Comments on community poems by onepauly
- KNOCK KNOCK (Michael Edwards)
lucky!
November 17th, 2018 02:24 - Mantovani (Goldfinch60)
music stirs the soul.
November 17th, 2018 02:20 - TRANSFORMATION. (Fay Slimm.)
very colorful .
November 17th, 2018 02:16 - THE DEWS OF DAWN (Michael Edwards)
a love story?
if its not
I love the morning dew
in the summertime.
November 17th, 2018 02:08 - Pendant Power. (Goldfinch60)
now they can manufacture
diamonds from carbon!
ha! ha!
November 15th, 2018 04:01 - Passion Prophecies (Orchidee)
in hardship we reconsider thee oh lord.
November 15th, 2018 03:56 - Seasonals (Michael Edwards)
nicely put.
November 15th, 2018 02:07 - My heart can’t help it (Drea)
quite heartwarming.
November 14th, 2018 17:33 - Her Beauty - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
so wonderfully mild.
and strong.
November 14th, 2018 17:29 - Worries On My Mind (W c)
don\'t worry
be happy
is in a song I once heard.
so keep in tune.
November 14th, 2018 17:26 - Who are you? (Pldabbs)
like if you see a bald man, you have an idea about him. if he had long...
November 13th, 2018 03:31 - STRANGENESS. (Fay Slimm.)
I am overwhelmed
by how good it is.
November 13th, 2018 03:25 - Dreams (Christina8)
your poem brings me a positive feeling.
November 13th, 2018 03:22 - Addiction (Kat1)
I know what your describing in this poem. its very, very close to what I...
November 13th, 2018 03:19 - The Corner of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
you are getting better all the time!
lol!
November 13th, 2018 03:06 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
by far,
your best yet!
November 13th, 2018 03:01 - Remembrance References (Orchidee)
thanks for shareing.
November 11th, 2018 02:56 - What Integrity. (Goldfinch60)
Great song!
November 11th, 2018 02:54 - Frames (Gary Edward Geraci)
interesting.
November 11th, 2018 02:45 - RIOJA (Michael Edwards)
sounds tempting. lol
November 11th, 2018 02:40 - The Guns Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
I have a documentary dvd collection
of that war. I have 95...
November 11th, 2018 02:29 - Hangover (G84)
probably till the next one.
good going.
October 8th, 2018 04:09 - SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL (Michael Edwards)
and return I hope.
October 8th, 2018 04:06 - New Family. (Goldfinch60)
what a beautiful baby.
among other things
you must be proud.
October 8th, 2018 04:01 - Pondering Perusal (Orchidee)
love
received and transmitted.
October 8th, 2018 03:58 - SUNDAY DEMANDS. (Fay Slimm.)
sunday,
the last day of the week
and the beginning of a new one.
October 8th, 2018 03:54 - Praise - Machowl/Chowl (Orchidee)
loved the song!
October 7th, 2018 12:43 - Grand wisdom of love (Poetic Dan)
it is wise to feel love.
October 7th, 2018 12:27 - Infinite Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
wonderful! what a beautiful way to describe spirit forever
October 7th, 2018 12:18 - Let Love Live Forever. (Kevin browne)
very good! you surely are a poet of my heart. I felt a lot of passion,...
October 7th, 2018 12:15 - Stronger (Christina8)
fantastic rythme.
I frequently remind myself
that I must take care of...
October 7th, 2018 01:04 - Life Is A Game (W c)
you are truly a poet.
October 7th, 2018 00:57 - SHORELINE (Michael Edwards)
described with great meaning
October 7th, 2018 00:54 - Universal language (Poetic Dan)
quite thought provoking.
September 19th, 2018 11:01 - Heaven Help Us All. (Kevin browne)
couldn\'t have wrote it better myself.
so much dedication.
September 19th, 2018 10:55 - Showers For Flowers (W c)
the showers
are heavens tears
upon the flowers.
they are so...
September 19th, 2018 03:24 - OUCH (Michael Edwards)
ha! ha! ha! ha!
September 19th, 2018 03:19 - The Day Begins. (Goldfinch60)
ha! ha!
have a good day!
September 19th, 2018 03:10 - God on our side (Orchidee)
God is on our side.
September 19th, 2018 03:07 - Team Player (W c)
why not?
its just a game.
September 18th, 2018 02:37 - HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN (Michael Edwards)
simple and sweet.
September 18th, 2018 02:34 - Prayer of Poor and Needy (Orchidee)
your lord.
September 18th, 2018 02:33 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
to tell you the truth, I know nothing of this game.
still,...
September 18th, 2018 02:29 - Just Let Me Cry. (Kevin browne)
so sorry to hear of your loss.
September 14th, 2018 04:42 - A Green Thumb (W c)
I remember I had a garden when I was 16 years old. my spiecialty was...
September 14th, 2018 04:37 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
I agree.
and did you know a squid will eat anything? even rocks.
September 14th, 2018 03:21 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
yes,
salvation flowing whole and free.
very good.
September 14th, 2018 03:18 - Time Giver. (Goldfinch60)
this poem itself is as precious
as the one who wrote it.
a fine piece of...
September 14th, 2018 03:13 - Veritas (Senryu #1) (Laura🌻)
I better speak the truth.
September 10th, 2018 00:47 - SOME (MORE) 575s (Michael Edwards)
I could not have put it better.
wonderful!
September 10th, 2018 00:46 - To Take The Steps (W c)
that is wonderful, your higher power at your side. I also joined AA when I...
September 10th, 2018 00:33 - Harrowed World. (Goldfinch60)
yes sir,
music is also the best medicine.
try it!
September 10th, 2018 00:18 - Caution...I think? More from my soul (Poetic Dan)
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
September 10th, 2018 00:14 - Refuge (Christina8)
a love story. cherished by many.
