Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- With the breeze (Caring dove)
The parallel between the softness of a breeze and the gentleness of a...
May 28th, 2026 18:44 - we are calm (Lunarchloedip)
A great metaphor in the similarity between a child\'s behavior and an...
May 28th, 2026 18:42 - Bad Apples (DLewis88)
Such a great metaphor and true it is. It only takes one bad apple to ruing...
May 28th, 2026 18:38 - Solid Ground Is a Drifting Cloud (FallingAwake2)
As clouds are constantly changing in form so the view of nature is in...
May 28th, 2026 18:37 - June (Vipassana)
It happens. An allegory of an allegory. Well done
May 28th, 2026 16:52 - Small Miracles (Gray0328)
A melding of the physical and the metaphysical the chemical and the...
May 28th, 2026 16:01 - Humanity (Fränz Müller)
A surreal poem of metaphor that speaks of our hollowness. Well done
May 28th, 2026 15:59 - The pills on the table (Part 2) (Lore)
This is a very emotional poem of pain and loss and the hurt that...
May 28th, 2026 15:57 - Light and Airy (Neil Higgins)
Nature presented in flashes in this brief poem. Very nicely done
May 28th, 2026 14:57 - Feuding mental nemesis appear... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Your writes are always a collage of many things here mythology to radio...
May 28th, 2026 14:56 - Life, Don’t Be Cruel (Mercy Robert)
Such a lovely message talking through life to others, the readers. So...
May 28th, 2026 14:55 - Cheshire Grinning (Kurt Philip Behm)
A tragic tale and well timed prelude to my write for tomorrow. Clever and...
May 28th, 2026 14:51 - Epitaph for a love (Lorenz)
Passion runs high in fairytales and sexual possession is buried beneath...
May 28th, 2026 14:50 - Malfunction Machine (Tristan Robert Lange)
A delve into the psychology of the mind in rhyme and poetic form. Been...
May 28th, 2026 14:47 - The Curse That Ended (Matthew R. Callies)
A poem of baseball history well written in poetic form. Well done
May 28th, 2026 14:43 - Cancel Cancel Culture (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great write on the use and abuse of power in the movie music industry
May 28th, 2026 14:41 - Changing Days (Paul Bell)
Life is a race without rules and winner takes all. Well written
May 28th, 2026 08:19 - I beg and I plea (Maplespal)
Whether literal or metaphoric this poem speaks of connections. Well done
May 28th, 2026 08:17 - What am I? (Cindy)
The personification of pen and paper and ink. Well written
May 28th, 2026 07:13 - Waiting for storms (Aallffiee)
A wonderful metaphor. I have a house within sight of a lighthouse and it...
May 28th, 2026 07:11 - Circles two (2781)
What a metaphor and within it deep meaning. Often the smallest is the...
May 28th, 2026 07:05 - leafy dapples (Arqios)
Beautiful! I have seen it so many times in the forest and felt it too bad...
May 28th, 2026 06:37 - sun beauty (Jim56)
Light hearted and bright this poem is a good way to start the day Jim
May 28th, 2026 04:35 - Manifest (Syd)
Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent...
May 28th, 2026 04:33 - Split in Two (That’sSoRaven)
We all have many parts and these can be grouped into two. That split that...
May 28th, 2026 04:07 - HELLS HELPER... (Celina Powell)
There is strong emotion in this poem where lack of understanding is cast...
May 28th, 2026 04:03 - What do you see? (Andrew Deaton)
A lovely point of view portrayed in this poem where looking into...
May 28th, 2026 04:00 - STILL AT PLAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This poem echoes of childhood and its freedom of expression in play and...
May 28th, 2026 03:57 - Pray With Me (Anthony Hanible)
Nicely worded this poetic prayer becomes a mantra with its repetitions of...
May 28th, 2026 03:55 - Acquitting Advocate (Orchidee)
Orchi the wording of this poem is most reminiscent of traditional church...
May 28th, 2026 03:52 - होली है..... (Waiting for Silence)
This poem is full of cultural foods and tradition even the wording is most...
May 28th, 2026 03:49 - The Alvar Tree Frogs. (Goldfinch60)
The enjoyment of music is one of the pleasures that social life has to...
May 28th, 2026 03:46 - The Poem. (David Wakeling)
A wonderful poem that casts in metaphor the world of the poet set in...
