Comments on community poems by onepauly
- Seeking Soul (Orchidee)
orchidee, can you answer me one question? is their really a god? my father...
May 6th, 2018 03:12 - The Old Man by the River. (Goldfinch60)
you certainly know whats good in poetry.
marvelous!
May 6th, 2018 02:55 - WHIRLING ROUND (Resa71)
I\'m happy for you.
May 5th, 2018 20:05 - Cactus Cafe (Gary Edward Geraci)
sounds like you had a good breakfast.
ha! ha!
May 5th, 2018 19:59 - Pretty blue eyes (Prettyblueeyes2903)
blue eyes are for blond women.
May 5th, 2018 19:55 - Whispers (Finley Fire)
I never found an animal
that felt sorry for itself.
good one!
May 5th, 2018 19:48 - 5-5-18 (Wilted)
great! easy to read.
and understand.
May 5th, 2018 19:46 - The urge never goes away (Theskyisnotblue)
you could take someone with you.
its up to you.
May 5th, 2018 19:43 - She Won\'t Wake Up (Elizabethshadow)
they shall have stars at
elbow and foot.
May 5th, 2018 19:40 - Mountain’s Call (Caroline Elizabeth)
your destiny will find you.
good one.
May 5th, 2018 19:31 - I Am Free (Ajon4wheels)
is it another real person?
or is it your other self. we are all dual in...
May 5th, 2018 19:28 - The ..\"CON$TITUTION\" .....Didn\'t Include You. (O.G. Tone)
I know it is hard. and you feel strongly about it. a loving father you...
May 5th, 2018 19:22 - Darkest Is The Night (W c)
we shall have stars at
elbow and foot.
May 5th, 2018 19:16 - You Open Your Eyes (Brooklyn6timesplus)
splendid!
May 5th, 2018 19:12 - Shatteted (Sandbone18)
think positive!
May 5th, 2018 10:56 - my assistant (Onepauly)
I cant believe it!
I fixed it!
ha! ha!
May 5th, 2018 10:45 - SMILING IS A LIE (Turtle)
sometimes crying helps clear the mind of negative emotions.
May 5th, 2018 10:28 - Blue Dreams (MP Martinez)
the dreams may be blue.
but reality is green.
May 5th, 2018 10:20 - it chains me to the floor (Lemons poetry)
you can save yourself.
May 5th, 2018 10:17 - Refuge Reassurance (Orchidee)
Russia has the nuclear capability to destroy the whole world two times...
May 5th, 2018 10:13 - Impossible Tamed. (Goldfinch60)
it must be possible.
ha! ha!
May 5th, 2018 10:05 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #57: between ridiculous (Frank Prem)
tough call.
May 5th, 2018 10:00 - Second Chance Hope (Cinderella_Pixie)
its always good to have a heart.
ha! ha!
May 5th, 2018 09:51 - LANTURNES BY THREE (Michael Edwards)
keep going.
May 5th, 2018 09:48 - The Syntax (Satishverma)
the only thing I can see is try.
May 4th, 2018 20:37 - Key of Sands (WL Schuett)
the journey
is never over.
May 4th, 2018 20:33 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 56: from long black shoelaces (Frank Prem)
we cant save them all.
sad.
May 4th, 2018 20:23 - Life Is Hard For Us All (Brooklyn6timesplus)
just like one day at a time.
ha! ha!
May 4th, 2018 20:19 - On Raven\'s Wings (Antoinette)
the true meaning of love
is sacrifice.
May 4th, 2018 20:07 - Lost In Her Made-Up World (Ajon4wheels)
we all need attention love.
May 4th, 2018 20:04 - What A Star You Are (Natashalovely678)
you still can be.
May 4th, 2018 19:58 - Thinking of you (Shayl)
true love.
May 4th, 2018 19:53 - Another Year Older (\"Carter Wills\")
likeable.
