Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Villains (Cindy)
So many villains in this world and to each of us different ones. A lovely...
June 2nd, 2026 16:45 - Cruel days (Jodie)
This poem a real existential crisis put on the page. Lovely
June 2nd, 2026 16:42 - Leaving The Past (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love these Kurt some great images here \"Putting your arm around the hump...
June 2nd, 2026 16:41 - Ashtray Memory (Thomas W Case)
Love your poems Thomas so full of life gritty and grimy at times at others...
June 2nd, 2026 16:38 - Extreme anguished agony courtesy cyber smokey and the bandits (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Hope the funds get restored as well. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 13:22 - Life\'s Last Page (Mylastwrites)
So true love changes in form over time but grows stronger as well. Nicely...
June 2nd, 2026 13:20 - The Curse (Matthew J. Bays)
This was a haunting poem that like a dream itself may well be metaphor....
June 2nd, 2026 13:19 - Ode to the Bush (Gray0328)
Wonderful wild and with a message. Well done Gray
June 2nd, 2026 13:16 - The Legend of Bertie Bucket (Cully45)
Quite the story that seems historical in nature and well written...
June 2nd, 2026 13:14 - Alternate history (Lorenz)
Alice what of the snarks and boojums? Oh yea forgot about the snark that...
June 2nd, 2026 13:09 - There Was a Young Lad Who Gulped Down a Lie (A Parody on “There Was an Old Lady Who Swallowed a Fly” by Dorothy B. King) (AuburnScribbler)
A familiar flow and meter from there was an old lady that swallowed a fly....
June 2nd, 2026 10:56 - What Changed (M.E.M.)
As one climbs higher the educational ladder more and more difficult it...
June 2nd, 2026 10:05 - people with titles feel entitled (King)
I hear a call for normalcy in this poem that pleads ignorance as to...
June 2nd, 2026 09:37 - Nightingale (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ah my friend here we have a great example of a contradiction \"as blank as...
June 2nd, 2026 09:36 - Refusing the Fixed Grammar of Self (Matthew R. Callies)
Gender, what seems a black and white issue of either or is not always so....
June 2nd, 2026 09:05 - PENDANT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Memories evoked by a picture opened and closed. And so it is that the mind...
June 2nd, 2026 07:08 - If for a Moment (Katie B.)
Moving with great descriptive adjectives and nouns it paints its picture...
June 2nd, 2026 07:06 - the shadows that follow (Arqios)
The very brevity of this work bodes depth of meaning the forces involved...
June 2nd, 2026 05:35 - June (Lauraoverxo)
There is the personification of a month making clever use of the dual...
June 2nd, 2026 05:31 - watch the children play (Jim56)
There is nothing like the innocence of a child or their energy. Well done...
June 2nd, 2026 05:29 - One last (Maplespal)
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27 - Tripping Over Me (JWKP98)
In search of a vacancy in the puzzle of life. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 05:26 - Ache (John Edward Smith Jr.)
Madness turned anger at alienation from those that can not see the same....
June 2nd, 2026 05:22 - जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था (Waiting for Silence)
Couplets of duality where there appears conflict sometimes finding...
June 2nd, 2026 05:20 - A Goodbye (Edgar_NiyaPoe)
A poem that continues to build until the end and the final lines define...
June 2nd, 2026 05:16 - I write to heavens for thy nation (ii) (Funmiwrites)
A poetic lament for a nation and a people that suffer in the face of...
June 2nd, 2026 05:13 - A Story Weird (Birdbird)
I particularly loved the first part of this poem with its cadence and...
June 2nd, 2026 05:10 - cursor’s blink (Pontefract)
This paints a vivid picture of technological progress that may or may not...
June 2nd, 2026 05:07 - Quieter (Xlayla55x)
The word itself quieter evokes emotions and is so well chosen for this...
June 2nd, 2026 05:04 - Mortal Kombat II (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Gamming taken to the next level in this poem. Nicely done
June 2nd, 2026 05:02 - Have A Great Day (Anthony Hanible)
A wish or blessing very nicely written in this poem. Well done Anthony
June 2nd, 2026 05:00 - Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60)
I love your story Gold but even more I love your word play with it...
