Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The George. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful story that rings with nostalgia and fondness. Very nice Gold.
March 7th, 2024 05:50 - Confident Comfortings (Orchidee)
Confusing how many names he has. Last time you said his name is always the...
March 6th, 2024 16:58 - Death In Verona (Teddy.15)
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s...
March 6th, 2024 16:48 - Exposé (Doggerel Dave)
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good...
March 6th, 2024 06:32 - A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O)
This holds a great deal within it. A deeply human experience that anyone...
March 6th, 2024 05:19 - Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60)
Gratitude for the past and hopeful anticipation of the future are keys to...
March 6th, 2024 05:10 - False Spring (Firefall)
The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely...
March 5th, 2024 15:14 - All Roads to Happiness (Accidental Poet)
A beautiful message that more people need to hear and take notice of....
March 5th, 2024 11:49 - Presence Providence (Orchidee)
My name is the same too is that special? Good write Orchi.
March 5th, 2024 05:10 - Algebra of Love (Teddy.15)
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is...
March 5th, 2024 05:06 - Veil of Sorrow (Cloie)
Focusing on the bad and painful only enhances it. This world is a balance...
March 5th, 2024 04:05 - Walking The River Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful metaphor for the changes in life that come unplanned and need...
March 5th, 2024 03:33 - Grieving Heart (Teddy.15)
The metaphor is a clear sign indeed but in the winds and rain (tears) of...
March 4th, 2024 04:47 - Must you.....? (Orchidee)
Made me chuckle Orchi I hope you have a good hair day.
March 4th, 2024 04:42 - Peace On Earth Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
So well said Andy a well organized piece full of wisdom that I too wish...
March 4th, 2024 02:18 - A Memory So Deep (Accidental Poet)
This struck the memory chords and they still vibrate at my age. Very nice...
March 3rd, 2024 21:49 - Echoes of Lavender (Cassie58)
Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with...
March 3rd, 2024 21:45 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Beautiful thoughts in beautiful words. Wistful in nature almost surreal.
March 3rd, 2024 21:41 - Among Poets (Rhmn_7)
A great question put in verse. I can only speak for myself. I write for...
March 3rd, 2024 08:11 - I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie)
There are no bonds stronger than the love between mother and child....
March 3rd, 2024 08:04 - Listening Lord (Orchidee)
Now you are reviewing my bible knowledge. This one seems a bit more...
March 3rd, 2024 05:43 - Glimmers in the Dark (Cloie)
A great contrast is shown here. Light could be knowledge and dark...
March 2nd, 2024 11:20 - Eruption (Teddy.15)
Love is not only at the top but also at the bottom. It is the underlying...
March 2nd, 2024 09:23 - Winsome Worship (Orchidee)
An anticipatory celebration here. Another good write Orchi.
March 2nd, 2024 05:00 - Freedom In Life. (Goldfinch60)
You have said it Andy. That is the key to freedom and to peace. Nicely...
March 2nd, 2024 04:57 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
\"the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\"
Loved...
March 1st, 2024 22:11 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
Now that was short!
March 1st, 2024 03:14 - Time To Text. (Goldfinch60)
I feel it Andy. From land lines to beepers, cell phones, texts, instant...
March 1st, 2024 03:13 - From Florence With Love (Teddy.15)
A beautiful tribute to not only a city but in metaphor a person.. This...
March 1st, 2024 02:41 - Boo Hoo! (Orchidee)
Had that happen before and felt very frustrated. My sympathies Orchi.
March 1st, 2024 02:33 - Every New Day. (Goldfinch60)
The message hear is plain and a good one that all should take to heart....
March 1st, 2024 02:30 - Dreamer (2781)
This seems a pledge along with a type of psalm nicely stated.
March 1st, 2024 02:28 - Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
I could certainly identify with this one Teddy it is not only beautiful...
February 29th, 2024 01:02 - I LOVE YOU. (Goldfinch60)
This is the mortar that holds the blocks together. A beautiful statement...
February 28th, 2024 03:00 - My existence (Meera Mere)
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but...
