Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Our Fates (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end....
  December 2nd, 2025 04:42
• benoit bouchard (Oh kay) Alliteration takes front seat in this write with B driving and A along for...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:40
• Nikola Tesla supposedly got by on 2 hours of sleep a night (Simple Tendencies) The last line ties the others together in this Alice in wonderland dream...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:38
• AS ANGELS FADE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) It is the integral weaving of good rhyme, unusual vivid images (stone...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:35
• O Stiff One (Anthony Hanible) Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:32
• Margins of Morning Light (Jainesh.D) This poem paints in vivid images sceneries of beauty that lift the soul. A...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:29
• After being scammed... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Software can only go so far in unraveling poetic underwear. A fun poem
  December 2nd, 2025 04:26
• The Light (Shahla Latifi) Here light and dark weave together into a single fabric where black and...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:24
• troubles (PerditaRose) A great haiku or senryu not sure how to classify this one. It has deeper...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:20
• Larceny (Aman 12) I love this poem and I use the word love loosely but mean it completely....
  December 2nd, 2025 04:18
• Voluminous Voice - OT/NT Series 4 (Orchidee) Another well constructed hymn that calls out to the reader as if one...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:14
• Good Things In Life. (Goldfinch60) An empty glass needs to be refilled a good host will make sure of this. A...
  December 2nd, 2025 04:11
• Thief (PerditaRose) I empathize, I have had important things stolen as has my wife some by...
  December 1st, 2025 20:57
• Magikali (Mutley Ravishes) A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but...
  December 1st, 2025 20:52
• JUSTIFY MY RAGE, or A YOUNG MAN DYING ANGRY (David Welch) If I were terminal (and we all are) I would be damn angry too. A thought...
  December 1st, 2025 20:51
• There Is No Dream (Pete the poet) A feeling of age, being worn out and overly ripe. This poem conveys the...
  December 1st, 2025 18:41
• Cuddling (Amethyste) Strongly worded, highly sexual, it goes beyond erotic a hard word of...
  December 1st, 2025 18:39
• calm (Lunarchloedip) A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of...
  December 1st, 2025 18:36
• Enough (Maplespal) A wonderful poem of refusing to give up what one knows. A lovely work...
  December 1st, 2025 18:34
• Between Two Shores (GeekSusie) Two different worlds built on two different values one money and the other...
  December 1st, 2025 15:50
• DESPAIR (Will Kevin) The feeling is such a common one but an overreaction. Caution yes but to...
  December 1st, 2025 15:47
• Heartsick (\"Carter Wills\") Here is a poem that the cynics would adore, a piece of the heart poured on...
  December 1st, 2025 15:45
• Mozart\'s voice (Lorenz) I think that Mozart would love to play with a synthesizer and computer...
  December 1st, 2025 15:41
• The Quiet Art of Becoming (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A poem of beginning a continual practice of shaping and reworking that...
  December 1st, 2025 15:34
• Sparrow that flies /Gorrión que vuela (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Although this can be taken literally, I believe it is a metaphor. A...
  December 1st, 2025 11:17
• Sing Me a Christmas Song (Matthew R. Callies) This poem sounds like one in weight or anticipation of a season that they...
  December 1st, 2025 11:16
• Faulted Lines (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nice Kurt, the poem is, but the shout the proceeds the action. There...
  December 1st, 2025 11:13
• handbook of normalcy (Corian Baek) One is tangled in the net of society and cannot escape it try is one...
  December 1st, 2025 11:12
• 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ 𝒜𝒻𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒲𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) To me going above and beyond words means action and actions speak louder...
  December 1st, 2025 11:09
• Every Moment (Paul Gerard Reed) There is a feeling of heaviness in this poem, the weight that one carries...
  December 1st, 2025 11:07
• Between Light and Dark (Nayak) The roles we are assigned in this world determine how we act. The most...
  December 1st, 2025 11:05
• wooden keys (Tristan Robert Lange) How true it is that the lack of sound can be heard as loud as any other...
  December 1st, 2025 11:03
• Merry Christmas, Mom - Part XIII (Randyjohnson71) A lovely poem of tribute to your mother, and I could feel the sadness in...
  December 1st, 2025 11:01
• tomorrow (Jim56) Most cheerful and upbeat poem Jim loved it
  December 1st, 2025 11:00
• A Brief case (Aman 12) A very powerful poem, that evokes strong images and raises the emotions....
