Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Existential Crisis (Malo J) Raw question from a traumatic life put to poem. Nicely written
  July 21st, 2025 20:57
• Death Crown (Brian Otucho) Defiance against greater forces, no shame, honor in standing up. Nicely...
  July 21st, 2025 19:47
• My only friend,my best friend, (Friendship) A most beautiful poem of tribute. I\'m sure that such a soul would want...
  July 21st, 2025 18:36
• A Fogged Glass Between Worlds (Gaias Soothing Haven) Seductive, errotic, sensual, sexual nicely written. Well done.
  July 21st, 2025 17:06
• Beyond the Clouds. (Jan bach) This sounds like it could be a song. A lovely poem with many images....
  July 21st, 2025 17:03
• I Love You Different (Ladywithaquill) This sounds more like a mother\'s love that is unconditional. This makes...
  July 21st, 2025 17:02
• rain (Lunarchloedip) A wonderful write of loneliness curbed by a dream of fantasy that seems...
  July 21st, 2025 16:59
• Malcolm-Jamal Warner (Randyjohnson71) A beautiful dedication to a most wonderful actor taken too soon.
  July 21st, 2025 16:57
• Absolute Silence (Emery Walker) Nicely stated and composed. I do have such a life where I don\'t see...
  July 21st, 2025 16:54
• Warmth (Kaz) A really beautiful haiku. Nicely written
  July 21st, 2025 16:49
• Have you ever? (Giù) Thought provoking and well written it speaks to those thoughts of life....
  July 21st, 2025 15:16
• Your Story (13LaurenD) A poem of faith that all things happen for the best and so I believe...
  July 21st, 2025 15:14
• Peace (Keeter C) A view of the future in this poem. Political, geographical, logistical...
  July 21st, 2025 15:11
• Rise again (Princesslove) Be the Phoenix and rise from the ashes. A poem of determination to...
  July 21st, 2025 15:09
• Evil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Movie or book. Reminds me of a blend between The Rose, Angeles and Demons,...
  July 21st, 2025 15:07
• Evil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Movie or book. Reminds me of a blend between The Rose, Angeles and Demons,...
  July 21st, 2025 15:06
• Buble (Damaso) A bubble submerged or better yet one on a mirror the form of the poem. On...
  July 21st, 2025 15:01
• The Captive of Captivity (Gray0328) Biblical images abound in this poem of heaven, hell, death and afterlife....
  July 21st, 2025 12:51
• Just your waist (Musdeenthoughts) Errotic, a poem of lust one that all men know from time to time. Purchased...
  July 21st, 2025 12:48
• A Sunset That Never Saw A Sunrise (Petrichor of Love) Unrequited love is the most difficult but may be noble as well. Well done
  July 21st, 2025 12:38
• 53: Monologue - The Ending (Alex PB) Fear and doubt prevent many things, relationships being one. A poem that...
  July 21st, 2025 12:37
• When I was younger I was rich (Molly Delaney) Indeed riches measured in different ways and values that change. I too...
  July 21st, 2025 12:26
• “If You’re Still Watching” (Samuel) As people change so do their relationships. Recognition of this makes...
  July 21st, 2025 11:04
• Writing (Amethyste) A form of self expression and working through things best done alone. Well...
  July 21st, 2025 11:01
• MAYBE MY TIME IN YOUR CHAPTER IS FINALLY OVER (Fikrioshin) Reminiscing about a relationship and the doubts that lead to saying good...
  July 21st, 2025 11:01
• Once Upon an Evening in July (Cheeky Missy) Another set of delights Chic that span the day from morn till night with...
  July 21st, 2025 10:59
• Voices That Follow (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Another well written poem of a trait too common amongst us. Nicely done...
  July 21st, 2025 09:36
• The Weasel (Tony Grannell) Have known a few and seen more. The only difference between them and the...
  July 21st, 2025 09:34
• Hell (Yael Olalde-Garcia) A poem of raw emotion set in words of rage. Nicely done
  July 21st, 2025 09:28
• Why not tell the truth (Caring dove) Good advice in a poem nicely written
  July 21st, 2025 09:26
• Incident at Russian Boy Scout Camp by Agnes Barto (Ksey_Gan) The care of raising, the playfulness, sadness of separation and joy of...
