Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Lowly Lines (Orchidee)
A most hopeful write Orchi full of optimism and good will.
May 18th, 2024 14:46 - Little Tommy Titbit (Teddy.15)
You are right Teddy there is always time for humor. Not quite sure why...
May 18th, 2024 14:42 - Lovelorn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful words of loss and missing someone. Short but so nicely written.
May 17th, 2024 04:00 - Humane Relations. (Doggerel Dave)
A fun write Dave it touches on real issues and I find that charming and...
May 16th, 2024 20:38 - Redemption Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Forgiveness is great and I only hope that the cloud doesn\'t go away.
May 16th, 2024 09:30 - Tentacles (2781)
So it appears. When we look for the cause we only need to look in a...
May 16th, 2024 06:10 - Always By My Side (Teddy.15)
I love surprise endings and this one caught me off guard. But as all...
May 16th, 2024 04:42 - Redemption Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Redemption is a powerful word Orchi. I believe it should be reserved for...
May 16th, 2024 04:06 - Why Wars? (Goldfinch60)
True Andy sharing is not an innate human quality for most of us. I ask...
May 16th, 2024 04:01 - Fishing (Teddy.15)
I love the play on words and like throwing in the towel it is over when...
May 15th, 2024 16:35 - Trees - or Something. (Doggerel Dave)
Yes trees do talk or at least communicate with each other so I hear and...
May 15th, 2024 14:15 - Into And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful picture here. Calm and peaceful full of the wonder of nature
May 15th, 2024 14:10 - Collective Communing (Orchidee)
I love poems of gratitude they are so far and few between. Good write
May 14th, 2024 09:25 - Ageless Love (Teddy.15)
Memories stimulated by a fragment of the past. Such an interesting way of...
May 14th, 2024 05:00 - Justified (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you Teddy your kind remarks are again appreciated. Yes peace seems a...
May 14th, 2024 04:54 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful image Here it seems that the key is the last stanza. I...
May 14th, 2024 04:28 - My Spell Checker (Doggerel Dave)
Nothing worse than to have a word changed without knowing it\'s spelling...
May 13th, 2024 10:38 - Dilly-dally (2781)
Been there done that. I can feel this one as if it were a mirror and a...
May 13th, 2024 03:56 - Unsighted (Teddy.15)
Art comes from the heart not the senses. Surging emotion will find a way...
May 13th, 2024 03:51 - Cats Know Fun (Thomas W Case)
This makes me think of all the times that such things occur and then I...
May 12th, 2024 11:14 - Scribble (2781)
Been there and probably will be there again. Liked the playfulness of this...
May 12th, 2024 11:11 - The Love in my Heart (Teddy.15)
Beautiful! There can not be one without the other Love and Hate are...
May 12th, 2024 05:49 - Please (Bella Shepard)
I love waltzes preferring a fast Viennese waltz where the whirling becomes...
May 11th, 2024 13:51 - Favourable Faith (Orchidee)
Faith, trust, belief, confidence in all are pretty much lacking these days...
May 11th, 2024 10:02 - Just to Hear your Laughter (Teddy.15)
The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and...
May 11th, 2024 03:55 - Musical Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Poetry a close kin to music in that it has meter and evokes emotion as...
May 11th, 2024 02:46 - At All Cost (Thomas W Case)
Thoughts that give pause. Great lines in this piece Thomas.
May 10th, 2024 10:49 - Bed Bath and Beyond (Teddy.15)
At first the title led me to think that this was about a store we used to...
May 10th, 2024 02:42 - Birdman! (Orchidee)
Did you get anything in the hunt? And were these wings angel wings? Good...
May 10th, 2024 02:18 - Death spiral (2781)
I like the feel of spiraling out of control in this poem and subject. More...
May 10th, 2024 01:55 - Yet Another Fine Day. (Goldfinch60)
And may it be longer and longer with better and better health and joy. A...
May 10th, 2024 01:20 - Sometimes a Blue Moon Turns into Gold (Teddy.15)
A wonderful picture and so well written with a bit of mysticism. So...
May 9th, 2024 17:39 - Ascension Acclamations (Orchidee)
Alleluia Orchi Good write.
