Comments on community poems by onepauly
- COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
religious freedom!
July 9th, 2017 08:21 - Profanity. (Jaylenrene)
this early? how many have you had?
July 9th, 2017 08:09 - Unspoken Dream (David Grubb)
keep dreaming it will make it all come true.
July 9th, 2017 08:00 - Dignity (Jabberwocky)
good way to put it.
July 9th, 2017 07:40 - Lost souls (Renzi)
I was homeless many times. now I find the homeless on my computer. I never...
July 9th, 2017 07:38 - Feelings change (Aa Harvey)
what is true love?
July 9th, 2017 07:31 - Guilty (P.X. Vexxus)
tough one to get by. do we ignore it. when our innocence is at sake....
July 9th, 2017 04:34 - Heart Space (FredPeyer)
there you go. you have answered your own question. I really like this one!
July 9th, 2017 04:26 - midnight cigarette (Velvetlascivious)
the message is comfortable
July 9th, 2017 02:09 - Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60)
yeah, but you will finish the book?
books are good to. reading can let...
July 9th, 2017 02:04 - Cadavers (UncleShrew)
and death shall have no dominion.
July 9th, 2017 01:56 - Love (Katy Alvarez)
how true
July 8th, 2017 20:49 - Tiger (Jabberwocky)
mysteirous
July 8th, 2017 20:27 - I *ove You (Cyprian Van Dyke)
everything.
July 8th, 2017 20:24 - Black is Beautiful. (Jaylenrene)
they pushed around the red man as well. I\'m ashamed of my color.
July 8th, 2017 20:09 - okay. (ForeverAW)
its ok to be ok.
July 8th, 2017 20:03 - Please Recycle (TiffanyR)
preserve our planet for all generations
July 8th, 2017 19:56 - of edgeless storms (Heather T)
my birthday is in july.
July 8th, 2017 19:52 - Swamp (Augustus)
I like the nature part of it. I never read or watch politicians.
July 8th, 2017 19:49 - PainKillers (Joaquin Finn)
love it or leave it
July 8th, 2017 19:41 - My name is on a list (Gary Edward Geraci)
I\'m glad my name is not on a list like that.
62 year old virgin
July 8th, 2017 19:37 - Beginnings (Rebeccanunns)
sad
July 8th, 2017 19:19 - Control (AshleyT)
control yourself! beautifully written. don\'t fight to control yourself....
July 8th, 2017 04:39 - Is love selfish? (Malubotelho)
best poem I\'ve read in a long time. so full of meaning. I think it will...
July 8th, 2017 04:26 - Insomnia (Sada_bear)
I\'m not a doctor but I may have a few pointers. if you have to stay awake...
July 8th, 2017 04:21 - Mind (FredPeyer)
outstanding! I followed every line. the universe is endless and so are we.
July 8th, 2017 03:34 - That Sound. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m proud of you
July 8th, 2017 03:30 - A love Thats Found. (Kevin browne)
the most positively inspiring one yet, quite fulfilling. put it there.
July 8th, 2017 00:48 - You Have The Courage (Brooklyn6timesplus)
example? what are we going for?
July 8th, 2017 00:38 - Doubts In The Thought. (Kevin browne)
is there justice in the jungle?
life is not fair. but sometimes we are....
July 7th, 2017 21:00 - Society (Jaylenrene)
it makes me think twice
July 7th, 2017 19:08 - Multitasking or focus (Avigail)
variety is the spice of life. I think I heard that somewhere.
July 7th, 2017 16:24 - Passage (Butterfly Eyes)
beautiful as a butterfly wing.
July 7th, 2017 16:04 - Your Nature (David Grubb)
at last an uplifting poem.
July 7th, 2017 02:33 - Joy (GeraldineTaylor)
joy that wondrous joy !
July 7th, 2017 02:28 - Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60)
telepathical telepathic telepathy
telepathically telepathized
July 7th, 2017 02:08 - Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60)
we can work with the future but we cannot change it. no matter what we...
July 7th, 2017 02:04 - Defiance (FredPeyer)
may the difference be your guide.
July 7th, 2017 01:56 - I stayed Up For Three Years. (Kevin browne)
I study each line. and take my time. that way I am able to understand you...
July 7th, 2017 01:44 - You Have Found Yourself In A Trance (Brooklyn6timesplus)
hey there, I like the times when I pass into trance. it helps me solve...
July 6th, 2017 23:45 - Secret Love (Tony36)
seems to me you\'ve gotta boost your self confidence
July 6th, 2017 23:26 - Better Days. (Goldfinch60)
absoulutly, I have learned most things from trial and error. and it does...
July 6th, 2017 01:39 - A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer)
does that mean to erase everything above those three lines? sometimes what...
July 6th, 2017 01:27 - I lie too (Muhammad the Bully)
don\'t
July 6th, 2017 00:06 - Rainbow (Meno1972)
I\'ve seen many rainbows after the rain. even if their is no pot of gold...
July 5th, 2017 23:47 - The Journey to Loving Myself (Judy Booler)
you have my blessings
July 5th, 2017 23:37 - Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho)
I too get lonely.
July 5th, 2017 20:20 - Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho)
I am like the bird on that tree.
July 5th, 2017 20:19 - On a Bad Thought (Kevin browne)
your poem was great wonderfully worded. I never use punctuation in any of...
July 5th, 2017 20:15 - For you or for me? (Poetic Dan)
comfort yourself, and you will find what your after.
July 5th, 2017 19:44 - Beautiful (Tony36)
wonderful positive poem. we need more like this.
July 5th, 2017 19:25 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
I laughed long and hard. also I have all six seasons of the1950\'s on dvd....
