Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Killing Time (Notapoet) Clever and well written a fave
  December 16th, 2025 12:44
• Christmas love (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Christmas the season for family and togetherness. Well done
  December 16th, 2025 12:43
• The Purpose Of Christmas -By Isaiah Ogedegbe (Isaiah Ogedegbe) A write of faith and belief at a special time of year and a call for...
  December 16th, 2025 11:20
• They’re Here (E.J. Waling) This seems to me a poetic criticism of technology gone array. Well done in...
  December 16th, 2025 11:19
• SONNET ON ALLURING LOVE ([email protected]) This to me seems a love poem and a proposal of love. Nicely done
  December 16th, 2025 11:17
• December’s Lament (Cam) A wonderful Christmas message that needs to be heard. True in what it says...
  December 16th, 2025 11:15
• Distant Door (StarLoom) Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
  December 16th, 2025 11:13
• Elegy of Rob and Michele Reiner (Matthew R. Callies) Unaware of the loss this seems a tribute to persons departed that left us...
  December 16th, 2025 11:05
• Each Time — The First Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Such nice metaphor here Kurt and cast in seasonal terms as well. The...
  December 16th, 2025 11:01
• loss (PerditaRose) Here in this senryu is the unanswered question of who. This puzzle leaves...
  December 16th, 2025 09:21
• Fresh start. (Andrew Deaton) The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded...
  December 16th, 2025 09:19
• The First time you smiled!! (Aaron Roberson) A lovely heart warming poetic expression. Nicely worded with good rhyme...
  December 16th, 2025 09:17
• Wrath of God (RSM0812) Beautiful words of a beautiful vision. So nicely set in a poetic style.
  December 16th, 2025 09:15
• The Artist\'s Muse— (Meera Mere) Sometimes the muse leaves abruptly not saying when they will return. Well...
  December 16th, 2025 09:13
• garden beauty (Jim56) A bright and beautiful write Jim it blooms on the page
  December 16th, 2025 07:14
• 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔇𝔬𝔫\'𝔱 ℑ𝔱\'𝔰 𝔏𝔬𝔞𝔡𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Very nice Keyara a thing to think about
  December 16th, 2025 06:20
• Russian Blues (Victor Bolshov) There is something wild and free in this poem yet it falls like the tree...
  December 16th, 2025 05:56
• Lazy love (Jah) There is something special in this write, something common, something...
  December 16th, 2025 05:54
• The Light (Katie B.) So few words so much said, wisdom in the saying. A wonderful poem Katie a...
  December 16th, 2025 05:51
• essence in Surikov (Arqios) Interesting the choice of red ink just like blood. The use of the...
  December 16th, 2025 05:50
• Man At Peace (Paul Bell) A special time in more ways than one. A time of peace. It leaves mixed...
  December 16th, 2025 05:31
• A Very Mismanaged Christmas Album (full of political parody) (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A passal of poems of a seasonal and political nature which is metaphoric...
  December 16th, 2025 04:00
• GUTTERS CURSED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This leaves the feel of ruin and destruction, devastation. Metaphorically...
  December 16th, 2025 03:55
• LIKE MY LOVE FOR HER (Coker Favour A.) Quite the love poem here. Very nicely done
  December 16th, 2025 03:52
• song bird’s cage (Vipassana) This one tells its story in contrasts and I find it most poetic and a fave
  December 16th, 2025 03:51
• Christmas Endearment (Ajon4wheels) A most seasonal picture is painted here in words so clear of this time of...
  December 16th, 2025 03:48
• A message to Pennywise (Birddie Jane) This sounds to me like a person convinced that they are not good for...
  December 16th, 2025 03:45
• Tell me it’s me (Sail) Questioning oneself but asking another, where belief in what one thinks...
  December 16th, 2025 03:42
• I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed (Anthony Hanible) We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then...
  December 16th, 2025 03:40
• A Flight on a Sleepless Night (JustARandomJulia) This poem brought to mind David Bowie\'s Space Odyssey and ground control...
  December 16th, 2025 03:37
• Heavenly Help (Orchidee) And so it should be Orchi let God repay not man. A good one my friend
  December 16th, 2025 03:34
• Happy Christmas Coffee#1. (Goldfinch60) A great acknowledgement and a kind seasonal greeting to all. Nicely done...
  December 16th, 2025 03:31
• sink deeper in that hole (MR.apocalypse) I hear that voice sitting on my left shoulder speaking in this poem. It is...
