Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Prolonged offal bout courtesy constipation... redux revisited (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Raw, gritty, strong, tortuous and dark this poem is what could be called a...
July 9th, 2025 14:45 - she invites (Thoughtless)
Quite the senryu my friend. Very nicely done
July 9th, 2025 12:53 - Swimming In Gasoline (Anthony Hanible)
Don\'t mention that had it happen to me. Not a pleasant experience. A poem...
July 9th, 2025 12:52 - Towering Above (Kurt Philip Behm)
Unfortunately true this poem casts doubts on what we vote and fight for....
July 9th, 2025 12:48 - Pink and Grey Hearts (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
A raw recognition of what one is and what others expect. A resignation of...
July 9th, 2025 12:46 - Choice (รฌfรจ)
A deep dive into questions of modernization, tradition, culture and...
July 9th, 2025 12:43 - Remember Forever (Insanibean)
Archetypes deeply imbedded reverberate in this poem. Very nicely done
July 9th, 2025 12:38 - We Rise Like Sunshine (DLewis88)
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so...
July 9th, 2025 09:47 - The waves of death (The ScarletBard)
A poem well crafted with great rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and...
July 9th, 2025 09:44 - I am living la vida loca (Poetaldo)
A poem of faith and looking to overcome life\'s difficulties
July 9th, 2025 09:36 - Mum\'s Replacement Knee (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
An image of rehabilitation with good signs of recuperation. A hopeful poem...
July 9th, 2025 09:35 - Mercy of Mind (RSM0812)
Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a...
July 9th, 2025 09:33 - Between the Lines (Tristan Robert Lange)
Too true at least so it was with Eugene Bullard the black swallow of...
July 9th, 2025 09:29 - nev (Arqios)
A fave for the respect. Love the tribute. I had searched far and wide and...
July 9th, 2025 09:22 - Let the bells of peace sound (Tony36)
A most creative picture painted in words literally. A great message that I...
July 9th, 2025 09:18 - Heart of Mine (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Sad yet wistful this poem speaks of memories in a haunting way. Nicely...
July 9th, 2025 05:20 - robin rap (Jim56)
Another great nature verse that leaves one upbeat for the day.
July 9th, 2025 05:18 - Licorice (ForeverJesus7)
A light hearted and fun read that leaves a sweet taste. Well done
July 9th, 2025 04:19 - REALIST NOT A ROYALIST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
With good rhyme this poem in telling its story asks the question of why we...
July 9th, 2025 04:17 - Sorrow of the kind (Poems_From_Emotions)
I like this poem and the message it sends. It is nicely written with rhyme...
July 9th, 2025 04:14 - Through the eyes of a child (Eleisha)
Childhood memories brought back by this poem that tells of a child\'s...
July 9th, 2025 04:12 - Trapped in pain (Nicole Pritchard)
Nice rhyme in a sad story. Well written it bleeds out on the page. Well...
July 9th, 2025 04:10 - Invisible Bleeding (Vanna)
This poem speaks with a familiar voice and the metaphor fits. Emotional...
July 9th, 2025 04:08 - Weaponized Empathy (Yael Garcia)
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of addiction and abuse and its...
July 9th, 2025 04:06 - Meanwhile (Orchidee)
Pork pies Orchi? You should know that pork is hard to digest. Another fun...
July 9th, 2025 03:58 - Accept Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Good observation and advice Andy.
July 9th, 2025 03:55 - Beautifully Broken (BlessedbyGod)
A wonderful poem of faith and hope. Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 20:03 - What\'s in a Name? (MendedFences27)
A great story and double meanings in words make it all the better.
July 8th, 2025 20:01 - Bend it like Tristan (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read that is clever in its word play. Very nice
July 8th, 2025 18:56 - Song of the Temptress by Leonid Derbeneff (Ksey_Gan)
This well could be a song. Nicely written
July 8th, 2025 17:50 - I Want so badly to live (Poetaldo)
Good write poetaldo
July 8th, 2025 17:48 - Wasting Your Time in Hell (Cedrick)
Admonitions that this person does not belong in the place they are...
July 8th, 2025 15:42 - The Feast That Starves (TheInnerLens)
This sounds like the memories of an abused and genocided people using...
