Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Sun (Ajon4wheels)
Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is...
May 5th, 2025 10:20 - Save us from Devils (Devender Kumar)
A poem for all innocents be they human, animal, or plant or even the...
May 5th, 2025 10:18 - Orion (Lorenz)
A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice
May 5th, 2025 10:16 - So Many Skies (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
Now that\'s the attitude. What an inspiration of things yet to do and...
May 5th, 2025 10:14 - What If? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we...
May 5th, 2025 10:12 - Shakespearean / Poet (Muse of Calliope)
A poem of pledge and one of excuse for being. These travel deeper than the...
May 5th, 2025 10:10 - I\'ll Take Three of Those, Please (Cheeky Missy)
We have all had days of confusion when we don\'t even know what day it is...
May 5th, 2025 10:08 - I may be a Christian (Tony36)
A poem of acceptance and hope. Nicely worded
May 5th, 2025 10:01 - WILDFLOWER (Qurrathul Ain)
Here two meanings are approached simultaneously with so few words. I\'d...
May 5th, 2025 09:35 - I See You as an Art (Framed Mirror)
A wonderful piece of praise that in words poetic speaks a truth to all. A...
May 5th, 2025 07:09 - Sunday Sunrise (RSM0812)
Beautiful words woven here in metaphor and with deep meaning. So well...
May 5th, 2025 06:45 - My Wave (Mutley Ravishes)
A metaphor and poem based strongly on belief that is somehow logical about...
May 5th, 2025 06:43 - Grateful: For You (Alex PB)
A poem full of pain and anguish. It bleeds raw and open. Sad
May 5th, 2025 06:41 - When Falling isn\'t Final (Salvia.S)
A gain a metaphor so short with so much meaning. So well said and a fave
May 5th, 2025 06:39 - Unique (Maplespal)
Although we are all the same we are all different. We each are unique and...
May 5th, 2025 05:40 - The darkest moment (Hey!)
There is anger and rage in this poem that speaks out. Nicely done
May 5th, 2025 05:38 - Still Here (Neckymonky)
A poem of love that recognizes that space is needed and that too much wood...
May 5th, 2025 05:35 - cruelty should never be (Jim56)
Cruelty to human or animal is the same it is cruelty. A good message Jim
May 5th, 2025 05:33 - there is no lack in you (Arqios)
Such good advice but like a novice guitar player listening to a Stevie Ray...
May 5th, 2025 05:31 - Blocking Out The Sun (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Ah yes the absurdity of government decisions and public support an attempt...
May 5th, 2025 04:31 - FORGOTTEN (Nephilim56)
Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely...
May 5th, 2025 04:29 - Poet’s Introduction (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I can feel this, I can identify with this and yes it is a pendulum of pain...
May 5th, 2025 04:26 - Jazz Song for Norah (Reynaldo Casison)
A fantasy fantasia in this poem that drifts and floats to new heights with...
May 5th, 2025 04:22 - A THREAD TO LIFE (Ferjohn Timung)
Good message, for every action there is a reaction and this applies to our...
May 5th, 2025 04:19 - Flags Are Always in Demand (Gray0328)
Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary...
May 5th, 2025 04:16 - Monster In My Chest (Salian)
Well worded and rhymed this poem makes good use of the metaphor of a...
May 5th, 2025 04:11 - Memory of her (James Warren)
A very nice metaphor and clever use of a mixture of literal and emotional...
May 5th, 2025 04:06 - My Lazy Shadow (Ferjohn Timung)
A good message sent with a wonderful metaphor. Very nice rhyme paired with...
May 5th, 2025 04:04 - Loveless (Noellenoir)
A poem of sad regret and moving on. Nicely composed and well done
May 5th, 2025 04:01 - From Grain To Glass (ADarkerMind)
Madness is happiness and is outlawed by all federal agencies as well as...
May 5th, 2025 03:58 - Fearful and Terrified. (David Wakeling)
I am glad you have your health after sitting at the first three tables. A...
May 5th, 2025 03:53 - Two Immates, Two Friends by Vlad Visotskiy (Ksey_Gan)
Loved the last line that tied it all together in a double entendre. Nicely...
May 5th, 2025 03:49 - Love People Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful message that would make the world a much better place
May 5th, 2025 03:42 - Satisfied (MDStone)
Quite creative MD I assume it is intended due to the separation in the...
