Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Brad & Sally (Paul Bell)
I\'ve been cited for running several red lights before and yellow is the...
May 31st, 2026 11:53 - ONE MORE LEAF (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a marvelous metaphor Carlos yes each day a leaf and we are the poem...
May 31st, 2026 06:56 - To meet someone. (Ginny jayne)
Cute and warm it speaks of a need for affiliation. Well done
May 31st, 2026 05:56 - Ready for departure (Maplespal)
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in...
May 31st, 2026 05:55 - sanctuary (Arqios)
Cryptic I do not know if it was intended but this held a deep and hidden...
May 31st, 2026 05:52 - nature way (Jim56)
Bright and cheerful it melds us with nature and the health of body and...
May 31st, 2026 05:38 - A Barn Owl (Cully45)
An endearing poem of connection between nature and man set in the first...
May 31st, 2026 04:33 - The Duel (Andrew Jackson) (Gray0328)
A drama well painted in beautiful language most poetic it reenacts a...
May 31st, 2026 04:29 - DID WE NOT ? (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This seems a poem of separation by the ending. A sense of sadness is...
May 31st, 2026 04:26 - Secret Societies Should Be Banned (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A powerful statement and write that paints all secret societies as evil....
May 31st, 2026 04:24 - Balcony coffee (William Hromada)
A beautiful image created by a short set of wonderful rhymes in this piece
May 31st, 2026 04:22 - Fourteen Years Ago Today. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful attitude keeps it a wonderful life. Finding joy in what one...
May 31st, 2026 04:21 - The Crescent (Rhmn_7)
A fantasy story with mythical themes unravels in this poem of rhyme and...
May 31st, 2026 04:18 - I Said What I Said (Amber D. Petty Patrick)
These rhymes come with a beat that seems rap like in some ways and hold...
May 31st, 2026 04:15 - Kindle a Candle (Soheil khodaparasti)
So short yet says so much well done
May 31st, 2026 04:11 - Mum\'s Day Off (David Wakeling)
A great story David of there is always something. This one tells of how...
May 31st, 2026 04:08 - Breach (Anthony Hanible)
Anthony this is a beautiful poem of renewal of how one sees the world when...
May 31st, 2026 04:04 - मैं लिपटता हूं तेरे ग़म से तो जी लेता हूं (Anmol Sinha)
Metaphoric and with good imagery this poem lays out a devoted...
May 31st, 2026 04:02 - Strangers (NafisaSB)
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over...
May 31st, 2026 04:00 - I need my med back (Never be)
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the...
May 31st, 2026 03:52 - Stand with yourself (Samuel Potsane)
Some god advice in poem form. Well done
May 30th, 2026 21:00 - Farting Free (E Naughton)
Cute and a tender poem of fun with a child. Well written. ( I hope it is...
May 30th, 2026 19:30 - Work In Progress (E.J. Waling)
The constant change in the world portrayed in this poem. Well written
May 30th, 2026 19:28 - Light-Hearted (Mutley Ravishes)
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things...
May 30th, 2026 17:54 - The Method Fades (Sassy Lou)
Pills for ills not for thrills an lovely write
May 30th, 2026 17:31 - ONLY SOMEONE ELSE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Lovely a most introspective and understanding poem of social nature. Well...
May 30th, 2026 17:26 - In The Night (Mylastwrites)
Well done this poem is electric and a love poem as well. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 17:23 - Masterpiece (Jeannie)
A lovely piece of advice set in a poem. Very nicely done
May 30th, 2026 14:15 - Times (Cerise456)
Nicely written this poem speaks of healing pain and injury. Well done
May 30th, 2026 14:14 - Stupid Commercials (Shadowbones)
A poem of lack of trust well written
May 30th, 2026 14:12 - Family room (Ogunisjustice)
A relationship evaluation in a poem. Well done
May 30th, 2026 12:39 - Saturday Soundbites: 5-30-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another wonderful set of poems Kurt I would have to say that my favorite...
May 30th, 2026 12:37 - Oppositional conversationalist 🗣️ (GoddessEYES)
A good point made in this write
May 30th, 2026 12:30 - Where\'s the exit (Rubberduck)
A picture of a toxic relationship that is maintained out of desire....
