Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- My mother is asleep - Mi madre está dormida (Lyss)
A most touching poem of interpretation. What is sleeping and what has...
May 26th, 2026 07:36 - The moon yearns the sun; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
This is truly beautiful the weaving of the yearnings and needs and the...
May 26th, 2026 07:31 - Trapped mind (Maplespal)
There is a sense of suffering in this poem that is resolved on in death
May 26th, 2026 05:31 - PARENT (Adnan H)
There is the dichotomy of control and acceptance in this poem nicely...
May 26th, 2026 05:30 - Season of leaving (Melancholia)
Here I hear a pledge of permanent unity. Well written
May 26th, 2026 05:25 - Half Lit Hallways (That’sSoRaven)
There are many roles in being a friend some more painful than others. A...
May 26th, 2026 05:23 - The Jesus Girl (Paul Bell)
This poem presents the dichotomy of left and right in their views. Living...
May 26th, 2026 05:21 - workshop on the hill (Arqios)
This poem presents a serene and peaceful image. Schooling may take many...
May 26th, 2026 05:16 - Lockdown 2040 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Dystopian in nature this poem is dark and predictive of future downfall...
May 26th, 2026 04:16 - dog friendship (Jim56)
Tribute to man\'s best friend a lovely write Jim
May 26th, 2026 04:14 - Afterglow (Cully45)
Such a sad poem. Having daughters myself this feels particularly personal....
May 26th, 2026 03:24 - I’m Sorry For The Shock (Anthony Hanible)
Such a great metaphor it applies in several ways. Nicely done Anthony
May 26th, 2026 03:20 - THE LAST REFLECTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
They always told me that art and particularly poetry is a pauper\'s job...
May 26th, 2026 03:18 - The Maps Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
We are noting more than our experiences and what they have made us. A...
May 26th, 2026 03:16 - रौशनी की ओर (Waiting for Silence)
This appears a prayer of defiance and at the same time asking for support...
May 26th, 2026 03:15 - The lord will make it happen (Cedrick)
A poem of belief in the past and faith in the future. Well written
May 26th, 2026 03:12 - Free or captured (EvenwheniLie)
This poem is historical, philosophical, metaphorical. Ownership is...
May 26th, 2026 03:11 - Freewheelin’ (Fränz Müller)
A poignant thought Franz well done
May 26th, 2026 03:08 - False settings (Ogunisjustice)
There is a lot of discontent in this poem and with the discontent comes...
May 26th, 2026 03:07 - The 7 judges of Terrestria. (David Wakeling)
This poem contains a downward spiral of issues from the beginning to the...
May 26th, 2026 03:05 - I Woke Up as Night Thinned Out; Sadly I Often Miss Fine Things; Title-less; Lodging in Alien Land (Xiaobai Yulan)
Many vivid images painted in this poem nicely done
May 25th, 2026 20:29 - The prettiest flowers are the ones that get picked. (Aallffiee)
Being picked means an early death and being discarded not being picked...
May 25th, 2026 19:56 - I loved you..... (Celina Powell)
Deception is a hard pill to swallow. This poem speaks of it and the bitter...
May 25th, 2026 19:51 - Internal external faithfulness (GoddessEYES)
Gratefulness is a rare commodity now days. Well written
May 25th, 2026 19:47 - Sb 🤴🏿have it your way🍔🍟 (Ms.divine)
Quite the fare where having it your way may lead to indigestion and high...
May 25th, 2026 19:45 - Moonlight (Neil Higgins)
\"Secrets safely sheathed\" such a great line. A wonderful write
May 25th, 2026 19:42 - Deranged (Amethyste)
Teaching one how to love is quite the task. A good write that pledges...
May 25th, 2026 19:40 - Chills (Maplespal)
A write of ghosts that exist in different forms. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 15:49 - Just You (Mylastwrites)
A poem of love and a pledge to be true well written
May 25th, 2026 15:47 - Damnation (NEPIEGE)
Hate transforms to love of another and sacrifice to of self for their...
May 25th, 2026 14:22 - Five minutes to Midnight. (Aa Harvey)
A most desperate love pledge under the stars. Well done
May 25th, 2026 13:26 - Oil in Gulf : the saga unfolds (Narayan Gadagkar)
This is a most unique topic for poetry and well done as well. Nicely told
May 25th, 2026 13:24 - The beat (2781)
A fun read with great rhyme that gives images reminiscent of old gods of...
