Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Do you love your country? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Indeed we all love our homeland despite its flaws and weaknesses. Well
March 24th, 2026 06:03 - Angelic knights on the battlefield (EvenwheniLie)
A clever weaving of internal rhyme makes the fabric of this poem of...
March 24th, 2026 04:48 - Absquatulate (Atticus_made)
I have to say that there is a special fun and playfulness to the cadence...
March 24th, 2026 04:46 - IF I WERE TO FORGET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Romantic and sensual it is also nostalgic and holds somewhere that I can...
March 24th, 2026 04:43 - Distance (Birdbird)
This poem itself is revved up an speeds along. There is a lot of energy...
March 24th, 2026 04:41 - Nonsense (Awam)
The author may insist that the country is fictional but it sounds all too...
March 24th, 2026 04:37 - After I die... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
This poem begins with an age old concept and question of why fear death....
March 24th, 2026 04:34 - You Fed Me Forever While Planning Never (Entangled heart)
This poem carries a sad mood it is melancholic and has a tinge of...
March 24th, 2026 04:31 - Realisation (Kora)
A well painted picture of infatuation romantically painted in this piece....
March 24th, 2026 04:29 - The clock (Cindy)
It is the image presented and the tie in with the watch as a symbol of...
March 24th, 2026 04:28 - Ode to Truth (Efrain Cajar)
As always well written a tribute to truth or at least what we perceive it...
March 24th, 2026 04:24 - Back To Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
Fun mixed with frustration in this poem Gold but then so is life. Nicely...
March 24th, 2026 04:17 - I am a verb. (Vipassana)
Very nice meter control in syllables, a great transmission of images all...
March 24th, 2026 04:15 - whisper (A Dying Hero of the Past)
Romance come first to mind although this poem is listed under friendship....
March 24th, 2026 04:13 - I Thought I Knew my Home (Vanna)
This poem speaks of when that familiar banter that makes a home turns to...
March 24th, 2026 04:09 - The Weight of Light (Friendship)
A most marvelous poem that drips with goodness. It speaks of giving and...
March 23rd, 2026 14:13 - bluebells (Lunarchloedip)
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty....
March 23rd, 2026 14:08 - Cold hands (Shadowbones)
So interesting that one would assume the worst elements it is hard to...
March 23rd, 2026 14:05 - what i want (LittleMe)
That last line of two a title from a Rolling Stone song \"You can\'t...
March 23rd, 2026 13:49 - The arrival of spring (Vasile Serban)
Beautiful natural scenery anthropomorphized in this beautiful poem with...
March 23rd, 2026 13:45 - To condemn violence with solemn ink (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A sad poem of violence against the innocent in a senseless or apparently...
March 23rd, 2026 13:43 - R.I.P. Tammy Carper (Randyjohnson71)
For a woman with a good heart gone far too soon. Well written a wonderful...
March 23rd, 2026 13:38 - The Russian .Legend by Dmitry Sadovnikov (Ksey_Gan)
This poem from another time when lives were deemed property and challenges...
March 23rd, 2026 13:37 - Inside The Raging Storm (Ajon4wheels)
Loss forms part of life and we all will experience it at times. We must...
March 23rd, 2026 13:33 - Why memories ......? (Ann hegg)
Life is a paradox a contradiction where death is the end of the road and...
March 23rd, 2026 13:32 - Lazarus\'s Tomb (Gray0328)
This poem seems a questioning the strength of God and self and it ends in...
March 23rd, 2026 13:30 - Where is the city of God!? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Where do the snakes go?
March 23rd, 2026 13:28 - Dive in (2781)
Looking for a way out this poem speaks of a few. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:27 - Ferns Grow on Death (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark)
I can hear the turmoil in this piece and the emotion behind it. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 13:24 - Shepherdesses of the Flock (Matthew R. Callies)
A most mythological write well done with good images and flow. Nice
March 23rd, 2026 13:22 - Demons Lie Waiting (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nicely said Kurt I feel that I have been there several times and am always...
March 23rd, 2026 12:17 - Too Damaged for His Purpose? (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Nothing is too damaged to repair it is just that the cracks will show...
March 23rd, 2026 12:14 - In The Shadow of Fast Clocks (Neville)
A slow clock shortens your years but lengthens your pleasure. A most...
March 23rd, 2026 12:10 - Sensual (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
This poem itself feels wild and free with its sensual drive energetically...