February 27th, 2024 14:51 - Grace Guardian (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi
February 27th, 2024 11:02 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
I love the way this is written without a specific narrator as if a unfaced...
February 27th, 2024 04:04 - From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15)
How did I miss gem? There is just enough mystery and puzzle in these lines...
February 27th, 2024 03:55 - March Birthdays! Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Wow you know that many people? I just give each two cents, that is my two...
February 27th, 2024 03:07 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
I have to say I have never been there myself. Wonderful wording and...
February 26th, 2024 20:47 - Your Favorite Beverage (Accidental Poet)
My favorite is tequila they say tequila will kill ya but I find it good...
February 26th, 2024 20:43 - Prayer Requests (Orchidee)
I always wondered what it would be like if everyone got everything they...
February 26th, 2024 20:38 - The Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Good advise and a new way to look at adversity, so nicely worded. It...
February 26th, 2024 04:14 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
God is an artist and you\'re right our creations pale in comparison.
February 25th, 2024 16:54 - Happy Birthday George Harrison (Accidental Poet)
Here comes the sun, one of my favorites. George responsible for bringing...
February 25th, 2024 12:10 - Paper Planes (Rhmn_7)
Your approach with a question to the reader was a great beginning. It is...
February 25th, 2024 09:24 - An Informal Visit. (Doggerel Dave)
Couplets my friend. Well when Taylor came down here a girl dropped dead....
February 25th, 2024 05:34 - In Quiet Wonder (Cloie)
This is beauty in words beyond your years. Lovely, poetic and wise as...
February 25th, 2024 05:20 - Creation Clarity (Orchidee)
I like the way this one begins.
\"The heavens declare the glory\" Indeed...
February 25th, 2024 05:07 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow....
February 25th, 2024 04:59 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
Well Orchi reading your hymns/poems I regard as my weekly church duty....
February 24th, 2024 08:58 - The Greatest Love Album Ever Written (Teddy.15)
\"a broken heart only needs
that one last sip
just enough to numb
the...
February 24th, 2024 08:52 - Father And Son. (Goldfinch60)
I feel this one Andy with four children of my own.
\"He had his...
February 24th, 2024 04:21 - Tea WithThe Tree (Bella Shepard)
I too feel akin to the trees. They get little credit for forming our...
February 23rd, 2024 16:47 - Desirous Dwelling (Orchidee)
You know I went to a church once that was trying to sell its parishioners...
February 23rd, 2024 14:42 - Breakfast Surprise (Teddy.15)
Appetizing. but I thought that the dish had run away with the spoon. Did...
February 23rd, 2024 05:01 - What Day Is It? (Goldfinch60)
Clever and correct well set up, the hook in this poem was perfectly...
February 23rd, 2024 04:08 - Maniac (Teddy.15)
Seductive, alluring, haunting in a way, I hear a sirens call. Short but so...
February 22nd, 2024 13:17 - Gassing dogs in Diego ; 4 February, 2024 (Soman Ragavan)
Although literal also a metaphor. People are not as loyal as the dog. Yet...
February 22nd, 2024 06:42 - Praise Proclaimings (Orchidee)
Orchi I have always thought if there were a God his/her words would have...
February 22nd, 2024 05:53 - Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Wow! This one is philosophy at its peak with such well thought out...
February 22nd, 2024 04:22 - So…You Want to Be a Politician (Accidental Poet)
And so it has always been. Times of Cesar, Attila the Hun, Hitler all...
February 21st, 2024 10:11 - In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15)
I have little faith but one thing I do believe is that everything happens...
February 21st, 2024 10:02 - Hear again (2781)
Here it is indeed. Love would not be bad if it truly was, but you can\'t...
February 21st, 2024 07:07 - Committed Calling (Orchidee)
Faith that help will come is what keeps us going on. So true Orchi. Good...
February 21st, 2024 05:06 - Kathleen Sings Again. (Goldfinch60)
Such a beautiful voice. Somehow I had missed out on her. Thank you so much...
February 21st, 2024 04:18 - And The Winner Is? (Teddy.15)
How true Teddy. I write for myself alone but love to share. Of the poems...