May 30th, 2026 11:36 - The fading scents (Arial)
Metaphoric and just beyond my grasp my mind wanders. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:30 - Just relax (Hzugman)
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children....
May 30th, 2026 11:28 - Stepping into June gloom 🌥️ (Ms.divine)
Nature personified in this write of changes. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:27 - The Fading of the Vow (Notapoet)
I really love this poem of faded love and the nostalgia for past days it...
May 30th, 2026 11:26 - Switch over (2781)
This poem starts of in a most playful manner it seems to be joking with...
May 30th, 2026 11:23 - How life resolves itself (King)
An interesting poem of Knights and royals and a story with some rhyme...
May 30th, 2026 11:20 - The Robin sat on branches of a apple tree (Caring dove)
This seems a reflection over a scene viewed of nature. It casts a...
May 30th, 2026 11:18 - Off Known of its Origin (NGUMO)
Death is the subject of this poem and it is approached from various points...
May 30th, 2026 11:16 - Forever fifteen (Lore)
A poem of loss and sadness at that loss but gain in what was given and an...
May 30th, 2026 11:10 - Russian Concertina (Cellinic)
A complex poem with deep meaning and emotions of loss and questioning....
May 30th, 2026 11:07 - Unfurled (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan this is ingenious your arrangement of words seem to indicate top...
May 30th, 2026 11:05 - Caps in the Air (Matthew R. Callies)
This poem ecoes a different culture but similar enough to other South...
May 30th, 2026 10:56 - I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried. (Friendship)
A well composed and rhymed poem that plants its meaning in crops that fail...
May 30th, 2026 10:50 - Inkling II (Eugene S.)
Strongly written with beautiful lines that are mind provoking. Well done
May 30th, 2026 08:10 - blueprint of narcissism (The breaktime monologue)
A poem story of loss and sadness enhanced by misrepresentation ending in...
May 30th, 2026 07:50 - Augmented (Syd)
The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely...
May 30th, 2026 07:47 - JOY CUP (Durdica Porobija)
A wonderful poem Durdica such vivid images of a visual and olfactory...
May 30th, 2026 07:45 - Conversations With Life (Deepak Vohra)
Beautiful Deepak well written and moving.
May 30th, 2026 07:41 - Where are you (Maplespal)
A fun read that is worded well and flows well. It is call for a lost love....
May 30th, 2026 07:37 - The Vicar of Blueberry Cross (Cully45)
A deja vu in this poem is it one you have reworked Owen? It reads well and...
May 30th, 2026 07:35 - And Then There Was Light (Katie B.)
Violence appears in this poem and it appears domestic and traumatic that...
May 30th, 2026 07:27 - poem’s manifesto (Arqios)
The interior of a poet. Lovely write Cryptic most identifiable
May 30th, 2026 05:43 - Nicotine talks (Alan R)
A wonderful write Alan nicely composed
May 30th, 2026 05:41 - MEMORY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Memories flow through this poem and drift off the page. A lovely write...
May 30th, 2026 05:39 - have you seen the flowers (Jim56)
Beautiful Jim. Nicely done
May 30th, 2026 05:33 - Four walls and a door (Aallffiee)
Lovely and so relatable it flows from the beginning to the end. Very nice...
May 30th, 2026 05:30 - He Always Corners Me (Gray0328)
Metaphorical but so bordering on the real its passion felt in every line....
May 30th, 2026 04:03 - I Can’t Do Funeral (Anthony Hanible)
Unless we die at birth or infancy we all have to face the loss of someone...
May 30th, 2026 02:48 - Poetry In Music. (Goldfinch60)
Well said Gold music is a universal language that does unite all mankind....
May 30th, 2026 02:43 - Second Spring (Gaurav Gurung)
Unique is the same sense I get from this poem and its incongruent lines...
May 30th, 2026 02:42 - Jacqueline and John. (David Wakeling)
A personalized tribute to a man and woman that created a Camelot that went...
May 30th, 2026 02:40 - The last times we.... (Rubberduck)
A poem of maturation, growth and development going into a new phase. It...
May 30th, 2026 02:29 - Pressure to Turn Bad to Good (FallingAwake2)
A most interesting perspective presented in this poem that flows well and...
May 29th, 2026 21:02 - Hope Holds The Knife (Entangled heart)
Wishes turn expectations that grow to more than what can be hoped for and...