March 23rd, 2026 12:06 - light on the question (Tristan Robert Lange)
Lábrea tar pits come to mind. We will all be frozen in time and what more...
March 23rd, 2026 12:00 - Unfolded time (Lorenz)
This poem bears the image of a jovial court jester on the hunt for young...
March 23rd, 2026 11:57 - Last (Katie B.)
Raw and hard hitting for anyone that was not picked for the team. It...
March 23rd, 2026 07:37 - The Goodbye I Never Said (Cindy)
There is the feeling of being trapped and yet the constant feeling of love...
March 23rd, 2026 06:08 - Static Disassociation (Donteatmecows)
Dreams of being naked are common and reveal our fear of being known yet in...
March 23rd, 2026 06:06 - tadpole life (Jim56)
A lovely poem Jim of growth from a humble beginning into nothing majestic...
March 23rd, 2026 06:04 - Life As We Know It (Anthony Hanible)
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone...
March 23rd, 2026 06:02 - From Sunrise and Then (Teddy.15)
Lovely list of life\'s joys and pleasures and can say I have done most,...
March 23rd, 2026 05:59 - nightwalk (Arqios)
Cryptic I love the subtle rhyme of this piece on each final line of the...
March 23rd, 2026 05:54 - Contrasting Hearts (Kora)
This poem seems a humble offering to a god. Nicely worded it appears...
March 23rd, 2026 04:35 - The Rooftop Reach (Lilmoonxx)
A most interesting play on words where atmosphere can be literal in a...
March 23rd, 2026 04:34 - Noises (Maplespal)
I often wonder what it would be like to understand animal language, not...
March 23rd, 2026 04:32 - waiting (Illiana)
A most interesting write. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2026 04:30 - An Ode To Earworms (Syd)
Unusual in a good way. This poem speaks to an old term and uses it in a...
March 23rd, 2026 04:28 - Brave Wings (Birdbird)
There is reflection in this poem of one\'s strengths as well as weakness\'...
March 23rd, 2026 04:25 - Maybe (Kman Pumpkin King28)
This seems a reflective poem of how much of a child\'s behavior is learned...
March 23rd, 2026 04:22 - Uncharted, Unheld (Entangled heart)
This is so poetic just enough left to interpretation so that it can be...
March 23rd, 2026 04:19 - Depravity (Atticus_made)
Some words just feel in a visceral way and that often feels depraved or...
March 23rd, 2026 04:17 - Climate change foists severe challenges... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Having been through hurricanes, having lost power, suffered blizzards,...
March 23rd, 2026 04:14 - Meteorologist´s Day (Efrain Cajar)
Beautiful words combine in tribute to meteorologists and meteorology...
March 23rd, 2026 04:12 - FOR YOU I PRAYED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This speaks of fond and not so fond memories that weld into a life missed...
March 23rd, 2026 04:04 - Intimate Exile (Brian Otucho)
Here an incongruous metaphor combines with others to form a feeling that...
March 23rd, 2026 04:01 - Warm (Alan R)
Romantic in various ways it speaks of a relationship and time. Lovely
March 23rd, 2026 03:57 - Peaky Blinders: The Immortal Man (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It is the last line that gains most of my support. It is why that sequels...
March 23rd, 2026 03:55 - Music With My Dad Again. (Goldfinch60)
A great thought or dream Andy and one that seems quite calming and...
March 23rd, 2026 03:53 - GUESS WHO (2) (Michael Edwards)
This pulls up a great picture in the mind and I could put a few faces on...
March 23rd, 2026 03:50 - Imaginary Albatross (Dan Williams)
Here one thought connects to the next just as they do in the brain and in...
March 23rd, 2026 03:47 - Time\'s Inventory (Hoolihooli)
Love can be a two edged sword that cuts both ways. A poem that speaks of...
March 23rd, 2026 03:43 - Where Is Everyone? (AaliyahC.)
A good analogy of changing relationships and chanting seasons well done
March 23rd, 2026 03:40 - Chess (Allie561)
A good metaphor used well with the different pieces. We are all pawns.
March 23rd, 2026 03:38 - Rocks, chains and pains (HerTime)
This poem has a rap beat and flow as it speaks of forgiveness. Nicely...
March 23rd, 2026 03:36 - Poem-Hippo Stomps the Lion--22 March 2026 (Soman Ragavan)
Engaging but with little doubt which would win. Well written Soman
March 22nd, 2026 21:15 - Paper (Kora)
Uncertainty voiced in this poem with metaphor nicely expressed
March 22nd, 2026 20:58 - A Room For Two (Freyaaa)
We all wish to be the best and that is reflected in this poem. Very nicely...