February 20th, 2024 06:35 - Never to return ! ; 9 February, 2024 (Soman Ragavan)
From time imemorial men have broken their words. Treaties were made to be...
February 20th, 2024 05:20 - What you think? (Orchidee)
I think I\'ve been to that church. There was only one church that i have...
February 20th, 2024 05:10 - Sparrow (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Orchi
February 20th, 2024 05:04 - What Ghost! (Goldfinch60)
Had me going for a while Andy. This one had a great build up and when the...
February 20th, 2024 04:42 - Love Button (Thomas W Case)
This was great, the picture at the top and the continued build up led me...
February 19th, 2024 17:06 - Lippy (Doggerel Dave)
I\'ve always been a fan of a guy that takes a chance. I used to fish with...
February 19th, 2024 17:03 - Dog Lonely (Teddy.15)
Loneliness comes in many forms at different times of life. I had a dog, ...
February 19th, 2024 15:09 - Saving Strength (Orchidee)
Trust, faith, belief, all elements needed in life as well as religion....
February 19th, 2024 14:07 - What! (2781)
The extremes that things can go to when a slippery slope is taken. Great...
February 19th, 2024 11:47 - Always Respect. (Goldfinch60)
It seems that many miss this lesson in their upbringing. Why do some...
February 19th, 2024 05:08 - Running From the Laughter (Accidental Poet)
Laughter is the best medicine lifting one\'s spirits and even making one...
February 18th, 2024 14:29 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
So true Dave. This piece is easily relatable.
February 18th, 2024 08:18 - long distance for now (Arqios)
Time stops for no man. A sense of urgency here and almost a sense of...
February 18th, 2024 06:43 - AND THE LINES WERE LONG (Bobby O)
A great description of the process of writing a novel, song, or poem. A...
February 18th, 2024 06:36 - Paddy McGee (Teddy.15)
I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story...
February 18th, 2024 06:32 - 21 Again - Ta-Dah! (Orchidee)
Happy Birthday dear Orchi may you have many more.
February 18th, 2024 05:22 - Discarded (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Orchi
February 18th, 2024 05:19 - Sitting With A Harem. (Goldfinch60)
I too have been in this position and it feels pretty good. Great write...
February 18th, 2024 04:55 - Transition (Accidental Poet)
Amazing the synchrony in that we both wrote about change today. A...
February 17th, 2024 15:30 - Going Forth... (Orchidee)
Orchi interesting that Christianity shares the idea of duality the same as...
February 17th, 2024 11:38 - Invention (2781)
Interesting how we still ascribe emotions and goodness or bad to the heart...
February 17th, 2024 06:51 - Crafty admiration (2781)
Catchy, smooth, easy and quick.
February 17th, 2024 06:11 - Indecent Proposal (Teddy.15)
Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he...
February 17th, 2024 06:09 - The Titanic. (Doggerel Dave)
I to think they should have paid attention to the word they gave, in that...
February 16th, 2024 20:34 - Deutschland (Olaf Gatermann)
My German is very limited but without knowing that there was a translation...
February 16th, 2024 18:08 - Fantasia (Teddy.15)
You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never...
February 16th, 2024 15:25 - Prayer Providings (Orchidee)
It is always helpful to know that someone is on your side. Good write
February 16th, 2024 05:03 - What Matters. (Goldfinch60)
Yes setting of priorities of what matters is an important issue and when...
February 16th, 2024 03:26 - No One Else Can See Them (Teddy.15)
Haunting. Yes I too at times find myself talking to such ghosts of people...
February 15th, 2024 13:57 - Valentine\'s Verve (Alan R)
A poem that not only contains beauty but wisdom
February 15th, 2024 08:18 - Fresh Coffee? (Goldfinch60)
Waste not want not I always say. Couldn\'t be worse than that high priced...
February 15th, 2024 02:49 - The land of Anon. (Doggerel Dave)
I just came from there, in fact I might still be there, I\'m not sure,...
February 15th, 2024 02:43 - rosy cheeked (Arqios)
Your poems are a privilege to review. I feel in ahh of their composition...
February 14th, 2024 06:18
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