Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• I love you more (Joseph M Marion) A most wonderful love poem that speaks of words versus actions. Nicely...
  March 17th, 2026 12:51
• The Stillness Between Footfalls (Gray0328) Wonderful spiritual lines here Gray. Nicely written it speaks to those...
  March 17th, 2026 12:49
• Sleep Well My Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) What in unpardonable in life is forgivable in death. Technological...
  March 17th, 2026 12:46
• a bad vine (Kingdaniel) A great analogy in this poem. Well done
  March 17th, 2026 12:04
• The black sheep (Sneha Sebastian) This is a sad write with a feeling of self incorporated rejection. There...
  March 17th, 2026 11:01
• My Grandfathers Hydrangeas (Neville) What is a bout grandfathers and hydrangeas? I remember well both of my...
  March 17th, 2026 09:30
• i, beast (The breaktime monologue) A cry of being independent of the world. A poem of acknowledgement of what...
  March 17th, 2026 08:09
• After the Fire, Road Home (Matthew R. Callies) Strong wording, marvelous metaphors fill this poem of a deep dive into...
  March 17th, 2026 07:43
• (un)held (Tristan Robert Lange) Clever wording and meter encase an emotion and thought that one is not...
  March 17th, 2026 07:39
• What is your religious beliefs? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) There is always only depending on from where one is looking a great write...
  March 17th, 2026 07:00
• Microcosmic Miseries (Mutley Ravishes) Real emotion in fantasy transposed a lovely write
  March 17th, 2026 06:59
• \"she orders me about\" (Arqios) A poem full of a male trapped in the paradoxes of society expectations...
  March 17th, 2026 06:28
• The 3 PM Sunlight (Lilmoonxx) Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and...
  March 17th, 2026 05:58
• as we age (Jim56) Indeed tis true Jim we all age and some show it more and others less. Well...
  March 17th, 2026 05:47
• One last chat (Carmen Luca) Sad and melancholic it speaks to a loss too young to suffer. A moving poem
  March 17th, 2026 05:01
• Please Come Back To Me (Ajon4wheels) A poem of longing and desire that goes unmet in this poem of eternal hope.
  March 17th, 2026 04:59
• Not The Only One (Orchidee) On an Irish day I\'ll wish ya top of the morning and lift my glass to you....
  March 17th, 2026 04:55
• Here\'s to St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan) A tribute to heritage on a splendid day commemorative of such. We all are...
  March 17th, 2026 04:49
• twenty two (Claudia) The difference between living life and fantasy is captured in this poem....
  March 17th, 2026 04:25
• Are You Listening (Anthony Hanible) There are several good lines here but it is the last phrase that captured...
  March 17th, 2026 04:23
• Winters feels in a Summer Bliss (Bloomingcereus) This poem brims with nostalgia and longing. It uses metaphor to set the...
  March 17th, 2026 03:44
• How old is creations (EvenwheniLie) Creative and clever wording and the use of metaphor fill this poem...
  March 17th, 2026 03:27
• THE REST IS FATE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of attraction well penned
  March 17th, 2026 03:25
• Not Me (Birdbird) The duality of us all good and bad the kind and cruel. All this reflected...
  March 17th, 2026 03:24
• HINE SIGHT (SaidGodIs) A poetic reflective prayer for forgiveness. Nicely penned
  March 17th, 2026 03:22
• Shadowed Eyes (RSM0812) This reworked version works well and reads smoother. Nicely done
  March 17th, 2026 03:20
• The Withering (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) This poem reflects feelings of insignificance, inferiority and acceptance....
  March 17th, 2026 03:17
• The Screens of Screams (Creator of Mystery) Advanced beyond years in insight and writing skill this poem represents a...
  March 17th, 2026 03:14
• the perfectionists academic procrastination (Haiku 6) (DeadRose) A message sent in these three lines in poetic form
  March 17th, 2026 03:10
• Pink (HerTime) Pink a calming color used in quiet rooms and also a color used in my...
  March 17th, 2026 03:08
• The Tug of War (HolesInMyJeans) Here is reflection cast as a mental struggle where questions are posed and...
  March 17th, 2026 03:06
• half-life, half-light (Freyaaa) There is anxiety and dread in this poem turned lament. Nicely written
  March 17th, 2026 03:03
• Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man (Efrain Cajar) Efrain you are indeed a wordsmith and craftsman. A lovely tribute to St....