June 2nd, 2026 04:58 - Laurence comes out of the closet aged 15. (David Wakeling)
June 2nd, 2026 04:49 - Laurence comes out of the closet aged 15. (David Wakeling)
It is funny how one\'s beliefs be they sexual, religious, economic,...
June 2nd, 2026 04:49 - The Honest Man (Coracaodacripta)
A metaphor with a powerful message that comes through in the last lines....
June 2nd, 2026 04:45 - Home🏡✨ (Antra.coree)
It sounds like you have already begun to build this home not with wood or...
June 2nd, 2026 04:41 - Chasm (Fränz Müller)
In the dark in need of a guide. Well said
June 1st, 2026 20:16 - A Plea to the Moon (Kevin Hulme)
It has such a soft feel initially and I guess that would go with a...
June 1st, 2026 20:14 - Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness. (Friendship)
A lovely thought most poetically stated. it strikes at the heart of the...
June 1st, 2026 20:12 - Dark sky (Cerise456)
Ah nothing like grandma\'s wool. A fun read
June 1st, 2026 20:08 - Art (Amethyste)
In art many of us find shelter so well said. Pouring our tea cup is a...
June 1st, 2026 16:17 - To my sister (HerTime)
There is pain in this poem of leaving. Nicely expressed it calls out and...
June 1st, 2026 16:16 - Soon my love (TrueNorth)
A love pledge in this poem nicely said.
June 1st, 2026 16:13 - Women! (Zelda Vanrooyen)
A powerful statement and one I respect
June 1st, 2026 16:12 - Just .....A..... Dream. (Celina Powell)
Sexual. sensual, seductive and erotic but only a dream
June 1st, 2026 13:04 - The Present Is What Counts (Mylastwrites)
A lovely write and so well said. Commendable but I believe it should be...
June 1st, 2026 12:17 - Naivety (Soheil khodaparasti)
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not...
June 1st, 2026 12:15 - Whatever. (Neyney@386)
When what we want we know we can not have. The Rolling Stones said well in...
June 1st, 2026 12:14 - When Hope Stops Breathing (Briana)
Now that is desperation. Well written
June 1st, 2026 12:10 - Frozen Dreams (Kurt Philip Behm)
This time Kurt I have to go with the first one because the wording made me...
June 1st, 2026 12:09 - grief (Nitya)
A poem that makes the distinction between pain and grief over loss. Nicely...
June 1st, 2026 12:00 - Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception... (Cellinic)
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the...
June 1st, 2026 11:23 - Push (M.E.M.)
A good read and what made it best was the last line and its meaning.
June 1st, 2026 11:13 - Gentleman Death (Gray0328)
Gray I have always seen death as a kind friend that in its mercy takes...
June 1st, 2026 11:12 - PLEASES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carpe diem the essence of this poem. Live life to the fullest in the...
June 1st, 2026 11:09 - Axiomagic (Mutley Ravishes)
The quote of an idealist I must admit and a fave.
June 1st, 2026 11:06 - night beauty (Jim56)
A most lovely write Jim. I love the night as well and find it to be a...
June 1st, 2026 11:05 - melded roads (Arqios)
Once again Cryptic I venture a guess at how it struck me. To me what is...
June 1st, 2026 11:03 - Renewable Hope (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have always loved the ABAB rhyme scheme it takes an ordinary poem and...
June 1st, 2026 10:50 - The math of it (Maplespal)
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit...
June 1st, 2026 04:33 - (Extra)Ordinary Birds (Rosalinahawkins)
Although this poem may be about an individual it is applicable to people...
June 1st, 2026 04:30 - AS I WANDER (Cully45)
A poem of gratitude at the realization that the world is beautiful and...
June 1st, 2026 04:27 - A DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The short lines and rhyme create a rolling rocking feeling to this poem...
June 1st, 2026 04:25 - The Nuns in My Neighbourhood (Mirela)
Images presented that leaves a feeling the core of poetry. Nicely done
June 1st, 2026 04:24 - Turn Off The Screen, Turn On Your Mind (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Technology has taken us down a dangerous road and this poem speaks that....
June 1st, 2026 04:23 - Trinity Trouble? (Orchidee)
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so...
June 1st, 2026 04:21 - Im okay; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
Vacillating moods, emotions and behaviors like a rollercoaster in this...
