Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Dawn Comes (Dan Williams) I was intrigued by the rhyme scheme that allows you to draw out the...
  August 12th, 2024 04:30
• sorry i\'ve been gone for a while ( the girl i once loved) (Lei) Fragile as a bomb. A most interesting line. They do shatter you know. Most...
  August 11th, 2024 20:06
• Sapphires & Desires (Mya) Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
  August 11th, 2024 20:04
• Serial killer in hiding (EvenwheniLie) I hear venom in this poem. Anger and disgust are expressed. Powerful
  August 11th, 2024 20:02
• Sitting (Xqw) It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray....
  August 11th, 2024 20:01
• Secure (Alan R) Emotional it shouts at the reader. Very well done.
  August 11th, 2024 19:57
• The river of life (Sami mulaj) Beautifully descriptive vivid images painted in words . Nicely done
  August 11th, 2024 19:56
• doctor’s chair (Anemoia) Sad, powerful, disturbing, hurtful. haunting all come to mind. Very well...
  August 11th, 2024 19:55
• Saturday Night (Young Fella) Beautiful images painted in this poem. Lovely
  August 11th, 2024 15:39
• THE EGG (R. Gordon Zyne) A most interesting metaphor in this poem. I would hope that we are all...
  August 11th, 2024 14:42
• Good Deeds (Saleh Ben Saleh) A most interesting write or statement of where one stands regarding...
  August 11th, 2024 14:00
• The fires (Kenny O\'Donnell) A good metaphor for this write, Nicely written.
  August 11th, 2024 13:57
• For some enchanted evenings... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A fun read about a sad situation. No good solution to this political mess....
  August 11th, 2024 13:56
• Tomb of Obscurity (Tristan Robert Lange) Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
  August 11th, 2024 12:44
• Present Perfect (Kurt Philip Behm) Fun, nicely worded with the feel of a poking fun. Loved it.
  August 11th, 2024 12:38
• Bear. (Beatrixx89) It reels like he uses testosterone for cologne a nice write.
  August 11th, 2024 12:35
• Parents (Sonal monhyung) A most beautiful tribute to parents Lovely
  August 11th, 2024 11:05
• Hurt People Hurt People (Anthony Hanible) Tit for tat they say step on someone\'s toes and a punch in the nose We...
  August 11th, 2024 09:58
• ~> Snow White, Glock And Creepy! (Thad Wilk) Thought you were going to do a poem on cocaine with a name like Snow...
  August 11th, 2024 09:43
• Illusions? (Thoughtless) This poem is why I frustrate people when I say that I know nothing, and...
  August 11th, 2024 09:39
• Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love. (Cassie58) Joan Baez and her song Diamonds and Rust has always been a favorite of...
  August 11th, 2024 09:36
• She (2781) Quite a tribute and well put in words. Nicely done
  August 11th, 2024 09:31
• SOMEONE HAS TO DO IT (Bobby O) So agreed that even small acts of kindness can and do make a difference. A...
  August 11th, 2024 09:30
• Hmm. (I am Danea) We all are alone despite how many relationships we have. A fear of death...
  August 11th, 2024 09:26
• Journey & Fun (Blossompayal) Quite a journey here explained. Ended well and all\'s well that ends well
  August 11th, 2024 07:26
• () Now this one says it better than I have ever heard it said before. Poetic...
  August 11th, 2024 07:23
• Run Red Run (Tony36) A great take off of this well known child\'s tale that is easily pictured...
  August 11th, 2024 07:17
• barley field (Jim56) As I read this I remember Sting\'s \"Fields of gold\" a beautiful poem and...
  August 11th, 2024 07:13
• Somewhere Between (ADarkerMind) Now here is a piece with metaphoric quicksand so attractive that it shines...
  August 11th, 2024 07:11
• The Role of Adversity (Gray0328) So well worded it flows like a river to the sea. It\'s meaning so well...
  August 11th, 2024 07:06
• Sister to sister (Glasswing) Touching and sweet this is a wonderful praise to sisterhood.
  August 11th, 2024 07:04
• TAKEN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Commemoration nicely written. Cheers!
  August 11th, 2024 07:02
• The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15) I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying...
  August 11th, 2024 07:00
• Abomination And Desolation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Disaster around the corner. Indeed it always has been in one way or...
  August 11th, 2024 06:57
• Comparing Uncertain Potentialities (Neville) A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated...