May 4th, 2025 19:28 - Branched allure (Arial)
With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
May 4th, 2025 19:23 - Genesis 3:15 (Rrodriguez)
A great poetic version of a biblical story. Just as poetry some read it as...
May 4th, 2025 19:22 - A Revelation of Self (Alex TheHueman)
Short and philosophical any answer could be debated. I guess if it...
May 4th, 2025 17:57 - Night (Amethyste)
Ah to catch such a thing and bottle it, can it tie it down. A fun read
May 4th, 2025 16:20 - Lying About Your Thoughts (Hanible)
An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of...
May 4th, 2025 14:38 - No matter I got prescribed Glycopyrrolate 2 mg tablets taken four times a day..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Terrifying, sad, tragic, plight of an author plagued with a nonterminal...
May 4th, 2025 14:09 - Return (Ellen Marsell)
A promise made in this poem poetically set and well done
May 4th, 2025 12:14 - Torture Me (Alex PB)
It is the weak that we torture because the strong are too powerful, It is...
May 4th, 2025 12:12 - Dances with Pain (Analogaddict)
It is the last stanza that conveys the message best and is the most...
May 4th, 2025 12:10 - As Petals Fall (RSM0812)
May 4th, 2025 10:47 - As Petals Fall (RSM0812)
Full of metaphor this poem gives one pause and provokes thoughts. Very
May 4th, 2025 10:47 - Hues of Hope (Salvia.S)
Another great short that equates fading with the passage of time and how...
May 4th, 2025 09:37 - I Fear (Damaso)
So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us....
May 4th, 2025 08:47 - NOT ALONE (Kingjamescory)
Nature and its creations are a gift indeed. A lovely short that says so...
May 4th, 2025 08:45 - Neither Fresh Applesauce nor Races (Cheeky Missy)
Very nice Chic I have thought about what it would be like to go back and...
May 4th, 2025 08:44 - Lost but never gone (Neilton)
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I...
May 4th, 2025 07:42 - Here we go again (Tony36)
Hope this is just poetic my friend. What a shocking dive into the...
May 4th, 2025 07:35 - In a state of heaven or not (EvenwheniLie)
What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in...
May 4th, 2025 07:33 - The Luminous One (Reynaldo Casison)
It is the vibrant imagery and resplendent colors and smells that get the...
May 4th, 2025 07:31 - Sleepy Hollow (Tristan Robert Lange)
The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep...
May 4th, 2025 07:28 - On colored nights (Maplespal)
A most beautiful use of colors and nature to depict human and animal...
May 4th, 2025 06:05 - $2.37 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that...
May 4th, 2025 05:05 - Penance for Imaginary (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Misunderstanding and blame powerful tools to wrack havoc in any...
May 4th, 2025 05:04 - IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME! (Swarovski20)
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much...
May 4th, 2025 05:00 - Double Exposure (Gray0328)
A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and...
May 4th, 2025 04:57 - mischief friend (Jim56)
There are special bonds that cross species. A lovely write Jim
May 4th, 2025 04:54 - DEVILS PACT (Nephilim56)
This one smacks of Robert Johnson the devil the crossroads and the guitar....
May 4th, 2025 04:52 - Just Another Man (Mottakeenur Rehman)
This is a powerful poem that speaks with thunder and seems to echo down...
May 4th, 2025 04:50 - \"Destiny Plot Twist\" (Cirawrites01)
Each has their own view on poetry but to me it comes from the heart and...
May 4th, 2025 04:47 - Fishcakes For Tea (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I always over read metaphor into writing and here healthy food equates to...
May 4th, 2025 04:40 - a fox dies in a field (Queer-with-a-pen)
A sad depiction whether animal or person where barriers have been set up...
May 4th, 2025 04:38 - real-rage-roar (Muse of Calliope)
Sometimes certain alliterations catch in the mind and create their own...
May 4th, 2025 04:33 - Message (Jonathan Merida)
Hemophilia or the use of curare but emotional in metaphor where the...
May 4th, 2025 04:29 - Sentiments (Z7 Softens)
A soft tinnitus impedes the experience of true silence one must experience...
May 4th, 2025 04:27 - Lost Together in Sound (Andala)
Sad and wistful this poem speaks of a world of smoke and water that can...