September 10th, 2018 00:09 - First for a while... A conversation with time. (P.H.Rose)
wonderful rhythm!
its been a while!
onepauly
September 9th, 2018 23:58 - THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN (Michael Edwards)
its all with capitol gain.
September 9th, 2018 01:06 - Mom\'s Greenhouse (W c)
the greenery around it is.
very wonderful noticeable.
inside and...
September 9th, 2018 01:03 - It\'s Good To Be Back On The Road Again. (Kevin browne)
a most fun read, you really know how to write them. ive been thinking of...
September 9th, 2018 00:55 - Blue Silence (Lorna)
excellent!
it is very meaningful.
I have two cd\'s from
simon and...
September 9th, 2018 00:32 - In the Beginning (Gary Edward Geraci)
to me,
the word subdue
feels ominous.
September 9th, 2018 00:24 - PRAGMATIC REALISM (Michael Edwards)
a fine way to introduce
ideology.
September 7th, 2018 02:17 - A Cat For The Family (W c)
ive had two cats in my life
now they are memories.
I wish I could have...
September 7th, 2018 02:06 - Scars (W c)
and it go\'s on.
great write!
September 7th, 2018 01:48 - Lightness Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
I have to say,
I haven\'t read a better one yet.
September 7th, 2018 01:25 - Lateness Prevailed. (Goldfinch60)
personally, I prefer caffeine tablets.
been taking them for 45...
August 29th, 2018 13:08 - Bushy Tail (W c)
I suffer disgrace
for shooting two
of them in the deep woods
when I was...
August 28th, 2018 22:00 - PLASTIC WASTE (Michael Edwards)
good enough.
August 28th, 2018 21:55 - Abstract. For Michael Edwards. (Goldfinch60)
euphoria.
great word
if you feel it.
August 28th, 2018 21:53 - FINALITY. (Fay Slimm.)
and death shall have no dominion.
August 28th, 2018 21:50 - Pyramids Raised The Roof. (Kevin browne)
Russia has enough nuclear missiles
to destroy the earth 2 times...
August 28th, 2018 21:35 - Machined Lives. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know the future
but I feel it.
August 27th, 2018 02:55 - No better lesson than to be open to the message (Poetic Dan)
when we do one.
we often say
i\'ll do you one better.
August 26th, 2018 22:14 - Miserable Man. (Goldfinch60)
also, I liked the music video, it made me feel safe.
August 26th, 2018 22:08 - Miserable Man. (Goldfinch60)
some days that\'s all it is.
August 26th, 2018 22:04 - Record Players Are Best (W c)
absolutely ! I remember my records and record player like it was...
August 26th, 2018 21:57 - Opportunity. (Goldfinch60)
ha! ha! instead of going over the wall,
go through it.
August 23rd, 2018 02:58 - CLEAR CONSCIENCE (Michael Edwards)
short and bittersweet.
August 22nd, 2018 15:08 - For Finches (W c)
I got the deeper meaning of the poem.
lots of people eat in soup...
August 22nd, 2018 15:04 - Words,, (Goldfinch60)
eternity,
now theirs a word I like.
August 22nd, 2018 14:54 - Words,, (Goldfinch60)
ha! ha!
I have two cd\'s
of the moody blues.
at the top of my list with...
August 22nd, 2018 14:48 - Words,, (Goldfinch60)
eternity,
now theirs a word I like.
August 22nd, 2018 14:41 - NEWNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
you truly are a fine poet Fay.
August 22nd, 2018 14:36 - O\'Reilly\'s Genius. (Goldfinch60)
have you heard the story of
alladdin and his lamp?
I just wish, he can...
August 19th, 2018 18:50 - THE EARLY BIRD (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards)
just like,
a robin redbreast hopping about
looking for a worm to come...
August 19th, 2018 02:38 - O\'Reilly\'s Genius. (Goldfinch60)
ha! ha! ha! excellent!
as a child I read every one of grimms fairy tales.
August 19th, 2018 02:33 - Paper Airplanes (W c)
learning the physics of flight
should be a part of school work.
who\'s...
August 19th, 2018 02:23 - The Fall (Used)
and death shall have no dominion.
they shall have stars at elbow and...
August 12th, 2018 21:06 - Moments Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
I fixed my mistake.
August 12th, 2018 21:00 - Na na na na Na na na na BatDan (Poetic Dan)
quite the story.
did it really happen?
August 12th, 2018 20:47 - trash fire at alcatraz (Abora)
maybe that\'s why they say
ashes to ashes.
August 12th, 2018 04:35 - Fireflies (W c)
finally, a poem that brings light to my heart!
August 12th, 2018 04:32 - HE THOUGHT (Michael Edwards)
I laughed out loud
with this one
lol!
August 12th, 2018 04:20 - Moments Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
wait one moment.
August 12th, 2018 04:18 - Sanddune Solitude (Sylviasearcher)
a real poem.
August 7th, 2018 03:15 - A Dangling Minnow (W c)
ha! ha! I found tons of lures
fishing in my childhood.
wonderful!
August 7th, 2018 02:44 - DEADLY INTENT. (Fay Slimm.)
the grace of flight is truly wonderful.
August 7th, 2018 02:38 - THE FLY (Michael Edwards)
simple.
truly a good poem.
August 7th, 2018 02:33 - Firm Foundation (Orchidee)
my father suffered more then
jesus Christ on the cross.
he is my...
August 7th, 2018 02:30 - Sunday Afternoon. (Goldfinch60)
sounds like you were having a good time. I wish I could be like...
August 7th, 2018 02:25 - I declare (Poetic Dan)
I like the part where it says
unconditional love.
August 4th, 2018 03:25
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