Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- They Came To The Door. (Goldfinch60)
I used to believe in an organized religion but then I used to believe in...
April 18th, 2024 03:38 - I Don\'t Get It\' (Mason Vollman)
Very philosophical write with a good rhyme and most interesting meter....
April 17th, 2024 21:45 - The Pierced Dreamer (Thomas W Case)
Short but with a message. I loved the line
\"Some dreams are
best...
April 17th, 2024 15:53 - Christ-Like Living (Orchidee)
Reminds me a bit of charity as in second Corinthians 13 but a bit more....
April 17th, 2024 09:33 - Do-over (Teddy.15)
Brilliant! Another write that is on more than one level. Do we not all...
April 17th, 2024 03:46 - Gospel Given (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. Faith is a good thing for in the end it is what we base...
April 16th, 2024 15:34 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
Such a touching and vivid picture you paint. Sad yet poignant aging and...
April 16th, 2024 15:27 - Full Employment. (Doggerel Dave)
Got you Dave I\'m in the same boat sailing down shit creek with no paddle.
April 16th, 2024 07:04 - What\'s \'is name (2781)
He has many names some of which are lost to time in that they were never...
April 16th, 2024 05:31 - Sleeping Beauty (Teddy.15)
A great saying and even greater thought and mind set. So healthy to think...
April 16th, 2024 03:57 - From Shakespeare with Love (Teddy.15)
Funny how a person can write something so iconic that after centuries it...
April 16th, 2024 02:44 - People Watching Once More. (Goldfinch60)
With children and grand children of my own, I remember the greatest joys...
April 16th, 2024 02:33 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
You continue in faithful hymns Orchi each reminiscent of scriptures and...
April 15th, 2024 13:10 - Contented Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Gold you have become a Buda. Your teachings are profound and wise indeed...
April 15th, 2024 03:49 - Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
Gratitude is a good thing. Good write Orchi.
April 14th, 2024 11:00 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the...
April 14th, 2024 09:30 - This Moment (Thomas W Case)
A powerful pledge and plea for the love of another. Hard to resist.
April 14th, 2024 08:44 - San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15)
Living in California for some years I have driven over this bridge and...
April 14th, 2024 03:54 - Just a world (Alan R)
A fine description of the world we live in, or at least most of us. There...
April 14th, 2024 02:43 - Modern poet (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much for the review and comment it is appreciated
April 14th, 2024 02:41 - The Shadows Were Back. (Goldfinch60)
I remember those years they were my teen years as well and the music was...
April 14th, 2024 02:26 - A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody (Doggerel Dave)
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry...
April 14th, 2024 02:21 - This Morning (Bella Shepard)
A most poignant and sad poem Bella. There are so many senseless tragedies...
April 13th, 2024 16:07 - Argh! Pain (Orchidee)
When I was younger I had a puffer fish in my aquarium, didn\'t last long...
April 13th, 2024 10:22 - My Darling London (Teddy.15)
It is strange how locations of birth, childhood, and places where one...
April 13th, 2024 04:55 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine several other images less holy that he could have painted...
April 13th, 2024 03:23 - The Womb\'s Lullaby (Thomas W Case)
The rhythm reflected in the rhythm of the poem itself. Yes I have felt it...
April 12th, 2024 14:17 - Saving Safety (Orchidee)
When I was young and even more poor than now I banked at Zion\'s bank. I...
April 12th, 2024 14:09 - A Poet’s Death or Encore? (Teddy.15)
Such a grand love, inspiring and in this there is no shame. In the...
April 12th, 2024 14:03 - Weak To Strong (Goldfinch60)
A message that many need to hear. I do believe in giving up on a method...
April 12th, 2024 04:19 - Olive Oil (Orchidee)
I haven\'t seen an olive tree since California. I do love olive oil...
April 12th, 2024 04:15 - Observer Of A Gentle Soul (Teddy.15)
Such a message of what we all go through in many different ways of...
April 11th, 2024 06:45 - Unitarians. (Goldfinch60)
I too feel that religion is more of a problem than a gift. Even the symbol...
April 11th, 2024 04:36 - Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case)
I have seen eyes like that before. Dead end eyes often lead to a dead end...