  December 16th, 2025 03:29
• Leading Hand (NinjaGirl) Although I take this to be spiritual maybe religious it is also literal...
  December 16th, 2025 03:27
• Two Snowmen It\'s said (Kevin Hulme) Cute, seasonal and also funny that should be enough for a fave
  December 16th, 2025 03:26
• YOUR PERFECT MAN (David Welch) How perspectives change from eye to eye. A lovely write and a fun read....
  December 15th, 2025 20:34
• The Gift of Stillness (Janet Lencowski) What a magnificent poem where it is the pause the space that creates the...
  December 15th, 2025 19:37
• Persian song by Pyotr Tchaikovsky (Ksey_Gan) This has a most orient feel to it a sense of the east. It is the rhythm...
  December 15th, 2025 19:35
• Superverse (E.J. Waling) This seems a fractal poem where the repetition of words is a reoccurring...
  December 15th, 2025 19:33
• about this time every year (Jon Nakapalau) So true it is and how one small thing leads to another and another like a...
  December 15th, 2025 19:30
• 𝒮ℴ𝓂ℯ𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓃ℊ 𝒜𝒷ℴ𝓊𝓉 𝒲𝓇𝒾𝓉𝒾𝓃ℊ (Keyara S Trotman) Very nice Keyara a beautiful encapsulation of the being of a writer....
  December 15th, 2025 19:29
• Boyhood\'s Toil (David Eugene Stewart) All things must pass. A ,most poignant poem
  December 15th, 2025 18:06
• Stuffed Peppers (Megan Blaney) Culinary but more, why the clean plate? And for who? Well done
  December 15th, 2025 15:40
• My Birthplace (Shahla Latifi) Dark are the sounds of the innards of this poem. It bleeds blood of the...
  December 15th, 2025 15:39
• Winter’s Watch (Notapoet) Beautiful images set in a winter scene. Nicely written
  December 15th, 2025 15:36
• The Ache (WinterBunny) The pain I hear and the emotion I can feel so sad that a piece of the...
  December 15th, 2025 15:34
• scream your silence in to mine (Jah) Silence speaks louder that thunder. It is the silence between notes that...
  December 15th, 2025 15:32
• Christmas time (Jesus is Lord) A religious redirection for a religious holiday nicely written in the face...
  December 15th, 2025 15:30
• Ache (Amethyste) Romantic and sensual a lovely write
  December 15th, 2025 12:49
• citrus stains (Lunarchloedip) A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the...
  December 15th, 2025 12:38
• My Envious Dream (JustARandomJulia) A reflection that can not be seen. A haunting poem nicely worded and laid...
  December 15th, 2025 12:11
• The Proof of Mistakes (Gray0328) I loved the wording of this surreal poem that dives deep into the psyche...
  December 15th, 2025 12:09
• The Reluctant Prophet (Kurt Philip Behm) Well said Kurt I feel at times that all poetic fruit has left the vine and...
  December 15th, 2025 12:07
• Sweet cadaverous cacophony (Jaryyn) A chaotic and violent world where no one can be trusted and everything...
  December 15th, 2025 12:05
• The old radio (Lorenz) Lorenz this caught my attention because as a young child I too went up the...
  December 15th, 2025 12:03
• The Big Book of Christmas Mishaps: 13 Wildly Wobbly Verses (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Here is a series of Christmas shenanigans wrapped in rhyme. Perfect for...
  December 15th, 2025 11:58
• Lion and the fox. (Andrew Deaton) It is the most skillful warrior that doesn\'t have to fight and the best...
  December 15th, 2025 11:15
• I Feel For Those Suffering (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain...
  December 15th, 2025 11:12
• An Unexpected but Pleasant Twist (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I like how you as the author break the forth wall in this write it makes...
  December 15th, 2025 11:09
• Born Like This (Thomas W Case) To write to live or to live to write is the question. A gritty poem about...
  December 15th, 2025 11:08
• Toys for Tots (Matthew R. Callies) A fave for the message in this poem. What ever your religious belief this...
  December 15th, 2025 11:06
• Forever Here (DesertWords) Physical loss does not mean mental or emotional loss. A lovely write
  December 15th, 2025 09:44
• Untitled {24} (Niko Papadatos) Self blame in this poem nicely written. Well done
  December 15th, 2025 09:41
• Fainted (Maplespal) This is a sad and dark poem of addiction. Well written with good rhyme
  December 15th, 2025 09:38
• My Angel (RSM0812) There is more depth to this poem than first appears and it is revealed in...
