Comments on community poems by onepauly
- Riding the train (Daveyboyz)
I always get exhausted.
April 20th, 2018 09:08 - Remember that (Aa Harvey)
I\'ll remember
April 20th, 2018 09:02 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #42: Act-ed up (Frank Prem)
I do not trust doctors.
but i\'ll give them a chance
April 20th, 2018 08:56 - Comforting Consolings (Orchidee)
if you prepare the way of the lord.
I will follow.
April 20th, 2018 08:51 - Patch of Light (Abu Aeesh)
I have a benign prostate
and I still
don\'t know what it means?
April 20th, 2018 08:44 - Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death) (Lorna)
you should have called first.
magnificent!
April 20th, 2018 08:29 - Missed Pint. (Goldfinch60)
your poem reminded me of
my beer on Friday. for Friday is my only beer...
April 20th, 2018 04:09 - Onus of Living (Nicholas Browning)
Great Write
it means something
i\'ll take impassivly
April 20th, 2018 03:58 - THE EMPTY BEACH (Michael Edwards)
on a beautiful beach I am never lonely.
though your poem is quite...
April 20th, 2018 03:23 - Images on the Hammersmith and City Line (FineB)
I\'m American with a mother who was born in England. to tell you the truth...
April 16th, 2018 08:15 - Nuclear war. (Antonis)
I think people don\'t want to face
the inevidable
April 13th, 2018 20:28 - Serenity (Sylviasearcher)
you really don\'t need a key, or lock either. great write!
April 13th, 2018 07:31 - In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60)
you really like your music and your wife.
lucky.
April 13th, 2018 07:24 - Much Ado About Anything (Lorna)
the rain in spain goes merrily down the drain.
April 13th, 2018 07:20 - A breath of fresh air (Mol)
keep writing good stuff like this. you never know.
April 13th, 2018 04:55 - THE MIRROR (Yasu Na)
for some reason I like mirrors.
April 12th, 2018 22:45 - 6 Months missing (Amandajane39)
quite the poem. a lot of meaning.
April 12th, 2018 22:37 - I walk now (Lee Renard Caspian)
no rest for the weary.
April 12th, 2018 22:27 - A breath of fresh air (Mol)
has meaning and easy to read. I really LIKED IT.
April 12th, 2018 22:25 - Images on the Hammersmith and City Line (FineB)
quite unique
April 12th, 2018 13:23 - Timing (Noni)
not sure about this one.
April 12th, 2018 13:20 - Rock and roll (Tyler14)
ok.
April 12th, 2018 13:15 - THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL (Lasergraph)
I never read poems with a copywrite.
April 12th, 2018 13:13 - The Mariner (Grange_m)
plenty of space
for a state of grace.
April 12th, 2018 13:06 - Consensual Crucifixion (The 2 A.M Writer)
things change, with you I hope for the better.
April 12th, 2018 13:02 - Blissful Solus (Adam Shirley)
it will not be forever.
April 12th, 2018 12:56 - Franks Psychiatry 2 #34: after the ball (Frank Prem)
just be awake, sober does not have a definition.
April 12th, 2018 12:41 - 7 billion people (Mgl)
went right to my heart.
April 12th, 2018 12:34 - Lift Your Head Up High (Brooklyn6timesplus)
remember me?
still writing beautiful poetry I see.
April 12th, 2018 12:29 - A Little... (W c)
great, now try a big
April 12th, 2018 12:10 - Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden (Lorna)
better days are coming.
April 12th, 2018 09:28 - Regarding Mankind... (Gary Edward Geraci)
something always
April 12th, 2018 03:26 - Sacrifice (Satishverma)
the true meaning of love is sacrifice
April 12th, 2018 03:22 - Sacrifice (Satishverma)
I need someone to explain it to me.
April 12th, 2018 03:21 - Wiseman or Criminal? (Germanamericanchurch)
there is no champion or challenger. soul medicine is just what it is. if...
April 12th, 2018 03:18 - Transcendence (Daveyboyz)
my last experience with mescaline, an equal to lsd, was 30 years ago. if I...
April 12th, 2018 03:02 - Clouds in My Life. (Goldfinch60)
yes sir, this poem made me feel better then I was before I read it. and in...
April 12th, 2018 02:46 - coffee stained bones (Sugar Suicide)
simply put. very likable
April 12th, 2018 02:21 - The Shade Garden (Lorna)
springtime!
April 11th, 2018 05:11 - Kings Of Broken Hearts. (Kevin browne)
simply put
ha! ha!
April 11th, 2018 05:05 - DECEPTION. (Fay Slimm.)
HI FAY,
THIS IS NOT A WISH GRANTING WORLD
April 11th, 2018 04:58 - Not a Word. (Goldfinch60)
I really like the picture of the hippo.
ha! ha!
April 10th, 2018 04:22 - How To: Face Your Fears (A. F. Naturaliy)
something like that
April 9th, 2018 14:25 - An Apology (Sylviasearcher)
I think daveyboyz has it
with, once we relies what pathetic and flawed...
April 9th, 2018 09:53 - Flowers and Souls. (Goldfinch60)
did I recognize peter, paul, and mary.
this song is one of my favorites....
April 9th, 2018 09:30 - Passed On (W c)
and death shall have no dominion
April 8th, 2018 02:09 - Seeing My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
illuminated for sure
April 8th, 2018 02:03 - Stopping the Superfluous. (Goldfinch60)
WONDERFULL!
April 7th, 2018 18:48 - The Wonder of Music. (Goldfinch60)
maybe I shall sing you a sweet melody. what do you say to that?
HA HA....