April 11th, 2024 04:27 - Counting Cost of the Cross (Orchidee)
So as not to lose my soul I have it chained to my ankle. I do tend to...
April 10th, 2024 12:09 - See (2781)
Sacraments always bothered me somehow. It seems cannibalistic, excuse the...
April 10th, 2024 12:04 - Tangerine Dreams (Teddy.15)
Such imagery in vivid color and setting. I too remember the Beatles, one...
April 10th, 2024 05:45 - Cheltenham Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
A long anticipated celebration and enjoyment as well as tribute to a...
April 10th, 2024 04:01 - Narcissist (Thomas W Case)
A vivid description of a narcissistic person. Difficult to live with I\'m...
April 9th, 2024 20:06 - Waste places (2781)
Not much of a religious guy anymore but I hear the message and yea there...
April 9th, 2024 07:27 - Senryu 3 (Teddy.15)
A sad truth and a well written piece Teddy.
April 9th, 2024 07:05 - My World. (Goldfinch60)
An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense...
April 9th, 2024 03:36 - I\'ve Been Touched By An Angel Today. (Teddy.15)
Some beautiful lines:
\"I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of...
April 8th, 2024 15:44 - O Abundant Spirit (Orchidee)
I made a friend of death too Orchi but he told me he does no favors even...
April 8th, 2024 15:27 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
So many of us have dreamed of flight and gliding over land and sea....
April 8th, 2024 04:36 - Dreams of the Fishes (Thomas W Case)
Sleeping with the fish always had a different meaning for me. In this case...
April 7th, 2024 23:47 - Sustenance (Bella Shepard)
Wouldn\'t it be nice to be obese on wisdom? Great write Bella
April 7th, 2024 19:47 - In Harmony Together. (Goldfinch60)
Green the symbol of new life. A great metaphor Andy. Clear with youth and...
April 7th, 2024 04:06 - Red (Anthony “Tappy” Paull)
Loved it. Basic addressing a primary color. I have written a couple of...
April 6th, 2024 14:21 - Cycle (John Prophet)
Loved the format of this poem with its one word lines and the flow that it...
April 6th, 2024 14:18 - Noir Nightmares (Katdream)
Noir is indeed the feel of this poem. It is dark in its shadows and paints...
April 6th, 2024 14:15 - Hide (Mason Vollman)
I have felt that way before and they say that what makes a poem, relevant...
April 6th, 2024 14:13 - April Trials (Bella Shepard)
When it comes to politics you could never offend me Bella since I see the...
April 6th, 2024 13:42 - Rejoicing Repertoire (Orchidee)
It\'s that slow to anger part that I worry about along with casting the...
April 6th, 2024 11:01 - Nightingale and I (Teddy.15)
Never give up on oneself is a battle cry that should be held by all of us....
April 6th, 2024 10:56 - War (2781)
War hurts the poor fought over gold
sometimes religion, or land we\'re...
April 6th, 2024 07:50 - The Village Ghost (Goldfinch60)
I enjoyed this tale Gold and brought a smile to me with the end line....
April 6th, 2024 04:42 - Reflection of the Soul (Thomas W Case)
They say that eyes are the mirror of the soul and so this poem reads. So...
April 5th, 2024 19:55 - Dear Little One (Mason Vollman)
A great message of reassurance and guidance. Well said.
April 5th, 2024 19:53 - A Perfect Madness (Teddy.15)
I love the picture and the poem but having worked with the insane for many...
April 5th, 2024 17:09 - Wholesome Wordings (Orchidee)
Many tell me I should be afraid and fear but I\'ve got too much other...
April 5th, 2024 10:44 - The Lord is my God. (2781)
So many thoughts common to many yet a beautiful wish.
\"But who is my...
April 5th, 2024 09:20 - So All Is Fine. (Goldfinch60)
Words that reminded me of my father who when asked how he was, always used...
April 5th, 2024 04:56 - Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots (Teddy.15)
Dreams, such an interesting topic. Some say their meanings are important,...
April 4th, 2024 13:03 - Persevere (Bella Shepard)
A great take on Descartes quote turned to another view and the play on...
