Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Puzzle Piece (DLewis88)
A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature....
July 15th, 2025 19:30 - what the bloodshed forgave (Yael Olalde-Garcia)
To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely
July 15th, 2025 19:24 - After the war (Leny)
A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely
July 15th, 2025 18:15 - trust ! (Friendship)
The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate...
July 15th, 2025 18:13 - butterflies in his chest (NEPIEGE)
A poem of misconceptions and insecurity. Well done
July 15th, 2025 18:08 - Dogs of Instanbul (Bella Mae Marshall)
Beautiful rhyme accompanies the lines of this poem where meter runs in in...
July 15th, 2025 16:53 - What do You Think of when you Think about Death? (M.E.M.)
This poems explores the change from life to death. The poem expands on the...
July 15th, 2025 16:48 - As Lonely As Freedom (A Boy With Roses)
It is the last line of this poem that drives the nail home. The question...
July 15th, 2025 16:16 - Beyond these walls (Betty Miller)
Sad and tragic events of abuse and abandonment can contribute to...
July 15th, 2025 16:13 - Butterfly (Amethyste)
A metaphor that speaks to love fliers
July 15th, 2025 13:57 - The Reality - of Learning Disability. (Jan bach)
A poem that takes on the conventional approach to abuse and neglect with a...
July 15th, 2025 13:10 - Stars inside my Eyes (Framed Mirror)
Poetic is the word for this poem a fave.
July 15th, 2025 12:58 - Bleed Within, Not Around (Eira Solen)
A great message in this poem introducing the counter culture idea of...
July 15th, 2025 12:52 - Woman Hits by Andrey Voznesensky (Ksey_Gan)
A most interesting poem that I took seriously to begin with. It evolved...
July 15th, 2025 12:47 - Locked Away (Kurt Philip Behm)
A great write that any Professor would appreciate. Nice Kurt
July 15th, 2025 12:34 - Raven on the Road (Teddy.15)
Visual items from the past can bring so many memories good and bad....
July 15th, 2025 10:55 - Inked Prayers (Gray0328)
Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A...
July 15th, 2025 10:52 - I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell)
Been there, done that. A read that made me think of all those things I can...
July 15th, 2025 10:29 - A FLAME YOU TRIED TO DIM (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
A poem of asking for recognition and equality. Nicely done
July 15th, 2025 10:11 - What I know (Juwaireeyah)
To give oneself to another is a dangerous thing. a write of courage and...
July 15th, 2025 10:06 - Meat (Aman 12)
Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned...
July 15th, 2025 09:45 - The human sanatorium (Vasile Serban)
A beautiful poem and the last stanza particularly caught my heart. A fave
July 15th, 2025 09:41 - Shine (Damaso)
Cryptic is the word that comes to mind. Metaphor falls out of these lines....
July 15th, 2025 09:38 - A thought: Of my mom (Maplespal)
Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
July 15th, 2025 09:34 - 15/07/2025 (Starlight)
Beautiful! A fave
July 15th, 2025 08:50 - Color Blind? (Tristan Robert Lange)
One hundred percent behind you and this poem and its meaning. This poem...
July 15th, 2025 08:41 - Things That Don\'t - But Do and Is. (Cirawrites01)
Brilliant! Amazing! A poetic touching of a nerve to the soul. This poem is...
July 15th, 2025 08:36 - Some only see the outside (Tony36)
Deep wisdom in this short poem. Loved it and its message gets a fave from...
July 15th, 2025 07:38 - AnalysisByDeepSeek AI-Volume 1-WaterSecurityMauritius-19Feb2025 (Soman Ragavan)
When in want it is hard to see others waste what we need. A good review of...
July 15th, 2025 07:37 - The Tigress and the Eclipse (RSM0812)
The first stanza although cryptic is my favorite it sets the ground for...
July 15th, 2025 07:34 - THE LEFT PATH (Saswati das)
Moment to moment is the feel that I get from this poem. A strong message
July 15th, 2025 07:10 - Morning Dew (Priya Tomar)
Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very...
July 15th, 2025 06:24 - a place in my dreams (Jim56)
A fun read Jim we all have a place of fantasy where we retreat from time...
July 15th, 2025 06:18 - an orchard’s lament (Arqios)
Hauntingly beautiful to say more would be to ruin it.
