Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- GOOD BORN OF TRAGEDY (David Welch)
Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s...
December 6th, 2025 15:05 - Tired but kind (Aa Harvey)
Exhaustion, tired , worn out all come through in this poem. A lovely write
December 6th, 2025 15:02 - The Gaze: The Purifier of Truth in the Human Soul (Soheil khodaparasti)
The words that are veils keep hidden some of the self sometimes because...
December 6th, 2025 15:00 - Tech-mania (EvenwheniLie)
Humans believe that what sets us apart is our mind and the rest does not...
December 6th, 2025 13:38 - Resighted (Kurt Philip Behm)
This poem is deeper than the surface of the mirror it goes to the silver...
December 6th, 2025 13:37 - The Second Arrow (Gray0328)
Learn from experience everyone makes a mistake but to make the same...
December 6th, 2025 13:35 - Flying Amongst Stars (Evie Baker)
This poem ends romantic and touching. Well done
December 6th, 2025 13:31 - Deep Reflections Within Mornings (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Seeds grow when planted. A most interesting and complex poem. Well done
December 6th, 2025 13:25 - Facts Pt2 (Anthony Hanible)
A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes...
December 6th, 2025 13:15 - Last words (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
Judge no one. This write bounces from one time to another. Well done
December 6th, 2025 13:12 - My Shadow Follows You (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
All things can and do change good to bad and bad to good nothing is...
December 6th, 2025 12:31 - Journey into the revealed (Lorenz)
A creation in entropy and unity in dissolution. All opposites are one and...
December 6th, 2025 11:35 - pig stye (Tristan Robert Lange)
Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where...
December 6th, 2025 11:31 - Snot-Freeze (Matthew R. Callies)
I can equate. In the past lived where lighter fluid would freeze before...
December 6th, 2025 10:21 - Emotions (TRADMAX)
Most interesting logic in this poem. A thought provoking write.
December 6th, 2025 09:40 - Analysis (Tkatie118)
Perceptions always change with time whether memory fades and distorts or...
December 6th, 2025 09:39 - xmas robin (Jim56)
Very nice Jim You must live a little south to still have robins this time...
December 6th, 2025 09:36 - Making the Cut? (GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ)
Shamrocker you are a definite one for writing stories. Well worked and...
December 6th, 2025 08:57 - Mindful (2781)
Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of...
December 6th, 2025 08:23 - Man\'s best friend (Maplespal)
Man\'s best friend in this poem is all that is needed in life. A wonderful...
December 6th, 2025 07:28 - Conscience (PerditaRose)
This poem not only a beautiful message but some great internal rhyme as...
December 6th, 2025 07:22 - โณโฏ๐ถ๐๐๐โฏ (Keyara S Trotman)
A beautiful thought that is well said. Nicely done
December 6th, 2025 07:20 - This Christmas (RSM0812)
A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter...
December 6th, 2025 07:04 - Christmas. (Friendship)
Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and...
December 6th, 2025 07:03 - The Faintest Outline (Iris Nazarene)
Self doubt creeps in and remains held within. What others say makes no...
December 6th, 2025 05:31 - no flowers (Arqios)
What on this earth doth cures is judged the same by the universe. A lovely...
December 6th, 2025 05:29 - TRACES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Times come and go mines to homes, Coal to smoke. Work to leisure people...
December 6th, 2025 04:18 - Cobalt (Katie B.)
Katie this should be familiar to many, in that often we have a favorite...
December 6th, 2025 04:15 - Night has fallen (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
Loved this haiku that brings memories of many days turning twilight, dusk...
December 6th, 2025 04:11 - Dรฉjร vu (Kering.karim)
Reflective tender words of being enthralled, entranced and obsessed with...
December 6th, 2025 04:09 - The Awakening Beyond the Lie (Dhiman Shah)
Deeply philosophical and metaphorical as well this poem deals with the...
December 6th, 2025 04:04 - Anthem of the Russian Bandits by Savely Yadov (Ksey_Gan)
Corruption, connections, collusion, criminals combine in this poem.
December 6th, 2025 03:56 - Christ for Jews and Gentiles - OT/NT Series 8 (Orchidee)
Well Orchi as I hear it there were progressive roots as far back as Isaiah...
December 6th, 2025 03:54 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
I remember him from my childhood. I too loved his music. A most nostalgic...
December 6th, 2025 03:50 - Passing By (Hacklec)
Enigmatic and surreal this poem unfolds as a conversation on a bus and...