April 3rd, 2018 18:44 - Although It\'s All I Can Remember. (Kevin browne)
worth something
February 4th, 2018 03:31 - Serendipity (FredPeyer)
beautiful! thanks fred
February 4th, 2018 03:14 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
very good faye. evening
July 30th, 2017 20:04 - The LGBT (DyingDreams)
what say you
July 30th, 2017 19:58 - A moment of regrets..... (P.H.Rose)
this was quite informative. the darkness does seek the light. good work!
July 30th, 2017 19:35 - Poetry (Anonymous18)
this poem in itself is remarkable, you have found the right words to put...
July 30th, 2017 19:27 - Intense Sometimes. (Kevin browne)
excellent poem kingkev101,
good or even better then the ones before. you...
July 30th, 2017 19:19 - Books? (Goldfinch60)
I know what you mean. when I\'m reading a good book I can go 12 hours on...
July 30th, 2017 02:40 - Alone (ThisVivian)
a poem that deserves a reward.
it will come.
July 30th, 2017 02:24 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
always did favor the countryside
good poem
July 30th, 2017 00:21 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
ill have to agree with Michael.
fred, keep on writing.
July 30th, 2017 00:16 - Keep Pushing Forward (Brooklyn6timesplus)
always an inspiration.
don\'t give up your poetry.
July 30th, 2017 00:10 - Ridiculous Renditions. (Kevin browne)
if you want to change your style that\'s your buissness. but ill say they...
July 29th, 2017 12:56 - Things that I delay (Avigail)
you show a good point.
July 29th, 2017 12:31 - Fear (FredPeyer)
I\'ve been their. good way to describe it.
July 29th, 2017 12:21 - Only Have Good Thoughts (Harsbars12281953)
if the star is an actor. is him/her. putting on an act or the real thing...
July 29th, 2017 12:13 - Stormy Weather (Brooklyn6timesplus)
work your way around or push right through. good poem
July 27th, 2017 22:50 - Understanding Death (Satishverma)
and death shall have no dominion
July 27th, 2017 22:46 - Lost Morning (WL Schuett)
man does not see with the eye alone but by the light which makes it...
July 27th, 2017 22:32 - Drawing Pins (Quirky)
keep a strong fan beside you always.
July 27th, 2017 19:07 - Is it wrong (Lakiea)
no your not wrong for that
July 27th, 2017 18:45 - My Smile (Mbird72)
undiscribable emotions.
July 27th, 2017 18:42 - Thank You (Dxmenxque)
this one let me feel a joy and comfort
July 27th, 2017 18:37 - My house in Budapest (Joaquin Finn)
deserves some sort of reward
July 27th, 2017 18:31 - Ken (Private poet)
I could feel love as I read this one.
July 27th, 2017 18:25 - You (Private poet)
I read a lot of poetry today and this is one of the few that deserves to...
July 27th, 2017 18:17 - I think I\\\\\\\'m hearing voices in my head (Kelvinedosa)
I hope you find what your looking for.
July 27th, 2017 16:24 - Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne)
I feel like nothing can compete with your words. I\'m a dry sponge soaking...
July 27th, 2017 16:16 - Decoding (Poetic Dan)
follow the unknown. I learn most things by trial and error. sometimes what...
July 27th, 2017 15:37 - Looking for my Mind (FredPeyer)
what say you. good poem fred
July 27th, 2017 14:17 - Marriage Vows (Sue.evans)
for the bride and groom we have the room.
July 25th, 2017 06:46 - Blue Skies (Daisychain)
if I lay on my back and look upwards blue sky puffy clouds lets me know we...
July 24th, 2017 23:03 - The Hard Times (Austin Harness)
true GOD is always their for all of us.
July 24th, 2017 20:02 - Thoughts (Lost Girl)
nothing left but open your mind and stare into space.
July 24th, 2017 19:15 - A New Ice Age (Pete the Petulant Poet)
I\'m old school myself. but ive killed viruses on computers.
July 24th, 2017 19:10 - Its you,it is (L.S.L)
wize, you should continue to write. its a good way to get answers
July 24th, 2017 19:06 - Dimensional Queries. (Kevin browne)
its so good of you to write such things. you certainly have a gift.
July 24th, 2017 18:56 - Begging Down on Broken Knees. (Kevin browne)
hello kevin , I wish I was more quick to understand. I\'m always slow but...
July 24th, 2017 17:56 - Looking forward (Rubers76)
spoken like a real human being. great dialog!
July 24th, 2017 17:35 - White Love (Down the rabbithole)
great way to put it. love of one for the other
July 24th, 2017 17:26 - I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho)
HELL IS NOT WHAT WE ARE AIMING FOR
July 24th, 2017 16:20 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
I wish I could get more stillness in my life
July 23rd, 2017 11:22 - The Comedian (Joel-Lilian)
going to or coming from
July 22nd, 2017 17:18 - Natures Love (DAE4u2c)
the weather?
July 22nd, 2017 17:14 - Perhaps (Malubotelho)
more then one?
July 22nd, 2017 17:09 - Affliction (Renzi)
you have many years ahead of you. some people don\'t have that.
July 22nd, 2017 12:12 - Satiated (LIGHT WARRIOR)
looking out for #1
July 22nd, 2017 12:07 - To face one\'s demons (Q)
I feel the terror in my mind is demons. but I cannot ask them to please go...
July 22nd, 2017 11:52 - I Ate Breakfast Outside this Morning (Hboo)
a lover of life
July 22nd, 2017 08:32 - Speak Words Of Encouragement (Brooklyn6timesplus)
yeah nice
July 22nd, 2017 08:24 - LITE (Onepauly)
just something to write on a Saturday morning
July 22nd, 2017 08:08
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