May 28th, 2026 03:44 - Symbiosis at the Greenhouse Cafe (Tim Lockman)
A poem of that trade we have with the plant family. We often neglect to...
May 28th, 2026 03:40 - I want to read again (Never be)
Such a poetic confession stitched with desire and an appeal for a healing...
May 27th, 2026 20:25 - Phantoms (Kayla Jackson)
Such a message sent in this write and well said as well. Very nice
May 27th, 2026 20:22 - Fool Britannia : ( I See No Ships) (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read that satirically speaks to the situation of military spending...
May 27th, 2026 20:20 - Walk Among the Flowers (Jeannie)
Truly beautiful wording in these analogies the meaning hidden under...
May 27th, 2026 19:07 - When tired and bare to the bone (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
An act of charity reflected in this poem well done
May 27th, 2026 16:40 - Stan (Syd)
This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written...
May 27th, 2026 16:38 - The Cruelty Of Still Caring (Entangled heart)
A love rejected, unrequited is a sad situation and it is heard in this...
May 27th, 2026 16:34 - Don\'t you miss us (Celina Powell)
There are many good memories cited in this poem of a lost love and whether...
May 27th, 2026 14:04 - Love them still (Samuel Potsane)
A write about unconditional love, nicely penned
May 27th, 2026 14:02 - Phantasm (Fränz Müller)
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm....
May 27th, 2026 14:01 - That 50% (M.M.)
A poem on the power of heredity and its acceptance. It assumes that...
May 27th, 2026 13:59 - Bright Spark (Teddy.15)
The unknown holds many surprises as well as expectations and this is a...
May 27th, 2026 13:55 - The Wise and Love (Mohammad ali)
This short write requires a good deal of thought. Nicely done
May 27th, 2026 12:22 - To Love or Not to Love (Mercy Robert)
A sad fact of life where love becomes a commodity and is sold and bought....
May 27th, 2026 12:21 - meerkat tale (Jim56)
A poem of escape and reunion well told Jim. Well written in good rhyme
May 27th, 2026 12:18 - Happy Birthday (CokennaMaria (CMH))
A beautiful birthday wish to a friend well written
May 27th, 2026 12:17 - The Fear Lies Sharper Than the Blade (Gray0328)
In so many ways we are but shadows that come and go. A most interesting...
May 27th, 2026 12:16 - Treading the path our footsteps made (Terry Mace)
With woods all around me I can identify with this piece. Very nicely...
May 27th, 2026 12:14 - to be black, blue and brown (Demar Desu)
A hard and vexing write of prejudice. Well done
May 27th, 2026 12:12 - Dreams (+!) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Poems of the process and the writing itself a lovely set here Kurt
May 27th, 2026 12:09 - Caligula (Lorenz)
Indeed a well thought out write of historical tribute to a man that got a...
May 27th, 2026 11:43 - Heart Speaks What Lips Can Not (Joseph M Marion)
A wonderful write most beautifully written. There are very pretty lines...
May 27th, 2026 11:39 - No (Tristan Robert Lange)
Societal expectations demand compliance ignoring the individual and their...
May 27th, 2026 09:03 - Our Children (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
It seems so for each generation and whether it is true or not history will...
May 27th, 2026 08:59 - Don\'t push (2781)
A great dwelling upon the meaning in a phrase that can be taken two ways....
May 27th, 2026 07:40 - early ending (Lunarchloedip)
The expression of a mother\'s tenderness leaving the person feeling loved...
May 27th, 2026 07:39 - The Remedy (out of my head) (BoxMyHeart)
Such a lovely portrayal of emotion and passion. Nicely done
May 27th, 2026 07:36 - Lost voice (Maplespal)
Lovely the building of a conscience from past words of a mother. So nicely...
May 27th, 2026 07:34 - stay (Arqios)
Very beautiful this short poem that speaks of redemption. Well done
May 27th, 2026 07:32 - कुत्ते वालों से (Waiting for Silence)
I love how you use discomfort to present a message and cause thought. I...
May 27th, 2026 07:30 - AS The Snow Falls (Cully45)
Very well imaged this poem casts a wintery feel and a playful free sense....
May 27th, 2026 04:38 - Hobbiton (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A poetic short of a travel log with an endearing feeling. Nicely written
May 27th, 2026 04:35 - LIFES DECREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I love this poem and its cadence with marching flavor to it. It ends in...