  December 1st, 2025 10:58
• Quieting stress (Friendship) I’ve given the description of stress, illustrated with numerous images...
  December 1st, 2025 10:56
• A (Katie B.) A lovely poem of love expressed in tenderness. Nicely composed and written
  December 1st, 2025 06:21
• Her Eyes (Tkatie118) A poem of love and care through the years. Nicely composed and written
  December 1st, 2025 06:20
• Shadow\'s Echo (Markashley1961) A poem full of symbols and metaphor that leaves one in the shadows of...
  December 1st, 2025 06:18
• Someone I knew (The Velvet) A poem of being overlooked and offering what was desired was not seen....
  December 1st, 2025 06:16
• outstaring a blank wall (Arqios) Cryptic this poem brought to mind the story of Bodhidharma and how he sat...
  December 1st, 2025 06:14
• WINTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of winter and its advent. Well written with great imagery it feels...
  December 1st, 2025 04:47
• Industry Plants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for...
  December 1st, 2025 04:46
• NO NO NO NO NO (Ethan Mikel StAmour) Short but deeper that it appears at first sight this poem requires...
  December 1st, 2025 04:44
• Midnight Morning (RSM0812) Highly symbolic this poem speaks through images and rhyme. Well done
  December 1st, 2025 04:42
• yours (Ja'Quan Shepard) A very unique and most interesting rhyme pattern in this poem that pulls...
  December 1st, 2025 04:40
• Carousel (Hacklec) Wonderful poetic images fill this piece. Very nicely crafted
  December 1st, 2025 04:38
• Fear هراس (Soheil khodaparasti) Deeply philosophical the imagery in this poem is very nicely conceived....
  December 1st, 2025 04:37
• Film Critic (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) How transient is life but a blink. This poem uses great imagery to convey...
  December 1st, 2025 04:32
• Past (Niki) A poem about feeling strong and asserting oneself in a situation. Nicely...
  December 1st, 2025 04:30
• December\'s Eve (Dyslexic.gun) A frightening prospect and experience when allergies take hold. Well done
  December 1st, 2025 04:28
• Who is I am Addicted? (Mutley Ravishes) A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The...
  December 1st, 2025 04:01
• Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee) A most sad and dark story which seems a little too tragic for the...
  December 1st, 2025 03:59
• You\'re My All Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet that speaks of your love for your wife. Very nicely...
  December 1st, 2025 03:55
• I am a Stone (Cedrick) Art already exists within the rock, that around it just needs to be...
  November 30th, 2025 20:13
• All I know (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem sounds like threats on the street. Well written
  November 30th, 2025 20:11
• 7am Sugar Fix (Liza-Jean) A vivid description of the streets upon return from work. Nicely done
  November 30th, 2025 20:09
• Breathe yourself into being (Zephyrschild) A poem to one\'s own body a plea for forgiveness for ill treatment and...
  November 30th, 2025 20:07
• Runnin\' in circles (BoxMyHeart) People like to criticize others for doing the same thing that they are...
  November 30th, 2025 18:41
• Windows (William Hromada) Beautiful words of sensitivity where the eyes are the mirror of the soul
  November 30th, 2025 18:38
• Needed this out (Maplespal) Time passes so quickly a wonderful write
  November 30th, 2025 16:51
• Painting With My Fist (Jjudaharts) Hitting the wall is a phrase made literal in this poem. Nicely said
  November 30th, 2025 14:21
• Don’t Worry Be Happy. (As said by the renowned bard Bobby McFerrin) (Jan bach) Food a comfort stress reliever. How to let loose of stress. Well done
  November 30th, 2025 14:20
• Wyoming Nuptial (Kurt Philip Behm) Most well imaged, been there. A lovely write Kurt
  November 30th, 2025 14:17
• Why am i here? (Xlayla55x) A poem of pain and desperation. Nicely written
  November 30th, 2025 14:16
• The Somatic Economy: An Epic of Flesh and Finance (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) The analogy of the body to the social and economic system is well done....
  November 30th, 2025 12:47
• THE STEADY HAND (David Welch) The foolishness of youth in this poem. Nicely worded it tells of the...
  November 30th, 2025 12:45
• Strictly parasocial (Abirami99) Abandoned is not a good feeling and the loneliness takes one down some...
  November 30th, 2025 12:41
• Impenetrable Sky (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable...