July 8th, 2025 15:40 - Born A Valentine (Xalvazora)
A poem of one in search of romance nicely written
July 8th, 2025 15:37 - A sailing ship in a deserted land (Arial)
A write about who one is and the personal nature of that Nicely done
July 8th, 2025 13:57 - My shift (Meikie Kodisang)
A wonderful personal meaning behind the words is what poetry is all about....
July 8th, 2025 13:54 - Forever Been (Teddy.15)
Tinkerbell always one of my favorites as a kid I think I had a crush on...
July 8th, 2025 13:42 - Orchid (Amethyste)
Indeed it is and so is the poem. Lovely
July 8th, 2025 13:07 - \"To Love Louder Than I\'m Heard\" (Antra.coree)
Heart felt this poem speaks of a difference from others of feeling more...
July 8th, 2025 13:07 - In time (Travis Bower)
A type of love poem that takes its time in a short write. Well stated and...
July 8th, 2025 13:04 - I understand, donโt I? (Micah Watson)
A poem of confusion as to blame, the game, how to be, how to see. A poem...
July 8th, 2025 13:02 - Heads Or Tails (Kurt Philip Behm)
The title made me think of the movie (No country for old men) Here the...
July 8th, 2025 12:54 - Vampyre (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
A seductive poem turned with a twist into a drink. Lovely
July 8th, 2025 12:52 - Heaven Waits (RSM0812)
This poem is well written with great rhyme and images and is a fave
July 8th, 2025 12:46 - I forgot...... (Orchidee)
Another fun read Orchi It\'s the little frustration that old age graces us...
July 8th, 2025 12:44 - poems & poets (Gray0328)
Well put Gray a beautiful poem of poems. A fave
July 8th, 2025 12:40 - Porch Poem (Catlover01)
A beautiful and peaceful image painted in this poem
July 8th, 2025 09:37 - AnalysisByYouChat-Volume 11-Sparrows--19Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan)
There have been several about sparrows being a generic term like poetry I...
July 8th, 2025 09:09 - The Party\'s...In...The...Trash (Cheeky Missy)
Daily life and now the party is over, but not really. I know that feeling...
July 8th, 2025 09:07 - I am proud (Tony36)
And well you should be a strong write that speaks out that we all should...
July 8th, 2025 09:02 - Some Kind of African Life (Neville)
Been worried about you, checked other sites and asked around but nothing...
July 8th, 2025 09:00 - It Shant Be In Vain (Tristan Robert Lange)
Searching for knowledge and leaving one\'s blood on the pages of poetry,...
July 8th, 2025 08:55 - The Ones Who Carry (NDOU ROLIVHUWA)
A poem of giving and passing down the line what we have to future...
July 8th, 2025 08:49 - Be the Light (Thomas W Case)
Poetry flows in all around us it is the putting it down in those little...
July 8th, 2025 08:46 - A magnet for tsuris (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Political to personal life flows in interconnected rows of verse. another...
July 8th, 2025 07:02 - Random Thoughts (MrNobody40)
Contact so important in human affairs whether mental, emotional or...
July 8th, 2025 06:57 - Aging (Maplespal)
I feel this poem not only in the mind but in the body and bones. Nicely...
July 8th, 2025 06:55 - dogs know (Jim56)
Dog man\'s best friend deserve all the praise that we can give. A...
July 8th, 2025 06:53 - vestibule (Arqios)
We are governed by habit and ritual more than thought we are a product of...
July 8th, 2025 04:53 - Get over it (Boot)
Coitus interruptus, or anejaculation which ever a lack of fulfilment. Need...
July 8th, 2025 04:38 - Demons and MK Ultra (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A frightening poem of mind control. In a world where everyone behaves like...
July 8th, 2025 04:34 - ANOTHER DAY OF WAR (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A poem for peace. I hear the frustration in this poem. The meter drives it...
July 8th, 2025 04:30 - Nobody but You (Job Welime)
Full of gracious and magnanimous compliments this poem oozes with charm...
July 8th, 2025 04:27 - Breath Hold (Mutley Ravishes)
Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and...
July 8th, 2025 04:20 - Hiruda\'s Bones (Mottakeenur Rehman)
This poem has introduced me to some new words and a new story. Very nicely...
July 8th, 2025 04:16 - Different Paths. (Goldfinch60)
The word lend needs to be redefined in the dictionary and a redundancy to...
July 8th, 2025 04:05 - Year (Frรคnz Mรผller)
Graphic, dark, vivid, with a sense of doom this poem is descriptive of one...
