Comments on community poems by onepauly
- Encroachment in Life. (Goldfinch60)
can I write you a poem
or sing you a song?
understanding.
August 4th, 2018 03:21 - Tattoo (W c)
I never could understand
the signifigence in tatoos.
August 4th, 2018 03:18 - Praise Proclaimings 2 (Orchidee)
ill say I am here.
August 4th, 2018 03:15 - Between the who we are and the one we strive for (Poetic Dan)
you surely have the wisdom
of a great poet.
August 3rd, 2018 03:33 - Death Has Always Been A Terrifying Thought To Me (Lyssa19)
and death shall have no dominion.
they shall have stars
at elbow and...
August 3rd, 2018 03:26 - I WRITE (Michael Edwards)
really good rythme.
August 3rd, 2018 03:19 - Pens And Pencils (W c)
excellent!
also im a crossword player.
August 3rd, 2018 03:14 - Forward With Knowledge. (Goldfinch60)
but for the grace of god
go I.
this one is meaningful.
August 3rd, 2018 03:09 - Pure Protectings (Orchidee)
think positive!
August 3rd, 2018 03:05 - Things changed that day (Poetic Dan)
I feel so humble with this one.
wonderful!
August 3rd, 2018 02:53 - Rock and hard place (Poetic Dan)
maybe its precious
because it is so short.
if its to long, it could get...
July 30th, 2018 14:03 - SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
its a must, for where I live.
otherwise people are coughing in the middle...
July 30th, 2018 01:29 - Hearing The Lone Ranger. (Goldfinch60)
ha! ha!i have all the episodes on dvd.
I also have all of them they made...
July 30th, 2018 01:18 - You May Have Taken A Fall (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I agree. guide your way through.
July 30th, 2018 01:11 - A Poet (W c)
the light is invisible but
its always there.
July 30th, 2018 00:55 - Failing Faith. (Goldfinch60)
the threshold.
July 27th, 2018 23:29 - It felt Like A Breeze. (Kevin browne)
your a better poet then me
kevin. keep on striking the match
until it...
July 27th, 2018 23:21 - CLOSE COMFORT. (Fay Slimm.)
your one
in a million fay!
July 27th, 2018 23:14 - A Praying Mantis (W c)
in my childhood
ive picked many
mantis
July 27th, 2018 23:11 - Spread Your Wings And Fly (Brooklyn6timesplus)
positively excellent!
July 27th, 2018 22:58 - Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get (Poetic Dan)
the two and no more.
July 20th, 2018 12:16 - Irregular (Nicholas Browning)
the first and second lines, and that word trance. I smoked a six inch...
July 20th, 2018 12:13 - Beechworth Streets #01: still (standing) (Frank Prem)
or more!
July 20th, 2018 12:02 - TROD TRACKS. (Fay Slimm.)
hard labor is something to be respected.
July 20th, 2018 12:01 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (7) (Michael Edwards)
?
July 20th, 2018 11:57 - Threshold of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
there you go!
outstanding!
July 20th, 2018 11:56 - Pleasant Pastures (Orchidee)
we survive.
and live forever.
July 20th, 2018 11:51 - round the lake walk #87 (final): dream of flight (Frank Prem)
come fly with me.
July 19th, 2018 20:56 - Believe That You Can (Brooklyn6timesplus)
you can too.
July 19th, 2018 20:52 - Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty (Goldfinch60)
you are a poet.
you know how to create poetry.
July 19th, 2018 15:28 - Communion Compliance (Orchidee)
I made my first holy communion.
I remember it.
July 19th, 2018 15:25 - ABANDON. (Fay Slimm.)
you show us how fragile and sensitive we are.
good one!
July 19th, 2018 15:21 - My inner child say be fearless and brave (Poetic Dan)
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
July 19th, 2018 15:17 - NIGHTSHADE WINE (Michael Edwards)
I like the last line the best.
ha! ha!
July 19th, 2018 15:09 - Death (Hoopie)
and death shall have no dominion.
July 17th, 2018 04:37 - Of The Things Stored High (W c)
one of the best poems I\'ve heard in a long time.
July 17th, 2018 04:30 - CONTAGION (Michael Edwards)
horrorfieing and sad at the same time.
July 17th, 2018 04:27 - Unbroken Love. (Goldfinch60)
this is a gift many of us do not possess.
great write, and song.
July 17th, 2018 04:24 - Fruitful Flourishing (Orchidee)
one more time.
ha! ha!
July 17th, 2018 04:19 - IF ONLY. (Fay Slimm.)
there is something grateful about a bird singing its notes in the morn.
July 17th, 2018 04:17 - Antagonist vs Antonyms (Poetic Dan)
knowing our worth goes a long way.
interesting.
July 17th, 2018 04:11 - Possession Useless (Here)
sad
July 16th, 2018 08:01 - Duck Squadron (W c)
really want to be with peace
like looking up viewing a flock
of...
July 16th, 2018 07:52 - Escape. (Goldfinch60)
im always outside the box.
but every once in a while I take a peek in.
July 16th, 2018 07:44 - Nature Notes (Orchidee)
peace be with you.
July 16th, 2018 07:41 - Why I love everyones thoughts (Poetic Dan)
everyone has a tale to tell.
great write.
July 16th, 2018 07:39 - MEDITATING. (Fay Slimm.)
meditation is the key to relaxation.
ha! ha!
July 16th, 2018 07:35 - why? (E-Poems)
I did the honor of reading your poem. it\'s o.k.
now read mine.
it\'s...
July 16th, 2018 07:31 - 4 A.M. (DesertWords)
a poem
July 15th, 2018 07:26 - Preying in the Choir. (Goldfinch60)
what can I say about
this one?
