Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Trash glass (Shadowbones)
Real life incident turned metaphor. Very nice
June 9th, 2025 15:45 - Sister Sister (Sebastian.)
A poem of the difficulty of dealing with a sibling that has problems. Love...
June 9th, 2025 14:14 - The Shadow (Anthony Hanible)
A sense that no one feels or knows what you do. Like a child under the...
June 9th, 2025 14:11 - The Weight of Regret (Shahla Latifi)
A wonderful write of inner battle. Motherhood and children a tool to...
June 9th, 2025 14:09 - Smoking (Simple Tendencies)
What a great symbol of the excitement of a passionate relationship. Very...
June 9th, 2025 14:04 - Tomorrow\'s Petroglyph (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt how many times are there that there are those things in the back of...
June 9th, 2025 13:50 - \"Still Standing There\" (Z7 Softens)
A poem of not being together anymore. A sense of loss and pain and a sense...
June 9th, 2025 13:47 - When You Left (Gray0328)
A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
June 9th, 2025 13:34 - Cake and strawberries (Orchidee)
I\'ll take cream with my strawberries and cake you can hold my cabbage...
June 9th, 2025 11:27 - I\'m through (Hzugman)
I\'m with you. Society too soft needs a chill of cold water telling it as...
June 9th, 2025 11:25 - The onset of love at 50 (Surfeyor)
Infatuation, obsession, passion powerful. Well done.
June 9th, 2025 11:23 - No, Guess I Musta Followed Peter Pan (Cheeky Missy)
The use of so many aromas and tastes is a pleasant and refreshing change...
June 9th, 2025 11:19 - AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 50-Synthesis-DyingGrass--5May2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Another analysis of a poem set with moral and emotional meaning. It has a...
June 9th, 2025 10:21 - Sacrament (Not)
June 9th, 2025 10:16 - Sacrament (Not)
A most foreboding and ominous write that shows darkness to the very end
June 9th, 2025 10:16 - Things She Doesn\'t Say Out Loud (COGNOVA)
A most lovely view from a child\'s eyes of the personification of nature...
June 9th, 2025 08:37 - You can\'t change me (Tony36)
Tony is this one that you reworked? It sounds very similar to another of...
June 9th, 2025 08:34 - manners (Jim56)
Good one Jim. Manners are a code that each culture has and differ from one...
June 9th, 2025 08:32 - Grey Girl (A piece of luggage)
Seductive and yet unknown this poem speaks of desire and lack of...
June 9th, 2025 06:16 - THE RED LIPSTICK WITNESS MARCH 2025 (Swarovski20)
Food and passion so easily intertwined. A poem of hunger. Most lovely
June 9th, 2025 06:13 - Addiction. (Rosie)
A sad poem of pain, not only physical but emotional that needs healing...
June 9th, 2025 06:09 - This is what (Maplespal)
A clever write that utilizes the sense as a numbering system to elucidate...
June 9th, 2025 05:21 - Your Kindness (Parsa)
Great metaphor in this love poem that intricately weaves its story. Nicely...
June 9th, 2025 05:19 - I WAITED FOR YOU (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The vivid imagery in this poem sets the tone and scene but later in...
June 9th, 2025 05:17 - Untitled (Matthew R. Callies)
This seems the destiny of a poet where words wander and meaning gently...
June 9th, 2025 05:15 - A Quiet Ache (Salian)
The feeling comes through in this poem of unfulfilled love and envy for...
June 9th, 2025 05:13 - The beast of revelation (2781)
A poem based on a Biblical verse that questions the identity of the Beast....
June 9th, 2025 05:10 - Love Myself (John Lee)
A poem that reminded me in the beginning of that song All my exes live in...
June 9th, 2025 05:07 - Optimistic Tragedy by Nikolai Tikhonov (Ksey_Gan)
This poem that speaks as if a historic event spells its metaphors out...
June 9th, 2025 05:04 - Forcing Myself To Function (Anthony Hanible)
There is a charm to this short piece and its pieces. Like the puzzle it\'s...
June 9th, 2025 05:01 - Farewell (Spencer Wilhelm)
It reads remarkably well and has good rhyme. I have never done one of...
June 9th, 2025 04:59 - The Week the Gnats Watched Me Heal (The Soft Witness)
A series of great shorts here. Each one with its own merit and charm....
June 9th, 2025 04:56 - My Mustache (ForeverJesus7)
A fun read that I can identify with, having had a mustache for the past 40...