  August 11th, 2024 06:53
• 12th poem for: “T.N.D” - Please Stay (Maplespal) A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I...
  August 11th, 2024 06:50
• Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing (Dev Parth) One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this...
  August 11th, 2024 06:48
• Evening of city (Zaheennishat) Identity and the lack there of is described here in feelings of alienation...
  August 11th, 2024 06:46
• i\'ll be there (Sheta) A reassuring poem of someone having your back. Nicely penned
  August 11th, 2024 06:44
• Seasons And Times (Orchidee) This time Orchi you have picked one of my favorite scriptures. Nicely done...
  August 11th, 2024 06:42
• Spiritually Watched (Scarlette Howard) A most interesting proclamation of faith. Nicely worded
  August 11th, 2024 06:40
• Forget Me Not (Cassie58) A most sweet and hauntingly innocent poem of love and loss through the...
  August 11th, 2024 05:05
• Mist And Foghorns. (Goldfinch60) A lovely setting for this poem in the mist and I can hear the ships horns....
  August 11th, 2024 04:59
• After the Ending (Dan Williams) Life and poems full of paradoxes and this poem has a few. Very nice to...
  August 11th, 2024 04:55
• Message In A Bottle (HolesInMyJeans) A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very...
  August 11th, 2024 04:48
• empty (Fire_fly) Fun thoughts placed in their place with proper words
  August 10th, 2024 19:49
• Home life (Beatrixx89) Far worse to be bad to oneself than to others. A most interesting read..
  August 10th, 2024 19:48
• The Calling Cell (HolesInMyJeans) Yea I knew a church that sold interviews with God and when they were sued...
  August 10th, 2024 18:04
• Grandpa & Grandma My Dear (Mark The Phenomenon) A most heartfelt tribute to grandparents. Nicely done
  August 10th, 2024 17:59
• Change (Alan R) Short but with a message. Metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
  August 10th, 2024 17:58
• Flash of Rain (Rrodriguez) A vivid description of a storm nicely done.
  August 10th, 2024 15:55
• TO BE AN ANXIOUS PERSON (Kwrites) Anxiety a terrible adversary lurks in the dark places of the mind and...
  August 10th, 2024 15:53
• Behind the Sofa (AuburnScribbler) Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
  August 10th, 2024 15:51
• A Rosewood Table (Xqw) The ambiguity of whether to take this as a literal description of a desk...
  August 10th, 2024 15:49
• To put Up my little Stars (J. Midnight) Intricate internal rhyme as well as end rhyme mark the first of this work....
  August 10th, 2024 15:46
• Let Me Share Your Shade With Girl (Shantha Teldeniya) A beautiful gesture of caring and sensitivity expressed in this poem....
  August 10th, 2024 15:45
• Willow\'s Embrace (POET_YASHREE) Beautiful wording falls in waves like willows in the wind. Very poetic
  August 10th, 2024 15:44
• Breaking Through (Kurt Philip Behm) Creative indeed. This makes the mind work like the bit. Time and pressure...
  August 10th, 2024 15:40
• Love is Love (Sami mulaj) So nicely stated this poem defines love in terms of unity and so nicely as...
  August 10th, 2024 15:37
• Sync or Sin? (Lionessence) A most fun read that puts one\'s mind into action spinning round and round...
  August 10th, 2024 15:35
• House on fire (I am Danea) Metaphoric in many ways this poem speaks of distress and agitation. Nicely...
  August 10th, 2024 15:32
• Suppressing was the lesson they ingrained in me. (Glasswing) A very personal poem of rage and anger that can be felt throughout it.
  August 10th, 2024 15:30
• Fantasy and Reality (Thoughtless) Sensuous and enticing this poem shows brave wording. Nicely said
  August 10th, 2024 11:41
• Sky (Annemarie) Beautiful words nature at her best.
  August 10th, 2024 11:38
• Ice cream (DLewis88) Delicious
  August 10th, 2024 09:56
• ~> Rapunzel And Jack Frost - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk) Another fun read. Love these fairy tales. Fairy tales are fun but...
  August 10th, 2024 09:35
• A Serendipitous Eternity (Bliss) Nicely written and fun to read.
  August 10th, 2024 09:33
• The Late Richard Franklin (Randyjohnson71) A very nice tribute set in verse. Well done.
