Comments on community poems by onepauly

• the simple things (Theseachild) absoublutly maarvouless even though I did not spell it
  May 1st, 2018 11:27
• Rain Comes (W c) sure I was doing LSD and the patter on the tin roof was marvelous.
  May 1st, 2018 11:19
• Shell of Nothingness (Sinisterdragon321) very good poem. I will remember all of it.
  May 1st, 2018 10:01
• Stories (A. F. Naturaliy) most of us do not remember being in bed as a child. but its a life worth...
  May 1st, 2018 09:58
• Rain Comes (W c) wonderful!
  May 1st, 2018 09:54
• Eternal Love (Last Shadow) if or if not, we will.
  May 1st, 2018 09:45
• The Flower Moon - May (Lorna) just me and you in a clearing in a forest in the days of may.
  May 1st, 2018 09:35
• LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.) I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always...
  May 1st, 2018 07:21
• Righteousness Reality (Orchidee) I believe I\'m saved.
  May 1st, 2018 07:17
• Franks Psychiatry 4 #53: the Carer Meeting (Frank Prem) crazy people don\'t die!
  May 1st, 2018 07:14
• I Love You the Most (DarkNationLocal) you sound very sincere. its coming from your heart.
  May 1st, 2018 07:11
• crumble. (Ottxr18) truthfull
  May 1st, 2018 00:23
• 4-30-18 (Wilted) I like this one. we can be friends. just friends.
  May 1st, 2018 00:21
• The Forest (Jal) very good write former self
  May 1st, 2018 00:16
• Ignite That Spark (Brooklyn6timesplus) though they sink to the sea they shall rise again. sparkling poem 6
  May 1st, 2018 00:08
• I’m Done (Sharda92) if he crawled would you take him back?
  April 30th, 2018 23:38
• Numb (Naeners) experiment with your emotions. not to strong at first. together you will...
  April 30th, 2018 23:15
• Happiness (Netashi) I wish I had that feeling.
  April 30th, 2018 22:25
• Blink your Eyes (MLHnow) all things being equal, me and the universe are one.
  April 30th, 2018 22:16
• a skinny desire (Theseachild) excellent! if theres a will theres a way.
  April 30th, 2018 20:01
• Ocean (Bailey) lets hope the mystery never ends.
  April 30th, 2018 19:58
• Forest Prince (W c) it went right to my heart. good one.
  April 30th, 2018 19:50
• feelings #005 (Tumnus) there is no rest for the weary. it goes on.
  April 30th, 2018 19:47
• Mystery man Part:2 (Mystery1023) all humans need to love and be loved.
  April 30th, 2018 19:42
• \"Choices\" (Merissa) be patient a little while longer it takes time. you will answer your own...
  April 30th, 2018 19:36
• So When\'s the Revolution? (Liam Lawless) merry ole England.
  April 30th, 2018 09:54
• To My Nana (WhiteWolf23) and death shall have no dominion.
  April 30th, 2018 09:52
• BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.) spring! the best time of the year!
  April 30th, 2018 09:48
• Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60) wonderfully written! easily understood. fanfare for the common man. that...
  April 30th, 2018 09:44
• Creation Considerations (Orchidee) I need a glass of sherry. good poem.
  April 30th, 2018 09:07
• 1:30 in the morning (Sidqiehs) is it always 1:30?
  April 30th, 2018 09:03
• Bliss (Alexandraa) quite blissful.
  April 30th, 2018 08:41
• The First Law (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) and death shall have no dominion.
  April 30th, 2018 08:38
• Broken (Jaayx3) hopeless or hopefull?
  April 29th, 2018 20:54
• Nowheres (Satishverma) i\'d like a few more days in the sun.
  April 29th, 2018 20:50
• MASK (ZIGGY) its better then nothingness. good write.
  April 29th, 2018 20:42
• Our spirit never dies. (Antonis) and death shall have no dominion
  April 29th, 2018 20:33
• Affable And Friendly (Brooklyn6timesplus) positively awe inspirational
  April 29th, 2018 16:56
• We dare not (LAWLIET) the true meaning of love. is sacrifice.
  April 29th, 2018 16:53
• \"Why\" (King Taurus) look at yourself with their eyes. not them, you.
  April 29th, 2018 16:50
• Reminiscing at the Playground (Sandbone18) it went right to my heart.
  April 29th, 2018 16:38
• Bloody Machine (Liam Lawless) it does make you think! though I would not be able to know it unless I was...
  April 29th, 2018 16:36
• As I Lay Upon The Clouds (Ajon4wheels) sounds like paradise.
  April 29th, 2018 16:31
• today (Colem) the same day is the same. and much different
  April 29th, 2018 16:29
• Changing Shifts (W c) easy to read written to perfection.
  April 29th, 2018 16:26
• drowning (Theseachild)
  April 29th, 2018 16:23
• drowning (Theseachild) sometimes we are so much in pain, suicide is the only way out. my...
  April 29th, 2018 16:20
• My House Is Filled With Blues (Lanaevans) good meaning. not to serious that\'s a great part of poetry among...
  April 29th, 2018 16:01
• Mental break downs (Dysthymia) very good rhythm.
  April 29th, 2018 15:54
• The Only Reason (SilverXball) quit fooling around and feed your dog. I thought of suicide many times. if...
  April 29th, 2018 15:14
• Numb (SorrowfullyHappy) is it a substance?
  April 29th, 2018 04:12
• Untold (Noah) nicely put. one ya can understand.
