Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- A choice (Maplespal)
This poem carries for me a picture of someone on a machine to sustain...
May 17th, 2026 06:29 - Faith (Dayena)
A poem of faith and belief well written
May 17th, 2026 06:27 - Page 100 (Lilmoonxx)
What a nice senryu and it would seem the answer is page one
May 17th, 2026 06:27 - how practice pays off… (King)
Although direct and strait forward this poem seems a metaphor as well...
May 17th, 2026 06:26 - late cup (Arqios)
A complex poem of time itself and nature\'s clock measured by sun. The...
May 17th, 2026 06:24 - Love in the Dark (Rodah M)
The comfort of another close by seen as love in the dark. Well written it...
May 17th, 2026 05:13 - country living (Jim56)
Another nature poem Jim that sings its joy in boisterous lines, Well done
May 17th, 2026 05:11 - Psalms 139: 13-16 (Evelynn)
Accepting oneself for who one is comes through in this poem. Nicely
May 17th, 2026 05:09 - Butterflies (Madeline)
Entranced, impassioned, taken all seem to fall within this poem. A cute...
May 17th, 2026 05:08 - The Ferryman\'s Hymn (Raunak Sarkar)
A lovely dark write. (I am not sure if you meant stairs or stars ) nicely...
May 17th, 2026 05:05 - THIS LONELY STREET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A vivid image poetically painted but there may be more in metaphor in this...
May 17th, 2026 05:03 - Against the Grain (Kora)
A most interesting poem where swimming against the current is taken as...
May 17th, 2026 05:01 - The Care Fairies. (David Wakeling)
A poem that seems to feel its tank of being cared for is empty and it soon...
May 17th, 2026 04:58 - The Waves Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Waves hypnotic in their regular repetition seem like the heartbeat within...
May 17th, 2026 04:56 - The Night Above (Marek)
A beautiful poetic portrait of the night sky painted in words. Well done
May 17th, 2026 04:54 - Pink Surprise in a Sealed Box (Matthew R. Callies)
Cute and fun this poem has a child like appeal. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 04:53 - A Letter To Heaven (Anthony Hanible)
A poem of faith in a continued afterlife where loved ones may be seen...
May 17th, 2026 04:51 - Granny (NafisaSB)
This is a joyous piece that I can identify with as a grandfather. If I...
May 17th, 2026 04:48 - Time as Taffy (FallingAwake2)
Time an illusion that is altered in the mind by perception. Nicely written
May 17th, 2026 04:45 - Eroding (Entangled heart)
This is a poetic expression of agony over separation and sadness of loss....
May 17th, 2026 04:43 - Being Human (E.J. Waling)
One word at a time taken on a journey. Well done
May 16th, 2026 19:14 - A heartbeat and a home (Anabasova)
A poetic pledge of love
May 16th, 2026 19:13 - MY LOVEEND\' (Rmjhm.i)
A letter of love nicely written
May 16th, 2026 19:12 - He quotes philosophers at me (Ace Bunting)
A fun read where a cover of a quote is thought to be the original....
May 16th, 2026 19:10 - Red and gold, Leaves unfold (Mark The Phenomenon)
A most autumn like feel with the images of this poem well written
May 16th, 2026 16:33 - My muse (Samuel Potsane)
A lovely set of areas of gratitude for life. Well composed
May 16th, 2026 16:31 - Mama (DeadRose)
A wonderful tribute to mother. Nicely written with great images.
May 16th, 2026 16:28 - Shadowy Faces (Shahla Latifi)
This is a wistful feel to a desperate and dark world. It asks the question...
May 16th, 2026 16:26 - Heavy Heart (Mylastwrites)
Lovely rhyme that sends such a strong message. Well done
May 16th, 2026 16:24 - I Miss You In Every Way (Sneha Sebastian)
Here is the fear of loss already noticed and the desire to return to the...
May 16th, 2026 16:23 - Ain\'t nuthin\' to it (Aa Harvey)
Here is a poem of self reflection and need for space not allowing a...
May 16th, 2026 16:19 - Whispers of the Haunted Heart (Rodah M)
Spooky, dark and haunted this poem does a great job of a murder ballad. It...
May 16th, 2026 16:15 - Please (Kora)
A poem of being timid to the point of fear. It is short and well composed
May 16th, 2026 16:12 - Trapped in one\'s mind. (Friendship)
Here in this poem I am left with the feeling of being trapped in a...
