Comments on community poems by willyweed
- Barranquitas (Rrodriguez)
its funny the things we remember
oh simple days where have you...
August 5th, 2016 10:28 - Vitality (Avigail)
''my signs are vital and my hands are cold" another mind mover get them...
August 4th, 2016 10:20 - UK & EU ~ Eingang und Ausgang (BRIAN & ANGELA)
interesting good luck with that.
another informative piece. ww
August 3rd, 2016 13:59 - A Misunderstood World ([email protected])
a wonderful and poetic truth! ww
August 3rd, 2016 13:49 - Afraid (Elphaba993)
very well done Bravo! ww
August 3rd, 2016 13:42 - When words are soft (Tony36)
I like you poem Tony it swims in the river of truth. ww
August 3rd, 2016 13:41 - Sadness (Rrodriguez)
a look into a sad heart for sure
well crafted and heartfelt. the sun will...
August 3rd, 2016 13:32 - I Dance (Tony36)
Dance the night away! you got typo on first line (I dace) other than that...
August 2nd, 2016 11:32 - bittersweet lies (AAA)
its a sad story you wrote
but it is well written. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:35 - Escape (Elphaba993)
wonderful write! ww
August 1st, 2016 14:31 - 1933 (OhMyGoshLouie)
this is very powerful for its truth.
August 1st, 2016 14:29 - And when I die (Avigail)
brilliant work avigail!
August 1st, 2016 14:25 - Patience (Survivor48)
I agree time like other things depends on one's perception.
well penned....
August 1st, 2016 14:23 - Drowning in me. (Camille)
This is good Camille! dark and mysterious good work. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:18 - Take On The Challenge (Brooklyn6timesplus)
this is a good motto for all. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:15 - Friend-Making (Eeva)
let yourself out to let others in. very nicely done. good write. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:13 - Age Knocked On My Door (Donnasaff)
wonderful piece great rhyme
very enjoyable. ww
August 1st, 2016 14:10 - please read (Inink)
This is very heartfelt and oh so very true. Some people wait until its to...
August 1st, 2016 14:04 - Just one more day (Alanis98)
one fine day your wish will come true. nice poem. ww
August 1st, 2016 08:42 - Sweetness (Thatsilentgirl)
yes to bad we can't stay that way innocent/without bias great poem you...
August 1st, 2016 08:38 - WATERFALLS and RAINBOWS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
well done Brian ! Waterfalls are beautiful and awesome! ww
August 1st, 2016 08:35 - Happy Love (PoeticBella)
smooth as butter please post an another. ww
August 1st, 2016 08:27 - I Wish I Could Let My Heart Go (Leighanne2010)
life time commitments can be difficult to make.
but sure to look hard...
July 28th, 2016 17:39 - Don’t Tell Me What I Cannot Do (Moontigerntn)
its great to spread your wings and do your thing, but good advise should...
July 28th, 2016 17:36 - An Angel’s Maiden Flight (Notapoet)
I like this it moves like water over a rock ...smooth, good rhyme good...
July 28th, 2016 17:32 - To a Dragon and a Phoenix (Lysistrata)
Thank You For the birthday poem!
its wonderful and wow. ww
July 28th, 2016 10:08 - The Music of Lyrics (Survivor48)
well done with a positive message
I'm liking it! nice work!
July 28th, 2016 09:55 - Ground Level Peace (The 2 A.M Writer)
we should all strive to reach our highest self don't stand still. I like...
July 27th, 2016 18:55 - The Greatest Love of All (Thatsilentgirl)
good flow good message=good poem ww
July 27th, 2016 18:47 - Skin deep (Thebettersideofme69)
good write valid point. I enjoyed this. ww
July 27th, 2016 07:57 - reminded (C.a.s.e.e._)
nice~ honesty in motion. write on ww
July 27th, 2016 07:56 - Separated (AlitaOpal)
I think some people are so busy trying to be happy, they can't see that...
July 27th, 2016 07:29 - death, life, and you. (AAA)
"RUN" well said I think charming psycho's may out number zombies in this...
July 27th, 2016 07:22 - Threats (Elphaba993)
first comes manipulation and then intimidation next "run for your...
