Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Quill of the Greats (Thomas W Case) Well done Thomas I too have my place although ideas ariase in other
  July 13th, 2025 16:29
• Waiting for Nora (Tony Grannell) Tony quite the tale that would make any novel proud as a beginning. Nicely...
  July 13th, 2025 16:27
• A Game of Chess (Samuel Maximilian) Brilliant! Well done in rhyme, message and metaphor each woven into this...
  July 13th, 2025 14:44
• Flower and ladybird (Caring dove) Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by...
  July 13th, 2025 13:54
• I told you (Sree) A poetic list of commandments said firmly and as a warning. Nicely written...
  July 13th, 2025 13:51
• Until I Found You (13LaurenD) A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and...
  July 13th, 2025 13:49
• The Moth and The Warmth (Gaurav Gurung) The allegory is very nice. It speaks to the heart and soul. To give back...
  July 13th, 2025 13:46
• Hades Train (Kurt Philip Behm) Good lord nothing left to rhyme that would be hell indeed. Another good...
  July 13th, 2025 13:42
• Wassat? (Orchidee) Point made Orchi f the poems I\'ve written stacked on top of each other...
  July 13th, 2025 13:41
• In shade (Kaz) What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
  July 13th, 2025 13:38
• The Sad Thoughts (Ksey_Gan) When the time is come little else matters after. A rather solemn poem that...
  July 13th, 2025 13:37
• Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy) Days ritual full of food and fun nicely done Four sonnets with loss of...
  July 13th, 2025 13:35
• Glass Race (Dyslexic.gun) A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is...
  July 13th, 2025 13:33
• Creatures of habit (2781) A habit may be good to keep a ritual but gives little room for reflection....
  July 13th, 2025 13:30
• Vibrations in Equations: Where Science Meets Soul (Salvia.S) Salvia many years ago I too thought of psychological elements as formulas...
  July 13th, 2025 12:42
• \"The tale of moon and star\"🌙⭐ (Antra.sharma_) Such a wonderful metaphor that fits so well in various aspects and well...
  July 13th, 2025 09:39
• Line up the constellations (Georgia Watson) Diametrically opposed put together in completion using wonderful poetic...
  July 13th, 2025 09:34
• The hustle (RSM0812) Great confidence in this poem that speaks with power. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 09:31
• Free me (Chitrangada) Feelings that I can identify with in many ways. Nicely written it speaks...
  July 13th, 2025 09:30
• The 12th Anniversary Of Dad\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A poem of loss and in its sadness positives found in memories. Well done...
  July 13th, 2025 09:25
• Put It Away (Bella Shepard) Ah Bella good advice given in a poetic form that all can understand....
  July 13th, 2025 09:23
• I Left the Door Open for You (Vanna) Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well...
  July 13th, 2025 07:47
• Clean (Tristan Robert Lange) Many interpretations here don\'t know which one to start with. As a race...
  July 13th, 2025 07:45
• Pirates (Tony36) Pirates always a a romantic crew of ruffians and scallywags on the ocean...
  July 13th, 2025 06:26
• Memories of childhood. (Friendship) Memories well written of a past enchanted, a storybook of comfort and...
  July 13th, 2025 05:35
• Processing loss (Jeremy Leach) A vivid image and great metaphor in this poem that teaches its lesson in...
  July 13th, 2025 05:29
• firefly forest (Jim56) I too love the fireflies and their floating lights over meadow and through...
  July 13th, 2025 05:26
• Who is His Beloved (Priya Tomar) A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence....
  July 13th, 2025 05:17
• what I couldn\'t finish (Leny) Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 05:15
• the dungeon within (Gray0328) Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep...
  July 13th, 2025 05:13
• THE FARTER (Nephilim56) A fun read reminding me of the show (Blazing Saddles) of childhood fart...
  July 13th, 2025 05:11
• A rising star (EvenwheniLie) Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its...
  July 13th, 2025 05:09
• None Left (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Poem in commentary worked well in this case. Nicely spoken
  July 13th, 2025 05:06
• Imperfect Heaven (Parsa) A prayer and poem spoken for one desired. Nicely written
  July 13th, 2025 05:03
• It\'s Happening Again (Writteninthestars) A dark write of death and what it has to offer as opposed to life. Nicely...
