Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Was it Justified (MrNobody40)
I foresee the coming of a bad relationship in this poem. The portent is...
July 6th, 2025 17:39 - Lost Cause for Love (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི)
Chained by love imprisoned in a glass box there is no prince charming to...
July 6th, 2025 17:36 - Bet on It (Dyslexic.gun)
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be...
July 6th, 2025 17:34 - The Women at the Eclipse (RSM0812)
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely...
July 6th, 2025 15:24 - polish the stars (Gray0328)
A lovely fanciful write that in metaphor speaks of many things, the light...
July 6th, 2025 13:23 - White piece of paper (Caring dove)
A poem of a sleeping muse that leaves the poet staring at paper and those...
July 6th, 2025 13:11 - Orgasm Of Dawn (Gaias Soothing Haven)
Seductive, erotic, sensual and at the same time most poetic. Natural and...
July 6th, 2025 13:07 - Dachstein (Alan R)
Short but powerful it speaks to being alone in making our choices and the...
July 6th, 2025 13:03 - Slowly fading (Chris M 352)
Dark, sad, a tragic sense goes with this poem leaving me feeling down and...
July 6th, 2025 13:01 - Rotten (Damaso)
It is from filth that things grow. Plants fertilized with manure, put out...
July 6th, 2025 12:59 - Listening To Patsy ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt I\'m always a succor for nostalgia and this is one. A fave
July 6th, 2025 12:56 - Helpless Witness (Vanna)
A poem that speaks of gravity pulling at melting wax as the candle bends...
July 6th, 2025 12:55 - The One (Eugene S.)
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well...
July 6th, 2025 12:51 - Of Testaments and Crimson Fragments (Petrichor of Love)
Normally this format does not attract me but there are exceptions to every...
July 6th, 2025 12:49 - Whipped Cream and Friday Night Strangers... (Cheeky Missy)
Now you did it Chic by mentioning whipped cream you got me going. I love...
July 6th, 2025 09:46 - A Prison town (EvenwheniLie)
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term...
July 6th, 2025 09:43 - Funny Bunny (DLewis88)
Good write. Keep moving it\'s hard to hit a moving target. Fun read
July 6th, 2025 09:41 - Home Again (Bella Shepard)
So glad you\'re back I missed you. Good write one that warms the heart.
July 6th, 2025 09:39 - The Jackalope (Tony36)
Have seen them mounted in a hunting store but never on the trail. A fun...
July 6th, 2025 08:29 - Oh pretty wild flowers (Stephen Maibam)
Colorful images painted in this poem with beautiful scenery that takes the...
July 6th, 2025 08:25 - My Religion (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem that is holding to most people\'s feeling today. A poem of...
July 6th, 2025 08:22 - What Your Friend Broke (Lore)
First this poem is very touching and sadly true for many. A triangle never...
July 6th, 2025 07:07 - Dreamily absurd (Maplespal)
Yes the vision of Nicola Tesla before Rockefeller got in the way. Free...
July 6th, 2025 07:00 - Butterfly Reflections (Teddy.15)
One of nature\'s symbols of beauty our mind weaves a tapestry of...
July 6th, 2025 06:56 - meadow melody (Jim56)
The meadow lark a memory from my childhood is nostalgic and now a ghost...
July 6th, 2025 05:43 - Human Folly (Devender Kumar)
Several cliche like phrases linked together in this poem give it a sense...
July 6th, 2025 04:42 - My Prayer Will Never Be Over (ForeverJesus7)
A poem of belief and faith that carries the writer onward. Nicely written
July 6th, 2025 04:39 - LOVE DYING (Nephilim56)
Loved the constant flow of metaphors in this poem of the chapters of love....
July 6th, 2025 04:37 - Anthonius Gunawan: Aviation\'s hero (Brian Otucho)
Well crafted in good meter and rhyme this poem is heroic in nature and...
July 6th, 2025 04:35 - A New World Order (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Every good order has an inner circle of knowledge where advancement is...
July 6th, 2025 04:33 - A time for everything (NafisaSB)
A poem with good advice for a fast paced world where everything is rushed...
July 6th, 2025 04:28 - Kissing in the Rain (Santajah Douglass)
A beautifully worded and rhymed poem fully romantic in its design and...
July 6th, 2025 04:26 - AnalysisByGoogleGemini-Volume 26-Sparrows--19Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Another good analysis Soman that brings back memories of the last one done...
