Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- What is the cost of a broken heart? (Anabasova)
The cost of a broken heart is an instalment plan of increasing interest...
August 13th, 2024 19:31 - My Dad (Angela)
A beautiful farewell and tribute. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:44 - How I write poems (Arcane-)
That seems to be the process succinctly put in a very brief manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2024 17:21 - Memories in waves (Kenny O\'Donnell)
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves...
August 13th, 2024 17:17 - LIFE OF LIE (Kwrites)
Questioning oneself in doubt. Short but well written. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:15 - Words & Silence (Young Fella)
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued...
August 13th, 2024 17:13 - True North (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful and not critically polemic but complimentary. And well deserved.
August 13th, 2024 15:31 - Have Faith (DLewis88)
A beautiful poem loved it
August 13th, 2024 15:22 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
A colorful past with a black and white view. A colorful write with a black...
August 13th, 2024 15:18 - A 19\'s Poem (Wh)
A message nicely sent and in poetic terms. Well done.
August 13th, 2024 13:50 - pain (Sheta)
A true and most wonderful message. Great lines my favorite is the last...
August 13th, 2024 13:49 - Best wishes (Sami mulaj)
If only more people felt this way the words would be uttered more...
August 13th, 2024 13:47 - Rough times (Hey!)
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can....
August 13th, 2024 12:10 - The Lizard in the Coffee Pot (Gray0328)
A fun write and a metaphor at the same time. We all seek warmth whether...
August 13th, 2024 10:53 - Broken Broom (AuburnScribbler)
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my...
August 13th, 2024 10:48 - ~> Halloween Demon BAT! (Thad Wilk)
Sounds like Shylock\'s bargain of a pound of flesh. Too pricy a cost for...
August 13th, 2024 10:18 - The Silent Giant (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Mountains majesty stands out in this magnificently worded wonder of beauty
August 13th, 2024 08:43 - It\'s Your Life (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Choices are the basis of life or at least the illusion of choices. This...
August 13th, 2024 08:39 - At the Beach (Tony36)
Calm and easy to digest this poem promotes relaxation. Nice to hear and...
August 13th, 2024 08:37 - Letting you in (Natalie Heisey)
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant...
August 13th, 2024 08:36 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
An endearing present in words given to another in the form of natures...
August 13th, 2024 08:33 - Vampire Regurgitation Blues (Mutley Ravishes)
Metaphoric it is a most interesting view that in many ways makes sense. A...
August 13th, 2024 08:31 - Midnight Wish (Thoughtless)
Sensuous and sexy it evokes a feeling of longing. Nicely worded.
August 13th, 2024 08:29 - August 13th, 2024 – twenty five plus years since awful series of unfortunate events (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Full of images and metaphors this piece gos on with emotion. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 08:27 - Let go (BlessedbyGod)
Very nicely rhymed and composed. An enjoyable read.
August 13th, 2024 06:06 - Final Word Count (Tom Dylan)
A good question that I am fighting each day. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 06:04 - Monsoon! (Ladywithaquill)
I have to say there are some marvelous metaphors contained in a most...
August 13th, 2024 06:03 - heart friendship (Jim56)
Friendship a most valuable asset. As they say you pick your friends not...
August 13th, 2024 05:59 - 14th poem for: “T.N.D” - Cent or Dollar (Maplespal)
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when...
August 13th, 2024 05:57 - You introduced me to the phrase fatherly love (Glasswing)
A most beautiful tribute to brotherly love. Nicely penned I was initially...
August 13th, 2024 05:55 - Joy (Alan R)
A clear statement of a need for space and respect. Nicely stated.
August 13th, 2024 05:52 - Silent Battle (Tots onav)
A great Haiku nicely stated
August 13th, 2024 05:51 - IGBO AMAKA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Nicely done expressing a missing of one\'s past culture and enjoyment of...