July 27th, 2016 07:16 - Sincere (Tony36)
words are very powerful. truth is unyielding , but honor and honesty
seem...
July 27th, 2016 07:09 - queen of hearts (Willyweed)
July 25th, 2016 08:19 - Childhood (Tony36)
very sound advise in this well done piece. ww
July 24th, 2016 18:37 - What I Most Remember (Kurt Philip Behm)
short and sweet but so very well done. bravo! ww
July 24th, 2016 18:31 - postcard (AAA)
this is a powerful piece.
ah love can be very complicated
very well...
July 24th, 2016 18:29 - Judge Not My Tears (Dandylion)
this is powerful I commend you for your courage and will.
July 24th, 2016 18:24 - Left For Dead (Notapoet)
This one is very good! it has it all flow structure wicked good rhyme.
I...
July 24th, 2016 14:19 - ᴍ ᴇ ᴅ ɪ ᴄ ᴀ ᴛ ᴇ ᴅ (Bella cortez)
nice I hope you feel better soon.
July 24th, 2016 12:14 - To Fight the Angels (Rosethebrokenhearted)
best of luck with your grandma RTBH~ your thoughts are not mixed the love...
July 24th, 2016 10:54 - Death (Thatsilentgirl)
I agree don't worry about it!
LIVE! good message! write on! ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:37 - L.O.V.E (Thebettersideofme69)
keep an open heart and an open mind if love you seek love you find
love...
July 23rd, 2016 12:33 - Be Ready (Avigail)
I think that's what's wrong with me? very wise advise you serve here...
July 23rd, 2016 12:30 - Love (Tony36)
love is life and life is love
true that! fun read Tony!
July 23rd, 2016 12:28 - Sunset (Rrodriguez)
This is gentle and well penned.
thank you.
July 22nd, 2016 08:16 - Baby Calves (Tony36)
ssssshhhh!
very cool!
July 22nd, 2016 08:13 - Expectations (Eeva)
wonderful work Eva! peace ww
July 22nd, 2016 08:11 - \"born\" ( ten feet from the grave) (Willyweed)
Thank you Brian, don't worry #3
takes a while! peace ww
July 22nd, 2016 08:04 - Depression\'s Obsession (Teenageheartbreak)
good rhyme and flow
July 21st, 2016 10:01 - To Sleep (Tony36)
short but on point, nothing better than a wild imagination!
July 21st, 2016 09:57 - Trampoline (The 2 A.M Writer)
very cool!
July 21st, 2016 09:55 - THANK YOU EVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
a lovely dedication
well done Brian.
July 21st, 2016 09:53 - CURE FOR DEPRESSION (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I can feel the pain in this piece.
good work Brian!
July 20th, 2016 15:49 - To be In Love With You (Rosethebrokenhearted)
Good story, flow and nicely crafted rhyme in this good job Rose very nice...
July 20th, 2016 15:43 - Pointless (Teenageheartbreak)
I always find it hard to write of love. but you did well here. ww
July 20th, 2016 15:39 - Creator (Tony36)
nice one Tony nothing compares to the one. check your title . write on ww
July 20th, 2016 15:36 - Dark Lullabye For Two ft Josh Hosey (Rosethebrokenhearted)
this is well done! ww
July 19th, 2016 20:17 - The Unexpected Ending (Teenageheartbreak)
write on TAHB! ! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:53 - G I R L P O W E R ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Trump's not honest either in fact I believe his pants are on fire. If this...
July 19th, 2016 19:50 - Clawing (The 2 A.M Writer)
you can find comfort in God.
again this is well written. ! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:44 - Hiding from the light. (Camille)
nice flow and serious rhyme.
good job Camille! ww
July 19th, 2016 19:42 - LULLABY I (Lysistrata)
rock a-bye baby. very gentle and heartfelt. beautiful work my dear!
July 19th, 2016 19:40 - This Is My Promise (Audralou)
I enjoyed this well crafted piece
next to last verse 2nd line you have...
July 19th, 2016 19:36 - To the next person who cares (PerpetualFlowers)
very nice poem in structure and flow. ww
July 19th, 2016 19:32 - Hi, My Name is Label (Audralou)
Hi my name is this poem is good!