July 6th, 2025 04:20 - feasting you (Arqios)
Such a style of a past era is carried by this poem. The first stanza...
July 6th, 2025 04:18 - Wise Man Say (19) (Poetic Licence)
There are at least two there today that struck home and are wiser that the...
July 6th, 2025 04:11 - And The Band Played. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful write of how music brings back memories and emotions from the...
July 6th, 2025 04:06 - To the ones who need to walk away (Insanely Hilarious)
Advice in a poem to women, but could be men as well, to not take abuse in...
July 6th, 2025 03:59 - Myths of Madness (MendedFences27)
The clever insertion of Famous past stars of the silver screen was...
July 6th, 2025 03:51 - Adrift (Kaz)
A great image cast in this short piece. It gives the image of a search for...
July 6th, 2025 03:47 - Broken Silhouette (MrNobody40)
A wistful poem of love lost in the past that now is only dream like. A...
July 5th, 2025 20:19 - Regrets (Fränz Müller)
A poem that explores those shoulds and coulds we all have. Very nice
July 5th, 2025 18:15 - Forgot (Keeter C)
Nicely written a religious feel to this poem.
July 5th, 2025 17:32 - The Positive And Negative The Negative And Positive (Anthony Hanible)
Indeed sometimes opposites attract. A fun read
July 5th, 2025 17:30 - As I Preach to the Choir (Xalvazora)
I hear the tiredness of this relationship where you feel controlled and...
July 5th, 2025 17:29 - You (Amethyste)
I ask the same question sometimes and just as seeds planted not all...
July 5th, 2025 14:01 - Threads Of Dream (DLewis88)
With this poem I see immigration past and present where once there were...
July 5th, 2025 13:56 - Betwixt The Between (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poem of the unseen that that exists unnoticed and invisible but never...
July 5th, 2025 13:54 - Confession (Gewar)
A cry out of the inner self in poem a most wonderful write
July 5th, 2025 13:52 - Haunted (Meagan Adelle)
A poem of that image we carry of the ideal the archetype of love. A most...
July 5th, 2025 13:50 - [What I Really Wanna Know is WHY?] (Cheeky Missy)
Another fun read of food and rain and a dirty car. Feels like I\'ve been...
July 5th, 2025 12:52 - Ma Ma Zil (Gray0328)
A lovely portrait of a woman in poetry it conveys the picture well. Most...
July 5th, 2025 11:18 - I will write to heavens your story (v) (Funmiwrites)
Dark and sad a poem of loss and death. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 11:12 - When I Thought I Was Okay (Lore)
Even physical health is not always that wat with relapses and infections...
July 5th, 2025 10:50 - The poor\'s Nation (Devender Kumar)
A thought provoking poem of oppression focused on the poor. Capitalism is...
July 5th, 2025 10:47 - One Beneficial to Aten (Eugene S.)
Amenhotep IV who tried to erase the other gods and after his death his...
July 5th, 2025 10:44 - I\'m the intelligence (Lorenz)
It was the end of this poem that gave this poem meaning or maybe I\'m just...
July 5th, 2025 10:38 - Fireworks fun (Tony36)
Made me laugh and that gets the fave. Clever with Hamlet rolling over in...
July 5th, 2025 10:33 - Can ye not..... (Orchidee)
Ye and Thee because you\'ve conditioned his brain with all those hymns....
July 5th, 2025 10:30 - Inside the Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
Intricate rhyme woven in a persistently formed gender specific cultural...
July 5th, 2025 07:54 - A moment: Cut palm (Maplespal)
Sometimes we all need a little space to deal with difficulties. Give the...
July 5th, 2025 07:01 - part savage, part human (Arqios)
It is contrast that makes for interest and catches the eye and ear....
July 5th, 2025 06:05 - when the bikers came (Jim56)
July 5th, 2025 05:40 - when the bikers came (Jim56)
A most wonderful tribute to another remembered. Nicely done Jim
July 5th, 2025 05:40 - Icelandic song of love (Cellinic)
Beautiful images that appear dreamlike but real and nature and myth melded...
July 5th, 2025 05:38 - THROUGH TEARS SUBLIME (Nephilim56)
Sad and somewhat haunting in its message of sacrifice and impending loss....
