Comments on community poems by onepauly
- deathbed (Theseachild)
and death shall have no dominion.
April 27th, 2018 10:32 - The Ostrich Pose (Lorna)
greatly defined.
the way you used the words.
good harmony.
April 27th, 2018 10:28 - College (Writings From The Unknown13)
i\'m 62 years old.
and I would love to be 17 again.
with a clear open...
April 27th, 2018 10:20 - The London Overground - Watford Junction to Euston (FineB)
wonderful! finally a great poem!
April 27th, 2018 10:15 - UNTIED. (Fay Slimm.)
freedom flight.
April 27th, 2018 10:10 - Soul Centre. (Goldfinch60)
did this really happen?
April 27th, 2018 09:53 - No one noticed (Mgl)
I agree.
April 27th, 2018 09:50 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #49: Frankly no worries (Frank Prem)
to much.
April 27th, 2018 09:48 - Oh, Dear Mother, I Love You So Much. (Kevin browne)
very touching King Kev.
my apartment number is 101
ha! ha!. I hope you...
April 27th, 2018 06:17 - The Great Escape (Lorna)
no rest for the weary.
April 26th, 2018 10:02 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #48: not a lot, anymore (Frank Prem)
I was a patient
in many psych wards.
I like what you write.
keep em...
April 26th, 2018 09:59 - AWE. (Fay Slimm.)
it was tough
but I got through it.
keep them coming.
April 26th, 2018 09:50 - Cool Leaf Litter Critters (Jhe)
life is all around us.
April 26th, 2018 09:45 - Word Witness - Epistles of Peter Series - 9 (Orchidee)
God is also behind us.
he pushes us forward.
April 26th, 2018 09:41 - Meteor shower (Theglassman)
think, then write.
April 26th, 2018 09:34 - courageous on accident (Queer-with-a-pen)
be brave.
April 26th, 2018 09:31 - LIMERICK No54 (Michael Edwards)
enjoyed it.
I do wish people would
write poetry for poetry sake.
April 26th, 2018 09:24 - Rare Day. (Goldfinch60)
very inspiring gold finch
from your American friend
who\'s mother was...
April 26th, 2018 01:43 - Me, myself an I (Marlenawood)
keep up the fight never stop.
rewards will not stop either.
April 23rd, 2018 22:15 - 4-22-18 (Wilted)
just take it one day at a time. I do and it works.
April 23rd, 2018 22:11 - Promethean Neopelagian (Gary Edward Geraci)
all we can do is push forward. it keeps going on no matter what.
April 23rd, 2018 22:00 - It Seems (Naeners)
upstream is where the power is.
keep writing and you\'ll find it. I\'m...
April 23rd, 2018 21:56 - For It Is Another Day (Brooklyn6timesplus)
that last line was great, as the rest of it.
April 23rd, 2018 15:17 - Distance Cures Everything (AllTheRandomThings)
even close can be far.
April 23rd, 2018 15:15 - Can I Pray for You? (Blessednloved)
if you care to.
April 23rd, 2018 15:13 - One Sentence (T...)
yea it does happen.
April 23rd, 2018 15:11 - I want you beside me (Shayl)
keep up the good work.
April 23rd, 2018 15:09 - Old Guy In Pub (Kitcat)
a work of art!
April 23rd, 2018 15:07 - The Abusive Church (Lee Renard Caspian)
meditate on the last stanza
and forget the rest.
April 23rd, 2018 15:01 - David’s Star (TesniWilliams)
sweet dreams.
April 23rd, 2018 14:58 - base ten birds (Abora)
birds are natures way of saying we are free.
April 23rd, 2018 14:57 - Young Provider (W c)
wonderful!
April 23rd, 2018 14:54 - I Don\'t Love You (Caroline Elizabeth)
first we must ask ourselves what is love.
April 23rd, 2018 14:52 - Spent Forever Chasing Ghosts (Edthepoet)
the ghost we are chasing is ourselves. each and every.
April 23rd, 2018 14:49 - Lost Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
love is.
April 23rd, 2018 14:47 - The Demon In Me (Writings From The Unknown13)
I too have huge anxiety attacks.
my thoughts go to fast. I\'m crippled...
April 23rd, 2018 14:42 - Little Tiny White Things (Lorna)
flowers were meant to be beautiful.
April 23rd, 2018 14:22 - mystery love (Lemons poetry)
I wont take the bait.
April 23rd, 2018 14:20 - Anger in thought (Afinley)
I have problems with the cops too. I hate them. they stalk me for no...
April 23rd, 2018 14:07 - Trials And Tests - Epistles of Peter Series - 6 (Orchidee)
blessed be in the name of the lord.
April 23rd, 2018 14:01 - Does She Ever Stop? (Goldfinch60)
one day at a time.
April 23rd, 2018 13:58 - Leash (Noah)
Ive thought about it a few times.
April 23rd, 2018 13:52 - SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL (Michael Edwards)
simply put.
keep up the inspiration.
April 23rd, 2018 13:44 - visions of the unknown (RiverJordan)
that\'s true.
April 23rd, 2018 13:41 - When you’re around (Dee♥️)
nice.
April 23rd, 2018 09:43 - know your worth (Infatuatedsoul)
you explain it to me.
April 23rd, 2018 09:30 - 4-22-18 (Wilted)
how was that yesterday?
April 23rd, 2018 08:53 - The shower (Jailynn✨)
it has charisma!
April 22nd, 2018 14:30 - Truth Ensues (Kurt Philip Behm)
refreshing. don\'t give up the fight.
