Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Sparrow and Joy — A Day of Light (Efrain Cajar)
Very nicely done this poem on love with the analogy of the bird. It...
March 20th, 2026 03:42 - Daily (Maplespal)
Worked on a dairy farm when I was young and you just described it in this...
March 19th, 2026 16:52 - the value of surrender (Jjudaharts)
So said Sun tzu in the Art of War that the best way to win a war was by...
March 19th, 2026 16:51 - Ochre Winged Sprite (Quemis)
Unless I am mistaken this poem is fanciful and takes us on a journey with...
March 19th, 2026 16:50 - Wings forgotten (Carmen Luca)
Beautiful! And indeed it is true the key is inside of each of us. We...
March 19th, 2026 14:07 - Nature\'s Painting (Teddy.15)
You mentioned dream Teddy and isn\'t life but a dream from which none of...
March 19th, 2026 14:06 - In the City Garden by Aleksey Fatianov (Ksey_Gan)
Romantic it could well be a song with the chorus. Nicely written it sings.
March 19th, 2026 13:19 - Journal of a Grief (Toniscales)
This could be for anyone from lover to child it rings out in loneliness...
March 19th, 2026 13:17 - To love or not to love (HerTime)
Great metaphor in this poem of seasons and temperature as well as new love...
March 19th, 2026 13:15 - Silence Leads to Surrender of Life (Joseph M Marion)
A great poem about the dualities of silence like everything else it has...
March 19th, 2026 13:13 - Weak (2781)
A well written poem of belief and faith that speaks of the division...
March 19th, 2026 09:53 - Eldest sister of mine under divine hands... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A sad poem of family well written
March 19th, 2026 09:50 - Beyond words (Cindy)
Science still has not been able to unravel the issue of consciousness and...
March 19th, 2026 09:49 - The Static Reset (Lilmoonxx)
What an experience coming back from that world. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 09:48 - Breaking the rules (Allie561)
A wonderful poem of not only rebellion but being oneself just for the sake...
March 19th, 2026 09:45 - Icicle Sun (Tristan Robert Lange)
A metaphoric Icarus fall of society in this poem. Interesting that as one...
March 19th, 2026 09:41 - Period — End (Kurt Philip Behm)
And from that circular seed all things grow. An end point in a small black...
March 19th, 2026 08:57 - DO YOU HAVE A GOOD HEART..... (Prachi Dalvi)
A good poem asking for reflection. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2026 08:02 - Do you enjoy sex? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Those that don\'t enjoy are doomed to an evolutionary cul-de-sac. Well
March 19th, 2026 08:00 - ফুলেল বসন্তে তার ডাক (Shah Alam Al Mujahid)
A most beautiful declaration of longing for one missing. It is both joyous...
March 19th, 2026 07:40 - poetry mouse (Jim56)
A poem with a happy ending where a mouse personified becomes a metaphor...
March 19th, 2026 07:02 - The Bridge (RSM0812)
Similarities and differences this reminds me of the river Styx that erases...
March 19th, 2026 07:00 - A cold eve (LONG) (Atticus_made)
Here a story, a fairytale the question being like the book The Little...
March 19th, 2026 06:58 - \"she\'s gutsy\" (Arqios)
We admire grit and courage glints of a dream we wish we were. A lovely...
March 19th, 2026 06:50 - Love is Priceless Love is Rare (Adventuressmalik)
The price of things can not always be put on a balance even though the...
March 19th, 2026 05:11 - Anxious Streets and Scared Whispers (Gray0328)
This poem seems a call to arms and a speech of encouragement. Nicely...
March 19th, 2026 05:08 - BORDERS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The present has a way of banishing the past. Nostalgia is allowed to visit...
March 19th, 2026 05:06 - Gem (Brian Otucho)
This carries the sensual sense of a preditor in the dark for me. It is...
March 19th, 2026 05:04 - Egregious Expectations (The Routine) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This poem carries a new view on the American Dream not wealth and luxury...
March 19th, 2026 05:01 - Found (Birdbird)
A most interesting rhyme and meter pattern in this poem it carries the...
March 19th, 2026 04:59 - Want (Alan R)
We ask for love but do we give it? Is it like money something that we...
March 19th, 2026 04:56 - Why The Abyss Stares Back (Anna Wakey29)
It is the last stanza that hold the power of this poem for me. It is self...
March 19th, 2026 04:54 - Drenched in Your Absence (Entangled heart)
Metaphors fall in drops in this poem and the water level raises until one...
