Comments on community poems by onepauly
- we the explorers (Avigail)
exploring is what we humans do best.
thank you for shareing
June 29th, 2017 20:32 - Govern (Augustus)
a lot of the so called men, when the populations got bigger and they...
June 29th, 2017 19:16 - Whose Problem. (Goldfinch60)
you got to look out for yourself.
excellent!
June 29th, 2017 18:55 - Today I said Goodbye (FredPeyer)
I said goodbye to myself long ago
and whats left over is me.
June 29th, 2017 18:49 - Another Important Note. (Kevin browne)
you are among the best of all poets and writers I have read to date. how...
June 29th, 2017 18:21 - Everyone Has Got To Struggle Sometimes (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I have to keep learning this over and over again. I knew it for years. but...
June 28th, 2017 23:48 - silly poem or not (Avigail)
I\'m mr minus
and I want to be mr plus
June 28th, 2017 20:42 - Writing: (Avigail)
what I feel is, you have an empty pad of paper and a pen in the other...
June 28th, 2017 20:34 - To Jillian (Augustus)
best wishes for her and
granma and granpa
June 28th, 2017 19:53 - Portrait (Malubotelho)
may the blessings between you and her follow both of you to the future
June 28th, 2017 19:43 - Indication (Poetic Dan)
the direction you are going now is just fine.
June 28th, 2017 19:27 - When I Am Dead. (Kevin browne)
great poem king kev.
I understand most of it.
the line that meant more...
June 28th, 2017 18:50 - YOU AND ME (Michael Edwards)
simple, and quite intimite
June 28th, 2017 18:37 - You will love it there (FredPeyer)
I\'m 62. I don\'t want to grow old
any suggestions?
June 28th, 2017 18:31 - That Tune. (Goldfinch60)
good enough
June 28th, 2017 18:22 - Girl, Our Love Shines So Brightly (Brooklyn6timesplus)
very romantic. man and woman
June 27th, 2017 21:09 - When His Pen Runs Out Of Ink. (Kevin browne)
hey king kev.
I have so much to learn from you.
I have no idea how you...
June 27th, 2017 20:37 - Love-Blinded Eyes (BloodPho3nix)
this poem is a masterpiece!
I\'ve never read such an intelligent poem....
June 27th, 2017 20:14 - Mirror mirror (Poetic Dan)
the mirror of truth speaks for all mankind. from way back in those days
June 27th, 2017 19:28 - The Artist\'s Eye (Augustus)
I\'m new but I was always near. its good that love is in the air.
June 27th, 2017 19:21 - Symphony (FredPeyer)
read this one often enough
and it will grow on you.
wonderful!
June 27th, 2017 19:07 - Book borrowed from the library of Learned.. (P.H.Rose)
lots of pure meaning
June 27th, 2017 19:00 - Picture of My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
to me it lets me feel like I\'m gazing at a new planet from outer...
June 27th, 2017 18:51 - From Here to There. (Goldfinch60)
like you put, friends who are just there for us,
and do understand. I\'m...
June 27th, 2017 18:45 - I love you (Malubotelho)
you hit the nail right on the head!
what can I say but
I love you more
June 27th, 2017 18:33 - i inspire me. (Ruth Fadairo)
I must be a twin.
because that poem fits me to a t
June 26th, 2017 20:36 - Birthday thoughts (Malubotelho)
id like to give you something for your birthday. but it seems to me that...
June 26th, 2017 20:31 - Moon Candy (FredPeyer)
all things are possible
esp\' ecially
in our dreams
want some candy?
June 26th, 2017 20:21 - You Are About To Embark On A Journey (Brooklyn6timesplus)
you do things
not because they are easy
but because they are hard
if...
June 26th, 2017 20:15 - See Your Face. (Kevin browne)
you are a great writer. I have my own thoughts about what you wrote.
it...
June 26th, 2017 19:56 - suicide (part 1) (Samreen Chowdhury)
I have a sister in law who committed suicide by drowning. it was very sad.
June 26th, 2017 19:39 - The next new day ....... (P.H.Rose)
I liked the part \"learn something new\"
then read the rest, and I did!
June 26th, 2017 19:26 - Those Moments Remember. (Kevin browne)
great page! you could be a novelist.
and I think you know it. that is...
