Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Music To Normality. (Goldfinch60)
Been there done that. And every time it has inspired me and I have never...
September 22nd, 2023 04:48 - Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15)
Interesting thoughts that run through all of our minds from time to time....
September 21st, 2023 11:41 - Yesterday Came (Pop64)
Clever and a good message. Being open to opportunity and making the best...
September 20th, 2023 12:20 - Three Palms (Doggerel Dave)
Can identify with this on Dave. What was a palm covered field between me...
September 20th, 2023 11:25 - Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
Nature is grand. Wonderful words to remind us that there is such...
September 20th, 2023 04:31 - Charlotte’s Fate (Teddy.15)
Although I respect all life and feel it is bad luck to kill anything...
September 19th, 2023 12:24 - Emotions Expressed (Orchidee)
Wrath never helped me just got me into a lot of trouble. Try to think that...
September 19th, 2023 08:55 - Broken Heart Fixed. (Goldfinch60)
A nice write, a tribute to both women and a new hope. Always good to hear...
September 19th, 2023 04:47 - Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15)
I echo that but I\'m not sure, a million what? Laughs, criticisms, irate...
September 18th, 2023 17:13 - Of Mice And Pork Pies (Orchidee)
Rubbish can be good You just read my poem. As to those pork pies why not...
September 18th, 2023 08:13 - The Sea is a Mistress (Pop64)
A wonderful poem litterally but in metaphor even grander. It speaks of...
September 18th, 2023 06:51 - This Life And Next One (Serhat Doğan)
A poem of what we all feel. Doubt, despite pain and misery we wish for...
September 17th, 2023 11:48 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort...
September 17th, 2023 11:45 - Without Words (Teddy.15)
Sad but so commonly true. Well expressed in words of softness and care.
September 17th, 2023 08:09 - Our coping, Substitutions (L. B. Mek)
Beyond anything else this poem carries a very important message. You are...
September 15th, 2023 05:54 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
This could be taken literally or figuratively in the sense of a broken...
September 14th, 2023 17:34 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise...
September 14th, 2023 17:25 - Holy Dreamscape (Parisab)
Thought provoking and enigmatic in its symbols. They may be taken several...
September 14th, 2023 17:21 - My Domestication. (Doggerel Dave)
A great story in verse Dave that I can relate to. Keeping the kitchen...
September 12th, 2023 19:23 - An Ode To The Wedding Band (Teddy.15)
Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.
September 12th, 2023 12:19 - Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O)
The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had...
September 11th, 2023 10:17 - Justice Judgement (Orchidee)
Justice seems to have an old testament read to it. \"An eye for an eye\"...
September 11th, 2023 10:07 - Thank You Dad. (Goldfinch60)
In this I see mirrored my own father who taught me a love for music as...
September 10th, 2023 07:15 - Our Issue In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So many things in life that we know we would be getter off without but...
September 10th, 2023 07:11 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
I sadly agree Bella. What a wonderful world it would be, maybe some day if...
September 9th, 2023 17:10 - Espionage (Doggerel Dave)
This one caught me by surprise Dave. This poetic encoded message leaves me...
September 9th, 2023 08:17 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
A captivating memorial of a dark day that has directly or indirectly...
September 9th, 2023 08:07 - Ode to the Poet (Pop64)
Well written, rhymed and with a great message.
September 8th, 2023 11:19 - SOS (L. B. Mek)
A most wonderful message of brotherhood and unity. The format was most...
September 8th, 2023 07:19 - of Uncertain, vigil’s (L. B. Mek)
Many good lines my friend
\"Time’s, muddying tracks have since...
September 8th, 2023 07:06 - The Touron (Bella Shepard)
Bella I love the term it fits. This reminds me of a trip I made to...
September 7th, 2023 15:39 - Abject terror (Sorenbarrett)
Sorry my friend didn\'t mean to startle just entertain. Thanks so much for...
September 7th, 2023 15:18 - Lacrime (Teddy.15)
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short...
September 7th, 2023 14:59 - Reviving Refreshments (Orchidee)
Such certainty is to be envied and helps all to build a positive attitude...