July 5th, 2017 19:16 - The Perception Of Love. (Kevin browne)
wonderful poem. how do you do it?
July 5th, 2017 07:19 - The Co-Pilot (FredPeyer)
I thought the movie GI jane was pretty good.
she put them in their
July 5th, 2017 00:33 - Night Rhythms (Garry)
beautiful!
July 5th, 2017 00:29 - Father (Judy Booler)
I read your poem, and it is heartbreaking.
July 5th, 2017 00:27 - The Conch Shell (TiffanyR)
the sounds of the ocean are comforting. I listen to them online.
July 5th, 2017 00:17 - Others Think (Brandyngraham)
stick to your guns. (so to speak)
your already on the right track.
July 5th, 2017 00:13 - Take Me Home (Jamminblu)
wonderful! you have it!
July 5th, 2017 00:02 - CAN YOU HEAR ME (Kenzie2.0)
I have schizophrenia and I\'m going to be creamated
July 4th, 2017 23:58 - A Dream (Adrianna Kjeld)
your true friend is coming
July 4th, 2017 23:44 - The Anger Inside (Adrianna Kjeld)
do something that makes you feel good
July 4th, 2017 23:37 - Coffee and cigarettes (Adrianna Kjeld)
you are a great poet!
July 4th, 2017 23:34 - Oranges (Adrianna Kjeld)
the most positive poem I\'ve read I a very long time! great work!
July 4th, 2017 23:26 - Comparision (DD.)
we are all rich. we just don\'t know it.
July 4th, 2017 21:42 - Taking The World By Storm (Brooklyn6timesplus)
true, some people can do this. good poem.
July 4th, 2017 21:27 - What is Death? (Goldfinch60)
and death shall have no dominion
July 4th, 2017 18:14 - Scars (Malubotelho)
yes, meditation is able to help soften the scars we take with us in our...
July 4th, 2017 01:48 - Something On My Heart. (Kevin browne)
very emotional poem, I was deeply moved by your expertice in wording what...
July 4th, 2017 01:31 - The time has come I cant let go (Lost in Murphy)
carry on
July 3rd, 2017 22:11 - I will not change a word (Tony36)
great fucking words! lol!
July 3rd, 2017 21:56 - Beyond Existence. (Goldfinch60)
the black hole gets smaller and smaller. then disappears into oblivion....
July 3rd, 2017 21:28 - a father\'s love. (Ruth Fadairo)
the first line
July 3rd, 2017 21:07 - Fleetwood Mac - \"The Chain\" (ABPoetry Remix) (Abpoet18)
Fleetwood mac.
I have a cd. I used to have it on vyenal
or an album...
July 2nd, 2017 19:57 - What is love? (Xd_Blade)
the true meaning of love is sacrifice
July 2nd, 2017 19:46 - a father\'s love. (Ruth Fadairo)
I found one part of it shocking.
can you tell me which part?
July 2nd, 2017 19:42 - Adrift (Lost in Murphy)
beginners of poetry do the best job
July 2nd, 2017 19:36 - Equality (Saphira)
I had many male lovers as myself.
they all passed into the infinite.
so...
July 2nd, 2017 19:30 - For the sake of ourselves (Malubotelho)
revelation, most of the time that\'s what poets feel.
July 2nd, 2017 19:16 - Inner perspectives (Avigail)
a lot of story tellers! in one.
July 2nd, 2017 19:03 - The Clown (FredPeyer)
it reminds me of the clown in Stephen kings story called \"it\".
July 2nd, 2017 18:59 - I WILL NOT GIVE IN (Emotional girl)
lots of meaning
July 2nd, 2017 02:35 - Summer is Alive - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
alive and well
July 2nd, 2017 02:28 - The Voice Of God. (Kevin browne)
and death shall have no dominion
July 2nd, 2017 02:17 - Waiting for Silverfish (Augustus)
not just another fish story
July 1st, 2017 22:27 - The magic of poetry (Malubotelho)
yes poetry is a wonderful magic. I remember when I was starting to write...
July 1st, 2017 22:22 - The trust paradox (Avigail)
live and learn.
July 1st, 2017 21:27 - Morning Constitutional Imagination.... (P.H.Rose)
I always had something to read. even the toilet paper wrapping. lol
July 1st, 2017 21:24 - When God Woke up One Day. (Kevin browne)
high kevin,
I\'m going to keep a keen eye upon your work. you can and do...
July 1st, 2017 20:59 - Memory (FredPeyer)
I too find it easier on my mind when I go out among other people and they...
July 1st, 2017 20:01 - Little Joys. (Goldfinch60)
excellent!
you read my mind.
July 1st, 2017 19:25 - The First (BloodPho3nix)
you can be a victim of your thoughts or you can be a conqueror of them....
July 1st, 2017 18:32 - those tiny things (Avigail)
there are also dust mites
July 1st, 2017 05:05 - Time Continues On (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I am somebody and so are you.
July 1st, 2017 05:03 - Reap what I have sown (Poetic Dan)
it makes me feel sad because I have no daughter
July 1st, 2017 04:58 - Fly (Tony36)
feel the breeze.
July 1st, 2017 04:49 - Waiting (FredPeyer)
this poem speaks wisdom
July 1st, 2017 04:20 - Lost (BloodPho3nix)
it would make a good horror movie
keep scripting
July 1st, 2017 04:16 - Back in the Sixties. (Goldfinch60)
the 60\'s !!!!!!the 60\'s!!!!!! the 60\'s!!!!!!
July 1st, 2017 04:11 - Timeless task (Poetic Dan)
we can never be the whole person we are at any one time. lets work with...
June 29th, 2017 20:43
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