  July 21st, 2025 09:25
• A thought: My minds stay (Maplespal) After an intense relationship of love it may be difficult to find another...
  July 21st, 2025 09:13
• How (Tony36) Such a poignant question. Each will have to answer on their own. As for me...
  July 21st, 2025 09:11
• Whispers in the Stars\' dream (Violet_Writes) A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to...
  July 21st, 2025 09:09
• Untitled (RSM0812) Wonderful rhyming in this short piece it speaks to the reader of the...
  July 21st, 2025 09:06
• It’s All in Him (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This poem is a proclamation of faith and belief strong and powerful yelled...
  July 21st, 2025 09:03
• Baphomet Rising (Tristan Robert Lange) I love the creative word play in this poem where the first letter in the...
  July 21st, 2025 09:01
• The art of traping (Devender Kumar) It is thus that contracts are made and signed. Just as the American...
  July 21st, 2025 07:06
• The century (Lorenz) There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written...
  July 21st, 2025 07:04
• Destiny of a Fool (Fränz Müller) Good rhyme paired with flowing meter and a haunting tale what more can I...
  July 21st, 2025 06:42
• The Empirical Veneers of Decency and Acceptance (ElizabethMoroz) A wonderful rhyme scheme and one that I have experimented with on...
  July 21st, 2025 06:34
• 4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student (Arqios) Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic...
  July 21st, 2025 06:21
• new day (Jim56) Very nice Jim every day is a new start.
  July 21st, 2025 05:47
• The path of no return (Albix) And so many may wonder. Time will tell and we will see. A well written...
  July 21st, 2025 05:06
• DADDYS GIRL (Nephilim56) A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and...
  July 21st, 2025 04:07
• struggle (Juliette) Metaphor and allegory well used in this poem of despair. Cleverly pursued...
  July 21st, 2025 04:05
• Impact (NafisaSB) Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the...
  July 21st, 2025 04:01
• Glad She Survived!!!. (Poetic Licence) There are worse things than death. Sometimes life is merely a reward for...
  July 21st, 2025 03:58
• My Dream Dress (Priya Tomar) Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a...
  July 21st, 2025 03:55
• Shower Meditation. (Goldfinch60) A shower much more efficient Gold. A lovely and refreshing poem of new...
  July 21st, 2025 03:53
• Once (Poetry.els) A poem of past promises, premonitions of pain realized. Nicely done in...
  July 21st, 2025 03:48
• All on Me (Bame Bame) A poem that poses the question of how much can a parent do with genetics...
  July 21st, 2025 03:45
• Amanda Taylor (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take...
  July 21st, 2025 03:40
• Jester (Hoolihooli) A poem of love gone sour turned to cheese and milk not knowing. A metaphor...
  July 20th, 2025 20:19
• It doesn\'t Make Sense (Thomas W Case) Gritty, full of raw life that most pay to avoid. Well written Thomas
  July 20th, 2025 20:15
• The stories we tell ourselves (Hzugman) Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
  July 20th, 2025 20:11
• 52: Monologue (Alex PB) A different concept of love than what most hold but still true and deeper...
  July 20th, 2025 20:10
• No Pain No Gain (Jordan) A bit of confusion and deterioration. What matters is the determination...
  July 20th, 2025 17:03
• You (Amethyste) A poem of offering nice
  July 20th, 2025 17:01
• Few cast the die (Muse of Calliope) Lovely! a fave
  July 20th, 2025 17:00
• A fable (Mourgana of the Fey) Perhaps it does indeed. In this world of humans happiness seems but an...
  July 20th, 2025 15:25
• Lost (Bella Shepard) Would, could, should, might, wished, wanted words that never were...
  July 20th, 2025 15:20
• Lost.. (David Prestigiacomo) A poem of love and passion as well as wishes. Nicely done
  July 20th, 2025 15:15
• Scars you chose not to see (Molly Delaney) Anger runs through this poem. Anger toward others and self. Feelings of...
  July 20th, 2025 13:20
• Don\'t fly (Sharvi) As a desire so common to children and adults this poem seems a metaphor as...
  July 20th, 2025 13:17
• The grief I could not set down (Samuel) A tragedy carried onward as a weight in life. Sad this poem is a journey...