May 16th, 2026 15:19 - A Land Of Monsters (Marek)
A fun read that portrays the feeling of luck of not being there and...
May 16th, 2026 15:15 - Unnatural Nature (Janey_Boo)
A sad story of greed and cold feelings that leave us all isolated. Nicely...
May 16th, 2026 13:42 - Panacea of the Forsaken (Raunak Sarkar)
A half heart better than none at all and more than many possess Nicely...
May 16th, 2026 13:39 - The lady of the lake (Lorenz)
Beautiful words make for a dream like image in this painting of words....
May 16th, 2026 13:36 - Love!! (Prachi Dalvi)
Love and its opposite hate is in all things. A lovely write
May 16th, 2026 13:34 - I Hate It Here (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
A recognition of problems but refusal to admit them to others. A lovely...
May 16th, 2026 13:32 - What the room knows (Allie561)
Emotions portrayed as surrounding objects in this poem of depression. It...
May 16th, 2026 13:29 - Isaac (Syd)
Well written and nicely composed
May 16th, 2026 13:11 - WEARINESS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Well written this poem feels confining and depressing. Well done
May 16th, 2026 12:23 - I found the little me (Cindy)
Our inner child lies buried beneath time and shadows. Well written
May 16th, 2026 12:20 - F. O. R. (Michaelm)
Clever internal rhyme make this verse sparkle
May 16th, 2026 09:11 - lumiere gets lit (Tristan Robert Lange)
Beautiful, short like the flaring of a match but bright it sparkles with...
May 16th, 2026 09:09 - Cough for her (Maplespal)
Although it seems directly personal this poem can well be taken as...
May 16th, 2026 07:17 - Late Harvest in Progress (Neville)
What a lovely story telling set in musty images that seem faded as is the...
May 16th, 2026 07:15 - the perceptions of the people! (King)
Poor self esteem leads to overevaluation and paranoia where the only...
May 16th, 2026 06:09 - Inside Anxiety (Katie B.)
Stuck in circles it is often best to step back rather than get caught in...
May 16th, 2026 06:08 - a small dismissal (Arqios)
We are all children and the world and society grown ups. Beautiful ideas,...
May 16th, 2026 06:06 - dog company (Jim56)
Indeed it is true Jim a faithful animal they are. Good write
May 16th, 2026 05:59 - Untitled (RSM0812)
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34 - सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है (Waiting for Silence)
More wisdom in a poem. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:33 - Nose Hairs (Gray0328)
Been there Gray and sincerity does sting. A lovely write about more than...
May 16th, 2026 04:31 - I Scream But Nothing Comes Out (Aaron Roberson)
This seems the torment of the damned where a lack of identity and values...
May 16th, 2026 04:29 - Ides of March (Madeline)
A poem of pulling oneself up by one\'s own bootstraps so to speak. Well...
May 16th, 2026 04:25 - Are we alien? (Ethan Mikel St.Amour)
Our shrines of honor but empty words drunk on greed we are imprisoned by...
May 16th, 2026 04:23 - The Fire of Akhekh (Matthew R. Callies)
Lovely a poem with a cascading style presenting the mythical creature who...
May 16th, 2026 04:20 - Holy cow ( moon & sea) (Poetic Dan)
Lovely and holding truth as a parent and grandparent I have seen it. Well...
May 16th, 2026 04:17 - I Killed Her With Romance (Anthony Hanible)
A truth that many learn too late. Love can not be purchased, demanded,...
May 16th, 2026 04:13 - PREMONITION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This poem chills to the bone. It is a premonition neglected. Well written...
May 16th, 2026 04:09 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
A confession of joy this poem reads as an expression of gratitude. Well...
May 16th, 2026 04:08 - The Accusation. (David Wakeling)
Violence seems man\'s inheritance. It has been with us from the beginning...
May 16th, 2026 04:06 - Poem--In Another Life--29April2026 (Soman Ragavan)
Good to hear from you again Soman I enjoyed your quotes and nicely written...
May 16th, 2026 04:00 - UNLIVING, I WALK (Isabel Szurlej)
Whether poem of song this write is beautiful and powerful, compelling it...
May 16th, 2026 03:56 - I’d rather be ELSEWHERE (Olivia.)