August 13th, 2024 05:50 - writers block + the thoughts that consume us (Lei)
That last statement was a bit vague I hope either way writing or self it...
August 13th, 2024 05:48 - Inverter (2781)
Sounds religious. Nice rhyme. Liked it
August 13th, 2024 05:46 - Sticky Identities (The Great Kateri)
A wise statement how we describe ourselves comes from how we see ourselves...
August 13th, 2024 05:44 - An Open Letter To Myself (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Mental images pressed in concrete. Feelings like needles in a pocket. I...
August 13th, 2024 05:43 - Calling Out (Cocamedo)
Nicely written a search for the lost set in strong images and nicely
August 13th, 2024 05:41 - Greatness of God (Orchidee)
Another good hymn Orchi
August 13th, 2024 05:38 - Home Another Way. (Goldfinch60)
The road not taken? or at least not taken before. A fun read Gold and a...
August 13th, 2024 05:36 - A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards)
Love these old measures Stones, furlongs, gill and cubit for a few. A most...
August 13th, 2024 05:33 - Letter From The Dead (Beatrix M)
Heavy and dark a plea for forgiveness for betrayal and treachery. Gothic...
August 13th, 2024 05:29 - Choir of Angels (Dan Williams)
The blues are soulful and come straight from the heart. Love the blues...
August 13th, 2024 05:27 - flowers without light are flowers that dont grow (MR.apocalypse)
Nicely written in good rhyme this poem of uncertainty was certainly done...
August 13th, 2024 05:22 - Our Walks (Anthony Hanible)
Walks too seldom taken by many and one of the reasons for alienation in...
August 13th, 2024 05:20 - WHY THAT\"S SO (Dev Parth)
Very nicely written this piece explores the why. Lovely!
August 13th, 2024 05:19 - Gertrude ......... (Saxon Crow)
This one gave me a laugh and got the morning off to a smiling start....
August 13th, 2024 05:17 - Clocked (Neville)
We never miss things until they are gone they say. And how could we? What...
August 13th, 2024 05:14 - Camera Roll (Sophin)
A great metaphor. Nicely penned.
August 13th, 2024 05:09 - I won\'t let you touch me (Weep little lion girl)
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form....
August 13th, 2024 05:07 - A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case)
A message sent in metaphor and clear words that speaks to all of us in one...
August 13th, 2024 05:06 - Wayfair (Coracaodacripta)
Exquisite imagery that often turns metaphoric. A beautiful write with a...
August 13th, 2024 05:03 - What Of Love? (Teddy.15)
Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such...
August 13th, 2024 04:59 - Unrest (Boot)
The sound of a battle lost. Very nice
August 12th, 2024 20:44 - His Daily Ritual (J.Edse)
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42 - I\'m Coming Back (13LaurenD)
A poem of perseverance nicely stated. Well said.
August 12th, 2024 19:43 - Full Solitude (DLewis88)
A rhyme pattern that I chose to use in tomorrows poem. A great message and...
August 12th, 2024 17:39 - The Monster. (Wanderingpoet)
Words of what once was love now have taken control. Nicely written.
August 12th, 2024 17:02 - Layers (MattColombo)
Turning negatives into positive in good form. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 16:59 - Happy (Alan R)
A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
August 12th, 2024 16:57 - Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard)
Most beautiful with stunning images and a wonderful lead in to the closing...
August 12th, 2024 15:30 - I die for you (Sami mulaj)
A beautiful sentiment clothed in poetic beauty. Lovely!
August 12th, 2024 15:25 - The Matrix (Thepoetman1234)
A poem of protest well stated and hopefully headed but yet what is the...
August 12th, 2024 15:24 - These days (BlessedbyGod)
Nicely written in verse this message speaks what many feel. Nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 15:22 - Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran) (AuburnScribbler)
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is...
August 12th, 2024 15:20 - texts from deadrose [part one] (DeadRose)
A mystery or code as time goes misunderstood. A most interesting read.