May 9th, 2024 12:31 - Too Drunk to Fuck (Thomas W Case)
It\'s like a flooded engine it just won\'t start until it has sat for a...
May 8th, 2024 09:53 - A Soul\'s Portrait (Teddy.15)
Many great lines speak from a wounded heart in this poem
a poetic heart...
May 8th, 2024 05:34 - Prayer Persevering (Orchidee)
My father was a believer in the moving of mountains he worked in a mine....
May 8th, 2024 04:09 - My Night of a Thousand Storms (Thomas W Case)
A poem of desperation well represented in ironic fashion. Nicely done.
May 7th, 2024 11:32 - Knowledge (Alan R)
The question becomes, can you afford to ask? A thought provoking poem that...
May 7th, 2024 10:19 - Possessing Peace (Orchidee)
I like the idea that gratitude should be voiced. It simply should precede...
May 7th, 2024 08:56 - My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave)
Here here Dave I echo these sentiments. Well stated in verse. Loved it.
May 7th, 2024 06:37 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant!! Such a metaphor here Andy. I feel that I have seen this happen...
May 7th, 2024 01:23 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
I go one step beyond when I pray I go where God can not see or hear me. I...
May 6th, 2024 12:43 - Firefly (Teddy.15)
This did seem to be for one gone from this world although it could be for...
May 6th, 2024 10:46 - Access to Asking (Orchidee)
Familiar words since childhood and I have asked in the past and my record...
May 5th, 2024 16:42 - Health In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So true Gold and though being loved is a wonderful thing and ideal it is...
May 5th, 2024 02:54 - Memories (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
An intriguing story that seems not to be finished yet.
May 4th, 2024 11:04 - Creation Considerations (Orchidee)
Orchi did you get rid of the rating before I got to it? I suppose you...
May 4th, 2024 08:56 - Storm (Doggerel Dave)
Funny how many people follow like sheep whether lies, superstition,...
May 4th, 2024 06:05 - A Very Epic Morning (Teddy.15)
Life has no joy without balance. No appreciation of the good without...
May 4th, 2024 04:03 - And It Rained! (Goldfinch60)
Here it has been raining for days and some houses are up to the roof top....
May 4th, 2024 03:56 - Far From The Madding Crowd (Cassie58)
A poet\'s sensitivity and ability to communicate emotion is a connection...
May 4th, 2024 03:50 - Necropolis Nonsense While on a Tour… (Doggerel Dave)
What did Micky do to deserve that? I thought that he was one of the good...
May 3rd, 2024 10:37 - A Perfect Moment in May (Teddy.15)
Your poem is a picture itself. In fact it has the advantage of portraying...
May 2nd, 2024 03:45 - Cycles (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Teddy your reviews are always so encouraging and appreciated. Thank...
May 2nd, 2024 03:37 - Liking? (Orchidee)
I am grateful that they don\'t have a dislike button Orchi or I might have...
May 2nd, 2024 03:34 - Into Summertime. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s so queer in a different hemisphere. I go back and forth, this time...
May 1st, 2024 03:03 - Wise Way (Orchidee)
All of life is preparing a place to go and so here too. Metaphorical or...
April 30th, 2024 04:32 - Let (2781)
Many great pleas for what would bring happiness and peace. Nicely done
April 30th, 2024 04:28 - Confines (Alan R)
This one is to think about. AI worries me but then who am I? Provocative...
April 29th, 2024 14:21 - Here, Sit I (Cassie58)
This poem speaks powerfully to any parent where a child should not go...
April 29th, 2024 12:23 - That Line (Doggerel Dave)
Here here, I agree such frustration from the present system yet what other...
April 29th, 2024 11:55 - Vain (2781)
Everyone needs a bit of security gained from different sources, some from...
April 29th, 2024 11:19 - Gospel Givers (Orchidee)
The spreader of good news is alwasy welcome. Good write Orchi.
April 29th, 2024 08:21 - Rocking Worlds (Teddy.15)
There are some famous musicians that keep such a little book and so are...
April 29th, 2024 08:15 - For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful feeling that will carry the day and the rest of eternity.
April 29th, 2024 03:06 - My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60)
Amazing how nature and one\'s focus upon it can remove stress and pain. A...