Well written the love of music with friends. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 18:55 - A Place For Me (Mylastwrites)
A poem of belief in a special place in the afterlife. Well done
May 15th, 2026 18:52 - Written In Ink (Neil Higgins)
This poem drifts through music and dance to the written word. Well done
May 15th, 2026 18:51 - Drowning In The Hourglass (Entangled heart)
Time we all battle with it and live in it. A good write
May 15th, 2026 18:46 - How inopportune (Allie561)
Time is an issue for us all. Well written
May 15th, 2026 18:43 - My Cat and Me (DLewis88)
Have had several cats never a loyal one but love them just the same. A fun...
May 15th, 2026 18:41 - I Am So Close to the Edge, Just Let Me Go (Aaron Roberson)
Are we remembered indeed after we are gone? A poem of questions that need...
May 15th, 2026 13:57 - A moment undefined (Maplespal)
Amidst the chaos of life one searches for peace and hear it is found in a...
May 15th, 2026 13:54 - Night (Cindy)
I too love the night and this poem speaks of its redeeming qualities....
May 15th, 2026 13:52 - Bats (Gray0328)
The balance of nature where one trouble ends a salvation begins a lovely...
May 15th, 2026 13:49 - Cloudless Sky (Tayama)
Here is the rejuvenating joy of a child that revives the old in ways that...
May 15th, 2026 13:47 - Victory Or Death (Kurt Philip Behm)
There is a sense of moving on in the series of poems that is culminated in...
May 15th, 2026 13:44 - NAKED / DESNUDOS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
This ghostly poem of passion is cloaked in sensuality and sexuality that...
May 15th, 2026 13:43 - Terror (Ethan Mikel St.Amour)
A senryu of fear and terror. It is dark and well done
May 15th, 2026 13:39 - When the World Feels Heavy (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Nicely written this poem of support and hope when the times are difficult...
May 15th, 2026 13:38 - Wilderness (Fränz Müller)
Most coincidentally this poem falls on the day I return to my forest home...
May 15th, 2026 13:35 - Love (Kora)
Kora this is a great two sided poem of love and its plusses and negatives....
May 15th, 2026 13:34 - The funeral of poetry (Lorenz)
Lorenz this poem holds true to the paintings of Bosch with its surreal and...
May 15th, 2026 13:31 - While These Words May Not Be Perfect (Neville)
A most tender love poem Neville. Well composed it starts with the dawn and...
May 15th, 2026 13:28 - Widow Makers (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very nicely done Tristan I could tell from the very first it had the same...
May 15th, 2026 13:25 - Tears On A Prayer (Janey_Boo)
A strong statement made here especially in the ending. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 06:46 - The trade with the Kānaka (King)
Feed the people and they will support you. A lovely write
May 15th, 2026 06:45 - Everything has an end (Selvaraj)
Lovely philosophy in this short write so well expressed in so few words a...
May 15th, 2026 06:44 - Cloudy With A Chance Of Tears (Anthony Hanible)
Nicely written this poem recasts the storm in metaphor. Well done Anthony
May 15th, 2026 06:42 - The Demon Poet (The Demon Poet)
A good write with metaphor used to represent the poet and his writing...
May 15th, 2026 06:41 - loves way (Jim56)
Another lovely poem of love Jim
May 15th, 2026 06:39 - BILLY THE MILKMAN (Cully45)
There is good amidst the evil in the world and at times it unites to carry...
May 15th, 2026 06:38 - An Optimistic Overture (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A good read about things as they are and trying to represent them...
May 15th, 2026 06:34 - Poets (Katie B.)
Nicely said Katie. Anyone that exposes themself on paper leaves themselves...
May 15th, 2026 06:33 - Whispey leaf (RSM0812)
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31 - Song to Julie (David Wakeling)
This is a sad poem of a love doomed and a life lost. So nicely worked with...
May 15th, 2026 06:29 - Flap and Twist (Matthew R. Callies)
This poem is a snap shot in time and place set in an image. Well done...
May 15th, 2026 06:27 - The Three Feelings (Rodah M)
A lovely poem matching each feeling created in colors and organizing them...
May 15th, 2026 06:26 - in beatween (Arqios)
Cryptic this feels a continuation from your last poem and it feels that I...
May 15th, 2026 06:24
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