May 27th, 2026 04:33 - Beneath the Frozen Sky (Matthew R. Callies)
A great write of a place foreign to most where weather extremes are...
May 27th, 2026 04:30 - Hope of Help (Orchidee)
A poetic reassurance and admonition in this hymn for a people used to...
May 27th, 2026 04:26 - 2 Weeks No Pills (Anthony Hanible)
This is a poem of recovery and recognition. Nicely written Anthony
May 27th, 2026 04:24 - Sonnet For Elliott. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful commemorative sonnet for a grandson turning man. Well written...
May 27th, 2026 04:21 - Molly and the Mean Pigs (David Wakeling)
Personification in a pig poem. An enthralling story with a message nicely...
May 27th, 2026 04:19 - Just Observe (Scraps~n~Scribbles)
Self doubt balanced with writing the first thought a most interesting...
May 27th, 2026 04:14 - Ah the times we are in (King)
A good read Jack of all trades and master of none. Well written
May 26th, 2026 20:22 - You Were (Mylastwrites)
A poem of support by a strong person. Nicely said
May 26th, 2026 19:24 - The Polish Tango (Ksey_Gan)
A great image of a sun\'s fire doused by water as love is doused by...
May 26th, 2026 18:26 - Correction (Fränz Müller)
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective....
May 26th, 2026 18:25 - Indifference (Alan R)
An ungodly experience or dream that ends as an end itself. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 18:21 - Free (Kora)
Very nicely written in allegory and metaphor it speaks of freedom in a...
May 26th, 2026 15:03 - White Noise (Vicecream)
Deeper than the oilwells from which plastic is made. It rings with truth...
May 26th, 2026 15:01 - The Beautiful Truth (Fathima Shaw)
A great juxtaposition of opposites it speaks of a different perspective....
May 26th, 2026 15:00 - Phoot! (Pete the poet)
Cubism, surreal and impressionism flow through this poem that takes sharp...
May 26th, 2026 14:57 - Little flower (Caring dove)
Feeling a part is something all social beings take joy in and it is...
May 26th, 2026 14:55 - Flannel Dreams (Gray0328)
To be authentic one must know who one is and that is rare now days. Well...
May 26th, 2026 13:13 - Rocks & Hard Places (Kurt Philip Behm)
Skinning of the cat gets the fave today. A social commentary and critique...
May 26th, 2026 13:11 - Invisible Battles 💚 (Lore)
You never know for sure what is in another\'s mind but reaching out may be...
May 26th, 2026 13:07 - Experiences of the Heart (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
A plea to put things in god\'s hands. Nicely written
May 26th, 2026 13:05 - proximity (Tristan Robert Lange)
If I remember right he had his head on some rocks before that dream....
May 26th, 2026 12:59 - The musician (Lorenz)
In a circus there is always cotton candy, get the pink one the other is an...
May 26th, 2026 12:55 - OCD =/= The End Of Me (Anna Wakey29)
Very nicely described and I believe that on a spectrum all have more or...
May 26th, 2026 10:01 - Quite Moments (A.N.)
A lovely description of relationships through a backdoor approach. Nicely...
May 26th, 2026 09:58 - Patience and Triumph (Mohammad ali)
Cleverly worded this poem speaks more than appears on the surface. Well...
May 26th, 2026 09:30 - Beneath The Bruises (Neville)
So sensitive and real this poem touches the needs of an aging woman in a...
May 26th, 2026 08:14 - HEAT CYCLE ACTIVE (Isabel Szurlej)
There is something magical about the structure and wording in this poem....
May 26th, 2026 08:11 - Myday2626 (2781)
Feel that I have been there before stuck in the mud or sand or snow. The...
May 26th, 2026 08:07 - Cement grass (Samuel Potsane)
The thrill of the edge is also the most dangerous. A lovely write
May 26th, 2026 07:59 - A Whitechapel Haunting (Matthew R. Callies)
A dark story well told in rhyme. A legend of a serial killer that is...
May 26th, 2026 07:58 - October Houses (Thomas W Case)
I too lived that era Thomas and felt your words were my feelings of that...
May 26th, 2026 07:48 - Mrs. Ward (Katie B.)
A wonderful tribute to a past teacher that touched and influenced a life....
May 26th, 2026 07:41 - Renewal? (Theodore Zendarski)
So nicely constructed in a series of questions that all point to the...
May 26th, 2026 07:38
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