April 28th, 2024 02:59 - Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60)
Most interesting synchronicity in that you wrote of Mozart and I of Jacob...
April 28th, 2024 02:54 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
I never expected a Haiku of such depth, the naked truth revealing inner...
April 27th, 2024 12:12 - Resorting to Refuge (Orchidee)
I\'ve been looking for that secret place heard there is a lot of treasure...
April 27th, 2024 09:48 - Locket (Cassie58)
Deep meaning here it is not what we are made of that dictates value but...
April 27th, 2024 07:15 - Raven\'s Encore (Teddy.15)
Rather spooky in that we both wrote of silence at the same time but you...
April 27th, 2024 03:41 - Night Sweats (Orchidee)
The end of last month? Was this a preparation for April fools? Or was it...
April 26th, 2024 11:22 - Mighty few (2781)
Ecclesiastes 1:9 “The thing that hath been, it is that which shall be;...
April 26th, 2024 11:16 - A Prayer of King Nebuchadnezzar (Orchidee)
I heard he was a heck of a gardener building hanging gardens. Good write...
April 25th, 2024 11:56 - Necropolis Nonsense While on a Tour… (Doggerel Dave)
Now this one was wonderful, well metered and rhymed but better yet was the...
April 25th, 2024 09:38 - Random Kindness (Cassie58)
Such a beautiful poetic smile to lift the spirits of all its readers....
April 24th, 2024 08:51 - The Happiness Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great metaphor that seems almost biblical in some way. It is also great...
April 24th, 2024 03:41 - Awakening (Teddy.15)
Such good advice in poetic form. Both sides need to be considered and...
April 24th, 2024 03:38 - I remember when.... (Orchidee)
Glad to hear you came out on the winning end of that one. Good write
April 23rd, 2024 16:28 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Great win in verse is the best of humor. Loved this one Andy it actually...
April 23rd, 2024 03:57 - Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15)
Separated by many more years than Europe from war on her own ground, the...
April 22nd, 2024 08:16 - Omnipotent Observations (Orchidee)
Did you steal this from Trump\'s acceptance speech? I heard that he...
April 22nd, 2024 05:23 - Nature\'s Blanket. (Goldfinch60)
Fall\'s beauty in the temperate zones of the world. I grew up with this...
April 22nd, 2024 04:39 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
\"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you\"
A great line. In this plea for...
April 21st, 2024 16:28 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
I like the clapping hands part I wonder if he will bow. The last church I...
April 21st, 2024 03:12 - Our Love Will Never Die. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful picture, faith, and emotion cast by this poem. Oh that such...
April 21st, 2024 02:08 - visionary (Teddy.15)
As I read I notice that I have expectations as to the outcome of each work...
April 20th, 2024 08:51 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
I couldn\'t afford the daily rate and so I have been sent to a one star...
April 20th, 2024 08:44 - Exalt (2781)
We have been waiting for the visit for some time now, I sometimes wonder...
April 20th, 2024 05:15 - Daily Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
I spend the night touching up what I painted that day. A poignant write...
April 20th, 2024 03:59 - Some Words Speak for Themselves (Neville)
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that...
April 19th, 2024 06:46 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
Perceptual presence is what the government proposes. I need a little...
April 19th, 2024 04:59 - Blind Date (Teddy.15)
So nice to start the morning with a smile and I am glad that no aliens...
April 19th, 2024 03:58 - A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer (Neville)
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42 - The Mountain Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great message that more should heed. Different paths to the same goal....
April 19th, 2024 03:40 - Frozen Love (Thomas W Case)
From the sad and morbid to the humorous poetic in its contrast. The...
April 18th, 2024 20:57 - Angels Encore (Teddy.15)
Such a pleasant though or dream as opposed to those moments paralyzed by...
April 18th, 2024 13:57 - Comforting Concerns (Orchidee)
\"Blessed they that help the powerless
And the poor in distress\"
A...
April 18th, 2024 09:05 - All\'s Going Well (Doggerel Dave)
Something light hearted is always welcome both the clip and your poem. I...
April 18th, 2024 06:52 - Imitators (2781)
Always said any church that asks for money is a red flag. Good write.
April 18th, 2024 04:11
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