Comments on community poems by onepauly

• funny or sad (Avigail) I reach for two caffeine tablets when I get up. making coffee gets to...
  July 16th, 2017 10:58
• The 7 (Niallprideaux) it gets better, keep writing.
  July 16th, 2017 10:51
• time off (Onepauly) right where they grow it. south America. one thing I\'ve been wanting to...
  July 16th, 2017 06:48
• Incoming. (Fay Slimm.) great poem, can you swim? I feel best about horizon. next I like between...
  July 16th, 2017 06:31
• Paw prints in my life (Clairie840) I loved my cats, though their passing away really hurt. it took me years...
  July 16th, 2017 06:07
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) you are a true poet. reading this poem has got me going. the spelling of...
  July 16th, 2017 05:30
• Unfulfilled *TRIGGER WARNING* (Writerkg) time has a wonderful fulfilling through the hardest times keep your...
  July 16th, 2017 04:23
• A short letter (Xxxplicit) congradulations! I am so happy for you. who is supposed to give the cigar?...
  July 16th, 2017 04:16
• Music in my head (Poetic Dan) song and dance man good poem.
  July 16th, 2017 02:38
• Wall of Power. (Goldfinch60) was that a hit or a strike?
  July 16th, 2017 02:34
• LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) in god I trust. all others pay cash!
  July 16th, 2017 02:28
• I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer) left right left right left right. I\'m marching in a parade. macys...
  July 16th, 2017 01:43
• Memories (Ron parrish aka wordman) nice and even, your words
  July 16th, 2017 01:32
• Death (Domi) and death shall have no dominion
  July 16th, 2017 00:04
• Path (Serenity) a poem worth its way good poetry.
  July 15th, 2017 23:59
• Be Willing To Try (Brooklyn6timesplus) this is a poem that someone could learn from.
  July 15th, 2017 23:54
• Sleazy lover (Malubotelho) this one warmed me all over sometimes my emotions just pop up when I least...
  July 15th, 2017 23:34
• Alone (FredPeyer) this is truly amazing. poems like this why I joined my poetic side. its...
  July 15th, 2017 21:34
• The 7 (Niallprideaux) very likable. at least I like it.
  July 15th, 2017 20:19
• WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) looks like you like boats. maybe you could get one. gotta save though.
  July 15th, 2017 20:16
• Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60) very good theory. one of many possible ones. intresting
  July 15th, 2017 19:59
• Words. (SimoneAllen) shock to find out that way
  July 15th, 2017 14:25
• Fireflies (Nyoko_beautiful moon) what about sleep
  July 14th, 2017 14:25
• Have you found them (Kpomeroy4119) them
  July 14th, 2017 05:47
• I need you (Andreax21) one away.
  July 14th, 2017 05:43
• Letting Go (Kbreinich) both go separate way just let go.
  July 14th, 2017 05:35
• Wounded (SimoneAllen) are you a male or a female?
  July 14th, 2017 05:26
• Returning Home (Satishverma) wait till I get my gun
  July 14th, 2017 05:20
• Suicide Note (Jaylenrene) seems like the down side of life. next time use the up side of life. good...
  July 14th, 2017 05:17
• A Dream Is Lost. (Kevin browne) great long poem. do these words just come to you? you probably edit them...
  July 14th, 2017 00:28
• burn (Eldubbb) is this about a crazy person.?
  July 13th, 2017 18:16
• It\'s So Quiet Now (M. Mohon) is this poem about your father or a father.
  July 13th, 2017 18:07
• Have you ever ... (Nyoko_beautiful moon) I like the gentle wind through the trees in the summertime. you can hear...
  July 13th, 2017 18:00
• Your doubt (Xxxplicit) hey hey, onepauly here, just read this poem. sounds like you have had it...
  July 13th, 2017 17:28
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) I to am angry about white men who did this unspeakable act. I\'ve...
  July 13th, 2017 16:15
• My State of mind (Xxxplicit) and death shall have no dominion onepauly
  July 13th, 2017 15:45
• Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60) so very sad.
  July 13th, 2017 13:13
• Don\'t Look At Me (Tia Davis/テイア) bravo solitary woman.
  July 13th, 2017 13:11
• Hard Rain (Adri) just singing in the rain?
  July 13th, 2017 13:05
• Baby poems (Jabberwocky) quite the verses.
  July 13th, 2017 12:59
• Recipe for the End (Rpgiii) what a clear message to put on the net.
  July 13th, 2017 12:57
• The same sun (Chris frank) quite a good romantic tale. I wish I could have written it.
  July 13th, 2017 12:33
• The Future (Travon Toussiant) no one is able to change the future one ioda. no matter what we do.
  July 13th, 2017 12:10
• Paranoid delusioons of a madman (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.) wonderful delusions from a madman who is quite sane. his words will let...
  July 13th, 2017 12:01
• A Sad Poem (EnderGirl) a twister to the end. good mystery then at the end.
  July 13th, 2017 09:46
• Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer) I do like a good mystery. but you wrote how it ended. trying to help?
  July 13th, 2017 09:08
• Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer) short?
  July 13th, 2017 08:59
• The Time Gone By (Julzradams98) brilliant words! better autobiography.
  July 13th, 2017 08:42
• I hate you (Angel-baby28) the subject hate . time is a good healer
  July 13th, 2017 00:36
• As sweet as ever (Malubotelho) very lovely poem
  July 12th, 2017 16:35
• Pulling Plugs. (Kevin browne) hey kevin, just read your beloved poem. great as ever. I understand a...