September 7th, 2023 14:56 - Wise Words (Orchidee)
I loved this one Orchi too bad that there are so many fools that don\'t...
September 6th, 2023 11:16 - Invention of Laughter (Teddy.15)
Liked the picture and the poem, short but to the point. My time machine is...
September 6th, 2023 11:10 - Find Myself (Bella Shepard)
Such a beautiful thought and message in so few words. Becoming comfortable...
September 4th, 2023 12:26 - Gospel Graces (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. I love mysteries but haven\'t the grace to understand...
September 4th, 2023 11:06 - Musical smoke (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks for the read Orchi appreciate the effort to put out the flame but...
September 4th, 2023 11:03 - Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave)
Does it really matter what\'s causing it? I\'m with you, when there is a...
September 4th, 2023 06:14 - Voilà ! here I am, here We be (L. B. Mek)
A vividly real existential depiction. I felt I was looking through that...
September 4th, 2023 06:02 - Empty Sky (Teddy.15)
At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it...
September 3rd, 2023 05:45 - Danger From Deceit (Orchidee)
Treachery or deceit is a terrible thing that steals the peace of this...
September 1st, 2023 06:04 - Seasons Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
So true Gold everything has a beginning and end and there can not be one...
September 1st, 2023 05:59 - A common miracle (L. B. Mek)
The format of this piece is wonderful.
\"dimming shine
...
September 1st, 2023 05:54 - Love (Poetry). (Doggerel Dave)
Roses are red violets are blue... I used to write stuff like that but...
August 31st, 2023 22:39 - Persevering Pleas (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi just a few typos, first line second stanza \"yoru\"...
August 30th, 2023 10:24 - Reflections (Sorenbarrett)
Yea Madam Butterfly for one. Thanks Orchi for the read.
August 28th, 2023 10:31 - Musical Language. (Goldfinch60)
Music changes moods and sometimes lives. It is liquid emotion that when...
August 27th, 2023 05:37 - \"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave)
I\'m glad that this is now in your past. Operations are nothing to look...
August 27th, 2023 05:33 - Trumpet Triumph (Orchidee)
Alleluia ! Trumpets are kind of loud, I always thought that, that is why...
August 26th, 2023 16:46 - Providing Presence (Orchidee)
I like to think of a supreme being that is merciful. It would help a lot...
August 24th, 2023 15:38 - Lost In Love (Bella Shepard)
At least you were not so blind as to not see the sign. Short but such good...
August 24th, 2023 11:14 - We Experience Life (Bella Shepard)
Good advice to a population that is near sighted, closed minded and deaf...
August 24th, 2023 11:12 - The Passenger (Doggerel Dave)
Twice as old as her dad... then that\'s like grand dad, right? We can only...
August 24th, 2023 07:34 - Where it all began (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Dave I appreciate the review and kind words
August 24th, 2023 07:32 - I Have A Dream 2. (Goldfinch60)
If we only put the same effort into this that we do into technology,...
August 24th, 2023 05:08 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
God made me to grow weaker as I grow older as a guarantee of humility....
August 22nd, 2023 09:39 - A parent\'s burden (Sorenbarrett)
If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you...
August 22nd, 2023 09:37 - Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella I have an allergy to some unknown weed that blooms each year it...
August 20th, 2023 14:44 - Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54)
I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and...
August 20th, 2023 12:43 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon...
August 18th, 2023 00:00 - Can We Live Happily. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I have noticed that those who have less tend to give more. A great...
August 17th, 2023 23:33 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
Giving is what is most missed in today\'s world. A beautiful thought and...
August 17th, 2023 23:31 - Fear Silence Not (Neville)
Great lines Neville
\"For it is long
empty like discarded
worm casts\"...
August 17th, 2023 23:21 - “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave)
I think I have worked there before. Whether physical safety or emotional...
August 17th, 2023 23:14 - Binding Pages (Teddy.15)
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be...
August 17th, 2023 23:08 - Sétana (Bigguy)
This poem seems very Celtic in nature hound of Cullan pup of Dael.
