Comments on community poems by onepauly

• Unfair (Malubotelho) I believe it is you and your soul. communicating.
  July 22nd, 2017 03:17
• Wisdom (FredPeyer) what is the prize?
  July 22nd, 2017 03:10
• The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60) very good
  July 22nd, 2017 03:05
• Smith & Wesson (DyingDreams) suicide is always a tragedy. and you had the courage to spell it out.
  July 22nd, 2017 02:51
• Dangers of repressing pain... (Q) just take it in stride. believe everything will be o.k. nobody said it...
  July 22nd, 2017 02:08
• Killing Ignorance (Lovett4166) sounds like a witch hunt.
  July 22nd, 2017 01:59
• TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I am not evil. but I know you are!!
  July 21st, 2017 05:02
• Don’t Go (Charlesbarrett) I was touched by this. good poem
  July 21st, 2017 04:37
• Happiness (Its Raskolnikov) I will love you.
  July 21st, 2017 04:32
• Somewhere so much better (David) this is brilliant! I can identify with this. why cant we find something...
  July 21st, 2017 04:27
• Blue Twilight (WL Schuett) is this about you earlier in your life? I liked it anyway. simple enough...
  July 21st, 2017 04:16
• Tree (Nicholas Ashton) made me feel I was surrounded by trees but they were barren. no leaves ,...
  July 21st, 2017 03:47
• Soul and Insight (Poetae Opus) where their is a will their is a way. kind of an old one.
  July 20th, 2017 16:03
• Childish head (Malubotelho) wonderfuly put. it makes ya think. horizens
  July 20th, 2017 15:43
• A Wisdom In Rehabilitation. (Kevin browne) you probably know it, the answer is in the last line.
  July 20th, 2017 13:36
• The Sandcastle (M. Mohon) years
  July 20th, 2017 12:55
• technically heartbreak (Prudence) nobody really wants to commit suicide. their probably in despair and...
  July 20th, 2017 00:04
• Fantasy (Baylee) simply put.
  July 19th, 2017 23:51
• The Letter (Simply Jimyra) quite the story. easy reading.
  July 19th, 2017 23:00
• Part alienated, part connected. (CaitEva) that was for lara love
  July 19th, 2017 22:44
• Part alienated, part connected. (CaitEva) I don\'t know what I was thinking. sorry
  July 19th, 2017 22:23
• This Ones For You (Kbreinich) best poem I ever read! I can relate to that. its madness in the city. I am...
  July 19th, 2017 21:53
• Sinking Skeletons (Poetboy123) though the sink to the sea, they shall rise again.
  July 19th, 2017 21:44
• Part alienated, part connected. (CaitEva) good for the people on CSI
  July 19th, 2017 21:36
• How to Kill a Dream (Ren) you must be brave. then again I\"ll fight.
  July 19th, 2017 21:17
• How to Kill a Dream (Ren) good way to put it.
  July 19th, 2017 21:13
• Black Hearts 🖤 (Drusch33) man does not see with the eye alone but by the light which makes it...
  July 19th, 2017 16:06
• Fireflies at nighttime (Katherinem7) they look kind of green don\'t they?
  July 19th, 2017 16:01
• Blue-Green Eyed Man (Domi) we all need to be loved.
  July 19th, 2017 15:54
• Remind Yourself: (Niallprideaux) atoms and molecules
  July 19th, 2017 15:40
• Wednesday\'s child (Renzi) three cheers for wednsday!
  July 19th, 2017 15:27
• Love Is (Migithehp) love so many things
  July 19th, 2017 15:17
• The Rose (Inking Feather) remarkable!
  July 19th, 2017 12:32
• Scorching Sun (P.X. Vexxus) very good!
  July 19th, 2017 12:24
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) only to become new again the next day.
  July 19th, 2017 12:02
• A day orf?! (Orchidee) now have yourself a nice cup of tea.
  July 19th, 2017 11:47
• A part of the process (Aa Harvey) a new life. always refreshing.
  July 19th, 2017 11:40
• Every year (L) Love sucks
  July 19th, 2017 11:10
• Dying Love (FredPeyer) this is a wonderful way to describe love. in its many assetts
  July 19th, 2017 10:58
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) more then one good message
  July 19th, 2017 10:45
• Thoughts (M.m) thoughts can be good or bad
  July 19th, 2017 07:29
• My younger years (Christina8) me and my 20\"s greatest ventures in my life. lol
  July 19th, 2017 07:27
• He (Xcigsx) somewhat
  July 19th, 2017 07:22
• Mirror mirror (Azura Nightsong) I like poems with mirrors
  July 19th, 2017 07:20
• Five more minutes (S.louise) is this another person or yourself
  July 18th, 2017 16:47
• An individual in a collective sea. (CaitEva) together we stand and stand again. great work!
  July 18th, 2017 16:38
• Inspire (Roudan) great use of words to get the story created.
  July 18th, 2017 16:35
• Solution (Malubotelho) the solution will be found. time will take care of all our ills. if not...
  July 18th, 2017 08:42
• Heart breaks (Kingpoetic) I\'m sorry too
  July 18th, 2017 08:30
• When stars don’t shine on you (Avigail) yes I believe in my inner self.
  July 18th, 2017 08:11
• Happiness (Q) I am happy also. I found it.
  July 18th, 2017 08:08
• Littleness. (Fay Slimm.) also a friend. great poem. easy to understand. its the little things that...