  July 12th, 2017 10:17
• The Truth (EnderGirl) only a suggestion. if you want to sleep without the aid of drugs, try...
  July 12th, 2017 09:37
• Black and White (Katherine_Lemke) in our dreams we sometimes see pictures, and moving pictures. how do we...
  July 12th, 2017 07:55
• Chapters of Time (Migithehp) the future. it is what it is. it will always be like that.
  July 12th, 2017 07:39
• Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60) English printed words in books, that\'s what I like to see. with my...
  July 12th, 2017 07:04
• LOST IN CREATION OF MY MIND (Jwill52) keep concentrating on writing. it will do you a world of good. stop...
  July 12th, 2017 02:02
• They call me ego (Malubotelho) ego is something I cannot envision. I see the word but nothing registers....
  July 12th, 2017 01:41
• Clouds (Sue.evans) what a wonderful poem. this makes me glad to be alive!
  July 12th, 2017 00:57
• Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose) theirs a storm outside right now with all the thunder and lightning.
  July 11th, 2017 19:47
• Help is on the way dear (Joaquin Finn) there are many fish in the ocean.
  July 11th, 2017 19:06
• Deluded (Jabberwocky) funny and great really. keep up the writing. they might get longer.
  July 11th, 2017 18:52
• Vulnerability (Lost Girl) I have paranoia. and I\'m afraid to go out most of the time. I feel...
  July 11th, 2017 18:40
• Light in the Dark (JuliannRenee) man does not see with the eye alone but by the light which makes it...
  July 11th, 2017 18:21
• 2nd shift (Jamesbackus) this is the age
  July 11th, 2017 18:18
• Unconditionally (Moonflower15) good love story
  July 11th, 2017 18:04
• Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne) best one yet kingkev I learned a lot with this one. ill show you my...
  July 11th, 2017 17:54
• Our Love was the Forest (Baylee) a clearing in the forest
  July 11th, 2017 17:10
• Roses (BeautifulDisaster) although it is sad you accepted it. and that\'s the first step.
  July 11th, 2017 16:47
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) nice watercolor
  July 11th, 2017 16:37
• PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) peace be with you
  July 11th, 2017 02:12
• A cry for opinion (Malubotelho) the last line. we could be. but don\'t worry dear. we can never change the...
  July 10th, 2017 22:44
• callousness (Stephanie Showers) I don\'t know why but I let out a laugh at the end
  July 10th, 2017 22:32
• Hello doctor (S.louise) my father died of lung cancer. if I ever had that id look for the highest...
  July 10th, 2017 21:48
• Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus) this is sad
  July 10th, 2017 21:41
• My name is depression, cant you tell? (R.A.Brown) just want to say I am familier with depression. it is no joke others know...
  July 10th, 2017 21:36
• Would you believe me (Poetic Dan) I believe you.
  July 10th, 2017 11:30
• Ear (Aa Harvey) simple and sweet
  July 10th, 2017 11:26
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) that poem is music
  July 10th, 2017 11:02
• Hoping (FredPeyer) maybe she loved the birds. don\'t want to up one on you. (I hope) she...
  July 10th, 2017 09:19
• The Demon That Haunts Me (Moonflower15) sensitive
  July 10th, 2017 08:30
• Enslavement (Trev) enjoy yourself. your poem has meaning.
  July 10th, 2017 08:06
• Lonely (Andreax21) I get lonely only sometimes. because I have friends( spirits) in my head....
  July 10th, 2017 07:59
• Better (Sarahgerome) only better is better great poem. positivaly
  July 10th, 2017 07:43
• Youth (Ezra.mendoza) I remember being very young. and your poem strikes a bell well within me....
  July 10th, 2017 04:26
• Imperfection (Adrianna Kjeld) perfect and imperfect merge them
  July 9th, 2017 20:24
• Ephemeral Flowers (Noveyre) flowers look good in every spectrum
  July 9th, 2017 20:20
• Muerta (Wackyheartache4) paranoia, I have it as well. sometimes I cant even go outside. and before...
  July 9th, 2017 20:16
• I Have The Poets Will. (Kevin browne) each line is like a poem in itself reading slow brings the poem to life
  July 9th, 2017 17:35
• Her city of words (Abu Aeesh) some love story good poem
  July 9th, 2017 17:12
• Feelings change (Aa Harvey) you\'ve answered my question! love is so many things. and more.
  July 9th, 2017 15:08
• The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15) a true love story
  July 9th, 2017 12:19
• How is your energy today? (Avigail) just a normal day, if that\'s what you want to call it.
  July 9th, 2017 11:30
• Why? (JYNX) the head and the heart communicate always
  July 9th, 2017 11:16
• Truth seeker (Lost Girl) try anger managment
  July 9th, 2017 11:13
• Soul (Trev) you\'ll find a way out. you\'ve already started.
  July 9th, 2017 10:26
• A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose) splendid! let freedom ring!
  July 9th, 2017 10:17
• The love I never had (Xxxplicit) I was a homeless person so many times I cant count them. i lived in a tent...
  July 9th, 2017 09:46
• Is it bad (SorrowfullyHappy) you can fix it. time will tell.
  July 9th, 2017 08:31
• Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.) I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube
  July 9th, 2017 08:26
• Empty (Xxxplicit) get a job
  July 9th, 2017 08:23