Found...
August 17th, 2023 12:29 - Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee)
I liked this one. \"I remember All creatures of our God and king from...
August 17th, 2023 09:44 - Short-Circuit (Teddy.15)
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure...
August 16th, 2023 07:21 - JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O)
You\'ve mentioned most of the biggies. a nice tribute to a very enjoyable...
August 16th, 2023 07:16 - While Out Busy Partying (Neville)
You sure it wasn\'t her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable...
August 16th, 2023 07:10 - Need To Be Right. (Goldfinch60)
So few people can seer that there are more than one side to an issue....
August 16th, 2023 06:59 - On Tour. (Doggerel Dave)
I loved the poem but not sure if I would love a stay there. Sometimes the...
August 15th, 2023 07:41 - Trust And Abide (Orchidee)
\"Which cannot be removed, does stand
Abides e\'er in the land\"
A great...
August 15th, 2023 07:31 - Life (Bella Shepard)
I loved the format to this poem of great advice. To give is to receive,...
August 13th, 2023 18:33 - Goldilocks and the…. (Doggerel Dave)
With her being too hot is this the x rated version? lol
August 11th, 2023 22:49 - RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O)
It takes a tough man to wear pink and an even tougher one to ride such a...
August 11th, 2023 15:02 - Service Settings (Orchidee)
The government has told me for many years that I must give and that...
August 11th, 2023 11:48 - Certainly Not! (Orchidee)
I could use a little levity and it\'s okay I\'m over 18 x 4. Thanks for...
August 10th, 2023 15:54 - Moonbeams (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Orchi
August 10th, 2023 15:50 - Grace Gloryings (Orchidee)
Grace is a great name for a lady but I\'m more set for a lady with the...
August 9th, 2023 05:22 - Worn Out Shoes (Teddy.15)
There is something about dancing that involves the whole body and soul,...
August 8th, 2023 16:18 - Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee)
It helps to recognize all that we have as opposed to look at what we...
August 6th, 2023 10:34 - Observing a Miracle (Teddy.15)
I once had a patient whose wife had died several years before. Yet every...
August 5th, 2023 17:49 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
I liked this one and identify with parts of it
\"The walled garden
of my...
August 3rd, 2023 13:18 - Trust And Abide (Orchidee)
Lead us all toward peace and kindness. The wicked need a little more help....
August 3rd, 2023 07:16 - Aliens (Doggerel Dave)
Rabbits indeed, run at the first sign of trouble, multiply like mad, and...
August 3rd, 2023 07:12 - The Red MG (Bella Shepard)
Change is something unavoidable but so difficult and even more so as we...
August 2nd, 2023 16:26 - Practical Pursuals (Orchidee)
Yes I couldn\'t agree more let us be sister and brother. Great write Orchi
August 2nd, 2023 14:04 - Oh What A Beautiful Morning! (Bella Shepard)
A beautiful feeling indeed. The song of the south was one of my favorites...
July 31st, 2023 16:12 - What If....? (Goldfinch60)
A question I too have asked on many occasions. What if? We will never know...
July 31st, 2023 15:43 - QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O)
I have read Don Quixote and this poem does him justice. like clouds on the...
July 31st, 2023 15:35 - In memory of Sinead O’Connor (L. B. Mek)
A most appropriate song to accompany this poem a eulogy to a most...
July 28th, 2023 05:44 - Just Vertigo (Teddy.15)
Such expressive lines about the emotions inside that one feels when...
July 27th, 2023 06:45 - The New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A proclamation, a resolve, a pledge well stated and such a good one too.
July 26th, 2023 05:19 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
I always liked the comparison of light to knowledge, truth, and...
July 25th, 2023 09:14 - Destination (Teddy.15)
An example of how a few words can say so much and so eloquently
July 25th, 2023 06:05 - Just Because She Is .. (Neville)
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with...
July 25th, 2023 06:03 - Tony Bennett. (Goldfinch60)
I remember them all and they touched my life with their music. A wonderful...
July 24th, 2023 04:59
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