May 4th, 2025 04:21 - My Father (James Michael)
A great tribute of love for a father. Nicely written I\'m sure he would...
May 4th, 2025 04:18 - The ghost that saves. (David Wakeling)
Entrancing and mesmerizing it drifts and carries one on a journey to...
May 4th, 2025 04:16 - Risen Rejoicings (Orchidee)
Another good hymn and poem Orchi well done and timely as well.
May 4th, 2025 04:13 - LIMERICK 142 (Michael Edwards)
Touchette! You matched my wind poem. As I have said before I love...
May 4th, 2025 04:10 - The Water Never Burned (MDStone)
I faved this poem for its hypnotic feel given by its returning line of the...
May 4th, 2025 04:08 - I Cried (Shandi)
Sad and one might say tragic but at the same time hopeful and bright....
May 4th, 2025 04:04 - Tired (Shandi)
I can feel the exhaustion in this poem. Locked in to life\'s prison by...
May 4th, 2025 03:59 - You Can Do This. (Goldfinch60)
Adversity makes us stronger it is the weight room of life. Good write Andy
May 4th, 2025 03:52 - revelatory (Arqios)
A darker poem played on ebony minor keys. Truth is relative a theme to...
May 4th, 2025 03:47 - Where I Found My Young Precious Pearl (Rrodriguez)
Such a lovely write commemorating love for partner and for her place of...
May 3rd, 2025 19:16 - SIN ALMA (Soullless)
More than a love poem an asking (pedido) expressing desire (ganas) lovely
May 3rd, 2025 19:12 - Could I Touch the Clouds (Maydanae)
Cute, catchy, clever, creative couldn\'t be better
May 3rd, 2025 19:04 - Twenty years elapsed since Harriet Harris, née Kuritsky gave up the ghost ~ May 5th, 2004 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Always loved obituaries. Most interesting. Dead pan humor. Well written
May 3rd, 2025 17:01 - To stare (Amethyste)
A poem of desire and passion. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2025 16:19 - Whispers of the Night ([email protected])
A most romantic write. Very nice imagery and well written.
May 3rd, 2025 16:18 - Linear transgressions (Shadowbones)
Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 16:16 - Simply His Touch (Sunshine777)
A poem that is a pledge of love. Firmly stated and well put. very nice
May 3rd, 2025 16:12 - Walk Away (John Prophet)
A poem of persuasion sometimes seductive and erotic but the flow takes us...
May 3rd, 2025 13:49 - Silent Storm (Libellule)
Some really good metaphors in this piece it is smooth and flows well. Very...
May 3rd, 2025 13:43 - Acceptance (Gray0328)
Very nice wording in this poem leaves feelings of being on edge. Loved it
May 3rd, 2025 13:31 - Memories (TheVlama)
A great Acrostic poem well written and full of meaning.
May 3rd, 2025 13:27 - ~Letter to let go of those who no longer wanted to stay~ (Spring Sugar Bunny)
A sad poem of acceptance that is glad in self acceptance. A most mournful...
May 3rd, 2025 13:26 - Trump\'s Wild Tango (Raidoc)
Reflections that show Trump as nothing more than a mirror view of...
May 3rd, 2025 13:20 - On National Talk Like Shakespeare Day....[Whose Birthday, again?] (Cheeky Missy)
Chic a great tribute to the bard. A lovely set of sonnets with a little...
May 3rd, 2025 13:15 - A Plain Out of Existence (A piece of luggage)
Life is an issue of timing and chance and it does not always work out to...
May 3rd, 2025 09:20 - The Last Cloud by Aleksandr Pushkin (Ksey_Gan)
A beautiful picture after the storm as the day opens to the sun. A...
May 3rd, 2025 09:16 - Apocalyptic delirium (Lorenz)
The meaninglessness of life reflected in intelligence that must be...
May 3rd, 2025 09:14 - A Little Mad (Tristan Robert Lange)
Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the...
May 3rd, 2025 07:44 - Three Kisses (Tony36)
A most serious pledge of love and covenant of commitment. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 07:36 - all the birds are awake (Demar Desu)
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly...
May 3rd, 2025 06:43 - Loss (E Naughton)
You depict well the loss of someone or something so significant. And then...
May 3rd, 2025 06:41
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