March 19th, 2026 04:52 - Dissociating Anxiety (Zhangyuyouyu)
At the beginning I thought that this represented Janis Joplin her last...
March 19th, 2026 04:51 - Vibrations (EvenwheniLie)
A great poem about spooky science as Einstein called it quantum theory,...
March 19th, 2026 04:48 - A Poet Superhero (Anthony Hanible)
With each line I had memories of the beginning of the superman series as...
March 19th, 2026 04:45 - A Night at the Theater (Matthew R. Callies)
Lovely the poem reads smooth and though in rhyme its meter lets the reader...
March 19th, 2026 04:42 - I Will Hear Your Song (Katie B.)
Katie I hear your song in the form of a bird calling for its fledglings...
March 19th, 2026 04:37 - Into Our Own Life. (Goldfinch60)
It is not the person that is perfect but the method that is. Like...
March 19th, 2026 04:34 - The Hare and the Moon (Kaz)
Indeed a question posed and answer implied but not given. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:32 - The original sin. (Vipassana)
This to me is one of you best it carries indications of deeper meaning...
March 19th, 2026 04:31 - Bruce Willis — A Tribute (Efrain Cajar)
Very well written a great tribute to a great actor I am familiar with many...
March 19th, 2026 04:25 - Poem-Lionesses Trump The Lion--17March2026 (Soman Ragavan)
A lovely poem with a personified view of the lion pride. Here human values...
March 19th, 2026 04:13 - Vl. The Circumference of Nullity (Jon Nakapalau)
As this poem develops it grows grim and the last few lines speak of...
March 18th, 2026 20:21 - Solar Veil (Freyaaa)
A beautiful wording of a lovely cosmic event where light refraction...
March 18th, 2026 20:19 - You\'re the Occasion (Official 1SP)
This is sensuous and seductive while at the same time seeming words for a...
March 18th, 2026 20:17 - waiting room of purgatory (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Strong words of anger lay in this poem giving it power but at the same...
March 18th, 2026 20:13 - What then? (Maplespal)
Clever word play in this poem. We all are what we are. Well done
March 18th, 2026 16:43 - Two Hearts by Vessa Blumenbaum (Ksey_Gan)
I love the line \"Whoever is happy is, by definition, right.\" Happiness...
March 18th, 2026 16:41 - Soon It Will Be Spring Again (Teddy.15)
So sad but so beautiful Teddy so nicely worded it sounds ethereal you have...
March 18th, 2026 16:33 - guise (Jjudaharts)
So short but so true and well worded a fave
March 18th, 2026 16:30 - Gaze. (Ociel)
Some beautiful lines in this poem that rings of faith. It is very nicely...
March 18th, 2026 14:47 - Take those risks (Allie561)
Such a great statement. How many times have we all failed to ask and...
March 18th, 2026 14:41 - Teddy Bear (Cully45)
A cute read of grabbing assurance in the form of a childhood comfort. Well...
March 18th, 2026 13:37 - Prosperous Praise (Orchidee)
A poem of promise and pledge. Nicely done Orchi
March 18th, 2026 13:34 - When I Discard My Body (Gray0328)
Reflections in this poem Gray well written my friend
March 18th, 2026 12:05 - Attack Of The Clones (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Lord keep me out of the public eye. A lovely write
March 18th, 2026 12:03 - The return (Lorenz)
How many journeys as a child in daydream and night dreams, in books and in...
March 18th, 2026 12:01 - Quiet of an early morning (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Well written it comes down to declaring beauty through divine eyes
March 18th, 2026 11:09 - Omission (Anna Wakey29)
Self sacrifice by silence is one of the most dramatic ways to go down. The...
March 18th, 2026 11:07 - The Unseen Map (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
A beautiful poetic expression of wisdom nicely rhymed and with great...
March 18th, 2026 11:03 - At Knowing\'s Edge (Tristan Robert Lange)
Faith in religion becomes theory in science each to be tested. And when we...
March 18th, 2026 09:10 - Wednesday Musing (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another set of poems to ponder my friend they each with a message that...
March 18th, 2026 09:05 - Mrudula (Neville)
A sad story Neville and I pray that I never be the cause of such a...
March 18th, 2026 09:02 - Microcosmic Melodies (Mutley Ravishes)
March 18th, 2026 08:26 - Microcosmic Melodies (Mutley Ravishes)
Gravity operates on all being a major force in the universe. Well written...
March 18th, 2026 08:26 - dont give up (Jim56)
A most encouraging write of keeping on and strive even when it is not what...