June 9th, 2025 04:52 - The In Between (Steve Goldenfort)
A most interesting understanding on which I believe I have written too a...
June 9th, 2025 04:49 - Strawberry moon song (Reynaldo Casison)
A poem of romance, allurement, soft seduction, sweet love, sensuous...
June 9th, 2025 04:47 - The Scarred Lovers of Light (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A cosmic Romeo and Juliet set in such great poetic style and verse. There...
June 9th, 2025 04:39 - sometimes things will try you (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies....
June 9th, 2025 04:26 - Into Our New Life. (Goldfinch60)
Another great poem directing us to look for the good and live each life...
June 9th, 2025 04:18 - Poem, Women of the Book! (AwHec8)
An acknowledgement of women prophetesses of the Bible and a call for...
June 9th, 2025 04:13 - “Live your Life Accordingly” (AwHec8)
A poem of faith and belief in a higher power. Most lovely
June 9th, 2025 04:07 - safe like heaven (Wildecho14)
In this poem religious belief becomes love. A lovely poem
June 8th, 2025 20:12 - The Cry at the Crossroads (TheInnerLens)
A religious plea to find light from darkness. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 20:08 - My eye\'s were opened (Nicole Pritchard)
A pledge of fidelity and a statement of love. Very nice
June 8th, 2025 20:04 - Prentis Hancock (Randyjohnson71)
A wonderful tribute for an actor missed now passed. Well done
June 8th, 2025 20:00 - Muse (Amethyste)
A most intriguing poem of one to the muse. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 17:19 - Wishing in silence (Byyvette)
This poem tells the inner depths of humans never being content. Lovely
June 8th, 2025 17:18 - The eyes of a lover (Tallisman)
Very nicely written and rhymed with good meter it flows like honey and the...
June 8th, 2025 17:17 - A poem (Mik this is mik)
A chained rhyme throughout this write. It flows onward and makes its...
June 8th, 2025 17:12 - My Dear Dove 🕊️ (Cirawrites01)
A wonderful poem of support and fellowship, of trust and pledge of being...
June 8th, 2025 17:11 - Those Hips made for Swaying (Reynaldo Casison)
Now this is a song with its chorus and repeating lines. Very nicely...
June 8th, 2025 17:09 - Kiss Me and Never Let Me Go (A Boy With Roses)
Wonderful lines in this surreal poem of a time that never was but is. A...
June 8th, 2025 14:00 - A shaman’s dinner table (EvenwheniLie)
This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of...
June 8th, 2025 13:55 - Cup o\' tea and....... (Orchidee)
Thanks for the invite Orchi but can\'t afford the next booking, it may...
June 8th, 2025 12:47 - Two Honeybee poems! (Classicmister)
June 8th, 2025 12:29 - Two Honeybee poems! (Classicmister)
The first is a far better poem in both overall wording and poetic...
June 8th, 2025 12:29 - Drear Love (Gray0328)
I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line...
June 8th, 2025 12:21 - In The Tears Of A Stranger (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow Kurt this is unlike you. There are a series of metaphors each with a...
June 8th, 2025 12:17 - Glorious tales (Starlight)
A most beautiful picture painted in this poem of a idyllic place and time....
June 8th, 2025 10:17 - Mary’s Reef (Fränz Müller)
A simply lovely metaphor with such great images portrayed in every line....
June 8th, 2025 10:15 - Life, the Movie (Thomas W Case)
I hear you Thomas I would not relive this film if given the chance. One...
June 8th, 2025 10:13 - I am who I am (Tony36)
Another proclamation of being who you are and satisfied with it. Nicely...
June 8th, 2025 10:11 - Tennessee, Cakes, and Whatever....I Guess (Cheeky Missy)
My Chic you have been busy lately with a prodigal number of creations....
June 8th, 2025 10:10 - Too much! (Hzugman)
Now that is what I call short and a full example of what it is about it...
June 8th, 2025 10:06 - Yours truly like most every hominid linkedin... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
There seems to be a bell curve of horniness across age spans peaking in...
June 8th, 2025 10:05 - The Heart Has a Cost (RSM0812)
A most interesting concept that not only with love there is pain but also...
June 8th, 2025 09:57 - Now I live (Maplespal)
I could feel the pain of individuality in this poem and the lack of...