July 15th, 2025 05:14 - (Re)lapse (DontSleepOnTheBoy)
Vices are those things that we have difficulty escaping and that are...
July 15th, 2025 05:12 - Help Me Find Myself (Kiprotich Langat)
A poem to oneself to buck up and do what is needed despite it all. Nicely...
July 15th, 2025 05:09 - 10:10 (Kheza)
Pain of loss is evident in this poem that speaks out honestly to another...
July 15th, 2025 05:05 - I FORGOT TO HATE (Nephilim56)
I truly love this poem. It is brilliant! It uses very short lines in a...
July 15th, 2025 05:03 - Nothing Will Ever Change (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Powerful stuff, explosive material. Pent up anger at a system that does...
July 15th, 2025 04:54 - CHOKE ! (Chris Duffy)
A poem that speaks venom from being stepped on. Clearly worded it speaks...
July 15th, 2025 04:51 - Alien Visitations (Mutley Ravishes)
Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
July 15th, 2025 04:46 - Love Can Be Rotten (Emery Walker)
Sadly relatable to many this cycle speaks to communication problems,...
July 15th, 2025 04:45 - If you say (Juwaireeyah)
Actions speak louder than words. This poem a plea for action. Nicely said
July 15th, 2025 04:39 - His Soul (Poetess.)
A strong message of commitment and loyalty. Nicely said in so few words.
July 15th, 2025 04:36 - Time Doesn’t Heal (Vanna)
A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant...
July 15th, 2025 04:35 - Second Comings (Fränz Müller)
I hear the anger in this poem it comes through like a draft under a door....
July 15th, 2025 04:31 - Standing Alone. (Poetic Licence)
Clever Tobani and with good meaning as well. Here the use of rhyme lures...
July 15th, 2025 04:27 - The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz)
Very well worked this poem uses great internal rhyming to reinforce its...
July 15th, 2025 04:22 - Nothing.... (Orchidee)
Orchi I took all those to be swear words and wondered why this was not...
July 15th, 2025 04:09 - Being Happy. (Goldfinch60)
Great wisdom here Andy and the key to happiness for rich or poor....
July 15th, 2025 04:07 - Tired (Mik this is mik)
So short yet so poetic and well done loved it and a fave
July 14th, 2025 18:41 - The Love Of The Devil (Sad girl)
Clever and reality made from a metaphor. Here everything is in reverse....
July 14th, 2025 18:10 - My last line (Last Shadow)
A very nice write of the need for another. Well done
July 14th, 2025 16:56 - There stood God (Amethyste)
Well said and nicely written.
July 14th, 2025 15:52 - Put on your happy face (Georgia Watson)
Being fragile in one aspect does not mean one has to be fragile in all. A...
July 14th, 2025 14:50 - Colors (Baker)
A poem of showing one\'s true colors and having the confidence to do so....
July 14th, 2025 14:47 - Clipped Wings (Violet_Writes)
Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:45 - Unicorn (Arial)
A poetic plea for one more visit that is longing in its asking. Nicely...
July 14th, 2025 14:43 - Broken beyond repair. (Debbie)
A sad poem of loss and injury of pain that continues. Well written
July 14th, 2025 14:40 - Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy)
Cats never gave me much comfort when ill but the dog was quite empathetic....
July 14th, 2025 14:37 - demonic pleasure (Devender Kumar)
Dark and sad but so because it is often true. Short and to the point
July 14th, 2025 12:27 - LYRICA (Magzzbaby)
Sad and mournful yet wistful and haunting a poem of past love. Lovely
July 14th, 2025 11:17 - Based on Anton Chekhov\'s The House with the Mezzanine (Ksey_Gan)
The mystery of loss and the empty feeling of dread as to what has...
July 14th, 2025 11:14 - Akasha (Ellen Marsell)
Our grasp on time so small we have no view. We look at a molecule in the...
July 14th, 2025 11:12 - My Dearest—Once My Homeland💔 (Petrichor of Love)
How many displaced from where they called home by war, famine, boarder...
July 14th, 2025 11:08 - Fortunate Isles (Gray0328)
Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
July 14th, 2025 10:05 - Bound Beyond Time (Jainesh.D)
Lovely! Brilliantly worded. It captures the moment.