March 18th, 2026 07:25 - This side of me (Bloomingcereus)
A sad and lonely poem of isolation. Well written
March 18th, 2026 07:24 - innocence (Isa kemmy)
One should never loose that innocence that exuberance that energy and...
March 18th, 2026 07:22 - Search (2781)
Isn\'t that the most vexing thing. I too have lost pieces in that way out...
March 18th, 2026 07:20 - iNNOCENCE IMPARTED (Katie B.)
Katie that last line holds all the power of a poem well composed and...
March 18th, 2026 07:17 - Mommy And Daddy Is Fighting Again (Anthony Hanible)
Is it no wonder that when a child learns that love is expressed like this...
March 18th, 2026 07:15 - \"and now it\'s my fault\" (Arqios)
And so it is with male female relationships not just in boyhood. To me I...
March 18th, 2026 07:12 - Will the Bus be Late? (William Hromada)
This I take for a rewrite William since I remember it well or maybe its...
March 18th, 2026 07:08 - Lagom (Alan R)
A lovely write that speaks the truth in most of us but is the recognition...
March 18th, 2026 05:40 - Chronicles of Warnia (Awam)
A fanciful (or maybe not) tale. If in metaphor it could easily represent...
March 18th, 2026 04:52 - Voices (Roseeee)
This has a surrealistic feel to it with the introjection of various...
March 18th, 2026 04:50 - Glimpse into the eye of a needle (EvenwheniLie)
A sense of feeling overwhelmed with too many demands comes through in this...
March 18th, 2026 04:48 - Deep abyss (Atticus_made)
Now this is a most interesting write where one must determine what the...
March 18th, 2026 04:46 - Blood Moon (Xlayla55x)
I hear deep sadness over loss in this poem that calls out of the darkness....
March 18th, 2026 04:44 - Refusing waste (Donteatmecows)
It is the end of this poem that captures my interest and the last two...
March 18th, 2026 04:41 - I Am Feeling So Alive (Ajon4wheels)
A loss fixed in the mind a pain that can not be forgotten. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:39 - \'At (Doggerel Dave)
Clever wording Dave and yes I have heard that term used before of north...
March 18th, 2026 04:34 - Doing The Garden Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Procrastination one of my best friends along with justification. Very...
March 18th, 2026 04:29 - MAN WITHOUT TIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Here we are left in darkness and shadow with a figure that somehow has...
March 18th, 2026 04:26 - -$1.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
It is in times of fault that understand most what worth and value are....
March 18th, 2026 04:22 - Clash of Strength (Matthew R. Callies)
This very well could be about any martial art. Nicely written it draws...
March 18th, 2026 04:21 - World Sleep Day (Efrain Cajar)
Very nice Efrain. In this beautifully crafted poem of sleep and dreams...
March 18th, 2026 04:18 - On The Road to Vexation. (David Wakeling)
We are the source of our own fears created out of imagination. A fun poem...
March 18th, 2026 04:10 - Note to Self: Love\'s Unseen Battle (Entangled heart)
A strong message sent in this poem. A warning to others it tells of the...
March 18th, 2026 04:06 - Extreme (E.J. Waling)
This seems the cycle and people do not learn but keep doing the same thing...
March 17th, 2026 18:38 - I just wasn\'t the one. (Ociel)
What we think matters at one point is not what it takes to get what we...
March 17th, 2026 18:36 - Vernal equinox. (Vipassana)
Quite the scene set with vivid images. I am not sure of the metaphor here...
March 17th, 2026 18:34 - A hard life (Donteatmecows)
This poem seems to scream of a greater need of stimulation and I hear...
March 17th, 2026 18:31 - God complex (Ms.divine)
Rulers beware whether national or individual. Nice
March 17th, 2026 14:59 - Remind me (Maplespal)
Almost mystical this poem looks to images of the beyond. Well done
March 17th, 2026 14:58 - ~City of stars~ (Nyra M)
A most beautiful write of the night sky and man\'s eternal look away from...
March 17th, 2026 14:57 - Will the Bus be Late? (William Hromada)
A great write that is more than a ride but that hope that hangs on with...
March 17th, 2026 14:54 - Matthew O\' Harris Ease A \"FAKE\" Irishman fair one day (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A fine write for a green day. Full of leprechauns and shamrocks. Lovely
March 17th, 2026 13:19 - Narc, Narc, Who\'s There? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
So clever and powerful at the same time a grate line well used in this...
March 17th, 2026 12:52
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