Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Caustic Double-Acrostic (Muse of Calliope)
Clever and creative double acrostics are not easy to pull off they are...
April 29th, 2025 09:51 - On the Windy Trail (Rrodriguez)
Your poems of nature enthrall me since I love nature and write about it...
April 29th, 2025 09:49 - It\'s cold (HollyGolightly)
The cold here sounds literal but could be metaphorical as well. A lovely...
April 29th, 2025 09:12 - Hope (Tony36)
Here exists the dichotomy of despair and hope of blackness and light. A...
April 29th, 2025 09:10 - Dead Rose (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
I particularly like the second stanza worded so well in feelings that so...
April 29th, 2025 09:08 - Cross-Examination (Tristan Robert Lange)
Always looking at the form of your poems Tristan I was first taken by the...
April 29th, 2025 09:05 - Acacia (Libellule)
A picture painted in words and nicely done
April 29th, 2025 08:54 - Starlit Desires (Salvia.S)
So short but a message clear, I\'m sure they will come true you needn\'t...
April 29th, 2025 07:42 - The Protector (Mr.Toor)
Cute and sweet a poem of the dichotomy of the mind and heart. Lovely
April 29th, 2025 07:12 - Today is All We Have (GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ)
A wonderful message. Carpe diem
April 29th, 2025 07:10 - Mushy Sunshine (KTay)
Mushroom hallucinations merge with dreams to take one to places never gone...
April 29th, 2025 06:27 - Enough\'s Enough (Tony Grannell)
As all great stories and poems are set an image a tale set in such normal...
April 29th, 2025 06:24 - true friend (Jim56)
Loyalty and fidelity the mark of a true friend and the dog\'s strongest...
April 29th, 2025 06:22 - Prayer & Last Message (Maplespal)
The first brings images of organized religion and its motivation power and...
April 29th, 2025 06:20 - Sublime uncreature (Lorenz)
It is in contradiction that wisdom is found, the birth of nature on a...
April 29th, 2025 06:16 - Differ (β¦ π₯ππΆπ©π’π¦π€π₯ β¦)
I hear not only desperation and need in this poem but a sense of being...
April 29th, 2025 05:08 - Escape (Victor Bolshov)
The mind roams even it the body can not. A most fun read
April 29th, 2025 05:04 - The Death Of Treat Williams (Randyjohnson71)
A very nice tribute dedicated to an artist passed. Lovely
April 29th, 2025 05:02 - A Gift (RSM0812)
When in love mementos can be most important as continual reminders of the...
April 29th, 2025 05:00 - FRAGILE HANDS (Nephilim56)
nicely written this poem beats with love\'s heart through the night. Well...
April 29th, 2025 04:57 - The Evening rain (Reynaldo Casison)
Love is a paradox, an enigma, a conundrum a most lovely poem that comes in...
April 29th, 2025 04:54 - O Frenzied Light! (Arqios)
So classic in form the opposites reconciled as one merges into the next. I...
April 29th, 2025 04:51 - Forever Changed+ (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Some deep philosophical thoughts in this poem and so nicely worded with...
April 29th, 2025 04:42 - Sharlene\'s Weekend (David Wakeling)
I always wondered if there was a correlation between narcissism and being...
April 29th, 2025 04:39 - Exotic Chanteuse (Reynaldo Casison)
Words whose fragrance lasts beyond the reading and lingers as one\'s mind...
April 29th, 2025 04:27 - Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd? (Teddy.15)
Melodrama is the cornerstone of romance and what exaggeration better than...
April 29th, 2025 04:23 - Share Love With All. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy. Kindness shared is a gift that costs nothing to give but can...
April 29th, 2025 04:14 - Tangled Memories (MDStone)
Memories as sweet as the berries. A good write
April 28th, 2025 20:56 - Ropes, Possessive Women, Covid Shots & Sand (Eugene S.)
Most interesting and engaging it reads well and creates curiosity. Nicely...
April 28th, 2025 20:54 - You Can\'t Believe (Hanible)
Marriage can be seen as such. Colorfully worded. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 20:52 - Rhythms of the Night (Rrodriguez)
The night definitely has its rhythms and its symphony it is my favorite...
April 28th, 2025 18:08 - Oppression Upon Its Own Reflection (Jaiden_noviqon)
An interesting concept and a fun read
April 28th, 2025 17:34 - Come, What\'s Thirty, Forty Years Ago? (Cheeky Missy)
Ah Chic you put me off with the tax issue lol. Popeye and the squirl...
