Comments on community poems by willyweed
- THE RAVEN HAS FLOWN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
another good one, who's the raven?
Thanks for sharing Brain much enjoyed....
July 13th, 2016 10:28 - Heart Astray (BCR64)
welcome ! your in trouble, follow your heart but consider the...
July 13th, 2016 10:27 - CrossRoad (Thebettersideofme69)
nothing is better than love, as painful as that sometimes can be. like...
July 13th, 2016 10:21 - I See You (Shawna)
someone's in love and it's a beautiful thing! write on ! ww
July 13th, 2016 10:17 - Stale. (The 2 A.M Writer)
yeah sometimes it all don't seem worth while, I hope you can spackle. nice...
July 12th, 2016 18:00 - Going Through A Storm (Jburtv95)
for sure two heads are better than one, I liked your poem and would like...
July 12th, 2016 14:13 - Campfire (Tony36)
It is always wonderful to find one's higher self and to commune with
the...
July 12th, 2016 13:55 - Fighting angels (SilverXball)
interesting write you pen. ww
July 12th, 2016 13:47 - DEMOCRACY IN ACTION (Berthold Lippel)
there's always impeachment. fun write. thankx ww
July 12th, 2016 13:44 - Redemption (Thebettersideofme69)
always good to reinvent one's self and reflect on pass...
July 12th, 2016 13:42 - The Forsaken One (TheUnspokenPoet)
good job with this, interesting and enjoyable read. thankx ww
July 12th, 2016 13:39 - Unexpected Event (Teenageheartbreak)
life is full of the unexpected, it seems you responded well.
July 12th, 2016 10:13 - Circles (Isituorme)
good rhyme and flow, enjoyed the theme as well. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:07 - Thinking (TheWritingInstrument)
This has some good rhyme and a nice gentle flow to it. great write. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:06 - who am i , really? (Avigail)
I think we are created creators here to learn the lessons of the reality...
July 12th, 2016 10:01 - Katharina III (Willyweed)
that's why I like it I guess I'm beyond the normal? the devil is a
joke...
July 12th, 2016 07:25 - Hindsight (Daniel)
hind sight is 20/20 so some say.
life is a lesson and we should always...
July 12th, 2016 07:18 - THERESA MAY ~ ANGELA MAY NOT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God save the Queen! Congrats on victory & this poem! ww
July 12th, 2016 07:13 - Thought The Stars Shine.... (DamilareBizBoss)
sounds like someone is in love.
a heartfelt write you'll never go wrong...
July 12th, 2016 07:09 - Writing Exercise #3 (The 2 A.M Writer)
well said well done!
July 11th, 2016 20:12 - Listening. (TheWritingInstrument)
Short but oh so sweet.
Someone's in love.
more please. ww
July 11th, 2016 20:09 - waking up (AlitaOpal)
wonderful sentiment in this poem and it's well crafted. it reminded me of...
July 11th, 2016 20:04 - Robot-Assisted Surgery (Robert Ronnow)
deep and well written.
I am a believer in the after or before live people...
July 11th, 2016 12:44 - Carnality (Satishverma)
the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work. ww
July 11th, 2016 12:38 - IF EVER YOU SHOULD LEAVE ME (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your not leaving much room in the schedule for her to go! Good fun write...
July 11th, 2016 12:33 - Abused (Tony36)
Abuse:
to the abusers
F#&K you all self loathing sperm bubbles. good...
July 11th, 2016 12:27 - Abused (Tony36)
July 11th, 2016 12:23 - Beyond (Skye Marlene)
spread you wings and fly
wonderful words you pen. Bravo
ww
July 11th, 2016 12:22 - Lonely road. (Camille)
depression is a killer. I hope there is not to much truth for yourself in...
July 11th, 2016 12:13 - 3AM (NJH)
you speak the truth, but it looks like power and greed are out in front....
July 11th, 2016 12:08 - Don\'t Let Go (DamilareBizBoss)
you swim in the river of truth here.
love the play on words(...
July 11th, 2016 12:02 - Narrow gaze (Daniel)
nice piece of work Daniel. Why are we so obsessed with our earth suits,...