  July 13th, 2025 05:01
• The storm (NafisaSB) Well written it took me by storm. I have been in such storms and it took...
  July 13th, 2025 04:57
• The old man waits (Maplespal) I love this poem that is so soothing in its rhythmic rhyme and seems to...
  July 13th, 2025 04:53
• I\'ll always be looking (Brynlee) Lost childhood or youth to me but there are other possible choices as...
  July 13th, 2025 04:51
• HURT! (2.0) (Jenifer.N.anisha) A truism in short poetic rhyme so well said. Loved it
  July 13th, 2025 04:47
• My Closest Friend (Vanna) I too find the night my best friend, comforting and nondemanding. It...
  July 13th, 2025 04:46
• Fusion (Fränz Müller) This one scrambled my brain trying to unravel it. A fun read
  July 13th, 2025 04:44
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) A beautiful poem that unfolds as a cat does in warmth and comfort...
  July 13th, 2025 04:42
• Wise Man Say (20). (Poetic Licence) Another fun read to pick up my Sunday. I couldn\'t help but answer the...
  July 13th, 2025 04:34
• Don\'t Say That Word! (Goldfinch60) That is one that raises the hairs on the back of the neck. Well written...
  July 13th, 2025 04:28
• The Groove of Things (Dyslexic.gun) Yes there is that question of what to do days with long nights. I would...
  July 12th, 2025 20:43
• The Pig (Emery Walker) Strange it reads like a Freudian dream. It does maintain attention and I...
  July 12th, 2025 20:41
• Knowing, loving and feeling (Shadowbones) A short that might be called a quickie. Well written
  July 12th, 2025 20:38
• To Poetry (Samuel Maximilian) A muse can be seductive and a tease but not deliver as promised. The rape...
  July 12th, 2025 20:36
• Not Weaving but Drowning (Kevin Hulme) A clever play on words that I love. A fun read.
  July 12th, 2025 20:33
• Shining star (Travis Bower) A fun read and most interesting thought. I have son\'s too and was...
  July 12th, 2025 20:32
• Cursed to love you (Poetry.els) Now that is a obverse look at love. Inside out, upside down and backwards....
  July 12th, 2025 20:30
• Alexa echo rocks ages of generations! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Another look at modern technology with accompanying social, capital hura a...
  July 12th, 2025 20:27
• Oracle (Doggerel Dave) Yes Dave it is hard to tell who is real and who is not, what poem is...
  July 12th, 2025 20:21
• A friend (Amethyste) We all need affiliation and here it is expressed. A lovely write that...
  July 12th, 2025 15:57
• Red in the morning. (Keeter C) A beautiful image turned metaphor in this poem. The storms of...
  July 12th, 2025 15:55
• I still (Sree) Memory bonds us. Chained to past love there is a haunting feeling of loss....
  July 12th, 2025 15:06
• You Deceived Me Old Ukrainian Song Ukrainian Song (Ksey_Gan) A fu song that talks of promises unkept. Nicely written
  July 12th, 2025 13:45
• Time, Thought, and Her In-Between ❤️ (Petrichor of Love) Love of the past haunts the present. A wonderful write
  July 12th, 2025 13:43
• Taken By the Clouds (Writteninthestars) Such fear and dread of death expressed in this poem. A dream but the...
  July 12th, 2025 13:37
• Nothing Between Us (GeekSusie) Well written, each line fitts like lovers bodies. Well constructed and...
  July 12th, 2025 13:33
• Aether Defends (Kurt Philip Behm) So true Kurt a word spoken can not be taken back. An excuse can be made...
  July 12th, 2025 13:30
• I want out (EvenwheniLie) Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
  July 12th, 2025 11:15
• Stand your crawl (Maplespal) A plea and a tribute at the same time. A sense of want and desire. Well...
  July 12th, 2025 09:56
• .... (Uditgoswami22) Open to interpretation it leaves the mind wondering.
  July 12th, 2025 09:53
• Don\'t Give Me THAT Look (Cheeky Missy) Food and celebration that becomes the 4th. Well done Chic
  July 12th, 2025 09:52
• The First Flame (Leny) For the metaphor and expansion on it that all makes sense a fave. Very...
  July 12th, 2025 08:38
• Untitled (RSM0812) So sorry to hear that my condolences to you. A beautiful write it is.