  July 20th, 2025 13:15
• Twilight without end... (Sree) The vacillation between sight and blindness between dark and light make...
  July 20th, 2025 13:12
• Of Lust and Other Holy Wars (Petrichor of Love) An interesting journey and more interesting confusion. An interesting read
  July 20th, 2025 13:10
• Blessings Unused (Kurt Philip Behm) The untaken road the choice not made the action never acted on time past...
  July 20th, 2025 13:06
• Things I Had to Give Up to Survive (Malo J) A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs...
  July 20th, 2025 13:05
• The Fake Meeting (Ksey_Gan) A poem of waiting for the other to react. Nicely done
  July 20th, 2025 13:01
• Ghost (MatPie) This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and...
  July 20th, 2025 12:59
• Baby Bird (Shahla Latifi) Sadness and loss in this reflective poem. I sometimes wonder if we can...
  July 20th, 2025 12:57
• Open Hands, Full Heart (GeekSusie) A most beautiful message sent in such tender and light words where a gift...
  July 20th, 2025 12:54
• Trepidation (Keeter C) Well expressed the fear of falling basophobia akin to acrophobia many...
  July 20th, 2025 12:52
• The woman of my dreams (Musdeenthoughts) We all have images of what our love should be, look like, act like and yes...
  July 20th, 2025 12:48
• And So It Goes (Eugene S.) I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to...
  July 20th, 2025 12:45
• Liberation (Fränz Müller) A most interesting poem that speaks in reality but also in metaphor. What...
  July 20th, 2025 12:42
• Untitled (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A poem of feeling not understood and worse that others think that they...
  July 20th, 2025 12:39
• Natures Crime (RSM0812) Cryptic, a puzzle well written with a most interesting rhyme scheme it...
  July 20th, 2025 12:35
• Generation X: Life As I Know It (2025) (Aurora Mizutani) Clever, nicely written with good pacing and continuity it sends a positive...
  July 20th, 2025 12:33
• TH CURSE (Saswati das) There is no scarier demond that the one inside. I too take comfort in...
  July 20th, 2025 12:31
• when autumn comes around (Jim56) A beautiful picture painted here Jim. Very nicely done in good rhyme
  July 20th, 2025 12:28
• Talking to them (Maplespal) Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it...
  July 20th, 2025 12:27
• Tango in Durango (Tony Grannell) Easily a song and I can hear the melody a happy and raucous one at that...
  July 20th, 2025 12:14
• Go (Tony36) I can feel this one from my past and its desire still calls to me. Very...
  July 20th, 2025 12:09
• Epiclesis (Tristan Robert Lange) To blend old form and format with new thought and images well done my...
  July 20th, 2025 12:08
• weekend unleashed (Arqios) (Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line...
  July 20th, 2025 12:06
• Dispensations of Grace (ElizabethMoroz) A modern poetic book of Revelations? Scepticism, Irony and disenchantment...
  July 20th, 2025 12:00
• Clever Guest (Priya Tomar) Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser....
  July 20th, 2025 11:55
• A Factotum\'s Call (Gray0328) Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended...
  July 20th, 2025 04:19
• UNSEEN TEARS (Nephilim56) Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A...
  July 20th, 2025 04:17
• Broken Since Beginning (Shivansh) Poetically beautiful, realistically tragic, emotionally painful. Very...
  July 20th, 2025 04:14
• Motionless voyager (Lorenz) (On the pier a white shadow will wait ... Marriage of sun and silence...
  July 20th, 2025 04:11
• Unwept Goodbye (Haleyalexis) Normally such topics I ignore but there are exceptions to every rule and...
  July 20th, 2025 04:07
• Why should I read their books, (Devender Kumar) A reality and a metaphor as well. Nicely stated the issue of...
  July 20th, 2025 04:01
• The Reset (Sunflowersinrain) A most interesting set of analogies in this poem. Nicely written
  July 20th, 2025 03:59
• Ghost and Puppy (Vanna) Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even...
  July 20th, 2025 03:57
• The Echo Chamber (Samuel) This poem is well written in narrative form. It tells the story clearly in...
  July 20th, 2025 03:53
• Rather than talking to walls – (Amy Michelle Mosier) This poem speaks to me with great word selection in a topic dear to my...
  July 20th, 2025 03:49