Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Faults (Ms.divine) This poem speaks to the feeling of being controlled and blamed and it...
  March 26th, 2026 09:19
• Borrowed by darkness (Cindy) There are traces of darkness here but a sense of assertiveness as well....
  March 26th, 2026 08:41
• Ere Despondence (Kurt Philip Behm) Here is represented the uselessness of one thing prepared dependent on...
  March 26th, 2026 08:09
• Desertification (Mutley Ravishes) This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its...
  March 26th, 2026 07:17
• Thank you to the garbage collectors! (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) A promising thought and well expressed
  March 26th, 2026 07:15
• So Goes our Light (Katie B.) Nature is such and a great metaphor with splendid imagery \"a yellow...
  March 26th, 2026 07:14
• wilderness kills (Arqios) Nature day to day the mundane becomes life and life with all its...
  March 26th, 2026 07:11
• Expected...... (Ann hegg) The last line turns this around from the giver to the receiver and the...
  March 26th, 2026 07:08
• mouster chef (Jim56) Such a lovely kids poem of fantasy. Fun and with some meaning as well. Do...
  March 26th, 2026 07:07
• Eight Ball, Corner Pocket (Entangled heart) A great metaphor that works well in the game of love. Nicely penned
  March 26th, 2026 06:48
• Perfect square (Maplespal) A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another...
  March 26th, 2026 06:46
• The Baker Of The Doughnut Donut Shop (Anthony Hanible) Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to...
  March 26th, 2026 06:42
• Hell of a Mind (Birdbird) An angel is nothing but a devil reformed and a devil is nothing but an...
  March 26th, 2026 05:02
• A Face in the Clouds (Cully45) Poetic considerations about clouds that ends on a cute note. Well done
  March 26th, 2026 04:58
• Long Gone Cursive (Gray0328) I like the subtle introduction of the mechanical and technological into...
  March 26th, 2026 04:56
• A second Man standing (Kutlo Moletsane) A good write of darkness of despair and of faith and light. Cleverly...
  March 26th, 2026 03:57
• forgotten (Markashley1961) This poem pretty well describes it from various angles and views it is...
  March 26th, 2026 03:54
• Gut (Alan R) A most interesting write of the mental vs the physical. And don\'t be too...
  March 26th, 2026 03:51
• Hollywood Curses (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Since I watch no TV any more much of this gos beyond me but I get the gist...
  March 26th, 2026 03:49
• SUNFLOWERS BY VINCENT VAN GOGH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A painter with so much mental turmoil that he expressed on canvass in...
  March 26th, 2026 03:46
• Now That\'s What I Call Jazz. (Goldfinch60) This poem records what appears to have been a wonderful time with...
  March 26th, 2026 03:43
• Home  (Vipassana) Clever writing I hope the painting wasn\'t damaged with the funeral. A fun...
  March 26th, 2026 03:41
• The Roundhouse That Echoed Forever (Matthew R. Callies) Nicely rhymed and metered this poem of tribute reads well an ode to a...
  March 26th, 2026 03:39
• On The Road to Grief\'s End (Teddy.15) A questioning poem that asks why the living suffer loss and the dead rest...
  March 26th, 2026 03:37
• Untitled (RSM0812) This is a poem of passion infatuation and being drawn to each other. Well...
  March 26th, 2026 03:32
• Exchange Memories 🪶🔓 (Ms.divine) A poem of gratitude to ex lovers that have provided happiness in the past....
  March 26th, 2026 03:28
• Poem-Jaguar Trumps the Caiman--22March2026 (Soman Ragavan) A poem of nature and its brutal but natural process in a step by step...
  March 26th, 2026 03:24
• Nothing (Jaayx3) This poem expresses feelings of loss and deterioration a sense of not...
  March 26th, 2026 03:14
• Hate (Vanna) So much hate even hating hate. I loved how this turned around at the end....
  March 25th, 2026 18:57
• Pursuit (Arial) There is a felt pursuit in this write. Nicely done
  March 25th, 2026 18:37
• What if we were meant to meet this way ? (Neilton) Wonderful wording in this poem. Very nicely done making it sensuous and...
  March 25th, 2026 16:08
• I\'m here (Maplespal) Frightening and dark. Well penned
  March 25th, 2026 14:43
• It’s Ok To Not Be Ok (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A good point not every day is equal and our responses are not always equal...
