Comments on community poems by chinaaliciarivera
- My Thoughts (Dakota)
Your writing is interesting and i love the rhyming. Nice. Keep on writing....
October 4th, 2017 16:33
- Arrival (Dakota)
I liked it. π π π π
October 4th, 2017 16:31
- Floating Underwater (Kate)
Lovely. Keep writing. π π β€ π
October 4th, 2017 16:26
- Hallucinations uncovered by woman, in illustration (Kate)
This is interesting. The ending is kind-of funny also, it made me chuckle....
October 4th, 2017 16:26
- Father Almighty (Writings From The Unknown13)
I love this. It is always good to seek and talk to God. You are on a good...
October 4th, 2017 16:22
- Decisions, Decisions Everywhere (DeviLove)
Interesting write. Yeah sometimes making decisions can be tough. Just make...
October 4th, 2017 16:17
- In The Garden (DeviLove)
Practice meditation and clear your mind. It is good to clear your mind...
October 4th, 2017 16:15
- Steak Knife (LukeCoomer)
Well. This is quite interesting. π π β€π
October 4th, 2017 16:00
- Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez)
Wonderful. Writing about family is a good subject. I am happy for you. It...
October 4th, 2017 15:57
- Halloween (Alexiss.111)
Lovely write. I very much liked it. ππβ€π
October 4th, 2017 15:53
- The Sun and The Serpent (Skyebellasario)
Interesting. Keep it up. π π β€
October 4th, 2017 15:51
- The Shaman in Us (Germanamericanchurch)
Interesting. β€πππ
October 3rd, 2017 22:30
- I am not a potato (Germanamericanchurch)
Oh my Gawd. This made me laugh. I didn\'t know about the potato. Ohhh......
October 3rd, 2017 22:28
- Would you.... (Crow.)
Kind of sad, but, interesting writing-wise. Keep writing. β€ π π...
October 3rd, 2017 22:26
- Music (Crow.)
Beautiful. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:23
- How I pray (Stephanie Showers)
Prayer is always a good thing. β€πππ
October 3rd, 2017 22:22
- Invisible goodbye (Stephanie Showers)
True that. Good write. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:20
- The Ocean I Am (Hartless)
The spelling errors really take away from the beauty of this poem. Please...
October 3rd, 2017 22:19
- Gentle Breeze (John Prophet)
Yes it\'s true. Nicely written. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:14
- It Approaches (John Prophet)
Nice. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:13
- Home (John Prophet)
Nice. I hope you plan to write a book. You have some interesting writes...
October 3rd, 2017 22:12
- Humanities Redemption (John Prophet)
Good writing. Interesting thoughts and words. I like it. β€ π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:10
- The Coming Storm (John Prophet)
I love this. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:08
- Life (John Prophet)
I like it. It makes me think. Nice. Good writes. Good thoughts. Good...
October 3rd, 2017 22:06
- Ideas (John Prophet)
You are connected! Good write. Keep it up. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:04
- Think (John Prophet)
Very true. Good write. Keep it up. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 22:03
- The Machine (John Prophet)
Interesting. The Machine... makes me think of the inner workings of...
October 3rd, 2017 22:01
- Mental prison (Samreen Chowdhury)
Writing can help release pain. Good write. Keep it up. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:59
- west coast angel (Izzi Lynn)
Very interesting and creatively written piece. Nice. β€πππ
October 3rd, 2017 21:57
- Color (Izzi Lynn)
Creatively written. Like speaking of auras. Nice. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:53
- RippleVision (B-LAH-que)
Nice. Creative. Interesting. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:49
- To Fall With You (B-LAH-que)
Lovely poem. I like the rhyming. And the length. Good length. No to long....
October 3rd, 2017 21:48
- Your Secret (B-LAH-que)
Interesting. π
October 3rd, 2017 21:46
- Wandering Love (B-LAH-que)
I like it. β€πππ
October 3rd, 2017 21:45
- Morning\'s Melody (B-LAH-que)
Nicely written. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:44
- A Thousand Scars Upon Your Soul (Thedarksideofthemoon)
Very interesting write. Good rhyming as well. I loved it. Keep up the good...
October 3rd, 2017 21:31
- Broken Vessel (Thedarksideofthemoon)
This is a creatively written and interesting write. Keep it up. β€ π...
October 3rd, 2017 21:29
- You, meet depression. (Iuselocean)
This is a good write. Creative. π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:25
- Itβs bigger than beauty (Iuselocean)
Very creatively written. I see skills here. Nice write. β€ π π π
October 3rd, 2017 21:22
- Facade (Poetboy123)
Love the rhyme. I kind-of wish this was longer. It is interesting....
October 3rd, 2017 21:06
- Depression (SorrowfullyHappy)
True words. β€ππ
October 3rd, 2017 21:04
- When Spring Comes (W c)
I really feel like you would make a great or even a fantastic children\'s...
September 27th, 2017 15:23
- Parking Lot Birds (W c)
This is funny. I live in the city so i can relate to these city writes,...
September 27th, 2017 15:14
- City Park (W c)
This is a interesting poem. Just remember to spellcheck your work. Good...
September 27th, 2017 15:11
- Dreams (W c)
This is wonderful. Good write. Keep up the good work. π β€ π
September 27th, 2017 15:07
- The Circus (W c)
I like circus art but not circus acts. I consider it to be dangerous to...
September 27th, 2017 15:03
- PHOTOS OF LIFE (Lasergraph)
Nicely written. I like it. π
September 27th, 2017 14:57
- Don\'t Leave Me (Broken_kingdom)
Nice poem. I like the rhyming and organization of your poems as well. I...
September 27th, 2017 14:55
- Vampyre (Broken_kingdom)
I liked it. Very creative and beautiful write. Also, just want to say......
September 27th, 2017 14:52
- Not Your Typical Woman (Simplybeautiful)
Interesting poem. Some lines spoke to me. I have met such women. :)
September 27th, 2017 14:48
- Scholarly Wanderers (WL Schuett)
Praise to the bees. I mean... as a child i ran from them so they won\'t...
September 26th, 2017 14:16
- The Alley (WL Schuett)
This poem gives you some interesting visuals in your mind. It makes me...
September 26th, 2017 14:11
- Warm Stormy Rain (WL Schuett)
Lovely poem. π β€ π
September 26th, 2017 14:09
- Return to the meadow (WL Schuett)
You could seriously narrate this poem over a strip of a movie i am...
September 26th, 2017 13:33
- Turtles on a log (WL Schuett)
This poem made me smile, and laugh. This is funny. What is really nice...
September 26th, 2017 13:26
- Dawns Piper (WL Schuett)
Lovely poem! Great writing and rhyming style. Very good. Well organized....
September 26th, 2017 13:18
- shards (Sunflowers Bloom)
This poem has very true words. Wonderful write. Good thoughts. Continue to...
September 26th, 2017 13:15
- Time now? (Clock King)
I love this. Great poem. I always like poems with the concepts of time. ...
September 26th, 2017 12:59
- Quotes #2 (Writings From The Unknown13)
There is a lot of pain here i feel. But, i think one can always pick up...
September 26th, 2017 12:54
- The First Meet (Simple-Man87)
Beautiful poem. Good words. I love the way it rhymes of course. I always...
September 26th, 2017 12:34
- I Wish (Skyebellasario)
I like this. This is Beautiful. Good thoughts and good poem. πβ€π
September 26th, 2017 12:24