May 4th, 2018 19:51 - \'57 Chevy (W c)
what a car!
May 4th, 2018 10:41 - Reflection (Mj_santos)
somebodys paranoid!
May 4th, 2018 10:40 - Disheartened (Sandbone18)
prey and predator alike.
May 4th, 2018 10:33 - No Longer Daddy\'s Girl (Gabriella)
what a story.
May 4th, 2018 10:30 - Love (Tyler Standard)
I lived on the third floor in my first apartment and loved sitting on...
May 4th, 2018 10:27 - The Tears of Lean On Pete (Lorna)
I do watch a lot of tear jerkers
that bring me to tears.
I know their...
May 4th, 2018 10:21 - CHANGES. (Fay Slimm.)
we all have to accept changes
if we like them or not.
the thing to do is...
May 4th, 2018 10:16 - Passion, Clichés, and No Man\'s Land (Caroline Elizabeth)
with time all things do change.
the only thing is
we cant change...
May 4th, 2018 10:10 - dreams (Turtle)
there is a time to lay down
and also a time to get up.
May 4th, 2018 10:03 - Quartet for the End of Time. (Goldfinch60)
your soul lets it in.
listening with great interest.
May 4th, 2018 09:59 - Praise Perpetual (Orchidee)
do we put our hands together when we pray?
May 4th, 2018 09:48 - Reciprocal (Noah)
I agree with Goldfinch60.
May 4th, 2018 09:45 - Broken (Angel-baby28)
think positive!
May 4th, 2018 09:43 - Tall Trees (Abu Aeesh)
the breeze in the trees whispers
the sound of country miles.
May 4th, 2018 09:01 - straw bery (Lemons poetry)
who said life is not a bowl of cherries.
I have at least one can of...
May 4th, 2018 08:58 - Let The Voices That You Hear (Brooklyn6timesplus)
like being the captain at the helm.
May 4th, 2018 08:48 - Best Friend (Shayl)
keep going.
May 3rd, 2018 14:14 - Misunderstood (Cutelilcardinal)
it can be a dangerous world.
May 3rd, 2018 14:13 - I Done Fucked Up (Liam Lawless)
it does happen when we drink.
I know from personal experience.
May 3rd, 2018 14:10 - Breath (Caroline Elizabeth)
we all breath the same oxygen.
are we together with this?
its all around...
May 3rd, 2018 13:53 - This might not be mine (Netashi)
you are brave.
May 3rd, 2018 13:46 - The One (Tyler Standard)
very romantic.
May 3rd, 2018 13:42 - It’s... Complicated? (M.E.M.)
I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like...
May 3rd, 2018 13:40 - Pretending (Christina8)
only if you want it to.
May 3rd, 2018 13:30 - The Preacher (Edthepoet)
even when you choose you don\'t choose. you cant. just pretend you can.
May 3rd, 2018 13:28 - childhood love (Theseachild)
ha! ha! humorus
May 3rd, 2018 13:13 - A Fishing Day (W c)
likeable
May 3rd, 2018 13:09 - Dreaming (Sandbone18)
simple, a start
May 3rd, 2018 13:06 - Millennium Bridge - LONDON (FineB)
wonderful way you described it.
May 3rd, 2018 13:04 - Wings (Marlenawood)
I\'m so sorry.
May 3rd, 2018 12:49 - A letter to my dream never brought to fruition (Compass96)
death shall have no dominion.
May 3rd, 2018 12:45 - a well written father (Queer-with-a-pen)
at least you can dream.
and write.
you would not be the only one.
May 3rd, 2018 12:32 - Happy? #28319 (Thoff1)
by all means.
be yourself.
May 3rd, 2018 07:26 - Have A Heart Of Gold (Brooklyn6timesplus)
its nice to feel needed.
May 3rd, 2018 07:23 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
words come to me
that be free.
May 3rd, 2018 07:20 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #55: what happened (Frank Prem)
human interest that be sad.