  March 25th, 2026 14:02
• The reeds rustled Russian folkclore (Ksey_Gan) Dark and sad is the tone of this poem. A strong write
  March 25th, 2026 13:38
• Pay Them. Respect Them. Let Them Work. (GeekSusie) It is never wise to anger those that protect you. Worse still encouraging...
  March 25th, 2026 13:35
• People (Edgar_NiyaPoe) People seem only structures with out what is necessary to be human lacking...
  March 25th, 2026 13:27
• The return of Apophis (Lorenz) Some wait for Christ others for Apophis I am waiting for a flight. Well...
  March 25th, 2026 11:48
• Do you understand what poverty is like? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Hope it comes soon Demar.
  March 25th, 2026 10:47
• Blues Poems 26 & 27 (Kurt Philip Behm) Such a great thought in the first poem using the common desire of all men...
  March 25th, 2026 10:43
• Fishy (2781) This poem a talking to or about God and the things that he is known for...
  March 25th, 2026 10:40
• I\'m your Shadow (Cindy) Truth and darkness both have their down sides. This is a wonderful poem of...
  March 25th, 2026 10:36
• Dodgeball (Gray0328) Such a moral in this that gos counter to all political correctness of the...
  March 25th, 2026 10:33
• For Reference Purposes Only (Neville) Neville this smacks of how some relationships work on one level but not...
  March 25th, 2026 10:27
• Power is Not Proof (Tristan Robert Lange) A truth seldom acknowledged in that people seek advice from those in power...
  March 25th, 2026 10:25
• Carpe Diem (Alex PB) This poem carries the feeling of the title. It is light and moves quickly...
  March 25th, 2026 08:39
• Terror in Gainesville (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew I remember this well. My son and daughter went to the University...
  March 25th, 2026 08:38
• The tree grew (Ann hegg) A lovely poetic allegory full of metaphor and tale gives its message of...
  March 25th, 2026 08:03
• big small victory, small big failures [haiku 8] (DeadRose) Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don\'t bet on the poetry as...
  March 25th, 2026 07:20
• A Lost Soul (Tayne) Welcome to MPS. Your poem reads of isolation and alienation a feeling of...
  March 25th, 2026 06:59
• Breathe out (Anabasova) So well said. We all worry about what others think or say when it is none...
  March 25th, 2026 06:56
• Worth (Katie B.) It starts off on the right foot addressing the question of whether one...
  March 25th, 2026 06:54
• unsigned horizon (Arqios) Cryptic your poems are growing deeper and deeper. Here the horizon is...
  March 25th, 2026 05:56
• Peace and War (Adventuressmalik) A lovely poem that extols peace not war. I think Mark Twain made this...
  March 25th, 2026 05:43
• Go, Go Gadget, Flow! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read that emphasizes the advance in technology and its seductive...
  March 25th, 2026 05:24
• The Old Oak Tree (Cully45) Such a lovely poem of time seen through the eyes of another living...
  March 25th, 2026 05:21
• A Flower (Prachi Dalvi) A beautiful poem Prachi that is tender, gentle, sensual and inviting. It...
  March 25th, 2026 05:17
• An Ode To Spring (Teddy.15) This poem has dual meaning as a haiku it is as rare as the bird or plant...
  March 25th, 2026 05:13
• Peace Possible? (Orchidee) Such a beautiful dream still unfulfilled Orchi. Nicely written my friend...
  March 25th, 2026 04:13
• hedgehog fred (Jim56) Cute this could well be a children\'s cartoon or bedtime story. Well done...
  March 25th, 2026 04:10
• Running Mind  (Anthony Hanible) This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where...
  March 25th, 2026 04:08
• Icon of Gospel (Dimitryet) A poem full of biblical imagery evoking many thoughts of interpretation...
  March 25th, 2026 04:05
• MERELY MEMORY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem that focuses on the temporary nature of our existence and its dream...
  March 25th, 2026 04:02
• Ephemeral (Atticus_made) Playing with rhyme is like the gravity of planets and their attraction to...
  March 25th, 2026 04:00
• I am the devil (Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer }) Where there is mort than one person there is politics and society. The...
  March 25th, 2026 03:58
• Our Tomorrow, Given Away (Entangled heart) There is a feeling of sad isolation in this poem that cries out but seems...
  March 25th, 2026 03:54
• No matter death stalks so close... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) In this piece I follow a train of drifting thoughts that are linked...
  March 25th, 2026 03:52
• Your Fading True Colours (Ajon4wheels) There is definitely annoyance if not anger in this poem expressing a right...