April 28th, 2025 16:07 - The Siege of Seven Days (Brian Otucho)
A great retelling of a biblical tale. Well done.
April 28th, 2025 12:16 - For The First Time (Devender Kumar)
First times are different that those that follow. An evolution from bad to...
April 28th, 2025 12:14 - Fate At Its Limit (Kurt Philip Behm)
Smooth reading. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 12:12 - miss and wish (Poetry.els)
Memories, wishes and hopes characterize this poem. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 12:10 - My girl (Hzugman)
Not much for overly sweetened things this one seems special and the...
April 28th, 2025 10:08 - Mirrors (Kaz)
This proves that length is not always the key to beauty and that the...
April 28th, 2025 10:07 - Daily route (Victor Bolshov)
Indeed I get it it is all relative. Yet the beginning of this poem set my...
April 28th, 2025 10:05 - Song of Spirits (Ksey_Gan)
Wow! what words attuned to nature and its workings. Lovely verse and so...
April 28th, 2025 09:59 - I Couldn\'t Do It (Damaso)
A poem of power from words said. Nicely done.
April 28th, 2025 09:57 - Always The Artist, Never The Muse (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
A most wonderful poem from the heart of a poet. Many yearn for fame,...
April 28th, 2025 09:55 - Windsbach (Isa kemmy)
So Windsbach is a city. Aurach I could not find but assume to be a river....
April 28th, 2025 09:49 - born (Jim56)
A very nice thought contained in these words that flows from birth to life...
April 28th, 2025 09:40 - Cherry Trees (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry I love the transition in the lines of this poem from cold and grey...
April 28th, 2025 09:39 - Let\'s share (Lorenz)
A fave for so many great lines and metaphors in this poem. It keeps its...
April 28th, 2025 09:37 - Incognito (Libellule)
Ah the disguise of a poet. Hidden behind the mask of verse one\'s soul to...
April 28th, 2025 09:33 - Fatal & Cold (Mya)
A deeper poem and metaphor set in verse that is somehow sophisticated in a...
April 28th, 2025 09:27 - Information Hoarders (Demar Desu)
Trivia hoarders like squirls in the trees burring bits and pieces that...
April 28th, 2025 09:22 - i wish i always knew (Tristan Robert Lange)
Knowing what one is and has to offer is key to valuing who you are. A...
April 28th, 2025 09:20 - Heart\'s Untold Tales (Salvia.S)
The mysteries of the heart are deep and profound and only time will tell...
April 28th, 2025 09:18 - Twinkled (Maplespal)
A rhyme with a message that comes through. Is it for fame or is it for the...
April 28th, 2025 05:26 - The Silent Hillock ([email protected])
So beautifully worded this poem speaks. A fave
April 28th, 2025 05:24 - Hinton, Pt. II (β¦ π₯ππΆπ©π’π¦π€π₯ β¦)
Reminiscing, memories of what was and what wasn\'t wishes and desires...
April 28th, 2025 05:22 - wedding bells... (Dimpy)
Great expectations are revealed here and it seems that such hopes are...
April 28th, 2025 05:18 - The Island Place (Tkatie118)
A fun read that in the guise of advise gives a smile to the face. Very
April 28th, 2025 05:14 - Raven (Mourgana of the Fey)
So many symbols in this poem the raven of wisdom straight from Odin\'s...
April 28th, 2025 05:08 - MOONLIGHT (Nephilim56)
I take this to be a metaphor and a mirror. The moon the face the face the...
April 28th, 2025 04:59 - Dreams Can Not Come True (Ajon4wheels)
Hate from anger, anger from pain, pain from defeated expectations. Nicely...
April 28th, 2025 04:56 - Whale Fall (Gray0328)
A most vivid description of demise and decay a melodious metaphor so...
April 28th, 2025 04:55 - Who am I (Domilla)
We are many things to many people actors that play many roles. A lovely...
April 28th, 2025 04:50 - I lose (Christophe Amarsingh)
Repeating cycles of life in this poem. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 04:46 - Thoughts at a Restless Bar (Railasunshine)
A poem of conscience speaking. Nicely written a poem of shame.
April 28th, 2025 04:45 - Confessions of a Bodybuilder (Mutley Ravishes)
Clever it seems the moto of Atlas. Nicely written Mutley
April 28th, 2025 04:41 - Psalm 2 (David Wakeling)
Well rhymed and with great flow this piece talks to me of faith and belief...