July 14th, 2025 10:03 - The Other Woman (Kurt Philip Behm)
This to me Kurt represents our journey on this earth. We all trying to...
July 14th, 2025 10:00 - Over What Hill? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Peter Pan a favorite as a child I guess it was because he demonstrated a...
July 14th, 2025 09:57 - AnalysisByBlackboxAI-Volume 19--Poem-GiorgiaMeloni-30Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Another most complete analysis of this poem. Very nice
July 14th, 2025 08:41 - Can we talk (Tony36)
In this hurried world where no one really cares a valid write and one that...
July 14th, 2025 08:39 - Both, and Neither (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Beautiful a metaphor for us as humans pawns in nature\'s game of chess. So...
July 14th, 2025 08:35 - I Met a Man Whose Eyes Were Like the Sea (Samuel Maximilian)
I am experiencing deja vu with this poem. It feels as if I had read it...
July 14th, 2025 08:31 - Waiting in Love (RSM0812)
A love poem without doubt. It speaks in poetic terms of a deep love....
July 14th, 2025 08:07 - Words of Encouragement! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A lovely belief that gives strength to the believer. Well written with...
July 14th, 2025 08:05 - Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell)
Once again you have done it a poem for all of us. Deeply personal it...
July 14th, 2025 07:08 - “flight from self” (Arqios)
I suppose that this too may be taken many ways but my read is in this...
July 14th, 2025 05:29 - sun fun (Jim56)
A joyous poem of summer and those things associated with it. Nicely done...
July 14th, 2025 05:24 - One thought stirs (Maplespal)
Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and...
July 14th, 2025 05:23 - The Age of Lies (ElizabethMoroz)
You can\'t believe what you see, hear, smell, taste, or touch a read of...
July 14th, 2025 05:09 - NOT YOUR CINDERELLA (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
Here here. As a male I believe in women and men, each with equal rights...
July 14th, 2025 05:06 - Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Each alternative worse than the last. Natural food so much better, not to...
July 14th, 2025 04:59 - Let Me Live in my World (Priya Tomar)
A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me...
July 14th, 2025 04:55 - SNIPER (Nephilim56)
I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a...
July 14th, 2025 04:53 - Handing Over the Reins (Mutley Ravishes)
Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well...
July 14th, 2025 04:49 - Long gone miners (Jeremy Leach)
Although the poem on the surface is sufficiently well constructed it...
July 14th, 2025 04:48 - Threads (Leny)
This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does...
July 14th, 2025 04:43 - Papa Francesco, addio a te! (Azeezah Khadeejah AbdulAwal)
Quite the homage to a great man done so well. I was quite surprised how...
July 14th, 2025 04:39 - The Last Slice (Aman 12)
This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to...
July 14th, 2025 04:33 - Once More With Feeling… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be...
July 14th, 2025 04:29 - Favourites? (Orchidee)
Favorite them? Don\'t even like them. Sometimes wonder if I even read...
July 14th, 2025 04:23 - Happy Birthday Dave. (Goldfinch60)
A nice remembrance paired with one of my favorite Monty Python songs. Well...
July 14th, 2025 04:18 - you asked for beauty and i rage (Yael Olalde-Garcia)
Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of...
July 14th, 2025 04:08 - FIGHTING AN INVISIBLE BATTLE- INTERSTITAL CYSTITIS (PassionatePoetess)
A diagnosis of any type does not define the person. A most personal write....
July 13th, 2025 19:30 - MAYBE IF MY VOICE A LITTLE BIT LOUDER, THEY\'LL HEAR ME (Fikrioshin)
Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense...
July 13th, 2025 19:25 - Where The Birches Meet (Gaias Soothing Haven)
Nature sensuous, sexual, errotic it breaths and lives. A creative and...
July 13th, 2025 16:59 - Prick the Blood Feather (Fränz Müller)
Quite descriptive and vivid in imagery it tells its story. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 16:35 - Cash strapped despondent citizen banker (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Smiles indeed as I read. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 16:34 - Drowning (Mminarik00)
A senryu that makes sense and is quite clever and a fave
July 13th, 2025 16:33 - Flailing neurotransmitters (Zephyrschild)
That is quite the contest and winner takes all? A verse of rhyme that fits...
July 13th, 2025 16:32
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