July 5th, 2025 04:29 - That’s Why (Vanna)
A sad poem of pain and hurt that caused a rupture. Well written
July 5th, 2025 04:27 - The stranger who was once myself (Tantrum28)
Nicely set up as a duality this poem becomes a soliloquy as one talks to...
July 5th, 2025 04:24 - I\'m back (Rainbow 1)
Glad you are back.
July 5th, 2025 04:20 - The Last (Parsa)
A strong play on words in this poem as it makes its point. A fun read
July 5th, 2025 04:19 - Free (2781)
A strong poem of faith. Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 04:18 - Just Leave Those Kids Alone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Whether news item or Pink Floyd the message is loud and clear that is sent...
July 5th, 2025 04:15 - Journey of Life (Sahildhobalepoetry)
A most encouraging tone to this poem, it cheers people on and is most...
July 5th, 2025 04:13 - Oh, Valiant Brigade (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Regardless of how you take the meaning the wording is beautiful. Whether...
July 5th, 2025 04:10 - Gaza (Help). (Poetic Licence)
Politics, greed, history, religion are a deadly mix. The Torah does not...
July 5th, 2025 04:04 - Forward With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
A good statement that I try to follow. Nicely said Andy
July 5th, 2025 03:55 - No reason why (Anabasova)
A fave for the message that is so encouraging to all that suffer physical...
July 4th, 2025 20:22 - Fourth for Annie (James Michael)
A fun read for the holiday a timely write. Nice
July 4th, 2025 20:17 - The Usual Please (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read that made me smile. Lovely
July 4th, 2025 19:12 - child (Lunarchloedip)
Cute and inviting it calls out for friendship and looking for connections.
July 4th, 2025 19:10 - When you found your Niche (Teacherblair)
I am so glad that there are people like you to fill that niche they are...
July 4th, 2025 19:07 - It\'s Over There (Thomas W Case)
Good write Thomas I think I\'ve lived there before but the rent was too...
July 4th, 2025 19:05 - What if SpongeBob was never happy (Vividvoid14)
Things are not always what they appear, illusions occur and...
July 4th, 2025 19:04 - The Day Love Flies (Gaias Soothing Haven)
Erotic, seductive, sexual well done
July 4th, 2025 19:01 - Your Hoodie (Alex PB)
A poem of how love can be different from one person to another. Nicely
July 4th, 2025 16:56 - A Rainy Rain (Mercy Robert)
A poem of gratitude nicely written
July 4th, 2025 16:55 - Memory (Amethyste)
A most interesting write that melts like butter. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 16:53 - Time Lord (Randyjohnson71)
An informative write well explained.
July 4th, 2025 16:51 - I\'ll Play Like Rip Van Winkle and Eat Eclairs (Cheeky Missy)
Another series of good writes Chic.
July 4th, 2025 16:49 - the art of the pause (Gray0328)
The hole in the pot, the space between the spokes what gives meaning....
July 4th, 2025 16:18 - Wicked Game (Travis Bower)
The games we play in relationships. This poem speaks to this. Very nice
July 4th, 2025 16:16 - Mystical Eroticism. (Black Lyon)
This poem has a religious ring and speaks of love nicely done
July 4th, 2025 16:14 - Under Control (Anthony Hanible)
It feels like we are being controlled by a puppet master. Strings are...
July 4th, 2025 16:06 - The beat of the bulb light (Georgia Watson)
A light bulb has a burning filament inside. It is the life of the light...
July 4th, 2025 16:03 - Ignoring (Caring dove)
Ghosting a person has many meanings and everyone takes it different. We...
July 4th, 2025 15:59 - Fornication Nation (Tristan Robert Lange)
We live in a greedy species, in a greedy world, under a greedy system....
July 4th, 2025 15:51 - I sing the praises of Sterilite (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Just to prove that a poem can be about anything and I too use things from...
July 4th, 2025 10:59 - Lethal jingle (Lorenz)
Madonna twice and her butt too. I get a postmodern feeling of a Salvador...
July 4th, 2025 10:54 - Omnipresent (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Quite biblical in nature this one could have come from Genesis. Very...
July 4th, 2025 10:48 - Bowery (Fränz Müller)
A tragic event with so many tragic consequences beyond the deaths there....
July 4th, 2025 10:44 - Julys Purple Flower (RSM0812)
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple...
July 4th, 2025 10:40
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