April 28th, 2025 04:40 - roaring tides (Arqios)
Not only entertained with a most magnificent piece of literary work but I...
April 28th, 2025 04:37 - Goodbye Little Friend (Orchidee)
Now that\'s a revelation I thought that they were made of Fido material....
April 28th, 2025 04:29 - AI (RSM0812)
Now here is a novel idea. I love the idea of man and AI as actors on a...
April 28th, 2025 04:18 - I Choose Love. (Goldfinch60)
A poem that would fit almost any gathering except for Wall Street. A...
April 28th, 2025 04:06 - Growth (NafisaSB)
Observation and aspirations fill this poem with words of wisdom. Very...
April 28th, 2025 04:02 - All the Difference (Thomas W Case)
This poem speaks out of shanty town where grit is found. I love the last...
April 28th, 2025 03:53 - An Ode to My Lord (Rrodriguez)
A grateful tribute to God very nicely written
April 27th, 2025 19:47 - Strength (Sunshine777)
The perseverance to keep going is evident here. Very nicely written
April 27th, 2025 18:42 - Butterfly Needle (Hanible)
Sucked dry. This is the feeling that I get. The last step before they fill...
April 27th, 2025 18:38 - Renegotiations (EvenwheniLie)
A lot of discontent shows in this poem. Tiered of being treated as a fool...
April 27th, 2025 17:52 - An unexceptional turning point in our marriage... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Quite the tale too common to be taken lightly and to funny to be taken...
April 27th, 2025 14:33 - Still Waiting (Mr.Toor)
Compassion? The poem evokes feelings of concern and empathy that go beyond...
April 27th, 2025 14:25 - Lemons (Mya)
Sad and painful this poem evokes tears of hurt. Well written the message...
April 27th, 2025 14:21 - How We Are Remembered (GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ)
A beautiful thought that we all should keep in mind. Well written with...
April 27th, 2025 14:20 - Awkward (Amethyste)
So many people try to give advice on things that they have no idea about....
April 27th, 2025 12:34 - Dearly Bought (Kurt Philip Behm)
Buyer beware and now days beware all. A good read with a good message
April 27th, 2025 11:58 - No Beauty Here (Tony Grannell)
A strong picture painted here that evoked the Billie Holliday song Strange...
April 27th, 2025 11:56 - Want love? (Hzugman)
A fun read that has validity to it. Nicely said
April 27th, 2025 11:53 - My magical life (Jenna33308)
All or nothing no modulation. So I gather from the poem that there are...
April 27th, 2025 11:52 - A Story of the Living Dead (Brian Otucho)
Several good lines here. I like the idea of the thread and to where it...
April 27th, 2025 11:47 - Glory (John Prophet)
Ah John this seems a spiritual quest indeed. Nicely written
April 27th, 2025 09:25 - Of Starbucks, Messes, and Songs from Childhood... (Cheeky Missy)
And the days go on with each marked with its own fingerprint. A lovely set...
April 27th, 2025 09:23 - Upon the tides (Kaz)
A beautiful feeling left by this poem
April 27th, 2025 09:18 - This Isn\'t About You (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
A poem of decision and goodbye. Well written
April 27th, 2025 08:28 - A Note: You have (Maplespal)
A most beautiful poem of love. Very nice
April 27th, 2025 08:26 - I Stood In The Rain Today (DesertWords)
A most beautiful image and images cast in marvelous language of a most...
April 27th, 2025 08:24 - Funneled into Nothing (Tristan Robert Lange)
For most poems I ignore the form of the print on the page but for yours I...
April 27th, 2025 08:22 - Faith in Fate (Salvia.S)
A thought well expressed that I hold to be true in its most extreme form....
April 27th, 2025 08:13 - The mummy story (Lorenz)
Do I detect a metaphor here? The last lines and question make me wonder. A...
April 27th, 2025 06:20 - America should annex Canada (Demar Desu)
So much said in so little.
April 27th, 2025 06:17 - Breeze (Jerry Reynolds)
So many interpretations of this metaphor. I love it when the metaphor can...
April 27th, 2025 06:16 - Untitled (RSM0812)
This poem revives buried emotions of what values in childhood instilled...
April 27th, 2025 05:54 - The Thermosphere is Descending (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I have read this several times and with rereading it mellows and grows...
April 27th, 2025 05:10 - The Crumbling Farm (Yumi Gab)
A harsh well painted view of men and women in a traditional role and the...
April 27th, 2025 05:04
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