July 18th, 2016 14:32 - Trust Fall (Audralou)
very nicely penned. ww
July 18th, 2016 14:28 - The voyage. (Camille)
I am Camille! wonderful just wonderful! ww
July 18th, 2016 14:25 - I LOVE BABIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
nothing better than babies
or your acrostic poems. write on ww
July 18th, 2016 14:23 - The one that got away (PrincessPie89)
good flow and rhyme! write on ww
July 18th, 2016 14:19 - Where He Leads Me (Tony36)
Nice Tony! I will follow him! ww
July 18th, 2016 10:06 - Beware (official) (Teenageheartbreak)
its has a nice flow with good structure and rhyme! imagination and...
July 17th, 2016 21:28 - MY GOD ~ IS MY SHEPHERD ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great write !!!
BRAVO ww
July 17th, 2016 20:42 - A Rose For Love (Tony36)
I'm loving this most soft & graceful poem.! ww
July 17th, 2016 20:36 - Revolution (Daniel)
first I love this piece you pen. second revolutions happen and three...
July 17th, 2016 20:32 - ʏᴏᴜʀ ɴᴀᴍᴇ (Bella cortez)
well done Bella nice form and flow! ww
July 17th, 2016 20:28 - A Riveting Story (SheWasTheSun)
I like it very good rhyme , flow and structure! ww
July 17th, 2016 20:25 - Words (Tony36)
excellent advise words can cut you to the bone. I liken it! ww
July 16th, 2016 11:35 - ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇ sᴛᴏʀʏ (Bella cortez)
a wonderful love story you pen, very nice flow, well crafted piece. bravo!...
July 16th, 2016 11:31 - Father. (Camille)
under the thumb, an excellent work! ww
July 16th, 2016 11:28 - Desperation (The 2 A.M Writer)
another very interesting write my friend! ww
July 15th, 2016 20:05 - ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀʀ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ᴜs. (Bella cortez)
I agree what the world needs now is love sweet love/ we are destroying our...
July 15th, 2016 20:02 - WILD (Thebettersideofme69)
born free! good one! ww
July 15th, 2016 19:59 - love is... (Avigail)
You are correct wise lady. awesome ink! WW
July 15th, 2016 19:57 - The abyss (Daniel)
very well thought out and crafted but you already know that. good food for...
July 15th, 2016 19:54 - MY R A I N B O W GIRL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Could I borrow that outfit , for a wedding? always fun to read you!...
July 15th, 2016 19:49 - Her promise.. (AlitaOpal)
a wonderful promise of love
great love poem you pen here Alita
July 14th, 2016 15:20 - You Can’t hold me down (Tony36)
well I for one would never try
and I agree let 'er fly. much enjoyed this...
July 14th, 2016 15:14 - Grandpa (AlitaOpal)
very nice piece Alita you cant beat
a cool poppa daddio or grandpa!
love...
July 13th, 2016 22:26 - Enlighten Yourself (Brooklyn6timesplus)
very sound advise my friemd
excellent write! ww
July 13th, 2016 20:05 - A Puzzle (Wordbyrdwriting)
we have to except or reject each other warts and all. well expressed and...
July 13th, 2016 19:58 - It\'s Not Enough (Avigail)
oh if only it could be so. ww
July 13th, 2016 19:53 - The Cop (Tony36)
finally a happy ending to a good story. I can relate my dad was a cop....
July 13th, 2016 15:08 - Close your eyes / It\'s an early day (Severus Alexander)
its a good thought, wish I could hear the song! write on ww
July 13th, 2016 11:45 - The 2am kebab (Daniel)
another very well crafted piece.
But alas I've never had one of those bad...
July 13th, 2016 11:42 - Silent scream. (Camille)
It looks like Brian has said it all'
it is a sad and mad world we live...
July 13th, 2016 11:37 - the little orange pony (Willyweed)
Thanks Daniel, this was my very first attempt to right.
July 13th, 2016 11:24 - Are You Still Proud Of Me? (Beachbum11)
very painful to lose a dad, just be happy that's what he would want.
And...
July 13th, 2016 10:37
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