April 22nd, 2018 14:28 - No More Tears (Brie)
I could not read this paragraph.
its not in English.
April 22nd, 2018 14:27 - Being the person I want to be! (Nuana)
you can make it work. be not against others to be just yourself. being a...
April 22nd, 2018 14:24 - Doorway (Aa Harvey)
NO!
April 22nd, 2018 14:19 - Wisdom (W c)
lets work with and for it.
nice piece.
April 22nd, 2018 13:59 - Air Balloons and Dead Trees (Noah)
great work of fantasy!
April 22nd, 2018 13:56 - Earth Day Dismay (Jhe)
I\'m so sorry. it is very very sad. I have one bag that I carry in my...
April 22nd, 2018 13:49 - Maggots (Syd)
this poem deserves a reward!
April 22nd, 2018 13:39 - Happy Birthday George Andrew Dunning - (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
great rythme!
April 22nd, 2018 07:53 - I don’t wanna disappear forever, but right now I need to not be here (Larosamarchitada)
if you really need one, take one. maybe another time you wont need it.
...
April 22nd, 2018 07:49 - Elias (Avarice)
sad, still nicely written.
April 22nd, 2018 07:45 - CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics (Laura🌻)
nicely done!
April 22nd, 2018 07:42 - guns and glory and children too young to know what death is (Izzi Lynn)
you have my sympathy.
what else can I give?
let it be known.
April 22nd, 2018 07:41 - Only yours (Honey Silk)
beautiful poetry
April 22nd, 2018 07:37 - Song At The End Of The Road (Satishverma)
no comment
April 22nd, 2018 07:34 - Anxiety (Brie)
I got your message so I could not read your poem. this is you to yourself.
April 22nd, 2018 07:32 - Utilize Your Time Wisely (Brooklyn6timesplus)
freedom for all!
April 22nd, 2018 07:27 - Self-forgiveness (Jeremy Cohen)
stick it out. until....
witch is to say, give it time.
April 22nd, 2018 07:26 - Stuck (CeVi)
if I find a cure I\'ll let you know. please do the same for me.
April 22nd, 2018 07:23 - IN A COMMON THEME (Michael Edwards)
our ancestors will be pleased.
April 22nd, 2018 07:12 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #44: black visitor (Frank Prem)
with nothing else to do. we mix it up, and let it out.
fine write!
April 22nd, 2018 07:07 - humble boy.. (Lea cobain .)
the mystery of beauty.
April 22nd, 2018 07:04 - Keeping the Fire Going (Orchidee)
merry ole england
April 22nd, 2018 06:55 - Through his eyes (Stevievize)
fine rhythm in its narration
April 22nd, 2018 06:52 - Fixated (Lerynn34)
great feeling of love from one for the other.
April 22nd, 2018 06:48 - The Storm\'s Bass (Goldfinch60)
nature creates beautiful music.
April 22nd, 2018 06:46 - Beatific Sorrow (Nicholas Browning)
Ive been in misery so many times that whenever it passes through I just...
April 22nd, 2018 06:42 - know your worth (Infatuatedsoul)
fuck?
April 22nd, 2018 06:34 - Brave Heart (Kevin Michael Bloor)
onward to victory!
April 22nd, 2018 06:32 - SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
I hope this springtime will treat you well.
April 21st, 2018 04:31 - V (Queer-with-a-pen)
you are not alone
April 21st, 2018 04:29 - Silence with Somebody. (Goldfinch60)
you just described my life!
April 21st, 2018 04:24 - C21H23NO5 (Nat Muñoz)
sadness.
April 20th, 2018 15:34 - Dear Father, (LUNAFAUS)
this baffles me. I have no comment.
April 20th, 2018 12:29 - Highwayman (Saint Sinner)
if a man stood in the middle of the world with two roads each going in the...
April 20th, 2018 12:27 - Man in the Train Station (Caroline Elizabeth)
we\'re all human.
April 20th, 2018 12:20 - Nothing (Catrockspoet15)
some of us, but not always.
April 20th, 2018 12:18 - I Spy (Poetsinspire)
wonderful!
April 20th, 2018 12:16 - Welcome to life (Netashi)
it makes a great way of thinking things.
April 20th, 2018 12:14 - Definitions with in Everything (AllTheRandomThings)
the last two lines say it all.
April 20th, 2018 12:11 - Just Give It Your All (Brooklyn6timesplus)
much apprieciated 6
April 20th, 2018 12:09 - Me in past tense (MSA-19)
I wish for your victory.
April 20th, 2018 11:57 - The Crest (Noah)
all the words are right there on the mantle.
April 20th, 2018 11:50 - Popular People (For her)
I don\'t have to prove myself to anyone! and neither do you!
April 20th, 2018 11:48 - Distant Illusions (Darkstar)
you are a poet!
April 20th, 2018 11:44 - “Tired” (King Taurus)
peace be with you.
April 20th, 2018 11:42 - Waterfalls (Strain)
it shall be.
April 20th, 2018 11:41 - Tired (Sharda92)
I always feel the same way. find sanity in your insanity.
April 20th, 2018 11:39 - Discomfort (Queer-with-a-pen)
be patient, things always change. to put it another way, time is a great...
April 20th, 2018 11:36 - Blackness Of Moon (Satishverma)
I think it is great!
April 20th, 2018 11:32 - Fucking Attention Seekers (RhysPieces)
your poem is a great way to express it.we all have to suffer, some more...
April 20th, 2018 11:29 - Conflicted (Jal)
between me and you. you hit the nail right on the head. I hope you let me...
April 20th, 2018 11:10
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