March 22nd, 2026 20:57 - Alone and Free (Lane.rowe)
One must love oneself first before one can love anyone else. A lovely
March 22nd, 2026 20:55 - Are you also poisoned? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Love they say can set you free or enslave you choose
March 22nd, 2026 20:53 - CONCRETE (Falcon_mn)
A great satire where concrete would work so well for a bed with full...
March 22nd, 2026 17:28 - a musician\'s thought (Jjudaharts)
This is where ego exceeds logic. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 17:26 - Room (Amethyste)
Lonely indeed where only a hollow remains. Nice
March 22nd, 2026 17:25 - Connection2 (E.J. Waling)
A poem of change and rapid change it seems to be. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 17:23 - Nowhereland (Philip Daniel Cook)
I find myself thinking about the last line. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 17:21 - The Sound Of Silence (Ajon4wheels)
A most interesting write incorporating silence.
March 22nd, 2026 15:45 - Jack of all trades,master of none (Ociel)
A poem that emphasizes the need to be the best at something. I gave up on...
March 22nd, 2026 15:02 - On A Loop (Not_defined)
A poem of literal groundhog day. So it seems in the grind of life where a...
March 22nd, 2026 14:55 - Gratitude (Prachi Dalvi)
A great poem on gratitude too little seen in life. Well written it gives...
March 22nd, 2026 11:59 - Help Is Available (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
I thought I understood self harm but self punishment is a different animal...
March 22nd, 2026 11:57 - Waiting For You To Write The Music (Kurt Philip Behm)
Now Kurt that sounds both musical and critical at the same time. A great...
March 22nd, 2026 11:54 - The universal hourglass (Lorenz)
Have you ever tried to count those grains as they fall like counting...
March 22nd, 2026 11:51 - Rooted system of a down caste soiled sport (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Preferred Mousetrap to chutes and ladders Do use the world wide web but...
March 22nd, 2026 11:49 - Untitled (RSM0812)
A most interesting perspective held in the character here. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 11:09 - Gravity, and Other Small Disasters (Gray0328)
A strong work Gray mind provoking nicely done
March 22nd, 2026 11:04 - Nightmares that wake you up (Aaron Roberson)
So many concerns and fears plague the mind. Strong and haunting well done.
March 22nd, 2026 10:56 - LETTER OF SPRING (Durdica Porobija)
Spring always returns and with it rebirth and new life. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 09:48 - Cat gazing at the moon (Caring dove)
This poem paints a clear picture of peace and the world on pause almost a...
March 22nd, 2026 09:46 - Stuck like back to to the future 🔮 (Ms.divine)
This is a poem of someone standing up against control and asserting...
March 22nd, 2026 09:44 - A Thought That Doesn\'t Return (Entangled heart)
To be edited out of one\'s book is a frightening thought like unto being...
March 22nd, 2026 09:42 - just care (Xqw)
Some find it far too difficult to lift their eyes and see what is about...
March 22nd, 2026 09:40 - Just (Bloomingcereus)
At any age we need it and it calls in different forms. A wonderful write...
March 22nd, 2026 09:38 - On Eugene Field’s ‘Wynken, Blynken and Nod’ (Matthew R. Callies)
A time of childhood where things were safe and parents were the guardians...
March 22nd, 2026 09:37 - Keep Swimming (J. C. V. O.)
Lost at sea a terrifying experience that at some point requires surrender....
March 22nd, 2026 09:34 - Somebody showed me (Maplespal)
Romantic and warm it is a sweet poem of infatuation. Lovely
March 22nd, 2026 09:33 - The Search has Ended (Thomas W Case)
A great write Thomas of how obedience comes in one\'s own time when...
March 22nd, 2026 09:31 - Orbit of Oblivion (Tristan Robert Lange)
A deep dive into the interaction of action and nonaction in regard to...
March 22nd, 2026 09:25 - Daisy (Alan R)
It is in the bloom that beauty is shown emerging from bud and going to...
March 22nd, 2026 07:19 - R&R (2781)
Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun...
March 22nd, 2026 07:17 - Yellow Brick Road (Yael Garcia)
Madness judged by comparison to others. It is a matter of degree of...
March 22nd, 2026 07:14
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