May 25th, 2026 13:21 - Monday Soundbites: 5-25-2026 (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Several new good ones Kurt keep them coming.
May 25th, 2026 11:35 - maybe I’ve been harsh (King)
A read that provokes questions about why someone would want you dead. Love...
May 25th, 2026 11:31 - First Class Ticket (Teddy.15)
Good one Teddy I think I would let them in as well. I let in the living...
May 25th, 2026 11:29 - PATH / CAMINO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
This poem metaphoric in regard to our path. It speaks of life in general...
May 25th, 2026 10:11 - AI Rescues My Decking! (Classicmister)
A fun read of the usefulness of AI. Well done
May 25th, 2026 10:09 - I Am From The Real America (Aaron Roberson)
Powerfully written this poem lays it out and proposes a different...
May 25th, 2026 10:06 - Joy Plays (Jamiano)
We all are our own journey and hopefully it is one of love. Well written
May 25th, 2026 10:01 - The Living Ark (Theodore Zendarski)
Biblical in intent a proclamation of divinity in human form. Well written
May 25th, 2026 09:59 - Fields without Footsteps (Matthew R. Callies)
A commemoration a memorial day to those gone that gave all for the cause....
May 25th, 2026 09:57 - moving beyond (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem of recognition without acknowledgement it leaves a cold feel and...
May 25th, 2026 09:54 - Reflections (Kaz)
Short and to the point just as the reflection may be brief but too intense...
May 25th, 2026 06:37 - तोहफ़ा (Waiting for Silence)
This poem seems to break time into pieces and question a relationship....
May 25th, 2026 06:36 - May\'s Last Monday (Katie B.)
A most noble tribute to those that gave the full measure to guarantee the...
May 25th, 2026 05:43 - guide dogs life (Jim56)
A tribute to a caring animal that is dedicated to the safety of their...
May 25th, 2026 05:39 - Дождь за окном (Andosius)
This poem has deep meaning with the concept of control of the internal as...
May 25th, 2026 05:37 - a younger poet\'s reply (Arqios)
This poem calls out the changes that transform a person from what was to...
May 25th, 2026 05:35 - The Feather That Called a Life (Gray0328)
This poem is highly symbolic and most poetic nicely done Gray
May 25th, 2026 04:33 - Zoom Diagnostics saved Memorial Day (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Memorial indeed a memory of the distant past and Plato too. Well said
May 25th, 2026 04:31 - Unsent (That’sSoRaven)
Relationships are often one way. This seems stated in this write. Well
May 25th, 2026 04:30 - 3 Speed Fan Spinning Memories (Anthony Hanible)
A good metaphor here with the fan and past well written
May 25th, 2026 04:29 - A Bird (Cully45)
A fun story told in good rhyme and flow. This has happened to me before...
May 25th, 2026 04:26 - Still I Stand (Entangled heart)
This poem presents the dilema of sacrifice in the face of incompatibility...
May 25th, 2026 04:24 - ECHO (Scraps~n~Scribbles)
Duality presented in this write well done
May 25th, 2026 04:21 - WINGED MESSENGER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Some great rhyme and images created in this write. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 04:19 - Dealing With The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read of conspiracy theories, men in black, government cover up and...
May 25th, 2026 04:18 - Walking Home Late. (Goldfinch60)
I like that one Andy it gave me a smile and hope it doesn\'t happen to me.
May 25th, 2026 04:14 - The Rock in the Garden. (David Wakeling)
A good write with a wonderful metaphor of peoples attitude toward change...
May 25th, 2026 04:12 - Why am I this way? (Never be)
A free writing with some internal rhyme that helps with the flow. Nicely...
May 25th, 2026 04:08 - i am not gone (Lunarchloedip)
A beautiful poem of unity and how one is always present with others in...
May 25th, 2026 04:06 - Six Thousand Miles (Matthew J. Bays)
Very nicely done the poem has a wonderful meter and cadence to it that...
May 25th, 2026 04:03 - Views (E.J. Waling)
An artists painting in words as each stroke is made, line by line. Well...
May 25th, 2026 03:58 - Battle of love (Kman Pumpkin King28)
Choices are always a dilema and here this is portrayed. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 03:56 - Grass and Flower (Mohammad ali)
Very nicely said a poem of aging and death. Well done and a fave
May 24th, 2026 19:02 - Where the Drum Remembers (DLewis88)
A beautiful write of origin the cradle of humanity. Nicely written and a...