June 1st, 2026 04:19 - That Memory Of Whitby. (Goldfinch60)
A poem of a fond memory made all the better with a good surprise of its...
June 1st, 2026 04:07 - June Folding into Brightness (Matthew R. Callies)
This poem that focuses on pride and Pride can apply to any although...
June 1st, 2026 04:00 - Anthony Or Hanible Middle Name Outcast (Anthony Hanible)
This poem begins with a division within and expounds upon that divide....
June 1st, 2026 03:57 - I write to heavens for thy nation (Funmiwrites)
A personification of the land sounding almost Native American in its view...
June 1st, 2026 03:56 - Margairetta (David Wakeling)
A poetic plea for forgiveness that extols feelings of guilt and remorse....
June 1st, 2026 03:53 - Three Ways Of Looking At A Chair (Vipassana)
Different perspectives of a chair as viewed from three different points of...
June 1st, 2026 03:51 - Up Up Up We go (Rabdikavi)
The ups and downs of life reflected in this poem that encouraged a carpe...
June 1st, 2026 03:48 - Silent Tears..... (Celina Powell)
The pain of loss echoes in this poem well written
May 31st, 2026 22:05 - Psalm of Delivery (Thomas W Case)
From a tough situation to betterment in this poem of redemption. Well said...
May 31st, 2026 22:04 - Am I a bad friend? (Friendship)
Sad and very emotional. A loss that is hard to reconcile. Well written
May 31st, 2026 22:02 - If (Or there Abouts) (Kevin Hulme)
With all due respect to Sir Rudyard Kipling this one made me smile and yes...
May 31st, 2026 18:45 - Where Does One Go? (Mylastwrites)
A question that asks where one goes in this life. Troubles and...
May 31st, 2026 17:28 - What lies ahead? (_Doc_)
Good rhyme and flow in this poem take one on a journey of life and where...
May 31st, 2026 17:27 - Citizens Bank checking account... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Banks and cereal quite a run. A fun read
May 31st, 2026 17:25 - and what is gold to utopians? (King)
A fanciful metaphor for cultural differences. Nicely done
May 31st, 2026 16:28 - The sadness without a name (Lore)
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27 - Visions I see (Joseph M Marion)
Biblical in proportion, prophetic in style it speaks to the present state...
May 31st, 2026 14:40 - FLOWERS vs PRICES (Durdica Porobija)
A stunning poem of a most powerful nature. Women on display and for sale...
May 31st, 2026 14:06 - Inspire (Cerise456)
A wonderful write that plays on a word. Well done
May 31st, 2026 14:00 - ADDED TIME (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59 - sin of wrath (Ethan Mikel St.Amour)
A powerful senryu and well written
May 31st, 2026 13:57 - Autumn (Mon)
Lovely! a great write
May 31st, 2026 13:56 - bring back punk (MR.apocalypse)
It is the rhythmic beat of this poem that caught my attention. It pulls...
May 31st, 2026 12:20 - Sunday: 5-31-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well Kurt I did read and yes did like and some more than others. I would...
May 31st, 2026 12:18 - A Walk in the Countryside (Classicmister)
I would have to agree. This is a lovely write that puts me where I am most...
May 31st, 2026 12:15 - Three Bells (Neil Higgins)
A reflective poem that is easily identifiable. Well written
May 31st, 2026 12:13 - Tangible Silence (– NoeticNonsense)
A lovely passage or two here that speak a mountain. It is what we don\'t...
May 31st, 2026 12:11 - Where the Trail Ends (Matthew R. Callies)
A beautiful picture painted in this verse. It is full of images close to...
May 31st, 2026 12:10 - Not the Park (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem Tristan combines Acrostic, Tribute, Historical, Religious all...
May 31st, 2026 12:07 - Blue Moon (Kaz)
What a great senryu nicely said
May 31st, 2026 12:03 - A woman’s heart (Mirela)
A great comparison and allegory short and nicely written Mirela
May 31st, 2026 12:02 - The Poet and the Magician (Sneha Sebastian)
A sad poem of love of an illusion. They say in magic the final act is the...
May 31st, 2026 12:01 - Not just a sport (Antra.coree)
A wonderful write and kept so by not identifying which sport. Very nicely...
May 31st, 2026 11:56
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