July 8th, 2025 03:46 - Union Members (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read that made me smile.
July 7th, 2025 20:18 - The Night Path by Mikhail Isakovsky (Ksey_Gan)
A poem from years past with standards long lost and with a great ending
July 7th, 2025 19:24 - My Fatal Love (Haleyalexis)
Beautiful words of need and dependence on one loved. A plea for unity....
July 7th, 2025 17:11 - BARE YOUR TEETH AT ME (Micah Watson)
Powerful and raw this write bites and gnaws at emotion and spits it out....
July 7th, 2025 17:07 - African (Palesa Motshwene)
A poem of heritage pride. Well spoken
July 7th, 2025 16:30 - Look at what you did (HollyGolightly)
Pay back time a poem of revenge. A fun read
July 7th, 2025 16:27 - Are you really happy --- really? (Hzugman)
Wisdom in four lines with rhyme nicely done
July 7th, 2025 16:25 - I know that I will suffer (Poetaldo)
Good write Poetaldo
July 7th, 2025 15:09 - A Demoralising World (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Loved the reference to the third eye and its absence in modern society. It...
July 7th, 2025 15:07 - The Sky Wasnโt Her (Vanna)
The analogies are great and it makes one wonder why. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 15:01 - \'Grains Of Salt\' (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another lovely write
July 7th, 2025 13:51 - Inbetween (Agantuk)
Cherish the moment carpe diem and wait for tomorrow to become today. A...
July 7th, 2025 12:17 - Polar Bear in the Fridge (Gray0328)
When you said bear in the fridge I thought of Klondike bars. A fun read...
July 7th, 2025 12:15 - I write and write (Amethyste)
A poem that asks that question of whether words can communicate what...
July 7th, 2025 12:12 - Escape from..... (Orchidee)
Lots of time to do thinking in Alcatraz, its closed but our good buddy...
July 7th, 2025 11:30 - Meows and Romantic Mistiness (Cheeky Missy)
Chic I have had several cats in the past and with mixed feelings. As to...
July 7th, 2025 11:24 - London Bombings 7/7/2005 (The ScarletBard)
A tribute to that event well written in first person adding more weight....
July 7th, 2025 11:22 - Enough (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
Love blinded and gratitude forgotten to another\'s seduction. A poem heart...
July 7th, 2025 11:19 - Sobibor (HolesInMyJeans)
Dark and tragic it speak tribute to the past and its horrors. Well written
July 7th, 2025 11:16 - Gap (Not)
A poem of the state of mind. Nicely written in verse it speaks to all of...
July 7th, 2025 11:13 - I (Isa kemmy)
A poem to give thought to. It is nicely written
July 7th, 2025 11:11 - We Are All Travelers (Ezekiel Olayemi)
A wonderful story that speaks to me in metaphor and takes its place in...
July 7th, 2025 11:09 - Disaster Relief (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
Dark it delves into another world that of Thanatos where Charon rows his...
July 7th, 2025 09:26 - Lost love (Meikie Kodisang)
So easy to accept what we long for and so difficult to accept their loss....
July 7th, 2025 09:21 - LE FEU (Krzis-Lorent)
You got me on this one Lorent
July 7th, 2025 08:41 - Dial A Tone. (Job Welime)
A sad call of loss and now coming to terms with it. A sense of melancholy...
July 7th, 2025 08:37 - Sometimesโฆ (Lore)
A poem of hope over clouds of despair for a brighter day. Most lovely
July 7th, 2025 08:34 - Killing Clowns (Tony36)
I liked this one Tony. You have to understand the images of McDonalds and...
July 7th, 2025 08:32 - AnalysisByPerplexityAI-Volume 22-Sparrows--19Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Another analysis on the sparrow and its behaviors. This in many ways is...
July 7th, 2025 08:29 - A Prayer Away (GenXer Sharon ๐๐)
A poem of faith and a proclamation for others to follow. Written with...
July 7th, 2025 08:27 - Tattered Tattoos (Tristan Robert Lange)
Marks that stay but fade, Scared over and dirtied, tattered most poetic...
July 7th, 2025 08:23 - Untitled (RSM0812)
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth...
July 7th, 2025 07:00 - mining days (Jim56)
A wonderful poem and tribute to brave men. My father was a miner and I...
July 7th, 2025 05:47
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