December 5th, 2025 19:57 - A little game (called Russian roulette) (Sam.C)
It reminds me of childhood when I did play games. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 18:29 - BURNING AFTER MIDNIGHT (David Welch)
An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that...
December 5th, 2025 18:26 - Together (Amethyste)
A tender and sad poem with a longing for togetherness. Well done
December 5th, 2025 18:23 - When I\'m gone. (Chris Duffy)
This is a sad poem of missed opportunity lost time. A wonderful poem about...
December 5th, 2025 18:21 - Exhaustion (Freyaaa)
I hear the tiredness in this piece. Well done
December 5th, 2025 16:22 - Mercedes Benz (for Janis Joplin) (Norman Flagtea)
I remember that song well. Loved the song
December 5th, 2025 16:20 - How To Survive an Argument in 15 Steps (Malo J)
A poem of apologies and the first time I would agree but repeated...
December 5th, 2025 14:35 - My gift to you (Anabasova)
This poem reminds me of the gift of a child. Lovely and so innocent.
December 5th, 2025 14:32 - PSA ๐ค (Ms.divine)
Feelings expressed. An assertion of power in this write.
December 5th, 2025 12:58 - just a random thought (Jjudaharts)
Love the twist in the last line. To be funny it has to have a bit of truth
December 5th, 2025 12:38 - Red-Ribbon Spirals (Matthew R. Callies)
A holiday poem that sweetens the season. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 12:38 - those who burned the lightโจ (Nayak)
The way I took this was a cremation a funeral and the work going into the...
December 5th, 2025 12:36 - The Epic of Saint Nicholas and Krampus (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
I loved this poem. I am not much for Christmas but it\'s legends and lore...
December 5th, 2025 11:33 - Too Late Now (Wondergirl)
A poem that pleas for a timely response. When one waits the opportunity...
December 5th, 2025 11:29 - Stop Signs (Gray0328)
What a beautiful poetic prayer Gray and although I don\'t pray this could...
December 5th, 2025 11:05 - The lone heart beats for two (Yazz)
We all feel alone at times and yet we are never alone. A lovely write that...
December 5th, 2025 11:03 - A Small Everyday Miracle (Soheil khodaparasti)
A definite fave. This poem pulls at the heartstrings for as a grandfather...
December 5th, 2025 11:00 - Critics (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another great write Kurt. A poem that holds meaning. Loved it
December 5th, 2025 10:18 - Cult (Aman 12)
Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is...
December 5th, 2025 10:16 - Ready? (Tristan Robert Lange)
All so true and more for some people than others. So well described in...
December 5th, 2025 10:12 - Patiently waiting (William Hromada)
A lovely poem that could be about a lover, spouse, friend, child or even a...
December 5th, 2025 08:43 - Recognize. (Friendship)
A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the...
December 5th, 2025 08:41 - Facts (Anthony Hanible)
A simple statement in poetic form that uses logic to command emotion. Well...
December 5th, 2025 08:37 - Friend? (TRADMAX)
Simple and nicely written it speaks to all those that are alone, nicely...
December 5th, 2025 08:36 - where the star goes when they fall (Ipshita)
Poetic, innocent, and a piece of our inner child in this poem. Lovely
December 5th, 2025 08:35 - January in December (PerditaRose)
A clever haiku that sends its message in weather and season. Nicely done
December 5th, 2025 08:33 - My forever friend (Neilton)
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman (the second line you might want...
December 5th, 2025 08:32 - guide dog (Jim56)
A beautiful poem about a beautiful animal that helps the blind. A true...
December 5th, 2025 06:47 - Love and Death (RSM0812)
A really beautiful write that has great images and rhyme. So well done a...
December 5th, 2025 06:45 - When Sorrow Comes to Call (Katie B.)
Beautiful in its sorrow, poetic in its stark reality. Life turned to...
December 5th, 2025 05:36 - cerulean chasm (Arqios)
You got me on this one Criptic I have reviewed this one several times and...
December 5th, 2025 05:33 - Icarus! (Andrew Deaton)
A poem of high dreams and expectations that cost too much but left one...
December 5th, 2025 05:24 - ๐ขโฏ๐ โด๐ โ๐ (๐ฏโด๐โฏ๐โฏ๐น โฑ๐โด๐โฏ๐๐พ๐โ โฑ๐โด๐โฏ๐๐) (Keyara S Trotman)
Yes write so as to remember and so as to express. Well done
December 5th, 2025 04:32 - LIGHTNINGS / Relรกmpagos (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
This is a rather haunting poem with deep feeling from awakened memories....