  April 29th, 2018 04:09
• Franks Psychiatry 4 #51: a well-honed team (Frank Prem) humbly written it has class.
  April 29th, 2018 04:08
• Put The Fire Out (Poeta de Cabra) from the heart of the poet I really liked this one a lot!
  April 29th, 2018 03:56
• Diamonds of Life. (Goldfinch60) I take big vitamins about 4 for my stress I think its the best...
  April 29th, 2018 03:26
• Communion Capturings (Orchidee) I pray when I\'m in a bad situation. it works sometimes.
  April 29th, 2018 03:19
• Drowning (Dreamer14) excellent! the description was very easy to follow.
  April 29th, 2018 01:01
• Worse (Jaayx3) it gets better, give it time.
  April 28th, 2018 21:28
• Beating Around the (Love) Bush (Rrivera138) shows you got class.
  April 28th, 2018 21:20
• Girl, Your Beauty Is Captivating (Brooklyn6timesplus) you are happy.
  April 28th, 2018 21:17
• The Death of Character (Lucaso) its a long story. do you want to hear it?
  April 28th, 2018 21:14
• Story of a wish (Lemons poetry) wonderful story.
  April 28th, 2018 21:03
• The hurt you caused! (Sharda92) touching. I liked it you\'ve out did your self
  April 28th, 2018 20:58
• A Journey Of A Tear Drop (Ajon4wheels) excellent! I enjoyed this one. keep writing
  April 28th, 2018 20:55
• Candle (inspirational) (Liberty_Shadows) nicely written.
  April 28th, 2018 14:48
• Desire pt1 (Wild fire) yea, read the book at another time
  April 28th, 2018 14:44
• Dread (Christina8) there are many remedies for anxiety. find the one for you. good...
  April 28th, 2018 14:41
• I\'m Keeping An Eye Out For Every Girl In The World (Noah Malice) look and you shall receive.
  April 28th, 2018 14:38
• The Rabbit on The Lawn (Hrbwoodb) springtime is the right time.
  April 28th, 2018 14:35
• At The Lake (W c) i\'d like to go to that lake.
  April 28th, 2018 14:31
• Picking myself up (Nuana) time is a great healer.
  April 28th, 2018 09:40
• my father’s eyes (Theseachild) this was very good I will always love my father. he\'s gone to heaven...
  April 28th, 2018 09:14
• Don’t Read GQ! (Gary Edward Geraci) nice try.
  April 28th, 2018 09:06
• burn your dead eyes on a pyre of bones (Abora) worth reading good job.
  April 28th, 2018 09:03
• Love, Hate, and Truth (The Ex Machina) one can turn to the other quite quickly.
  April 28th, 2018 04:32
• WILD LOVE👁💋 (YoursTruly9) live, love, and learn.
  April 28th, 2018 04:30
• The Lady Grey (Kevin Michael Bloor) good poetry is always something to smile about.
  April 28th, 2018 04:27
• Franks Psychiatry 4 #50: this somebody\'s boy (Frank Prem) certainly hard to be a man sometimes. trials and tribulations.
  April 28th, 2018 04:24
• Expectant Eschatology - Epistles of Peter Series - 11 (Orchidee) don\'t have to ram the castles gate to sieze, just be you and it come with...
  April 28th, 2018 04:18
• Contentment in Wine. (Goldfinch60) an evening at the opera. good description of that man.
  April 28th, 2018 04:10
• After Death (Poeta de Cabra) and death shall have no dominion.
  April 28th, 2018 00:32
• My First Love (Thatsilentgirl) really the first?
  April 28th, 2018 00:28
• No Shoes on His Feet (MARY Swillum) maybe we could get him some shoes. good one.
  April 28th, 2018 00:23
• This Was Love (Satishverma) just open the door.
  April 28th, 2018 00:19
• irritable bowel syndrome exacerbated courtesy of prunes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) excuse me. I\'ve got to take a poop.
  April 27th, 2018 18:40
• Shattered (AJ) the door is not there anymore. but a threshold.
  April 27th, 2018 18:37
• that road... (Lemons poetry) go all the way around the world and find yourself. all the way around.
  April 27th, 2018 18:35
• A star out of reach (Jordy L G) a genuine poet at last! keep writing. it is its own reward.
  April 27th, 2018 18:30
• Locked Eyes (Masking) she knows.
  April 27th, 2018 18:23
• The Maple Tree (Sepala Weliwitigoda) always happy to meet a good poet theirs not to many
  April 27th, 2018 16:12
• A poet (Netashi) thank you.
  April 27th, 2018 13:37
• Spring (Christina8) springtime surely is the best season. and after a long cold winter.
  April 27th, 2018 13:31
• Up in Flames (Edthepoet) drunken words don\'t mean much. very good way to describe it.
  April 27th, 2018 13:29
• Have The Strength And Courage (Brooklyn6timesplus) always good to hear from you 6
  April 27th, 2018 13:25
• Softly Gone Mad (Syd) great poetry syd!
  April 27th, 2018 10:59
• Promises Kept (Kurt Philip Behm) yes, music is good for the soul.
  April 27th, 2018 10:51
• Sunsets (Broken_kingdom) you\'ll be their. go meet yourself. positivly
  April 27th, 2018 10:50
• Free-Verse Poem: (Merissa) newly now. and forever afters.
  April 27th, 2018 10:46
• LOST AFFECTIONS (David.A-J) very inspiring! you are a poet. keep writing with an open mind.
  April 27th, 2018 10:43
• lies (Gabriella) church bells?
  April 27th, 2018 10:38