June 8th, 2025 07:16 - forever friend (Jim56)
Another lovely poem of dogs and their close alliance with man. Nicely done...
June 8th, 2025 06:42 - A Lovecraftian horror trip (Muse of Calliope)
A changing and rather complex set of images in dreamlike fashion evoking a...
June 8th, 2025 06:40 - Sleep (Sebastian.)
A most interesting structure to this poem that seems to ripple with each...
June 8th, 2025 06:34 - The Unreturned (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Very poetic this poem has a solemn nature to it and the images created are...
June 8th, 2025 06:31 - Pilgrim’s Progress (Arobot)
The title of a rather famous old book this poem followed a different path...
June 8th, 2025 06:28 - Possessed (Parsa)
Supernatural and surreal in tone this poem conveys a sense of sadness and...
June 8th, 2025 06:26 - My Mother (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential...
June 8th, 2025 06:24 - Two Trillion (E.J. Waling)
Unfathomable numbers that boggle the imagination keep expanding...
June 8th, 2025 06:18 - TO WANDER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The meter was hypnotic and for this a fave. I very much liked the line...
June 8th, 2025 06:15 - In The Zone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Clever weaving of rhyme into this poem that makes total sense regarding...
June 8th, 2025 06:12 - Meet me at the freshet (Amy Michelle Mosier)
This poem has a revival type feel to it feeling deeply Christian but with...
June 8th, 2025 06:10 - AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 49-Synthesis-AdLeaveAdDeath--4May2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Another analysis of a poem with political intent expressing inequity in...
June 8th, 2025 06:08 - Whispers in the Quiet Room (Matthew R. Callies)
A wonderful mood is cast in this poem with as much told by what was not...
June 8th, 2025 05:59 - Two Villagers Fable by Ivan Krylov (Ksey_Gan)
Consequences of actions taken and the sad remorse after the fact. A...
June 8th, 2025 05:52 - Love (Sebastian.)
This poem is erotic and expounds a strong sexual need as well as one for...
June 8th, 2025 05:49 - Calligraphy. (Goldfinch60)
That one got me Andy and made me smile. Calligraphy is such a time...
June 8th, 2025 05:39 - Butterfly (BlessedbyGod)
A fun lighthearted poem that lets the reader soar with the author. Very...
June 8th, 2025 05:36 - Time is a heal (Jennifer Owen)
Time does heal many things well written
June 7th, 2025 16:30 - The Alphabet (Anthony Hanible)
As I read this poem I take it for metaphor. Nicely done
June 7th, 2025 16:29 - Damn (Amethyste)
Being used is a common human tendency. A clever poem
June 7th, 2025 16:27 - She will know. (Tayama)
Lovely and heart warming, a wonderful write
June 7th, 2025 15:22 - God is in control (Cedrick)
A poem of logic and faith. Well written.
June 7th, 2025 13:57 - Get better with you (Shadowbones)
A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship...
June 7th, 2025 13:55 - Eating the moon (Orchidee)
That\'s why the moon had a bite taken out of it. Sounds delicious. Good...
June 7th, 2025 13:10 - Social Conditioning #2 (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A nicely stated truth that how we are raised determines our later...
June 7th, 2025 13:08 - Fake/truth (Natalie Heisey)
A poem that leaves me with feelings of anger and resolve that will not...
June 7th, 2025 13:06 - Judgment Day (Shahla Latifi)
God\'s preaching love do not combine with destruction, torture and pain. A...
June 7th, 2025 13:03 - Lines That Entangle (Kurt Philip Behm)
A wonderful write of a poets mind. Lovely a fave
June 7th, 2025 12:59 - Suffocating Darkness (Rosey)
Short but powerful loaded with wonderful images and metaphor. (Thoughts...
June 7th, 2025 12:57 - Once Upon The End of-- and...! (Cheeky Missy)
Diverse is all that I can say. From seasons to nature, food and day to...
June 7th, 2025 12:53 - Caged (Fränz Müller)
A most wonderfully worded poem that moves the emotions without mention of...
June 7th, 2025 12:48 - What Promise (Tony36)
Moving, this poem speaks to the need for another to give one wind to their...
June 7th, 2025 12:46 - I got (Poetaldo)
Nicely stated Poetaldo a good read
June 7th, 2025 09:06 - One step at a time (Hzugman)
Progression not perfection. Short but nicely said this poem speaks truth...
June 7th, 2025 09:04
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