Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Share the wealth not the misery (Hzugman) A fave for a piece of wisdom well said in poetic form.
  May 7th, 2025 09:28
• The Road is not the Limit (Kingdaniel) We all have our paths and some are afraid of them other look forward to...
  May 7th, 2025 09:27
• Guess I Never Knew (Cheeky Missy) Each day marked by a food. Seasons and dance fill the hours. Another good...
  May 7th, 2025 09:25
• Men’s Convention by Nick Dorizo (Ksey_Gan) I loved the personal first person intimate type of conversation this poem...
  May 7th, 2025 09:22
• Oh Narrow Love (RSM0812) A most wonderful wish and message put in poetic form. Very nice
  May 7th, 2025 09:20
• Moonlit Pond (Akshadha_Joshi1310) That was a very clever rhyme Artemis and a great reference. The whole poem...
  May 7th, 2025 09:19
• Be who you are (Tony36) Great encouraging poem for individual expression. Lovely
  May 7th, 2025 09:17
• etiquette (Seori) Your metaphors may stick in the throat of some but it got me salivating....
  May 7th, 2025 09:15
• words (Jim56) Word choice in poems and life is very important so that misunderstandings...
  May 7th, 2025 09:11
• Scent of Memories (Libellule) Wonderful rhyme and flow in this poem with a tale to tell. It speaks to me...
  May 7th, 2025 09:09
• Morning Walk (Jerry Reynolds) Very nice. I love poems that are on the edge of enigmatic and clear and...
  May 7th, 2025 09:06
• The Light of Lucifer. (David Wakeling) Quite the devils call in this poem. All that we find abominable we dump on...
  May 7th, 2025 05:25
• Yellow (Maplespal) Uniquely colorful a fun read that reaches out to the reader. Lovely
  May 7th, 2025 04:50
• Toeing myself into you (Freya Møller) Makes me wonder what he did with the other seven. A fun read that can be...
  May 7th, 2025 04:14
• My Soul Belongs To God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) In times of threat and trouble a commitment to God. Nicely written
  May 7th, 2025 04:00
• Echoing Patience (Steve Goldenfort) Change, growth, progress seem to be themes of this poem of progression....
  May 7th, 2025 03:59
• He the who (Victor Bolshov) Loved the implication of duality in this poem and the idea of how we have...
  May 7th, 2025 03:56
• The old poet\'s heritage (Lorenz) Set in a blend between classical and Lewis Carrol it reads as a metaphor...
  May 7th, 2025 03:54
• GHOSTS OF WAR (Nephilim56) The pointlessness of war and all the consequences it brings. A cold read....
  May 7th, 2025 03:50
• Where is all the warriors,   (Devender Kumar) Poem of the consequences of a natural disaster and its implications. Most...
  May 7th, 2025 03:48
• me irl (Anna Lidia Patti) Now there is a thought. Was he a beefy guy? A fun read.
  May 7th, 2025 03:46
• God, Universe and Nature (Demar Desu) Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
  May 7th, 2025 03:44
• Lets Get Out of This Place (Hollow Enigma) Clever usage of the god dog inversion. A poem of attraction. Nicely done
  May 7th, 2025 03:43
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 24a-IndiaSouthernSeaFronts-20April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Comprehensive and most thorough analysis of this book and its implications...
  May 7th, 2025 03:41
• Murmurs In the Night (Sassy Lou) A need for privacy in a moment of weakness. Nicely written
  May 7th, 2025 03:38
• The forest Enchants (Kaz) A scene set with enchanting images that entrance the mind and senses.
  May 7th, 2025 03:36
• It\'s Ok (🅔🅜🅘🅛🅐🅨🅨) We all search for acceptance but before we can gain the acceptance of...
  May 7th, 2025 03:35
• Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s (Maydanae) The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most...
  May 7th, 2025 03:32
• A Longing For Freedom (Poetic Licence) Good to hear from you again Tobani. A poem of internal state and concern...
  May 7th, 2025 03:29
• Words Written Limerick. (Goldfinch60) A fun read Andy, I always liked limericks and this one fits right in.
  May 7th, 2025 03:21
• Let us Pray (Cedrick) Gratitude expressed in poetic form. Nicely written
  May 6th, 2025 20:30
• an evening activity (NinjaGirl) Such a lonely feel to this poem a feeling of isolation. It cries out for...
  May 6th, 2025 20:27
• The Weight of Almost (Amandatoriii) A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice
  May 6th, 2025 20:22
• Summer Love (Fauxsabotage) A pledge of love in a poetic form using rhyme in verse. The message comes...