May 24th, 2026 17:02 - Tie A Red Balloon To It (Neil Higgins)
It come to mind with red balloons a good poem that is a bit creepy
May 24th, 2026 16:58 - Tongues of Fire (Fränz Müller)
A beautiful message contained in this write well said.
May 24th, 2026 15:54 - The Same Way (Mylastwrites)
Short, romantic and well said. Lovely
May 24th, 2026 15:28 - AUREAL BEAUTY / MOMENTO AUREO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Beautiful are whether words or marble is the same it touches the soul of...
May 24th, 2026 15:27 - Towards the Eternity (Dev Parth)
A lovely thought with deep philosophical meaning. Nicely written Dev
May 24th, 2026 15:26 - Hazy IPA (Eugene S.)
The island vibes I got but IPAs don\'t hit the spot. Although I like my...
May 24th, 2026 12:38 - Dreams End (Teddy.15)
Dreams so often imaged as something to look forward to, a hope, wish,...
May 24th, 2026 12:35 - Harm (Ms.divine)
Anger, revenge in word where vindication is sought. Well expressed
May 24th, 2026 11:17 - Entangled macchiato (Lorenz)
Cousin to expresso it is highly regarded by me as a social companion who...
May 24th, 2026 11:15 - The art of being alone (Isa)
Well written it is thought provoking but at least partially true in that...
May 24th, 2026 11:12 - The Executioner (Raunak Sarkar)
Deep thought here in justice, duty, redemption personified. Well written...
May 24th, 2026 10:47 - Alive & Sustaining (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt I love this one where we live perpetually in the moment with neither...
May 24th, 2026 10:44 - Peculiar (2781)
Spiritual? Religious? it speaks to me of a greater power maybe even a...
May 24th, 2026 10:43 - My Last Breath (Anthony Hanible)
Evoking feelings of Dylan Thomas in Rage rage against the dying of the...
May 24th, 2026 10:41 - Memorial Day – 2026... the brightest and I attest (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A memorial day tribute tongue in cheek so to speak. Well done
May 24th, 2026 10:37 - what matters (Pontefract)
A surreal view of life. Well written
May 24th, 2026 10:30 - honor, shame and guilt (King)
Thought provoking and a soft and tender in its feel. Well done
May 24th, 2026 10:24 - Smile (Aa Harvey)
Lovely fantasy always brings a smile. Well done
May 24th, 2026 10:23 - The Third Baptism (Tristan Robert Lange)
Forcing a square peg into a round hole is never advisable. Trying to make...
May 24th, 2026 10:21 - The Emaciation of Life (Thomas W Case)
A write of memory, focus and satiation on what is nothing more than...
May 24th, 2026 10:18 - Faded & For the cats (Maplespal)
Two poems each with its merit and appeal. Well done
May 24th, 2026 06:21 - I Know Her (Katie B.)
It gives me the sense of a grandmother Katie. A most beautiful description
May 24th, 2026 06:19 - an older poet\'s advice (Arqios)
It is the last line that struck me strongest. In a world of change...
May 24th, 2026 06:17 - The Torch (RSM0812)
Wisdom in a stone nicely written
May 24th, 2026 06:11 - every heart has love (Jim56)
Nicely said Jim love has a place in all.
May 24th, 2026 04:27 - Gods in Our Pockets (Gray0328)
Wow! this one is right out of a dystopia that we have created where...
May 24th, 2026 04:26 - fucking you in the night (GoddessEYES)
Sexual bursting with desire and passion it is explicit. Clearly stated
May 24th, 2026 04:21 - Anhedonia (Kora)
What little was there now trampled underfoot and destroyed in this poem of...
May 24th, 2026 04:19 - Nihilism (Alan R)
Clever wording confirms the title of this poem. Well written
May 24th, 2026 04:17 - Silver Souls (Vaeu)
This poem a puzzle with many pieces as metaphors that paint a surreal and...
May 24th, 2026 04:16 - Switch o roo 🦘 (Ogunisjustice)
Raw and straight forward this poem speaks out about treatment deemed...
May 24th, 2026 04:13 - The lies in the sky... (Celina Powell)
A great metaphor of the moon stuck in an orbit around the earth. Well...
May 24th, 2026 04:11 - फ़ना (Waiting for Silence)
Giving seems to be a theme in this poem the giving of oneself or the...
May 24th, 2026 04:09
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