July 11th, 2016 11:57 - the eagle egg (Willyweed)
July 9th, 2016 11:19 - To Write (Tony36)
I like this piece Tony, sparks interest into deep questions. ww
July 9th, 2016 08:02 - GUNS \'N ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I agree guns should be banned all together, but that ain't going to happen...
July 9th, 2016 07:57 - Salvation lies within (Daniel)
I like your poem Daniel. looking inside
is the only place to see, who it...
July 9th, 2016 07:50 - Sleepwalking (Moontigerntn)
what have you been smoking, and do you have anymore? I enjoyed this...
July 8th, 2016 16:01 - I will be waiting (AlitaOpal)
your poem is wonderful and graceful, good flow and structure and nice...
July 8th, 2016 15:49 - (“Forget Me Notts”) Leaving on a Steel Worm (AuburnScribbler)
well thought out with good flow and structure a well done poem indeed! ww
July 8th, 2016 15:45 - Is this Harmony? (Avigail)
natural harmony a beautiful thing
Then I saw a crane chewing a...
July 8th, 2016 15:40 - strange encounter (Inink)
Very well done piece. write on! ww
July 8th, 2016 08:23 - Twisted Sister (Tony36)
a lot of that going on!
this sounds like a lyric?
right to the point. ww
July 8th, 2016 08:16 - Sticks & Stones (Teenage_misfit)
love your poem and attitude!
welcome !!! peace WW
July 8th, 2016 08:12 - VENUS RULES ~ MARS SERVES ~ HILLARYOUS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, another well done piece!
The ladies in waiting won't wait any...
July 8th, 2016 08:03 - Self pity (Daniel)
you pose interesting questions in this well thoughtout piece. well done...
July 8th, 2016 07:55 - Just another love poem (Tmehrer)
this is anything but just another love poem, it's heartfelt and wonderful...
July 8th, 2016 07:50 - Corazon (Willyweed)
July 8th, 2016 07:27 - When Waking Up Feels Meaningless (Survivor48)
nicely done, good message, never give up! ww
July 7th, 2016 13:19 - A Light Life (KLyman)
I enjoyed this, very good and clear message, hopeful thoughts, good flow...
July 7th, 2016 10:19 - Wondrous Nature (Haiku) (Dee)
I love this wonderful truth! ww
July 7th, 2016 09:58 - Philosophy in the bathroom (Avigail)
being created creators we do create our own reality. very interesting and...
July 7th, 2016 09:46 - The soul thief. (Camille)
wow this is an interest read, I like poems related to soul, and this one...
July 7th, 2016 09:43 - You Told Me (ThomasAndrewHitchen)
WOW Thomas! you hit the nail on the head (hard) powerful piece! ww
July 7th, 2016 09:31 - APATHEIA (Lysistrata)
wonderful! I know I always feel better after a wuppin' love this one! ww
July 7th, 2016 09:23 - God closed his eyes (Daniel)
very well done Daniel!
great word choice and flow. ww
July 6th, 2016 15:36 - Oasis in the desert of the heart (Reivax Camlost)
yes in this life we have to stay the course even through the most violent...
July 6th, 2016 15:34 - Maze. (Salmaxx)
yes love will clear it all up.
when love comes you know
but it won't say...
July 6th, 2016 15:29 - Don\'t Laugh At Me (Tony36)
good rhyme and flow here. you have a typo I'm not to blamr? in this fast...
July 6th, 2016 11:08 - who is right? (Avigail)
your right, the truth is fickle, when someone believes something then it...
July 6th, 2016 09:23 - Maybe gone (SilverXball)
sometimes a man wants to know that he still has it. And goes searching for...
July 6th, 2016 09:05 - 50 SHADES OF AMERICAN LADIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
you didn't list the state I'm in.
the state of confusion.
fun read my...
July 6th, 2016 08:54 - #1 chore (Crazyboyraps)
you are correct we can't choose who we are, but we can choose what we do....
July 6th, 2016 08:47 - Tears by moonlight. (Camille)
oh please stay, just a little bit longer!
I can relate sometimes it all...
July 6th, 2016 08:39 - Shadows (Eeva)
we all have to see our self at some point, problem is some people refuse...