  May 6th, 2025 15:37
• writers block (getting over it) (JuneM) A strong feeling of reliance in this poem of calling out for one desired....
  May 6th, 2025 15:33
• You (Amethyste) A good metaphor for a romantic subject. Nicely said
  May 6th, 2025 15:30
• A ball of fluff (Nicole Pritchard) A furry companion that one can relate to. Very nicely done
  May 6th, 2025 13:46
• Beauty is in the Eye of the Landlorder (Quemis) A poem for attention to a problem among many others. Well written
  May 6th, 2025 13:45
• Delerium in PA (Thomas W Case) More great images that give the impression of poverty, grit, grime and...
  May 6th, 2025 13:42
• SOUL&MIND (Magzzbaby) We are the one that is most difficult to fight against, to agree with and...
  May 6th, 2025 13:40
• The Curious Case of The Bumblebat Moo (Jane Walker) Memories of Lewis Carrol in this poem. Always loved those poems.
  May 6th, 2025 12:03
• Ode To Michael Parks (Kurt Philip Behm) Nicely done Kurt liked the rhyme and flow. The message is always good and...
  May 6th, 2025 12:01
• At Our Sleepy Bay by Alexander Block (Ksey_Gan) Now this one has me pondering. The beginning seems clear and it grows...
  May 6th, 2025 11:58
• Shudder Spit (Gray0328) Metaphors galore in this poem. Nicely done Gray
  May 6th, 2025 11:54
• Wounded Landscapes (TTEUK) A sad poem of loss. Images of confusion and multiple metaphors. Nice write
  May 6th, 2025 11:51
• The big guy\'s pissed (Hzugman) Yes we broke it and now what? Good read
  May 6th, 2025 11:43
• Let’s not touch mustaches (EvenwheniLie) A poem of standing up for oneself and one\'s decisions well done.
  May 6th, 2025 09:37
• Let\'s Go Back (Paul Gerard Reed) A positive write of hope and wishes. Very nicely done.
  May 6th, 2025 09:35
• Of Lavendar, and...Candles (Cheeky Missy) Another lovely set of sonnets that speak of smells and tastes lovely
  May 6th, 2025 09:33
• Wrath of the Wild ([email protected]) A great write of nature\'s resilience and rebirth. Loved it a fave
  May 6th, 2025 09:31
• Mythopoetry (Libellule) Once again a poem of quality with great classical analysis and mythology....
  May 6th, 2025 09:29
• I write your name (Lorenz) Close to gothic in nature this poem is dark and highly metaphorical in...
  May 6th, 2025 07:56
• Dare (Pineapple_pizza018) What seems an absurd joke is more real than one might imagine, although...
  May 6th, 2025 07:53
• Rose moon Midnight star (Reynaldo Casison) So poetic in its uncommon word combinations. Lovely and artistic in its...
  May 6th, 2025 07:51
• Vanguard (John Prophet) A most interesting idea John makes me wonder if we are not AI without...
  May 6th, 2025 07:48
• Music and Poetry (Tony36) A wonderful write Tony. A recognition that song is one more component in...
  May 6th, 2025 07:45
• Smell (Weep little lion girl) A marvelous write of how we often feel what is part of us is something...
  May 6th, 2025 07:42
• The Laughing Matter (Tristan Robert Lange) Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a...
  May 6th, 2025 06:41
• Spring Breeze (RSM0812) A very nice sonnet and well written with great images and metaphor. Lovely
  May 6th, 2025 06:34
• Trapped (Caring dove) The mind is the cocoon from which butterflies of confidence...
  May 6th, 2025 06:12
• existential dread (Seori) What a wonderful metaphor lies behind the mask of this creature that...
  May 6th, 2025 06:09
• Tomorrow is my birthday (Demar Desu) This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on...
  May 6th, 2025 06:07
• a rose can say so much (Jim56) Ah now there\'s a love seldom mentioned even in poetry. So near sighted we...
  May 6th, 2025 06:05
• THEY HAD JUST BEGUN (Ferjohn Timung) A most sad write of what could have been and never was to be. Tragic and...
  May 6th, 2025 04:55
• the thread between us (Arqios) Deep thought here Cryptic although many meanings are possible it seems to...
  May 6th, 2025 04:53
• 3 for your sight (Maplespal) Three the still center on the object, the author in the first a fading...
  May 6th, 2025 04:47
• The Greenhouse Effect (JH The Muse) What I felt I did not like. The feeling of control, the artificial...