May 29th, 2026 18:36 - Thirty Years Together (Mylastwrites)
A beautiful wish for a couple in poetic form
May 29th, 2026 18:33 - 2021 Poems Chinese to English (Xiaobai Yulan)
A travelog almost journal like this poetic recitation flows.
May 29th, 2026 18:32 - in the echo of stillness (Jon Nakapalau)
Dark is the tone and black is the mood. Well written
May 29th, 2026 18:29 - Can’t start (Marissa)
A car without gas a gun without bullets, a poet without words. A most mind...
May 29th, 2026 18:27 - I in I (NGUMO)
A write that reveals sadness and depression a dark write.
May 29th, 2026 17:10 - Don’t piss him off (EvenwheniLie)
A most interesting perspective of an angry god
May 29th, 2026 17:08 - Smoke - Humo (Lyss)
Young or old child or adult this poem speaks.
May 29th, 2026 14:14 - A Humble Request (Fränz Müller)
Well said and written. I think I have been there before
May 29th, 2026 13:52 - The new era (Lorenz)
A poetic malfunction can lead to civil suit of the manufacturer but no...
May 29th, 2026 13:50 - WITHOUT SUITCASES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A poem of carpe diem of take care of oneself a poem of freeing oneself...
May 29th, 2026 13:01 - \'Living\' Without (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Now this Kurt has to be a favorite it uses not opposites exactly but...
May 29th, 2026 09:37 - simply because (Tristan Robert Lange)
What a powerful message my friend. I too have reached the age that I am...
May 29th, 2026 09:35 - Ghosting (Gray0328)
Poignant and haunting itself. The poem speaks of the power of silence and...
May 29th, 2026 09:29 - A better man (2781)
Quite a question posed here. Nicely written
May 29th, 2026 08:25 - I adopt with unbearable self control the incentive (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Quite the tale that unravels and takes us to various places. Nicely done
May 29th, 2026 08:24 - GRANDDAD LAND (Cully45)
Granddads are special in many ways and you have outlined some of them....
May 29th, 2026 08:23 - Purple (Janey_Boo)
The repetition the simple is what it is statements the use of senses and...
May 29th, 2026 08:20 - Rotating days (Maplespal)
It is the last line and its rhyme with the previous that cemented the fave...
May 29th, 2026 08:18 - nothing will be wrong (Carpe4diem)
Our own insecurities projected onto others in the form of fear of...
May 29th, 2026 08:12 - backward-facing carriage (Arqios)
Cryptic I had to read this three times for it to sink in. So set in...
May 29th, 2026 08:09 - Let People Rest In Peace (Anthony Hanible)
A most religious profession of belief in a higher power and (his) taking...
May 29th, 2026 04:52 - 2:00 a.m Playlists (Aallffiee)
A great rational for why music seems different at that quiet hour and...
May 29th, 2026 04:49 - people poetry (Jim56)
Good one Jim a write about expression itself and the art of poetry very...
May 29th, 2026 04:46 - THE SLENDER ROPES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I can identify with this poem set so well in short rhyming verse and with...
May 29th, 2026 04:45 - An Anomaly (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A strongly opinionated poem of which I am in support an illness true that...
May 29th, 2026 04:42 - Grace Upon Grace (Orchidee)
A lovely freeing message Orchi although I am not religious I still hold...
May 29th, 2026 04:39 - Diamante Italy (William Hromada)
Congratulations and what a beautiful poem it is with seldom used terms...
May 29th, 2026 04:36 - Ripples Of Kindness. (Goldfinch60)
I could not agree more Andy this is a wonderful message that too many...
May 29th, 2026 04:35 - Amber Watson\'s recorded message. (David Wakeling)
A sad story of parental loss of child and maybe faith as well. The...
May 29th, 2026 04:33 - Wings Attached and then Connected (HelpMePlease)
This poem by its alternating repetition of line imitates the flapping of...
May 29th, 2026 04:29 - जज़्बा-ए-इश्क़ (The Passion of Love) (IAli)
It is the cascading verse in this poem that repetitively in an expanded...
May 29th, 2026 04:25 - Your Human Side (Mylastwrites)
A poetic plea for one to be softer and more tender. Lovely
May 29th, 2026 04:20
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