July 6th, 2016 08:35 - THE FUTURE\'S BRIGHTER ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
very uplifting piece Brian, I'm sure the old geezers have a future...
July 5th, 2016 14:47 - The Tendency to Sin (Survivor48)
I agree we all need to find our better self's.
July 5th, 2016 13:03 - Every Man Has His Secret Sorrows (DamilareBizBoss)
Sadly this is the world that we live in. good work!
July 5th, 2016 12:49 - Asymmetric (Avigail)
you swim in the river of truth here.
short and sweet and so well done.
July 5th, 2016 12:44 - Dark embrace. (Camille)
great poem, good imagery, and flow. nicely done. ww
July 5th, 2016 12:41 - Freedom\'s Fight (Tony36)
I like your poem , and agree if the fight is right and true. And I can...
July 5th, 2016 12:37 - the poet and the devil (Willyweed)
Thank you Tony36 you are very kind. Glad you enjoyed it, you may like some...
July 5th, 2016 12:27 - Kate (ThomasAndrewHitchen)
Good piece Thomas, enjoyable read, at first I thought it was about...
July 3rd, 2016 16:49 - \'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\' (Willyweed)
Thanks Dee for catching the type o
now if I can fix that?
July 2nd, 2016 09:32 - POLITICAL INCORRECTNESS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
oh this sounds familiar!
greeting from USA
good rant Brian
July 1st, 2016 11:47 - The chorus of Christmas Day (Daniel)
Looks like they said it all already,
this one checks all the boxes very...
July 1st, 2016 11:43 - How Can I Forget You (Dee)
wow is it hot in here or what. now that is how you write a love poem
my...
July 1st, 2016 11:35 - A New Approach (Survivor48)
your swimming in the river of truth here. good work. ww
July 1st, 2016 11:31 - Just a breath away. (Camille)
reaching for the higher self, wonderful message you ink.
nice one! ...
July 1st, 2016 11:25 - The puppet Master (Lysistrata)
very imaginative indeed! WW
July 1st, 2016 11:20 - Lone Souls I (Inink)
so far so good, I like it and i'm waiting for more. fine start. write on
July 1st, 2016 10:14 - Maladaptive Daydreamer (Tropicana)
I am a daydream believer
good poem. I enjoyed reading it
you take a...
June 30th, 2016 18:13 - A Poets Love (Dee)
I love this Ar's Poetica a poem of the poet, and love too, how good could...
June 30th, 2016 18:04 - damp earth (Willyweed)
I thank you again Dee, looks like you been busy
we all get to meet ...
June 30th, 2016 17:54 - \"the puppet master\" (Willyweed)
Thanks again Dee, don't worry it's non-addictive...I suppose?
June 30th, 2016 17:48 - Mother Nature (Dee)
what heartfelt beauty you create with this. bravo! ww
June 30th, 2016 10:36 - A Real Jack the Ripper in a Small American Town (Moontigerntn)
good story full of imagination, which is just what a good story...
June 29th, 2016 17:02 - Our sins (Daniel)
I like your poem, we can all relate.
good flow, and structure, thankx for...
June 29th, 2016 14:59 - STREAMS & WATERFALLS OF LIFE & LOVE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, you have story telling talent.
your experience and...
June 29th, 2016 13:49 - Movements..... (Lysistrata)
wonderful prose, good flow and structure, enjoyable read. I like it
ww.
June 29th, 2016 13:36 - Good vs. Evil (Eeva)
nice poem, good flow and subject
enjoyed reading.
beware ye floret's...
June 29th, 2016 13:15 - \"The un-haunted house\" (Willyweed)
hey thanks Brian, I love the spooky, kooky fun writes, and I also have a...
June 28th, 2016 13:37 - Poem under Construction..... (Lysistrata)
good poem,enjoyed reading it.
June 28th, 2016 13:18 - \"The un-haunted house\" (Willyweed)
come dream with me
we'll make a wish
as lover's often do
in the glowing...
June 28th, 2016 13:09 - damp earth (Willyweed)
Thank you kind sir! I appreciate your reading and comments, thank you for...
June 24th, 2016 13:28
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