April 4th, 2024 08:15 - Victory Verified (Orchidee)
With this thought in mind there is no need for Botox. One of my favorite...
April 4th, 2024 08:09 - Going To Galilee (Orchidee)
A most famous story well told in clear description. Nicely written Orchi
April 3rd, 2024 05:45 - Enlightened (Teddy.15)
Beautifully stated in poetic style a feeling of relief. Lifted from the...
April 3rd, 2024 05:41 - The New Season. (Goldfinch60)
Something historical always gives a little more weight to something. I...
April 3rd, 2024 05:32 - A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say….. (Doggerel Dave)
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no...
April 2nd, 2024 18:44 - Whose Will To Do? (Orchidee)
Very timely Orchi and well written as well.
March 26th, 2024 11:30 - Please Achieve Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Peace such a lovely thought but like most other good thoughts almost...
March 26th, 2024 11:27 - LOVES LAST EPISODE (Bobby O)
I always loved an improvised approach to poetry and often use it even it...
March 26th, 2024 11:23 - Hard Head Soft Behind (Bragee)
A wistful write merging the past with the present.
March 26th, 2024 11:15 - Love Letter (Teddy.15)
Very clever wording and idea in general/ Loved it.
March 26th, 2024 11:11 - Faithful Family (Orchidee)
Now this is a bit different it speaks of Jesus\' brothers and sisters but...
March 19th, 2024 10:19 - A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15)
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my...
March 19th, 2024 10:14 - The Proper Task (Thomas W Case)
The metaphors are great in this poem. Nicely done
March 19th, 2024 09:58 - Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave)
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29 - Guide And Guard (Orchidee)
Trust is a big word for someone you can\'t see and or hear. Someone that...
March 18th, 2024 09:42 - Six (Thomas W Case)
Very nice it speaks to those few days where poems just roll out.
March 16th, 2024 23:16 - Pedestal (Teddy.15)
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many...
March 15th, 2024 04:40 - Everlasting Exhortation (Orchidee)
My parents used to tell me the same thing. Our commandments obey and they...
March 14th, 2024 11:36 - Guiness Is Good For You. (Goldfinch60)
Didn\'t know that. Not sure it\'s available where I\'m at. I love a beer...
March 14th, 2024 05:04 - Shanties Getting Better. (Goldfinch60)
Why is it that such pub stories are so nostalgic and warm in their nature....
March 14th, 2024 05:00 - Humbly Hoping (Orchidee)
Yes indeed Orchi \"in spirit poor\" it seems that most church goers and...
March 14th, 2024 04:56 - Tariffs (2781)
This in its literal sense I experience myself with constant costs. This...
March 13th, 2024 05:58 - That Sorceriffic Ass (Thomas W Case)
A definite statement that can be taken various ways. Nicely done
March 12th, 2024 15:29 - Beautiful people (Alan R)
The goodness of some people is a blessing to see. When that goodness comes...
March 12th, 2024 11:22 - Confession. (Doggerel Dave)
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual...
March 12th, 2024 07:53 - Shadow and Light (Saxon Crow)
A most interesting write.
\"But magic is real
Where we are not
And...
March 12th, 2024 05:44 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
Well done Orchi
March 12th, 2024 03:03 - One for Hunter (Thomas W Case)
The first person helps this wonderful write present itself in a vivid and...
March 12th, 2024 02:42 - Egg yolk on a comet tail (Teddy.15)
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more...
March 11th, 2024 15:13 - Fossilised? (Orchidee)
Now those human footprints in rock are explained. Good write Orchi.
March 8th, 2024 04:30 - Joy, Love, Sadness and Hate. (Goldfinch60)
This is why I do not watch the news anymore. The imbalance is such that it...
March 8th, 2024 04:26 - Dancing with Doubt (Cloie)
An existential journey that at one time or another we all take. Nicely...
March 7th, 2024 12:05 - The Makings of a Poet (Accidental Poet)
To say that real men are not poets is to say that real men are blind....
March 7th, 2024 11:22 - Deceitful Desires (Orchidee)
Lust is a big problem not only morally but practically. It never ends...
March 7th, 2024 09:13 - The Great Journey Home (Teddy.15)
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the...
March 7th, 2024 09:00
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