August 12th, 2024 14:56 - It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole (ADarkerMind)
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55 - Chokehold (Saidgodis)
A poem of distress and anguish. It cries out in pain.
August 12th, 2024 14:52 - The Unseen Struggle (Gray0328)
Well worded with some great lines it does speak to the heart. Loved it
August 12th, 2024 14:50 - Poets (Anabasova)
I liked this poem it talks of the difference between a poet and the rest...
August 12th, 2024 14:48 - A moment (Xqw)
I think you have captured the essence of poetry in this. Lovely
August 12th, 2024 14:47 - Counting (Eugene S.)
A fun rhyme that tells a story. Nicely worded and with good rhythm as...
August 12th, 2024 14:44 - ~> Stupid Cupid! - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
The Jaded Cupid. Loved it
August 12th, 2024 14:41 - Out of guilt (Saleh Ben Saleh)
This one reads so well and caries its message all the way to the end....
August 12th, 2024 14:34 - Tail Of The Dragon (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another jewel. Wise and poetic two for one in this write.
August 12th, 2024 14:32 - Quite Potty. (Doggerel Dave)
It seems that this experience is quite common. Did it years ago with an...
August 12th, 2024 14:30 - If You Submit (Mark The Phenomenon)
A wonderful portrayal of union and cooperation in a relationship. Nicely...
August 12th, 2024 08:53 - BROKEN GLASS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
August 12th, 2024 08:51 - A Time to Remember or Not (Paul W Conway)
A wonderful write using anthropomorphism and great images loved it
August 12th, 2024 08:50 - I Can\'t Find No Help (Anthony Hanible)
A cry of despair heard in this poem. How true Baker act is not the answer....
August 12th, 2024 08:48 - Reunion? (Thoughtless)
Pieces and bits put together yes reunion. Nicely said
August 12th, 2024 07:24 - I write (Tony36)
A common malady amongst poets. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 07:22 - A Special Breed (Tom Dylan)
Dogs man\'s best friend so sad that their lives are so short. Loved the...
August 12th, 2024 06:16 - The chosen ones (EvenwheniLie)
Well worded a message sent Bars
August 12th, 2024 06:14 - a robin sang to me (Jim56)
I love nature and find in it peace, harmony and beauty. I hear all of that...
August 12th, 2024 06:12 - vent poem (Lei)
Terrible feelings that one may not be accepted by one\'s family for being...
August 12th, 2024 06:11 - Justice (Davmor73)
Filled with vivid imagery this poetic metaphor reads like a prophesy.
August 12th, 2024 06:09 - 13th poem for: “T.N.D” - Quiet morning (Maplespal)
Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it...
August 12th, 2024 06:06 - Dim light (Fanita530)
Some great lines accompanied by great rhyme and rhythm in this poem of...
August 12th, 2024 06:03 - SWEET CELL (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Nicely written.
August 12th, 2024 06:00 - Look (2781)
A most comforting thought put to rhyme. Nicely done.
August 12th, 2024 05:58 - Castles Made of Sand (Cocamedo)
Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard...
August 12th, 2024 05:57 - Healthful Humility (Orchidee)
Another great hymn Orchi. humility is quite healthful. Loved it.
August 12th, 2024 05:53 - Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read Gold. The danger of building a house on a foundation of sand...
August 12th, 2024 05:51 - I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I hear you. Nicely written. A fun read.
August 12th, 2024 05:48 - america (Sheta)
A very clever write. It starts out with well written lines that lead the...
August 12th, 2024 05:47 - Fragments of Us (Dev Parth)
This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the...
August 12th, 2024 05:45 - Spirit2 (E.J. Waling)
There seemed to be a running drum beat in this poem as each word followed...
August 12th, 2024 05:42 - Atonemental (Mutley Ravishes)
Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely...
August 12th, 2024 05:40 - The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone (Neville)
Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short...
August 12th, 2024 04:37
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