  December 15th, 2025 08:07
• Blessed By An Angel (Ajon4wheels) A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and...
  December 15th, 2025 08:05
• hedgehog in my garden (Jim56) And so it is the season for hibernation and a cut poem it was Jim
  December 15th, 2025 08:03
• Christmas Cheer (PerditaRose) Discomfort allows appreciation for the better. By sacrifice we know days...
  December 15th, 2025 06:53
• Cora (Katie B.) I love the metaphor of outgrowing her gown. Death but a change and we out...
  December 15th, 2025 06:49
• One Day Closer (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and...
  December 15th, 2025 05:47
• there is a room (Arqios) And so it is with poems, verbs alter the nouns and adjectives just enough...
  December 15th, 2025 05:44
• Land of Opportunity (Doggerel Dave) Plan on doing a little hunting Dave? The color of the type makes me a...
  December 15th, 2025 04:24
• SONNET ON DESOLATION ([email protected]) It is not only the with that we feel but the without. A lovely poem
  December 15th, 2025 04:02
• Heidelberg (Atticus_made) There is a feel in this poem of antiquity and of heritage as well as a...
  December 15th, 2025 04:00
• A VIOLENT NIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner....
  December 15th, 2025 03:58
• The poem of heart (Nature) Here in this poem I hear a broader definition of music than most give it....
  December 15th, 2025 03:56
• Interim (Sail) There is anticipation and anxiousness in this poem that feels like any...
  December 15th, 2025 03:53
• Sing of Salvation (Orchidee) It seems that God is a music lover and likes to party. A good read Orchi....
  December 15th, 2025 03:51
• \"Down for the Count\" Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A sonnet well written my friend about a subject we both enjoy, music. So...
  December 15th, 2025 03:47
• Remembrance (Freyaaa) This leaves me with the feel that an imperfection is still desired and...
  December 15th, 2025 03:45
• The World Waits (Jjudaharts) And indeed it does for those that still read and feel the zest of the...
  December 15th, 2025 03:42
• I Haven’t Healed (Vanna) A sad poem of damage done faith put in the wrong hands. Nicely done
  December 15th, 2025 03:41
• The Digits of Day (JustARandomJulia) This flow of message and word meter gave me the feel of Sting\'s Fields of...
  December 15th, 2025 03:40
• We Wish You a Merry Christmas (Sanitized Version) (Cody Ellis) Unfortunately it is only once a year that it is not amiss, it would be...
  December 15th, 2025 03:38
• what happens when you don\'t like anything you\'ve written all day (PerditaRose) When more than one knows a secret it is no longer a secret. Well written...
  December 15th, 2025 03:35
• Have you ever stopped to consider how the ant feels when a giant pane of glass floating in the air beams pure sunlight into its carapace? (Simple Tendencies) I understand I myself lie about lying. A fun read and full of interest....
  December 14th, 2025 20:27
• Delusional (Jazmyne Monroe) Delusional we all are at times. A lovely love poem
  December 14th, 2025 19:27
• Regrets (Keeter C) A type of poetic expression of gratitude and ending almost as a prayer....
  December 14th, 2025 19:25
• Free souls (Amethyste) Well stated and so true. Very well said
  December 14th, 2025 18:11
• Fall in this Place (Scarlette Howard) A poem of faith and belief well said
  December 14th, 2025 17:13
• Love (Hadley) Romantic love expressed in this poem nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 17:10
• Mountain Peak (RSM0812) This reminds me of a Hawaiian volcano. Great images
  December 14th, 2025 17:06
• Facts Pt3 (Anthony Hanible) And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
  December 14th, 2025 13:39
• Appreciate (William Hromada) The words of love put in this poem touch the heart. Well done
  December 14th, 2025 13:38
• WHAT A SOUL GOES FOR (David Welch) Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
  December 14th, 2025 13:31
• Ego Death (Shadowbones) Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
  December 14th, 2025 13:07
• An Abandoned Father (Soheil khodaparasti) This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a...
  December 14th, 2025 13:06
• The Prince and the Forge (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Hauntingly dark this poem speaks with controlled power as a ghost speaking...
  December 14th, 2025 13:04
• Getting Along Well (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another chapter and the story moves along. Well done Shamrocker
  December 14th, 2025 12:58
• This Fight Chose Me (JBentley) Militant answers fill this poem with reflection too many unnecessary...
  December 14th, 2025 10:48