  March 25th, 2026 03:49
• the poet’s construction (Vipassana) A short snapshot in time without explanation it briefly dips us into...
  March 25th, 2026 03:46
• Spring Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Loved this one Andy it is direct, positive and beautiful.
  March 25th, 2026 03:43
• NOT DEAD YET (Michael Edwards) A line from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A line made famous by singer...
  March 25th, 2026 03:42
• Independence of Greece (Efrain Cajar) A beautiful poem of tribute so well rhymed and metered it flows smoothly...
  March 25th, 2026 03:39
• Reflective Pattern Reality (Thoughtless) Behind the smoke of definitions and shiny packaging of what is sold as a...
  March 25th, 2026 03:32
• New Poet? (Doggerel Dave) Here here Dave I am behind you all the way on this one. I have been remiss...
  March 25th, 2026 03:20
• THIS POEM IS NOT TRENDING (DeadRose) A most interesting topic. For there to be a trend in song, poem, book or...
  March 25th, 2026 03:14
• Held Hostage in Suits (GeekSusie) Assertive words in this poem of standing up for oneself in a thankless...
  March 24th, 2026 20:34
• rainbow froyo (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Here a poem of reflections on love and life and the difficulty involved....
  March 24th, 2026 19:42
• Texting Anxiety (James Michael) Anticipation the best part it is the finding out that can be the problem....
  March 24th, 2026 19:06
• Offset (Alan R) It needs a watchmaker. An intriguing poem of metaphor cast in time. Well...
  March 24th, 2026 16:05
• Joker (A.N.) This poem speaks to trying to understand a lover and it making him...
  March 24th, 2026 16:04
• When I See You Again (A Dying Hero of the Past) A good write of how one needs to see emotions to understand them. Well
  March 24th, 2026 13:48
• natures wonders (Jim56) So true it is Jim loved the poem and its implications.
  March 24th, 2026 13:16
• this box.....is it death? (Jjudaharts) A great line and both are made of the same material. Well penned
  March 24th, 2026 13:14
• The Whippoorwill Calls (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely Kurt bird calls music to the ear
  March 24th, 2026 12:07
• On the Banks of the Volga by Iosif Utkin (Ksey_Gan) This seems a follow up to the previous poem or song posted. Most...
  March 24th, 2026 10:55
• Virginia weather (William Hromada) A lovely description of weather\'s secret making a joke at which we cry or...
  March 24th, 2026 10:52
• The Game (E.J. Waling) The greatest game on earth that of life. How could a game be designed with...
  March 24th, 2026 10:06
• Designated Smoking Area (Gray0328) The smoke of nostalgia lingers Gray and and to relive it we must still...
  March 24th, 2026 09:58
• Humanity☮️❤️‍🔥 (Ms.divine) A most positive theme for the message of this poem. Very bright. Lovely
  March 24th, 2026 09:51
• Shred (2781) I have to agree this is such a common occurrence built into product...
  March 24th, 2026 09:49
• Tiny Paws, Big Joy (Matthew R. Callies) Cute and loveable. I have had a few and each wonderful
  March 24th, 2026 09:39
• Get it together (Boot) Like the jargon feel the beat got the message. Nicely done
  March 24th, 2026 08:44
• threshold (Tristan Robert Lange) The unknown is threatening to most thrilling to some and a regular part of...
  March 24th, 2026 08:42
• Jojo\'s Bizarre Adventure (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I never realized how one becomes accustomed to text in a certain pattern...
  March 24th, 2026 08:12
• Mechanoids In March (Syd) A most interesting thought yes machines will one day become conscious and...
  March 24th, 2026 07:39
• Ash and Gold (Thomas W Case) Once burnt twice shy they say. Life is full of fire that burns away the...
  March 24th, 2026 07:37
• Death of a King (RSM0812) Total devastation in this poem of darkness. Even revolt does not bring...
  March 24th, 2026 07:33
• तेरा सजनी नही दोष कोई   (Waiting for Silence) How many times I have set out for destinations without a path. Life is...
  March 24th, 2026 07:31
• hallway split (Arqios) Dualities in everything. Here the dissonance can be heard even in the...
  March 24th, 2026 07:29
• Wordless (Maplespal) Have been there frequently and feel its weight. Here a few lines in good...
  March 24th, 2026 06:06
• Ahhh! Is The New Woo Sah (Anthony Hanible) What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
  March 24th, 2026 06:04