  March 17th, 2026 03:01
• Aussie Aussie Aussie (David Wakeling) Amusing and being old myself identifiable. It calls out to the aging...
  March 17th, 2026 02:53
• Sleepy Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A most relaxing and pleasant sonnet that mirrors the content in soothing...
  March 17th, 2026 02:47
• Other Name (Alex PB) A rather harsh view of love. Desire wearing a love mask never works out...
  March 16th, 2026 20:00
• Clock (Amethyste) The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
  March 16th, 2026 19:32
• Hard head soft heart (Walrus) Two qualities soft heart hard head. Well said
  March 16th, 2026 18:59
• 🫨tax payer (Ms.divine) An old school attitude in this poem. Well done
  March 16th, 2026 17:45
• Amour inconnu (Operetta) (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) So glad that you included an English version although I understand Spanish...
  March 16th, 2026 16:25
• Why I’m Me (JBentley) A sad write that emphasizes the plight of the defenseless. Well done
  March 16th, 2026 16:21
• Moral injury/ eroding (Ebtisamya) I hate waiting rooms. I see it as a waste of time where my time is judged...
  March 16th, 2026 16:19
• Viviscal hair growth disappointed customer (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) The vanity of men and women emphasized in this poem well written. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2026 16:18
• Time is coming (Maplespal) You have captured the essence of man and his folly and determination in a...
  March 16th, 2026 16:17
• flat tyre (Lunarchloedip) Making romance out of excitement and excitement out of recklessness it is...
  March 16th, 2026 12:36
• Mother Earth (Claudia) A poem that begins nostalgic and ends in positive hope and affirmation....
  March 16th, 2026 11:50
• Forgiven, don’t forget, rese(n)t (Algendhir) A poem about a siren that when discovered was too late to defend against....
  March 16th, 2026 11:06
• Soundbites 3-16-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt here are three pieces that speak one protected, one detected and the...
  March 16th, 2026 11:04
• Smolder (Thomas W Case) A poem that smells of earth and rain. It is natural and organic. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2026 10:57
• The Housefly\'s Final Flight (Gray0328) Gray coincidence is amazing in that I too in todays poem wrote of burning...
  March 16th, 2026 09:19
• Effectively impacted (EvenwheniLie) Here we have a wonderfully internal rhymed piece that reflects the views...
  March 16th, 2026 08:43
• Scentd Beauty (RSM0812) Lust, desire, seduction, sensuality, sexual and arousing this poem is one...
  March 16th, 2026 08:37
• Washed for the Wilderness (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this carries so much unsaid meaning. We are all baptized by birth...
  March 16th, 2026 08:33
• “For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?” (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) A lovely senryu it speaks volumes in so few words and leaves the reader to...
  March 16th, 2026 08:27
• Storms coming (William Hromada) The storm an allegory of life itself and within it multiple metaphors so...
  March 16th, 2026 08:25
• The hollow heart (Carmen Luca) The mind forgets its age feeling but a child. It does not notice that the...
  March 16th, 2026 08:19
• hotHotHOT (2781) Woh now that sounds good. I have a jar of tequila soaked peppers that I...
  March 16th, 2026 07:33
• The Old Mulberry Tree (Shahla Latifi) This fave is for the setting you depict so reminiscent of where I am in a...
  March 16th, 2026 07:30
• Mumbai- An unmatched emotion (_Doc_) A tribute to a city and country a beautiful picture painted in this poem....
  March 16th, 2026 07:26
• hurtful love (Jim56) You never know what you have until you have lost it and love is not an...
  March 16th, 2026 07:24
• My Vivid Memories (Ajon4wheels) Here pain is reinforced and almost treasured where the past is longed for...
  March 16th, 2026 07:23
• The British Empire (Atticus_made) It sounds as if it came from another era where immigrants were welcome and...
  March 16th, 2026 07:21
• Dismissed (Katie B.) Tension and then the finality of the last line. An abrupt stop as if a...
  March 16th, 2026 07:19
• You Are Not Chaos (Matthew R. Callies) It is the last line that gives closure to this wonderful piece that holds...
  March 16th, 2026 07:16
• of witnesses (Arqios) Highlighted adjectives dance, shift, ripple, whisper, drift, kiss, weave...
  March 16th, 2026 07:14
• The Letter (Lilmoonxx) There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a...