  August 10th, 2024 09:07
• The spirit (2781) Well defined. The spirit nicely explained.
  August 10th, 2024 09:05
• We\'re Toxic (Anthony Hanible) Unity despite whatever. Nicely written
  August 10th, 2024 09:04
• Darkness Came to Soon (Tomorrowlloyd) A poem of loss with pain but the feeling that the departed is still near....
  August 10th, 2024 07:36
• Evening Stroll (Tony36) Sweet and cute glad you got your wish
  August 10th, 2024 07:33
• CEASELESS WONDER (Bobby O) Elegantly worded this poem to me reflects a desire of mine as well to have...
  August 10th, 2024 07:22
• The Balance of Narcissus (Gray0328) Love the last line \"life is best without the lens of death\" Nicely...
  August 10th, 2024 07:19
• The bunny (Michael William Reid) Cute and so childlike it could well be told to young children. Oh that we...
  August 10th, 2024 07:08
• My Last Wish (Vansh Lohia) Questioning one\'s value in a relationship is a continual venture. Here it...
  August 10th, 2024 07:07
• Dinner Date (Maplespal) A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem....
  August 10th, 2024 07:03
• love is for everyone (Jim56) Universality nicely expressed in this poem of unity and brotherhood. Very...
  August 10th, 2024 07:00
• Parting Words (Young Fella) Well expressed in different forms and perspectives through...
  August 10th, 2024 06:58
• Flames of Defiance (Dev Parth) Most beautifully worded this poem is a call to courage and perseverance....
  August 10th, 2024 06:56
• Swan\'s Lake (Teddy.15) It\'s a wonderful world sung by Lois Armstrong in poetry. Beauty is in the...
  August 10th, 2024 06:54
• IJE UWAM (MY STORY) (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A happy ending to a sad story. Nicely written
  August 10th, 2024 06:50
• Rituals (Neville) Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me...
  August 10th, 2024 06:48
• War, Who Is It Good For? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) War is good for the manufactures of weapons, for contractors that are...
  August 10th, 2024 06:46
• Now lookie here.... (Orchidee) So sorry Orchi I thought you had posted a picture of KP and Fido.
  August 10th, 2024 06:43
• My Sweet Boy (Cocamedo) To anyone with children of their own a most touching poem well written in...
  August 10th, 2024 06:41
• mirror,mirror (Sheta) Yes so true the mirror tells lies indeed, lies to the inner self not the...
  August 10th, 2024 06:39
• Under the Mausoleum Door (Beatrix M) Fine words here leaving a gothic feel to a dark poem. I loved the last...
  August 10th, 2024 06:32
• Square One, Again (Jewelwrites55) Short but with a plot and nicely said. Don\'t fight the current go with...
  August 10th, 2024 06:29
• Lying to Myself (FallingAwake2) The feeling of aloneness in this piece is outstanding. The last part of...
  August 10th, 2024 06:28
• Our Favourite Place Once More. (Goldfinch60) Gold your pairing of your poems with music is a kickstart in the morning...
  August 10th, 2024 05:29
• The Violin Man (Dan Williams) This is a wonderful poem and I can see how it is a song as well. The...
  August 10th, 2024 05:26
• ~> So Sad, Cookie Monster\'s Gone Mad! (Thad Wilk) I needed a smile this morning and this one gave it to me. Thank you for...
  August 10th, 2024 05:19
• Cry of The Hermit (Dan Williams) Loved the first two lines and the last the most. They convey a distant and...
  August 10th, 2024 05:15
• Oh Just Get On With It. (Doggerel Dave) Now here is a mind boggler that I was not expecting. Be careful of slips...
  August 10th, 2024 05:11
• The Inevitable Revolving Door (Gloria Denise) Never predict the future your beliefs can lead things to happen. Think...
  August 9th, 2024 20:26
• Hope Dies Daily (Satishverma) Good advice don\'t drop names in poems and shutting the book of life...
  August 9th, 2024 20:24
• The Tree (Annemarie) A great analogy that borders on a metaphor. An insightful poem nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 18:11
• Lake or Ocean (Arcane-) Surfing on the ocean or water skiing on a lake not vice versa. Nice write.
  August 9th, 2024 18:10
• Sometimes (NDOU ROLIVHUWA) I like the phrase \"in the shadows of me\" I find it quite poetic. Nicely...
  August 9th, 2024 18:08