 2018 02:14
• A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES (Michael Edwards) I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a...
  April 16th, 2018 09:23
• COME LET US ........ (Fay Slimm.) Polished poetry as always Fay.
  April 16th, 2018 09:12
• Riding Pegasus (Lorna) I like this one very much.
  April 16th, 2018 09:10
• Throne (Nicholas Browning) Nice words, well written but I can\'t find the meaning and I would like to...
  April 15th, 2018 04:08
• Calligraphy. (Goldfinch60) We\'ve all been there... I like calligraphy too but it takes me a while...
  April 15th, 2018 04:04
• TWO MORE EDELECTS (Michael Edwards) That first one sure is the truth... you seem to know about horticulture,...
  April 15th, 2018 01:37
• AN ARTISTS EYE (Michael Edwards) Good job Michael, both in the poetry and the image.
  April 14th, 2018 08:45
• Retribution. (Goldfinch60) When speakers are stopped from speaking and people are barred from...
  April 14th, 2018 06:47
• Tell (Nicholas Browning) First verse I thought it was going to be about logging... by the end I saw...
  April 13th, 2018 10:05
• The tale of Miss Adeline Carr or Opportunity lost (David.A-J) A well told tale.
  April 13th, 2018 09:59
• Nightshade (Noah) Wonderlust, is a good song too. The profundity that we are made of...
  April 13th, 2018 03:08
• Serenity (Sylviasearcher) Thought provoking poem, I think most of us construct our own prison.
  April 13th, 2018 02:58
• UNWINESQUE (Michael Edwards) I should be too young to know him but I am familiar... one line he used to...
  April 13th, 2018 02:46
• In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60) I have seen people taken by dementia, and few can accept it as serenely as...
  April 13th, 2018 02:43
• love (Blast219) True it can be, though there are many kinds of love. Welcome to the site...
  April 12th, 2018 06:31
• Divided (Redneckwriter) Life can be a tragedy, all you can do is your best... try to struggle...
  April 12th, 2018 04:36
• Clouds in My Life. (Goldfinch60) Very nice, we must always remember they pass.
  April 12th, 2018 04:17
• Transcendence (Daveyboyz) Many drugs are dangerous, and pychedelics are no exception but they are...
  April 12th, 2018 04:14
• ignoble harness gummed facebook ethics: (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Floccinaucinihilipilification of your verbosity would be erroneous. A...
  April 12th, 2018 04:01
• ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.) Well described and a more than a couple astoundingly assembled lines.
  April 12th, 2018 03:58
• ALL MY OWN (Michael Edwards) Mind blowing, Words flowing, Great job.
  April 12th, 2018 02:06
• Calliope Asks. (Goldfinch60) I only ever remember Clio, I must bone up on my classical Greek stuff they...
  April 11th, 2018 15:55
• Rejoin the Dance (Sylviasearcher) The key is to be in the moment, nice work Sylvia.
  April 11th, 2018 15:49
• Xenophobic (Daveyboyz) Thanks all.
  April 11th, 2018 13:56
• The One Percenters (Redneckwriter) The 1% are constantly changing, but tend to be old since they have had...
  April 10th, 2018 15:26
• With the rope around my neck (Lottierose) A grim topic, and the most common killer of young men currently. Life...
  April 10th, 2018 06:09
• LIMERICK No 52 (Michael Edwards) Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.
  April 10th, 2018 05:10
• I died again today (Sylviasearcher) Very thought provoking poetry.
  April 10th, 2018 03:52
• WRITER\'S BLOCK (Lasergraph) If it brought about this poem it was worth it in the end.
  April 9th, 2018 08:46
• Beautiful Child (DesertWords) Astute words, nicely written.
  April 9th, 2018 08:44
• Bleached Blonde Bombshell Babe (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Lol, some women get this a lot... many men are unable to resist their...
  April 9th, 2018 05:53
• The Laughing Dormouse (Lorna) What a cute picture, and charming prose.
  April 9th, 2018 05:47
• An Apology (Sylviasearcher) What a great poem, and once we realise what pathetic and flawed creatures...
  April 9th, 2018 05:45
• SUNDAY WAYS. (Fay Slimm.) I love the language, the exuberance of your verbosity is breathtaking and...
  April 9th, 2018 05:42
• AN ESSENCE (Michael Edwards) Concise, Poem device, will suffice, very nice.
  April 9th, 2018 01:18
• Multi Tasking (Grange_m) Hear, hear! Better to do one thing well than many badly. This poem made...
  April 8th, 2018 04:52
• A Whisper From Heaven (Birddie Jane) Great poem, my parents are in good health but I am sure this relates to a...
  April 8th, 2018 04:50
• WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards) Nice, and thanks for explaining the structure.
  April 8th, 2018 00:49
• SALT IN HER WOUNDS (Bibbeck) Short, sweet and nicely said.
  April 8th, 2018 00:45
• Subway Safehouse (MaddieJ) I like it, the first half I am thinking of the commute and then the line...
  April 7th, 2018 15:26
• Just you (Patricia LaFazia) I\'ve been there before and its hard to come back from, thanks for...
  April 7th, 2018 15:23
• Sun (Mol) Very melancholic, not what I was expecting for the subject matter as we...
  April 7th, 2018 07:46
• Cat Days (Noveyre) Kittens asleep on knees really is the stuff of poetry, I like your folded...
  April 7th, 2018 05:26
• FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.) Evocative of times gone by, a master of craft taking an apprentice built...
  April 7th, 2018 03:54
• WITH RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards) Some vivid imagery there, I could see rough seas, though I am not sure I...
  April 7th, 2018 03:39
• The Echo and the Mirror (FatMorton) Thought provoking and tragic.
  April 6th, 2018 10:18
• First (Karoline) Very nice.
  April 6th, 2018 10:14
• Strength (Redneckwriter) Meaning and responsibility can offset the heaviest burdens... thought...
  April 6th, 2018 06:13
• Talking Therapy (Sylviasearcher) Talking is thinking, and as humans we talk order into the world. I guess...
  April 6th, 2018 03:36