  July 18th, 2017 07:59
• Pain (Jakiki) very heartbreaking. don\'t do it. If you do ill never speak to you...
  July 18th, 2017 07:48
• That time of the week (Renzi) recently I lost two quarts of blood. so don\'t threat a little pin prick....
  July 18th, 2017 07:37
• My girl is turning 10 (Poetic Dan) very lovely. I\'m happy for you.
  July 18th, 2017 07:26
• Honey (The 2 A.M Writer) your brain on drugs. excellent poem! wonderfully put.
  July 18th, 2017 06:52
• the fear of men who look like my mother (M) wonderfully different
  July 18th, 2017 06:47
• Hi I am a slut (NikitaPassmore) I give this one o.k.
  July 18th, 2017 06:32
• Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60) nice gem!
  July 18th, 2017 06:23
• The Seat Belt (Noah) and death shall have no dominion
  July 18th, 2017 06:15
• I Miss You (Another Memory) (Papi Y) not sure of yourself.
  July 18th, 2017 06:12
• Children of War (FredPeyer) good poem
  July 18th, 2017 06:03
• I Hate Mirrors (Ren) a mirror is a mirror. your reflection is a reflection. its not you. its a...
  July 18th, 2017 05:55
• I remember everything (Andreax21) real suicide is not the answer. nor is the threat.
  July 18th, 2017 05:35
• Utilize Those Tools Wisely (Brooklyn6timesplus) good enough for me
  July 18th, 2017 05:24
• The Rose (Carmine Branco) yes it feels as though we must be perfect when we go outside. so we put on...
  July 18th, 2017 00:56
• Why not (Brandyngraham) everyones supporter must come from themselves. its lonely but it works.
  July 18th, 2017 00:50
• Modern Slaves of society (Denxse) your poem makes me think about how the society dictates our freedom. are...
  July 18th, 2017 00:43
• Beauty Is This Life. (Kevin browne) in your poetry there is not a message, but messages. that\'s why I read it...
  July 18th, 2017 00:15
• the damage of the adults (Mocuisle) narrated perfectly. freedom!
  July 17th, 2017 20:34
• \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans) excellent! this is what real poetry looks like
  July 17th, 2017 20:14
• Shy (SorrowfullyHappy) very good. in only four lines
  July 17th, 2017 20:04
• Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx) best one I\'ve seen in a long time you know how to write poetry.
  July 17th, 2017 20:00
• Erotica (Phantom bride) a poem filled with passion. you wrote it perfectly.
  July 17th, 2017 18:33
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) wonderful.
  July 17th, 2017 18:07
• Pepsi Cola (Niallprideaux) ill have a coke please.
  July 17th, 2017 18:04
• I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.) the last two words are the best.
  July 17th, 2017 17:35
• For The Reader (M. Mohon) splendid! you sang my song.
  July 17th, 2017 17:29
• Who I am (Daisychain) time is a good healer.
  July 17th, 2017 17:06
• Goodbye (FredPeyer) whats in your view finder? anything good. I love the printed word. I...
  July 17th, 2017 16:53
• We love who we love (Emile Dubois) that\'s love for ya.
  July 17th, 2017 16:32
• Not sure of the title ? (Writerkg) I liked this one it makes me feel comfortable
  July 17th, 2017 16:29
• SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST ? A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) your still on that pedestal. something to stir the dormant muse? the...
  July 17th, 2017 15:43
• SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST ? A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) are we on a crusade? I would like to help with this. but what can I do?...
  July 17th, 2017 13:13
• Copacabana (Malubotelho) the crowd was amazed and I was amused. lol
  July 17th, 2017 11:55
• Coffee First! (Goldfinch60) do you need milk with that. oh, I\'m afraid all we have is tea. dear!
  July 17th, 2017 05:59
• Don\'t Judge. (Jaylenrene) good one we are duel in nature.
  July 17th, 2017 05:48
• *Warning: Explicit Content* (Hannabal) you have the right to remain silent.
  July 17th, 2017 05:41
• Sleep Tight. (Kevin browne) I myself am still a virgin and 62 years old. is that the way its...
  July 17th, 2017 04:43
• Just Keep On Trying (Brooklyn6timesplus) sounds like a dream. agood one. but a dream never the less. good poem. ...
  July 17th, 2017 03:45
• The Hurting (Kbreinich) I like the very last line. reminds me of someone.
  July 17th, 2017 03:41
• demons (Justagirl) everyone is an optimist. find it in yourself.
  July 17th, 2017 03:36
• Clouds in the sky (Nyoko_beautiful moon) I remember as a child I used to lie on my back and watch the clouds for...
  July 17th, 2017 03:29
• Conquest (MissDefined) good way to describe it. I\'ve always felt that the ocean waves are...
  July 17th, 2017 03:18
• Until She Graces My Mirror Again (Rpgiii) how much does that mirror cost i\'ll buy it, if I can afford it.
  July 17th, 2017 03:11
• Game of Life (Poetboy123) your the boss
  July 17th, 2017 03:05
• Oops (ElenaGrace) keep writing that\'s the only way you are going to find out.
  July 16th, 2017 12:31
• Later nor grater (Mello) absolutely one of the best poems I\'ve read in awhile. keep writing.
  July 16th, 2017 12:18
• The Closet (Domi) time is a good healer.
  July 16th, 2017 12:03
• Purity (Darkerme8651) this poem deserves a trophy.
  July 16th, 2017 11:12