June 25th, 2017 19:23 - never give up the fight! (Wanderlust)
the fight never ends
June 24th, 2017 23:17 - Love and its siblings (Avigail)
I agree
June 24th, 2017 23:13 - Distant memories of a friend (Fayeisabee1)
life is not always kind.
my condolences
June 24th, 2017 23:08 - Too old? (FredPeyer)
let it be, let it be,
whisper words of wisdom,
let it be.
June 24th, 2017 22:58 - Continue To Climb (Brooklyn6timesplus)
continue to climb
I will too
we must get to the summit.
June 24th, 2017 22:48 - Degenerate (BloodPho3nix)
did you put them back on the shelf
AFTER taking enough to kill?
read...
June 24th, 2017 00:05 - Degenerate (BloodPho3nix)
there is always
something called
sometimes.
if you need help
just
June 23rd, 2017 23:58 - My Repition Precedes Me (Emile Dubois)
I learned something from it.
June 22nd, 2017 21:15 - Everyday We Write A New Book (Brooklyn6timesplus)
very good, if I do
say so myself
June 22nd, 2017 21:12 - Safe places (Malubotelho)
I agree with you.
I am abnormal myself,
will I ever be a regular person...
June 22nd, 2017 21:07 - Can\'t keep fighting.. (WG7)
I like the last line
June 22nd, 2017 18:36 - Awesome (Tony36)
absoulutley !
June 22nd, 2017 18:31 - The one with two faces (ShannonXx)
we have more then two faces
June 22nd, 2017 18:11 - Balance (Poetic Dan)
we are still growing up
June 22nd, 2017 18:06 - The day of death.. (Wolf10)
very sad
how can I cheer you up
June 22nd, 2017 17:15 - Bubble of suffocation (Fayeisabee1)
and then the bubble bursts
into unspoken joy
worth reading
June 22nd, 2017 17:02 - Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer)
your description is creatively
a gem
June 21st, 2017 22:03 - Anything Is Possible (Brooklyn6timesplus)
this one helps me a great deal
June 21st, 2017 21:20 - They say (Crow.)
I don\'t know if I\'m really gay, ive been by myself so long. ive had gay...
June 21st, 2017 20:07 - The World 🌎 (The Metaphysical Poet of the 21 Century)
check out my poem \"good times\"
June 21st, 2017 18:47 - Poem for women (Malubotelho)
you have my respect
June 21st, 2017 18:37 - Oh Baby! (Bibbeck)
great ending
I\'m not saying its good or bad
its just a great ending
June 21st, 2017 18:31 - Our Chicago (Naya13)
your poem made me very emotional
we are defenseless
what can we do?
June 21st, 2017 18:26 - As a poet (Tony36)
a true and great poet
June 21st, 2017 18:14 - Mantle (Lucaso)
handle things on the mantle
June 21st, 2017 18:08 - Only If... (The Broken Vessel)
wonderful way to describe it
victorious! you are
June 21st, 2017 18:04 - Blind (ApolloEnjolras)
very sad,
drinking will do it.
June 20th, 2017 18:44 - This Anxiety (Hannabal)
ive been dealing with acute anxiety for about 30 years. your right it is...
June 20th, 2017 05:03 - Four Walls (Anonymous Human)
I made an error that last
comment. sometimes those four walls have a...
June 19th, 2017 17:05 - You are A Nahpro By His Mercy (Pintu Mahakul)
nahpro memory of god
good write
June 17th, 2017 20:32 - \'Escaping from Life\'s Prison. (Goldfinch60)
we need more of
this type of thinking
June 17th, 2017 18:56 - Insignificant. (TheBrokenPrincess)
no pun
just live and learn
June 16th, 2017 23:00 - just gone (Starr_)
what a shock it must have been
I\'m sorry. but that is just some words....
June 16th, 2017 22:36 - Lost within Myself (Jdblake)
I feel the same way. the key is
sometimes
June 16th, 2017 22:25 - Girl, It Is The Two Of Us Together (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I read your poem.
its simple and sweet
June 16th, 2017 18:56 - Girl, It Is The Two Of Us Together (Brooklyn6timesplus)
June 16th, 2017 18:55 - Always An End (Lala)
watch for my poem.
there are many ways to understand it
June 16th, 2017 18:03 - Always Find Your Rhythm (Brooklyn6timesplus)
rhymes and reasons
follow rhythm.
great work!
June 16th, 2017 04:16 - Reminiscing from jail (Lala)
beautiful poem
lots of meaning
June 15th, 2017 19:06 - forward (Onepauly)
just one of my simpler poems
June 9th, 2017 16:44
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