  November 30th, 2025 12:40
• Love making (Amethyste) Ah the difference between love and passion. Often the two go together but...
  November 30th, 2025 12:37
• Möbius Trip (Eugene S.) A mobius has a hole in the middle and I hear this hole in my reading of...
  November 30th, 2025 12:36
• Damn You Title (Anthony Hanible) The title often the hardest to find. We often remain stumped without a...
  November 30th, 2025 12:33
• car ride on a wet day (PerditaRose) A snapshot that transforms into a deep message where it takes on multiple...
  November 30th, 2025 08:59
• A Brand Plucked from the Fire (Tristan Robert Lange) Whether a Christian or not the message of Jesus is what saves, that of...
  November 30th, 2025 08:52
• 𝔼𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕪 𝕄𝕠𝕣𝕟𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤: 𝒯𝒽ℯ ℬℯ𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒯𝒽ℯ 𝒯𝒾𝓂ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Such a wonderful poem of putting emotions into verse. A lovely write
  November 30th, 2025 08:49
• Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) I love this one Thomas I have shared this feeling and have retreated to...
  November 30th, 2025 08:46
• kindness (Jim56) A fantastic moral in this poem Jim. Couldn\'t agree more. A lovely poem...
  November 30th, 2025 08:44
• Off to the races? (2781) The poem starts at the races and ends in rest. Well done a journey well
  November 30th, 2025 08:42
• 1 (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A sad poem of hiding from pain and putting on a mask and living in a...
  November 30th, 2025 07:03
• I Partake in Joy (Katie B.) Substances, knowledge, meditation, spiritual enlightenment, sexual climax,...
  November 30th, 2025 06:58
• Echo پژواک (Soheil khodaparasti) The contradiction from one culture to another is expressed in this poem....
  November 30th, 2025 06:17
• Wynken, Blynken, and Nod (reprise) (Arqios) Wow! A truly masterful poem that in the nostalgia of childhood takes one...
  November 30th, 2025 05:33
• Bus Stop (Gray0328) Ah Gray you have most poetically caught the spirit of past dreams and...
  November 30th, 2025 05:18
• Letting go. (Friendship) So nicely composed in structure, meter and rhyme a poem that speaks to...
  November 30th, 2025 05:12
• Reunited (Paul Bell) It is most sad that we do not consider the effect of our actions on...
  November 30th, 2025 05:07
• Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics) (Teddy.15) Beautiful and touching it is the poetic plea of one who fears and suffers...
  November 30th, 2025 05:03
• The Butterfly (RSM0812) Butterfly real or metaphorical a symbol of romance it floats and shows its...
  November 30th, 2025 04:59
• Piggy bank (Poetaldo) Hope the piggy is a big one that stretches with inflation. Well done...
  November 30th, 2025 04:06
• STARLET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There are some who have had great careers ahead of them that threw it all...
  November 30th, 2025 04:04
• No escape (Ethan Mikel StAmour) Great senryu well done again. You have a knack with these.
  November 30th, 2025 04:00
• Painting in the dark (A.B. Jakobsen) A great story and metaphor in this poem that took my mind to the deaf...
  November 30th, 2025 03:59
• Wind Song (Hacklec) Some very nice allegories used in this piece. Good imagery as well is...
  November 30th, 2025 03:56
• Explicable descent (EvenwheniLie) A fun read that showed multiple rhymes and a running meter. Nicely done.
  November 30th, 2025 03:53
• Twilight on Sunday (NafisaSB) This poem had the meter of the season meaning it felt somehow Christmassy....
  November 30th, 2025 03:48
• Amenable Andrew (Orchidee) A famous story put into a hymn and nicely too. Well done Orchi
  November 30th, 2025 03:44
• Two Singing Sessions. (Goldfinch60) Tis true Andy with song, poetry, one\'s own being appreciated in one...
  November 30th, 2025 03:41
• Santa daddy\'s response 🦌🎁 (Ms.divine) Christmas started early this year it appears
  November 29th, 2025 21:50
• over and over alone (Ja'Quan Shepard) This sounds like a rebellious soul created by society. it speaks with some...
  November 29th, 2025 17:49
• Mind Control (E.J. Waling) Under old names new threats appear on the horizon. A world spiraling...
  November 29th, 2025 17:45
• Chilly day by pool (William Hromada) A dip in a chilly pool can be refreshing or chilling and if cold enough...
  November 29th, 2025 17:43