  March 16th, 2026 04:45
• Of Profound Knowledge (Teddy.15) A lovely thought and indeed it is true that at times I have seen my mother...
  March 16th, 2026 04:44
• The Ice Maiden Queen (Cully45) An Amazon warrior, a Valkyrie fierce and frightful painted in this poem....
  March 16th, 2026 04:42
• my perspective on music. (Jjudaharts) A wonderful picture painted here.
  March 16th, 2026 04:11
• The midnight\'s light (Roseeee) Here intent is implied but not stated. Well written it leaves the reader...
  March 16th, 2026 03:20
• A Poet In A Psychological State (Anthony Hanible) A great metaphor electric a storm lightning all forming creation. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2026 03:17
• ECHOES LONELY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I get a sad lonely and despondent feel to this write. It reports a lack of...
  March 16th, 2026 03:16
• The Hours That Haunt Me (Entangled heart) Haunting and dark this poem casts shadows of the past and leaves the...
  March 16th, 2026 03:14
• The SLAYING. (David Wakeling) Brutal and powerful this poem reminds me of the ignorance and stupidity of...
  March 16th, 2026 03:11
• meaningless (MR.apocalypse) There will be no smelling rose after tasting bleach I can tell you. It...
  March 16th, 2026 03:07
• The pain (Bloomingcereus) That is indeed pain to be bound to someone that does not love you. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2026 03:05
• A Light Beyond Saturn (Efrain Cajar) Another marvelous story told in poetic form a fave
  March 16th, 2026 03:03
• Hair Cut. (Goldfinch60) People used to tell me that and I always took it to mean that I must have...
  March 16th, 2026 02:57
• Sometimes I hate myself (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Self forgiveness is so important as is the learning that goes with it....
  March 16th, 2026 02:53
• Nothing (Vanna) A recognition as to the difference between the two not in the sensation...
  March 15th, 2026 20:51
• Affirmations (Freyaaa) Self assurance to the max in this poem nicely done
  March 15th, 2026 20:49
• Seismic Goodbye (Entangled heart) A metaphor of nature and its force for a relationship well worded and...
  March 15th, 2026 20:48
• Sade (Madalynsamantha) A longing and wistful poem of desire well worded
  March 15th, 2026 20:44
• First Competition (HerTime) This may be metaphorical or literal. Life is a sport the same as bull...
  March 15th, 2026 19:41
• Fiddle (Alan R) Fiddles make beautiful music in the right hands. A wonderful write
  March 15th, 2026 17:06
• Trauma (Anonymous Human) This write is raw and heart felt. One must remember one is not responsible...
  March 15th, 2026 17:05
• I Ran To Jesus (ForeverJesus7) A wonderful write relying on faith and belief. Nicely done
  March 15th, 2026 17:01
• Therapeutic (Ms.divine) Poem of proposition. Well done
  March 15th, 2026 14:49
• Childlike wonder (DLewis88) A poem of joy and enjoyment. Lovely
  March 15th, 2026 14:48
• Empty Hands (Toniscales) Tender and innocent a lovely poem
  March 15th, 2026 13:44
• The House Within (Carmen Luca) A metaphor of being and living a wonderful construction of where one...
  March 15th, 2026 13:43
• The healing fire (Melancholia) A powerful statement of a view of oneself. Nicely done
  March 15th, 2026 13:40
• Beware The Ides of March 2026 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A write of historical dates and events and their relation. Well done
  March 15th, 2026 13:39
• A Shrine (Katie B.) A body a shrine that ages sometimes with patina and sometimes with rust. A...
  March 15th, 2026 13:36
• Death (Prachi Dalvi) A nice write about death and noticing its loss. Well done
  March 15th, 2026 13:34
• Little Moments (Akshadha_Joshi1310) Thinking positive there are always choices to make. A lovely write that...
  March 15th, 2026 11:30
• The shadow of the living (Lorenz) The female cast as a curve which is nothing but segments and from which...
  March 15th, 2026 11:27
• The Instant Upon Us (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely my friend and a fave. There is no time but the present and it is...
  March 15th, 2026 11:24
• The Desert Door (Tristan Robert Lange) A poem of wisdom. The sacred never what is preached or lived by others. It...
  March 15th, 2026 11:23
• Some nights (2) (Maplespal) Expectations precede the terror. Well written
  March 15th, 2026 09:06