  May 6th, 2025 04:42
• The River of Dreams (Mottakeenur Rehman) It is so difficult to find original metaphors. Although storms and rivers...
  May 6th, 2025 04:36
• Tick, Tock, Time Is Up (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A clever wording of modern paranoia in a world where paranoia is warranted...
  May 6th, 2025 04:33
• Shhh (KTay) A metronome beats in the heart of this poem as it drags you along to its...
  May 6th, 2025 04:30
• LOVE (Nephilim56) It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the...
  May 6th, 2025 04:27
• Haltia, spirit (Mourgana of the Fey) I can hear and see the nature in this poem. It talks to me and seductively...
  May 6th, 2025 04:25
• The Lady Who Liked Mangoes.     (David Wakeling) A most romantic poem that wistfully carries the reader on a journey. Very...
  May 6th, 2025 04:21
• You and me (Victor Bolshov) I loved the song the verse is hypnotic as is the beat of the music. It is...
  May 6th, 2025 04:16
• One Day It Will Happen. (Goldfinch60) So true and be thankful for each and every day that you have had every...
  May 6th, 2025 04:08
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 22a-Poem-IndiaMaldivesBitingHand-20April2025 (Soman Ragavan) A most thorough and comprehensive analysis that leaves little else to be...
  May 6th, 2025 04:04
• Drinks & Drugs (Pineapple_pizza018) A most sad poem of addiction that becomes the choice over love and how...
  May 5th, 2025 20:40
• A mirror’s memory (Thoughter) How much more important it is when young to feel pretty. Still important...
  May 5th, 2025 20:37
• I Am the One (Rrodriguez) Romantic and sweet. This poem speaks of the gratitude felt in love. Very...
  May 5th, 2025 20:34
• Untitled (❦ 𝔥𝔞𝔶𝔩𝔢𝔦𝔤𝔥 ❦) Raw, sad and difficult to believe. That a person feels unlovable is...
  May 5th, 2025 20:32
• my imaginary twilight zone introductions #1 (Jon Nakapalau) Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
  May 5th, 2025 18:46
• The door (Boot) Cryptic but not too much so, just enough to be poetic. Lovely and well...
  May 5th, 2025 18:44
• in the dark (Gloria Denise) A great message poetically said. Well done
  May 5th, 2025 18:41
• Some Things I Do Not Need (Maydanae) Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything...
  May 5th, 2025 18:38
• Dump Nymphs (Tony Grannell) I must say that I look forward to your poems so as to glean a bit of...
  May 5th, 2025 18:03
• As I reflect on you (Z7 Softens) Clever and well worded a poem of reflection for sure. Very nicely done
  May 5th, 2025 17:55
• Those Amphibious Beings (EvenwheniLie) Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most...
  May 5th, 2025 17:52
• her death (NinjaGirl) Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this...
  May 5th, 2025 16:36
• Hope of the Day (Tayama) Positive, inspiring, bright and hopeful. Very nicely written and well...
  May 5th, 2025 16:34
• You (Amethyste) As short as the time that it took to miss the one you love. Well written.
  May 5th, 2025 16:32
• Skele-tongue (Canticle) A fun read and I have never thought of a skeleton with a tongue.
  May 5th, 2025 15:07
• I wish (MinaH) A most interesting write. Death doesn\'t bother me pain does. A read that...
  May 5th, 2025 15:05
• The other Side of Pain (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Great advice and well written in such poetic form. A lovely write.
  May 5th, 2025 13:37
• Well Versed in Delerium (Thomas W Case) I love this one Thomas it is quite gritty and raw and like a piece of food...
  May 5th, 2025 13:35
• The Truth That Is (Lewisgale mental hospital) This is a very strong poem and the use of repetition is a good tool used...
  May 5th, 2025 13:30
• Erase (Libellule) Again a wonderful write. How many times I have pruned from my poems lines...
  May 5th, 2025 13:22
• I Will Have To Ask My Mother First (ADarkerMind) I am most sorry that I missed this one but very glad that I have now found...
  May 5th, 2025 13:18
• Caterpillar\'s Journey to Freedom (Moumita) I love how you have incorporated mythology in this poem and have...
  May 5th, 2025 11:51
• requiem. (Vic.) So sad, change is a constant and sometimes it does not happen...
  May 5th, 2025 10:28
• God But A Handmaiden (Kurt Philip Behm) A strong poem and well thought through. Yes according to believers of...
  May 5th, 2025 10:27