July 15th, 2018 07:23 - SELF DOUBT (Michael Edwards)
I used to be a very heavy drinker, and suffered for many many years. the...
July 15th, 2018 06:49 - Symbols for Words. (Goldfinch60)
your as old as you feel.
ha! ha!
July 14th, 2018 22:47 - No Flying Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
you always come out
with good poems
July 14th, 2018 22:44 - Girl, With Every Little Step (Brooklyn6timesplus)
SOUL MATES
a man and a woman
at their...
July 14th, 2018 22:33 - Queen Of The Hill (W c)
very interesting,
and entertaining.
July 14th, 2018 22:24 - no faith (Chana)
we are all born in faith
that\'s the reason we are here.
July 14th, 2018 22:20 - Drugs of Choice (Noah)
and puts you back together.
July 14th, 2018 22:13 - What’s the point in trying (Ah353)
its the good times
and the bad times.
we\'re all stuck with it.
July 14th, 2018 22:09 - BE TOUGH (Michael Edwards)
I don\'t want to go so deep
that I cant get out of.
I always look...
July 12th, 2018 07:55 - Embrace The Challenge (Brooklyn6timesplus)
you amaze me 6
July 12th, 2018 07:50 - A DELICATE THING. (Fay Slimm.)
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:48 - A DELICATE THING. (Fay Slimm.)
I remember listening
to the wind through the leaves and branches. very...
July 12th, 2018 07:46 - A DELICATE THING. (Fay Slimm.)
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:42 - That Will Be Me. (Goldfinch60)
try thinking in your mind
that your 20 years old.
it works for me.
ha!...
July 12th, 2018 04:38 - Caving Together. (Goldfinch60)
something to ponder
July 11th, 2018 03:27 - Become The Master. (Kevin browne)
with this one you are the greatest poet that ever lived. you shall go down...
July 8th, 2018 23:18 - At The Beach (W c)
excellent!
but you probably know already.
ha! ha!
July 8th, 2018 21:36 - The Red, White, And, Blue (Brooklyn6timesplus)
today is the 4\'th of july.
happy independence day 6
July 4th, 2018 16:43 - Speed. (Goldfinch60)
July 4th, 2018 16:40 - Speed. (Goldfinch60)
slow, is my way too.
July 4th, 2018 16:38 - Your Teardrops. (Kevin browne)
you are improving marketably
July 4th, 2018 16:35 - 7-1-18 (Wilted)
I did reread it. I think we both have the same problem. hows your...
July 1st, 2018 23:33 - Just a phrase (Aa Harvey)
well put.
this is me all the way.
July 1st, 2018 18:59 - Visitor in my own body (A potato)
every time something good happens
to me there\'s always a shadow on my...
July 1st, 2018 18:42 - 7-1-18 (Wilted)
the date fits
and probably everything else
attracts great interest.
July 1st, 2018 18:06 - Remain Self-Motivated And Self-Determined (Brooklyn6timesplus)
could not be told better!
July 1st, 2018 17:51 - All is Well. (Goldfinch60)
best poem ive read in a very long time.
great!
July 1st, 2018 11:41 - Flowing In Faith (Orchidee)
may the lord be with you.
June 29th, 2018 14:36 - Endeavour Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
imagination is forever.
when you think
outside the box.
now ill listen...
June 28th, 2018 14:02 - Pondering His Presence (Orchidee)
peace be with you.
June 13th, 2018 02:03 - Prayer Progress (Orchidee)
truly wisdom speaks to thee.
June 13th, 2018 01:44 - New Studies. (Goldfinch60)
freeing the being is
seeing not fleeing.
I do not know what I mean by...
June 13th, 2018 01:36 - New Studies. (Goldfinch60)
there you go!
your friend onepauly.
peace be with you!
ha! ha!
June 13th, 2018 01:26 - Finding Peace. (Goldfinch60)
hi gf.
a poem that I do understand.
thanks for the message. I did not...
June 13th, 2018 01:17 - Peg\'s Mini. (Goldfinch60)
remembrance ,
and a song like
no other.
May 12th, 2018 02:09 - Cheerful Chorus (Orchidee)
the lord.
blessed be.
May 12th, 2018 02:03 - Meteor shower (Theglassman)
you got to think outside the box,
but opposites do attract.
May 12th, 2018 01:52 - Sex And Violence (John Prophet)
true.
May 6th, 2018 12:07 - Fear of Reality (Keeya_3)
you leave your thoughts their?
so where are you?
do you know how to...
May 6th, 2018 12:04 - Until we meet again (Arianna Smith)
wonderful!
May 6th, 2018 11:51 - Swooping to the Kill (Sandbone18)
excellent!
you did it!
May 6th, 2018 11:47 - THAT MORN. (Fay Slimm.)
it comes and goes in the right direction.
May 6th, 2018 11:42 - The Hollow Man (Kevin Michael Bloor)
the last line, pulls it off nicely.
May 6th, 2018 11:36 - Tickled (Jabberwocky)
simple an precise.
its something
I would say good.
May 6th, 2018 11:31 - Write to the Stars (MP Martinez)
fair.
keep writing.
May 6th, 2018 11:27 - SHE DANCED (Michael Edwards)
I think that\'s kind of graceful.
May 6th, 2018 04:29 - Multiple Personalities (SorrowfullyHappy)
great rhythm.
May 6th, 2018 04:23 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #58: raising the pride (Frank Prem)
easy to read and understand.
great!
May 6th, 2018 03:58 - Your #1 (DarkNationLocal)
that\'s a nice way to put it.
May 6th, 2018 03:31 - JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I know your not a bad man.
I seek spirit if you want to call it that. I...
May 6th, 2018 03:27
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