May 3rd, 2018 07:17 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
you did it again!
a masterpiece!
May 3rd, 2018 07:12 - Ascents Acclaimings (Orchidee)
spring water in a desert.
quite uplifting
May 3rd, 2018 07:07 - ON THE RUN. (Fay Slimm.)
this is something.
to enjoy city life.
among its negative aspects.
May 3rd, 2018 07:04 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
sounds like a natural tale.
enjoyed it.
May 3rd, 2018 06:52 - Commotion (Lee Renard Caspian)
the past in the present.
May 2nd, 2018 23:34 - UNFORGETTABLE (Laura🌻)
positive.
May 2nd, 2018 23:29 - My Sister (Shayl)
simple and light.
the mark of a true poet.
May 2nd, 2018 23:25 - JUST ME (Broken_kingdom)
and death shall have no dominion.
May 2nd, 2018 23:22 - My House is my Prison (Kingdaniel)
with us by its side.
May 2nd, 2018 23:18 - Fall (Hmarie16)
forgive me, I have doubts.
I agree with lee
keep fighting.
May 2nd, 2018 23:15 - Sunrise (John Prophet)
until the next time.
very satisfying
May 2nd, 2018 23:11 - Purple Hulls (W c)
thank-you for your good nature.
and wisdom. I enjoyed this one a lot.
May 2nd, 2018 23:03 - Judgement And Justice (Orchidee)
there are many religions
but only one god.
May 2nd, 2018 21:06 - ONCE HONED (Michael Edwards)
this one goes on.
there is no end.
May 2nd, 2018 21:00 - Franks Psychiatry 4 # 54: and the hell with the papers (Frank Prem)
self-love is not selfish.
in order to love others
one must first love...
May 2nd, 2018 20:55 - Missing Conversation. (Goldfinch60)
excellent!
May 2nd, 2018 20:49 - You won\'t forget me (Marlenawood)
I really don\'t understand it, did you lose him?
May 2nd, 2018 20:43 - Deep Distress (Kitcat)
there are many ways to alter consciousness .
these days once in a while...
May 2nd, 2018 18:32 - My father the stranger.... (P.H.Rose)
I\'m sorry to say my own father died after suffering with lung cancer.(he...
May 1st, 2018 18:25 - Escape route (Theskyisnotblue)
you are not alone.
I also have anxiety.
the thoughts in my...
May 1st, 2018 18:10 - On a naked caprice (Poetae Opus)
we cannot change the future.
we can only pretend we can
May 1st, 2018 18:01 - Headstone Of Sorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
the bones picked clean.
the clean bones gone.
we shall have stars
at...
May 1st, 2018 17:51 - Only Human (Lionheart)
ABSOULUTLY WONDERFUL!
THIS IS WHAT I LIVE FOR
each and every day. I\'m...
May 1st, 2018 17:40 - Fuck You (Ajon4wheels)
FUCK YOU TOO
HA! HA!
GREAT POEM.
ITS EASY TO UNDERSTAND.
May 1st, 2018 17:32 - Empty but fine (Netashi)
evil is within all of us.
some more than others.
but whose to judge....
May 1st, 2018 17:28 - Headstone Of Sorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
I don\'t want to be buried
i\'ll accept creamation.
then my brother...
May 1st, 2018 14:19 - Battle cry (Gabriella)
you are the only one
that knows
of your invincibility
May 1st, 2018 14:13 - Ugh, Feelings (Azura Nightsong)
I like the part
the past will not repeat itself.
only memories in our...
May 1st, 2018 14:11 - Murder Me (Shayl)
you\'ll find another way
May 1st, 2018 14:05 - Moments (Christina8)
you expressed it
perfectly.
May 1st, 2018 13:29 - Roman Culture in Britain (in 2 parts) (Jhe)
there are many religions
but only one god.
May 1st, 2018 13:05
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