  July 12th, 2025 08:36
• The Queen of Dunes (Tony Grannell) Another delightful poem this time of love in an exotic setting. The...
  July 12th, 2025 08:34
• The Catch (Tristan Robert Lange) Catching the unintended is most complicated and extracting them from the...
  July 12th, 2025 08:23
• Red kiss (Lorenz) Absinth liquor of hallucination seems present in this poem. Nicely written...
  July 12th, 2025 06:32
• Love yourself, (Friendship) A fave for the message set in good rhyme and meter it reveals a secret to...
  July 12th, 2025 06:28
• Not sure (Tony36) I would bet that everyone has been there at one time or another. It is not...
  July 12th, 2025 06:23
• crossings (Arqios) A spiritual journey, a metaphor with wings of life alighting in various...
  July 12th, 2025 06:21
• cancer evil (Jim56) Wow! Jim this time something that is dark and not so bright. I have gotten...
  July 12th, 2025 05:05
• God is Not a Cosmic Bellboy (Gray0328) Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that...
  July 12th, 2025 05:03
• LEST WORDS CURSE (Nephilim56) This poem has a circular feel to it as it progresses from birth to death...
  July 12th, 2025 04:58
• If He Was Mine (TheVlama) We all need recognition and in a relationship we need some feeling of...
  July 12th, 2025 04:53
• Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever use of words in this poem the metaphor of pulling a tooth and being...
  July 12th, 2025 04:50
• This world (Natalie Heisey) A voice calling for peace in a violent and hateful world. I hear you and...
  July 12th, 2025 04:47
• What If (Palesa Motshwene) A little Descarte in this poem Ergo Cognito Sum I think therefore I am....
  July 12th, 2025 04:44
• Roasted Turkey. (Poetic Licence) I got images with this one. Everyone looks for the fattest turkey to...
  July 12th, 2025 04:41
• I never knew.... (Orchidee) I\'m not working those numbers to verify such things. All I can say is...
  July 12th, 2025 04:37
• AnalysisByDeepAI-Volume 17 -EntitledMynas--20Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan) This one again seems familiar. I have great admiration for crows that are...
  July 12th, 2025 04:32
• Father Time Is Undefeated. (Goldfinch60) There is a nice weaving of time markers in this poem. (birth, morning,...
  July 12th, 2025 04:30
• That\'s Okay but I\'m Not Okay (Writteninthestars) A poem of loss and pain. Well written it carries a sad tone.
  July 12th, 2025 04:16
• Single dad (Adiii) The strength of being a father and its joy paired with the down side of...
  July 12th, 2025 04:13
• Am I disillusioned? (Brynlee) This poem leaves the reason for change ambiguous but the first thing that...
  July 12th, 2025 04:09
• HURT ! (Jenifer.N.anisha) A great message in a short poem. Well written
  July 12th, 2025 04:02
• Again letting go (Shadowbones) A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss...
  July 11th, 2025 20:31
• for sister kathrine (Jon Nakapalau) Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying...
  July 11th, 2025 20:29
• Her Blossom Falls (Gaias Soothing Haven) Very good metaphor for a love poem. Great images and well written.
  July 11th, 2025 18:49
• Criminalizing Masculinity (JBentley) We have a difficult time accepting nature and what it means about...
  July 11th, 2025 16:56
• A tree and birds (Caring dove) Freedom is not total but restricted by nature and our capabilities. A...
  July 11th, 2025 16:53
• When the walls 🧱 come tumbling down!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Unique format and had my brain bouncing from thought to thought. A fun
  July 11th, 2025 16:50
• I was always here, but now I\'m gone today! (Friendship) The fear of every poet being erased from pages, sites, memory. I have read...
  July 11th, 2025 16:46
• Clocks (Gewar) Very nice the issue of time and love intertwined and indistinguishable....
  July 11th, 2025 13:30
• Last Sunday by Z. Friedwald (Ksey_Gan) A sad poem of loss and parting. Most poetic
  July 11th, 2025 12:46
• Lingering Love (RSM0812) Sonnet with rhyme and and message not necessarily of love.
  July 11th, 2025 12:17
• When Augustus Fell for Cleopatra⚔️ (Petrichor of Love) Love stories contained in this poem that speaks of a historic love. Nicely...
  July 11th, 2025 12:15
• the hunger (Gray0328) A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor...
  July 11th, 2025 09:55