December 5th, 2025 04:31 - Days Of Division - OT/NT Series 7 (Orchidee)
I remember that Bible verse well and never thought that people needed any...
December 5th, 2025 04:26 - An Open Letter To Jay-Z (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A call out poem and very well worded and laid out. A good read
December 5th, 2025 04:21 - A DEEP BREATH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A poem of rhyme and ethereal form that speaks from another world. Very...
December 5th, 2025 04:18 - The Arc of Silence - Malaysia Airlines Flight MH370 (Brian Otucho)
This poem was well written its rhythm, meter, rhyme and imagery kept my...
December 5th, 2025 04:16 - the marie antoinette bakery (Jon Nakapalau)
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in...
December 5th, 2025 04:13 - Cocoon Phase (Chanel T.)
A very nice metaphor of growth and development in the form of caterpillar...
December 5th, 2025 04:10 - Weaning myself off social media platforms..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Here a ramble though loose thoughts leaves a feeling of amusement. Nicely...
December 5th, 2025 04:08 - FRECKLES AND BIGGER THIGHS (Fikrioshin)
As I read this it gives me a sense of belonging in a small space that...
December 5th, 2025 04:05 - He (Freyaaa)
Smitten is the word that comes to mind for this poem. A writing of being...
December 5th, 2025 04:03 - Stand Still (Lane.rowe)
Reflections of childhood of family and their meaning in the author\'s...
December 5th, 2025 03:59 - Forever And Always. (Goldfinch60)
A pledge of allegiance to another a declaration of love. Nicely written
December 5th, 2025 03:55 - AMERICA, MADE OF AWESOME (David Welch)
A rather complex set of assertions and conclusions. Nicely written David
December 4th, 2025 19:14 - Fire (Amethyste)
I sense a metaphor in the concept of winter that can be literal or...
December 4th, 2025 19:09 - Wordless story (Lorenz)
December 4th, 2025 16:48 - Wordless story (Lorenz)
Some great images and lines here. Surreal, esoteric with a fog of wisdom...
December 4th, 2025 16:48 - Love me silly (Aa Harvey)
A love poem that recognizes differences but wants to make connection. Very...
December 4th, 2025 16:25 - YOU THINK YOU CAN HANDLE ME?\" (Aaron Roberson)
Quite the range of emotions in this piece it covers the whole gambit. Well...
December 4th, 2025 14:48 - Centerpiece (Soumya Singh)
A declaration of love in a most poetic and beautiful way. Most lovely
December 4th, 2025 14:44 - I\'m difficult to love (Sree)
A poem stating the situation as it is before one enters into the...
December 4th, 2025 14:36 - life is grey (Ipshita)
It is the interaction between opposites that make for the colors of this...
December 4th, 2025 13:10 - You Weren\'t Meant to be Awake This Long (Alex Arnot)
A poem of how one looks at things and the differences and interactions...
December 4th, 2025 13:08 - Outward and Inward (Soheil khodaparasti)
A most interesting perspective on the words and their differences. Nicely...
December 4th, 2025 13:06 - The Reaper Said (Megan Blaney)
A wonderful write that makes the journey feel so at home a fave
December 4th, 2025 11:57 - Where Our Feelings Match (EchoCanvas)
A poem of longing for a match that is a good fit and so we all wish. Very...
December 4th, 2025 11:55 - An Ode to Our True Ancestors (Overlords of All Creation) (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
My favorite portion of this poem were the first three sections where the...
December 4th, 2025 11:54 - Old Man Winter (Matthew R. Callies)
Descriptive in the best poetic manner its images are cold and stark and...
December 4th, 2025 10:59 - Searchers Take Flight (Kurt Philip Behm)
An inverted point of view when one is turned upside down. A lovey poem my...
December 4th, 2025 10:57 - Ready for Jail (Ladywithaquill)
A poem of feared betrayal and rejection. Sad but anger flows beneath the...
December 4th, 2025 10:56 - The Azure Lake (Yazz)
Lovely! a wonderful depiction of nature in its serenity and beauty. A...
December 4th, 2025 10:54 - A Farmers Sunrise (RSM0812)
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of natures beauty and healing force. Well...
December 4th, 2025 10:51 - You Can\'t Be Mad With Twizzlers (ForeverJesus7)
This one expresses a strong preference for something that I had never...
December 4th, 2025 09:49
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